Hum jo chalne lage h ye raste (ragsan) epi1

Hello guys.I m new here.just thought of a idea nd decided to pen it down.well this is gonna be a few shots nd it is related to the movie jab we met of shahid nd kareena with some changes of mine.
Well let me introduce the characters first.

Ragini gadodia.-a bubbly nd naughty girl.very talkative..daughter of shekhar nd janki gadodia.
Has a sister swara.shares a beautiful bond with her.loves laksh nd dreams of marrying him by running away from house.
Sanskar maheshwari- a business man not so successful yet.son of sujata nd ramprasad maheshwari.fed up of his family problems.wants to live a life free of all his family problems.

The scene opens with a railway station with kalyan written on a board.there was a lots of hustle nd bustle.a no of trains are standing at numerous platforms.this was the regular routine of the station.thousands of people departed nd from the city while thousands came for some or the other reason.in all this hustle bustle we could see a boy walking lifelessly.he walked nd entered a train.he had worn black denim nd soft pink coloured shirt with his hair all messed up.

here we see a girl entering the railway station she was wearing a blue jeans with black crop top over it with her hair tied up in a pony tail nd some of them flying over her face enhancing her beauty.she was running towards the platform murmuring”babaji madad kro.train ko late kara do..mera record nhi tutna chahiye na..plzzz babaji..uffo ragini tu bhi na yaha apne aap se baat karne se acha h bhag pehle hi late ho gayi kahi train na chut jaaye.”nd she rushed to platform no.3 as it was announced that her train was leaving from there..
Here the train is shown leaving…
A person is standing at the door.he was the same boy which was shown in the start looking out of the train nd feeling the cool breeze closing his eyes as if it is going to heal his wounds while the train was moving along.he heard a girls shout “stop…stop..someone pull the chain help..”he opened his eyes to see a girl who was running along with two heavy bags nd a poster of babaji in her hand..she tried hard to handle all those things all together but failed..somehow she managed to reach the door.the boy yet couldn’t see her face clearly as her hair strands were blocking her face.he was busy in seeing her face while the girl shouted on him.”hey hello u idiot what r u looking here nd there help me..”
The boy came to the reality nd forwarded a hand for the girl to hold..
The girl-u idiot cant u see I have these bags take them first.
The boy shook his head nd was about to take a bag when the girl jerked her hand.
Boy-what..??
The girl handed him the poster of babaji nd asked him to take this first..
He took it nd kept it on a side nd then turned to her.she handed him a bag..he took it nd kept it besides the poster.he then turned nd forwarded his hand for the girl to come..
The girl-uffo u dumbo cant u see I have one more bag in my hand.take it first.
The boy-mam first u come the train is leaving if u miss it then what will u do with this luggage in the train.
He said as politely as possible as possible
The girllooked at him giving him angry glares.”-I know what to do nd what not.do as I say.”
Saying this she handed over the last bag to him.
He sighed nd took it nd kept it beside the first bag.he then turned towards her nd looked at her expecting another bag or something else.
“Now why are u looking at me like that give me ur hand” she said trying to catch her breath as she was running all the while along.
He offered her his han,the girl held his hand..both felt something strange but ignored it..she climbed up the train.nd now she was in the train.the train catched speed leaving the platform behind.
She seemed happy nd had a winning smile over her face..she immediately closed her eyes joined her hands as in prayer nd murmured”thankyou babaji..thankyou so much..u did not let my record of not missing any train break..thankyou so much bhagwanji..love u inaa saara.”
The boy was just staring at her observing her face nd childish acts keenly which brought a curve on his lips.
“Oh sorry I forgot to thank you”sai the girl breaking his trance.
“No its kk..”

He said nd was going to walk away but the girl stopped him holding his hand.he looked up to her feeling something different.he looked directly in her black orbs which were attracting him.both had a short eyelock but it broke bcoz of the noise around.
“Vo .actually I wanted to say thank you to u..thank you for helping me..”she said still lost in his brown hazel eyes.
“You are welcome.”he said removing his eyes trying to walk further to avoid further conversation.
“Well I m ragini gadodia..nd u ..??”she asked as he was walkinh further.
“I m sanskar….”he said without turning not willing to say further.
“Sanskar..oh nice name..btw what is ur…”
She was going to ask about his surname but her phone rang interupting her.
She took it out of her pocket.the phone flashed laksh as the caller id nd a pic of laksh behind.
A smile crept on her lips following a blush.laksh was her bf with whom she had plans to marry nd live her life all together.they were together for a year now.laksh couldnt come drop her due to some issues nd thats why he was calling her now.
“I will just be back”she said nd moved to a side still blushing.
Sanskar moved from there as he was least interested in talking to her nd as he got the opportunity to escape.
Screne splits on the blushing face of ragini on the phone with a frustated sanskar.

So how will ragsans story when sanskar even hates love nd rags is madly in love with ragini.??
Wanna know??
Stay tuned to hum jo chalne lage h yeh raste.
Drop down ur comments guys plzz.
I wanna know how it is.
Plzz tell me whether it is upto the mark or not..
Let me know do u like it or not.waiting for ur comments..
Plzz plzz comment.

25 comments

  1. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Hey dr warm welcome to TU ..wohoooo m sooo happy to see a new writer n dat too a ragini fan 😉 😉 😉 i jst loved d concept sweeety…jab we met is one of my fav. Movie…n ragsan jst suits d charecters perfectlyy!!!m soooo excieted for it!!! 😉 😉 😉 …hehehhehe bechara sanky … m laughng imagining his condition 😀 …n rago uff!!!non stop talknggg!! Hehehhee !!aww!mera baccha 😉 …lets see wt happens nxt…keeep rockng n stay blessed sweeety…waitng for nxt part eagerly!! 😉 😉 😉

  2. Jasminerahul

    |Registered Member

    wow.Jab we met on RagSan.its a treat.loved ragSan meeting.loved all ragSan moments esp Sanskar getting momentary attraction 2wards her n their eye lock.So Laksh is her bf.waiting 4 more.

    can u plz message me whenever u update this?

  3. Silent_writer

    |Registered Member

    Woooooooow dear itssss amazinggg no one can say u r new the way of ir writing its totally awsmeee loveed it n thanksss alot for ragsan fs its really awsmee keep smiking take care n update soon n stay blessed dear 💐💐💐

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