Horror in Kriyam’s life by Annie chapter 27(last part)

Hi guyz its me Annie again. I am back with the last episode of my ff. I know its kind of early. But I think its the best time now….. Well everyone plz comment today and say if u liked it….. Tomorrow I will update the new ff.

So lets start…..

Our trio reaches BM. Everyone is there at the door​ to receive them….

The hugging session goes on….

Yuvani: Krishna I am soo happy that u r back…..( hugs her)

Krishna: I am happy to be back too.

Yuvani: Don’t worry krish. U will forget ur traumatic pat as long as I am here. Now taking care of u and the baby will be my responsibility.

Bhavna: ha krishna. Plz throw all the negativity from ur mind and concentrate on ur baby.

Krishna: I will try to do that…. Thank u all for ur support.

Yuvani: Why are u behaving so formal? Are we strangers?

Krishna: No Yuvani…. Its just that….

Suhani: ok everyone. Enough with the questions. Krishna needs rest. She is tired and all after the journey.

Yuvani: Ma long journey? It was just an hour flight.

Suhani: yuvani!! Its tiring for krishna because she is pregnant.

Saiyyam: Ma don’t worry. i will just take her to the room.

Yuvani: oh yeah. U guyz must be needing some privacy. I totally forgot.

Saiyyam sends Yuvani a death glare and goes to their room.

Kriyam bedroom…

Saiyyam: Krishna are u ok? I mean do u need something?

Krishna: No thank u… I umm… nothing…

Saiyyam: What nothing? Tell me if we want something.

Krishna: Can i have some pickle? Well I didn’t have them for days.

Saiyyam: No krish. Firstly its oily. Secondly u are still stressed and ur diet…. Tells..

Krishna: pls saiyyam. U r. Again behaving like before? I said I want ti eat.

Saiyyam: Ok fine but just little.

Krishna: 10 spoons.

Saiyyam: 10!!! Never. Only 5. Not more than that.

Krishna:( pouts) ok.

Saiyyams POV

I am so happy to see krishna bubbly again. I hope she stays like that. Always..

Time skip to 5 months….

Krishna has a big baby bump now.
Krishna and Saiyyam are sitting in the sofa….. They are watching some childish movie due to Krishna’s insisting.

Saiyyam: Kya krishna…. It so boring.

Krishna: Shut up Saiyyam. Let me see. U…. U are always scolding me.( cries).

Saiyyam: No no krishna. Don’t cry. Why r u getting so emotional?

Yuvani: That’s because she is pregnant Saiyyam. And in this stage they r moody.

Saiyyam: might as well say extra…. Moody.

Krishna: U think…. I am….

Saiyyam: why are u sputtering like that?

Krishna: Saiyyam I think I am in labour.

Saiyyam: (nervously) u r kidding right?

Krishna: I am not and holds her stomach..

Suhani: Krishna… R u ok?

Saiyyam: Ma she is saying that she is in labour.

Suhani: than why r u waiting? Go and bring out the car.

Saiyyam: Me?

Suhani: saiyyam!! Ofcourse u.

Saiyyam: Oh god. Where did I keep the keys?

They see a car parking at the door.

Saiyyam: Yuvani?

Yuvani: Come on quick. Get in.

They rush to the hospital….

Krishna is on the stretcher and is screaming in pain.

Saiyyam: Krishna don’t worry u will be alright?(holding her hand).

Krishna: Its all because of u.

Saiyyam: But I…..( thinks but doesn’t find his mistake).

Now they are in the hospital room.

Krishna hold Saiyyam’s hand tightly…

Krishna: Saiyyam I hate, hate u, hate u a lot.

Saiyyam: yeah I love u too. Don’t worry its not that painful? is it?

Krishna glares at saiyyam.

Saiyyam asks the nurse: Are pregnant ladies always like this?

Nurse: Sir believe me, I have seem worse.

The doctor arrives and shoos Saiyyam away. Well he wasted 20 mins insisting on staying but when Krishna scolded and sent him out he was forced to leave.

At the waiting place…

Saiyyam: I hope krishna is alright.

Yuvraj: don’t worry saiyyam.

After sometime a baby’s crying is heard. The doctor comes out….

Doctor: congratulations. Its a girl.

Saiyyam: Thank u soo much doctor.

Saiyyam rushes inside and finds krish with a baby in her lap.
He hugs krishna and kisses her forehead.

Saiyyam: she is so cute..

Suhani: what do u guyz want to name her?

Saiyyam: Sashna.

Yuvani: thats such a cute name.

Krishna: Its a combo of my and Saiyyam’s name.

Kriyam.holds the baby together and says our little world……

Thats the end of my Horror ff. I hope u guyz liked it. I will post the new one tomorrow…

I will end it with my fav quote….

The lesson you need to learn right now, can’t be taught with words… only with action.( Levi Ackerman, Captain of Scout Regiment, Attack on Titan)

That’s all….. Hope to hear ur views….

Till than bye….. πŸ‘‹

45 comments

  1. Shaani

    Shaani

    |Registered Member

    Omg.. U ended it….😒😒 nice ending… Loved ur this ff very much… U gave us a nice story… I enjoyed it alot… N I’m happy about that u started a new ff… All the best for it also…

  2. Hafsaaa

    Hafsaaa

    |Registered Member

    Omg no 😭😭 someone please bring me a tissue,this is somehow so emotional😭😩 I don’t know why you would even your ff but you didπŸ˜‘πŸ–€ I loved it so and that part where Krishna says I hate you and Saiyyam replies back saying I love it’s totally me in normal routines,my hate you means love πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ aww I swear I’m going na miss your ff so much yaar😩😍 it was so danm perfect or maybe πŸ’― better than my ff.I haven’t read your other ff but as soon as I get time I’ll read your other ff and I just know it’s gonna be perfect as well cause it’s written by you “the queen” πŸ”₯πŸ˜ŒπŸ’ I still am speechless at your writing and swear I’m gonna miss this one but best of luck for the next one πŸ’—πŸ’— ILYSMπŸ”₯πŸ”₯

    • AnahitaAnnie

      AnahitaAnnie

      |Author

      Thank u soo much Hafsaa. Ur words of appreciation brought a smile on my face. Its truly a privilege that u liked it… I am sorry that it ended very soon and I am no way near ur ff. Its sooo good. I mean it’s the best ff ever. U really can’t believe how much I love it… And it means a lot for me that I could live up to ur expectations….. And I will miss this one tooo. Thanks u soo much for ur beautiful words Hafsaa. I was nearly in tears after reading ur comment….😘😍

  3. yura

    Oh Annie it’s damn superb. Beautiful ending. Saiyyam ‘ s behaviour towards krishna was so adorable. I am so happy. Thank you so much. Looking forward to your another ff

  4. Fenil

    Fenil

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    Amazing end
    whole ff was simply perfect.
    Sorry as i didn’t comments on previous but today i commenting as i don’t know u will forgive me or not.

    Loved it and love u too…
    Till than tata taata bye

  5. Dinu

    ☹it’s ended. Btw nice ending dr.I really enjoyed ur ff a lot.feeling sad coz it’s ending. Bt eagerly waiting 4 ur nw ff.πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜‡sry dr i’m late.as shaani said before we r celebrating sinhala and tamil new year in our country. So i’m busy with preparations.bye dr.tc.plz post ur nw ff soon.can’t waitπŸ˜‡πŸ˜Š n ya baby’s name was cute.sashna.I love it

  6. Nadhiya

    Superb … Ending is really nice and waiting for next ff. I read the intro it’s really nice please upload part 1 of it soon and gng to miss this horror

  7. Aarti32

    Aarti32

    |Registered Member

    Khatam ho gya😞😞
    But koi nhi..U’re starting d new one, which I’m sure I’ll love more than I luvd dis one..

  8. shivani

    An extraordinary end to one of the most marvellous stories. This episode was seriously a great one. The way you described every minute detail and nuance was just exemplary. It was a magical end to an intensely horrifying story. Truly unexpected..

    • shivani

      Thanks a lot for giving a thought to my suggestion and naming the newest member of birla family as Miss Sashna Birla.

  9. shivani

    This story had comedy, love, tragedy, horror and millions of other mortal emotions in the right proportion. It was an amazing work of art. A greatly unique work of art by an immensely talented person.
    Thanks (Γ—infinity) for this lovely story. All the episodes effected me in a huge way. Some of them horrifued and shook me up to the core while some soothed my throbbing brain. The way you managed to nail every episode was just unthinkable. Its a humongously difficult task to write such a magical piece of art. But you being you, you managed to complete this ordeal even after the numerous obstacles and have reached this milestone by your sheer grit and determination.
    May fod bless you with everything that you desire and deserve…

    • shivani

      Sorry for any grammatical errors or the misspelt words in my comments. Apologies for the times when I hurt you through words.
      If I have done any mistake please feel free to speak up and forgive me in the end.
      In love always..

    • AnahitaAnnie

      AnahitaAnnie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Shivani. Ur comment never fails to mesmerize me. I loved every bit of ur wonderful words. It a great pleasure for me to hv such an amazing commenter like u. Thanks again for all the appreciation…..

  10. Fidato

    Fidato

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    Aanie…It such a lovely end to the horrific ff.. very nice… Sorry couldn’t comment on your previous episodes… Hope u will forgive me… Thank you for the new ff takkar ka rishta..Nice intro..

  11. Zani Saleem

    Sweet you ff was totally amazing 😁😊we done😘and plz come with a new ff😊

  12. Ayesha

    Amazing epi. I wanted to read more but u finished it too early. I hate u!!! (Actually I want to I love u like saiyyam for ur great work). I loved every bit of it. And thanks for the name SaShna. I like that name very much. You’re going to start a new ff & I will surely read it bcoz u r a great writter.

  13. Isha

    U ended the ff that is so sad.. πŸ™ plzz comeup with a new ff… I couldn’t comment as had no tym and I promise if u start a new ff I will comment regularly…love u and will miss u lots
    Isha πŸ™‚

  14. Ayesha

    Lovely love you so much πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ˜˜
    This pic smile on my face and I’m waiting for next FF continue you do very good πŸ‘Œ

  15. asia

    Hey its ended am felling so sad 😒😒 But its realy good ending. All well if end’s well. Bye dear take care and come up with new one. Till then πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜

  16. Rockstr

    Rockstr

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    I hv been a silent reader throughout this ff…i hv loved evry bit of it..u r a very talented ryter….pls do write again…

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