Horror in Kriyamโ€™s life by annie chapter 24

Hi guyz its me Annie again. Well I am updating at night again because tomorrow we are going to Harriman state park and I am soo excited. Anyways, I have seen most of my readers chose first option so I will go with that. Okay, now it is Exorcism part 1. So lets proceed…..

The clock is ticking 1’O clock at night. Preparations started…

Saiyyam: Kairaji, umm. Where’s the bird?

Kaira: Its not needed anymore. I found out a new way.

Saiyyam: Ok.

Kaira: Well, let me tell u guyz the devil will try to possess anyone of us. Everyone stand on ur feet. Don’t let ur conscience deceive u.

Krishna’s head was spinning and she was about to fall. But Saiyyam holds her.

Suhani: Krishna beta r u ok?

Krishna: yes aunty. I was just feeling a bit dizzy.

Saiyyam: krishna I told u not to take stress.

Krishna: Saiyyam do u really think I can sit calmly in this situation?

Saiyyam doesn’t reply and looks tensed.

Kaira: there’s still sometime left. U guyz go and rest. I hv somework here.

They exit. Kaira is seen keeping a knife near her chair.

At Kriyam’s room…

Krishna: Saiyyam.

Saiyyam: hmm. What happened krish?

Krishna: Saiyyam remember one thing. U r the most precious thing in my life and I will always love u. I love u Saiyyam.

Saiyyam:( shocked). I love u too krishna but why are u talking like that?

Krishna: Its just that I don’t know if I will be ever able to tell u that again.

Saiyyam:( stood up angrily) enough is enough Krishna. Here I am trying heart and soul to find a way to keep all of us safe and u? U r really very selfish Krishna.

Krishna: Selfish?

Saiyyam: Ha selfish. U r only thinking about urself. U didn’t even think once how would I feel after hearing this? U didn’t even care about my feelings.

Krishna:(bursts out crying) I didn’t mean that. I am sorry saiyyam.

Suhani: Krishna, u shouldn’t say such things beta. U know how much we love u.

Krishna: I know aunty its just that I am scared of the consequences.

Kaira sees the trio.

Kaira’s POV

Don’t worry Krishna. Its my responsibility that nothing will happen.

Time skip to 1:45…

All are gathered at the baby’s room…
Its dark.

Saiyyam: do we start?

Kaira: Not one now. Everyone take a deep breath and stand up right. We will go through this. Krishna u sit between Saiyyam and Suhani and everyone plz keep ur distance from me. Okay.

Everyone nods.

Suhani thinks something fishy.

Suhani’s POV

Kaira is surely thinking something. I hv seen her behaving a bit differently. I know her since a long time. She can do anything to see others happy. I hope she will not take any drastic step. God plz protect her.

Kaira: Suhani… Suhani.

Suhani: umm yes.

Kaira: Don’t loose ur focus. Keep ur mind free. We are starting.

All of them closed their eyes.

Kaira: imagine, We are in dark realm. U hv evil around u. Keep breathing slowly. Ignore all noises around u. Don’t lose ur focus. Now open ur eyes Slowly.

Everyone open’s their eyes….

Saiyyam’s POV…

Why is everything so dark? Wait, there is a little shine there. Do we get up? Why has the house changed suddenly? Are we somewhere else?

Suhani’s POV

It so dark. There is a red door and a little shining. The atmosphere and scene is not of here. We hv reached somewhere else.

Krishna’s POV

I can see Kairaji reciting. But its dark. Why is saiyyam and Suhani aunty looking around like that. Wait what’s that behind kairaji?

Kaira snaps and Suhani and Saiyyam come to senses.

Kaira: so what did u guyz see?

Saiyyam: I saw some dark place..

Suhani: Same here. I saw a dark place with a light shining.

Kaira: and u krishna What did u see?

Krishna: Everything was normal except there was something behind u.

Kaira: I got it. We can start.

Saiyyam: Kairaji why was Krishna’s vision different than ours?

Kaira: Because she is not alone. Her baby’s life is attached to her. So she can see the more than we and because she is the target. Besides, Krishna clarified the devil is here. We can start.

Kaira chants something and a smoke is seen slowly developing behind her. Its a mixture of red and black.

Kaira stops….

Kaira: I know u hv reached here devil. Show urself.

A black figure is seen behind kaira… Its hand is extended towards kaira. The hand is black and has claws. The nails in the claws is like bent knife attached to fingers. The eyes are totally red and a white pupil in the middle. The devil has no lips. But a part of its mouth is moving and when it speaks something like red smoke is seen inside. Indeed the devil has mouth without lips. When it speaks the mouth opens and it mixes with the black smoke again when closed.

The devil has its eyes on Krishna…..

Precap: Suhani: Kaira. Plz don’t do this.

Kaira: Don’t stop me suhani. Its my choice.

That’s all for today. That was the end of first part of our exorcism. The next part will be last part of exorcism. Lets see how kaira scarifices herself for the sake of others…..

Hope to hear ur reviews….

Till than bye… ๐Ÿ‘‹

25 comments

  1. shivani

    This was horrifying and sacrificial at the same time. Sayyam’s love for krishna and kaira’s dedication towards her work is exemplary. All the processes and actions were described in a greatly meticulous way. The story is truly enrapturing and has kept me hooked through every episode.
    The horrific lines and description of the devil along with the vivid visions of the birla trio surely indicates the coming of the devil. Its a horror masterpiece…

    • AnahitaAnnie

      AnahitaAnnie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Shivani for this appreciation. I am happy that I could live up to ur expectations….. Thanks a lot again for being a regular commenter. It means a lot dear..๐Ÿ˜Š

  2. Dinu

    Wonderful epi dr.bt feeling bad 4 kaira. Loved 2 see kriyam love 4 each other. Plz post d nxt prt soon. Till then bye tc

  3. asia

    I loved that episode its simply horified and i love kriyam care and love part also.post next part also .Am waitng

  4. yura

    Wow Annie. .. what a thrilling episode. It’s really nice to read dear. Fingers crossed wht ‘ s gonna happen nxt. Update soon

  5. Shaani

    Shaani

    |Registered Member

    It’s sooo thrilling yaar… Omg that description of the devil…
    Very well written Annie..loved it..
    Keep writing… Sorry for being late to comment… U know it’s festival season in my country soo I’m damn busy… That’s why..
    God bless you

    • AnahitaAnnie

      AnahitaAnnie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Shaani. Don’t say sorry yar, i understand. Really u guyz are having a festival? I didn’t know. What festival are u having? Anyways hope u enjoy it…

      • Shaani

        Shaani

        |Registered Member

        It’s called Sinhala n Tamil new year… We r making soo many sweets new clothes.. Gifts…
        So we have to go shopping n we have to clean our houses…paint it… N many more…

  6. Hafsaaa

    Hafsaaa

    |Registered Member

    Omg girl it was aaaa๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ my heart crushed when Krishna said I will never will be able to say “I love you,again,” ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ฉ GEEZZZ you nailed it again ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฅ Falling in love with your ff day by day,devil description was ooooaaalala ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค and I saw your comment on the written update.Karan is still in Goa cause he left yesterday but I think srishti is back but I am not sure because she hasn’t post anything so I am not sureโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
    Eagerly waiting for the next one ๐Ÿ’•

    • AnahitaAnnie

      AnahitaAnnie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot Hafsaa. I am happy that u liked it. I may be good but ur ff is fantastic. The way u uphold the suspense is truly amazing. And about KJ. How many times does he take leave? I miss my kriyam terribly. Anyways…. Thanks for ur appreciation….๐Ÿ˜˜

      • Hafsaaa

        Hafsaaa

        |Registered Member

        Ikr same KJ takes so many leaves and the worst part is when he comes back srishti leaves and then the process continues and My ff is nothing in front yours โค๏ธโค๏ธ

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