Horror in Kriyam’s life by annie chapter 23

Hi guyz I am back again. Had a hectic day today. Anyways I am currently in Baccarat Hotel & Residences New York( sorry guyz its a habit of mine to describe my environment). Got a chance and a free time to type my update. Chapter 22 was posted in SNS forum. So I reposted it. If guyz didn’t read it than here’s the link below:


Everyone if u missed it than plz read. It was an important chapter.

Anyways, lets start…..

The day of predation is near. They are supposed to start everything at today night. Everyone is scared ?.

Saiyyam: Kairaji, where is the bird we needed for the capture? Did u contact anyone regarding it?

Kaira: yeah it will be here soon. Don’t worry about it. Even if its not here there is another way….(she says after thinking a bit).

Saiyyam: but u said…. Nevermind what’s the other way?

Kaira: There are somethings u will know later. I can’t tell u now.

Saiyyam nods.

Suhani comes running from behind….

Suhani: Saiyyam…. ( nervously). Saiy….

Saiyyam: Ma what happened?

Suhani: krish…krishna got locked in the room. I can’t open it.

Saiyyam: What?…

They run towards kriyam bedroom.

Saiyyam knocks the door…

Saiyyam: krishna… Krishna…

(There was no reply)…. After sometime the door automatically opens…

But there’s no one.

Saiyyam: Krishna…

The bathroom door opens and krishna is coming out with a towel on her hand.

Krishna: What happe…(couldn’t complete).

Saiyyam runs and hugs krishna tightly.

Saiyyam: Krishna are u ok? I hope u didn’t get hurt.

Krishna: I am fine Saiyyam. Why are u all so worried?

Suhani: The door was locked and u were not answering. So we got scared.

Krishna: Oh I was taking a shower but I didn’t lock the room’s door.

Kaira: krishna tell me everything that u saw before leaving for shower. Any sound, shadow… Anything?

Krishna thinks…

Krishna: Before I went inside I left my dress and towel in the bed and went out of the room. When I came back I found them inside the closet again. I thought saiyyam must hv done it.

Saiyyam: but I didn’t touch anything krishna.

Kaira: I am guessing u understood what happened. Well we can’t get scared now. Its just todays night and everything will be okay.

Suhani: hmm.

Kaira: Krishna.

Krishna: ji?

Kaira: Krishna don’t stay alone even for a second.

Saiyyam: I will stay with her don’t worry.

They go..

Kaira’s POV

The ritual is near. This is the second time I am doing this. Last time, my mistake took two persons away. This time I won’t let that happen. I will save this family whatever happens. Ashish help me. I hope nothing happens this time.

Saiyyam’s POV

Just some hours and thats it. This is a test of all of our lives. I don’t know what lies ahead. Hope we survive this.

Suhani’s POV

I hope everything goes well today. I don’t know even know if it is my last day. O god whatever happens me doesn’t matter hope others stay ok. And there is something going in kaira’s mind. Hope everything is well with her.

Krishna’s POV

I can feel eyes on me. Its like someone is following me. Today’s is the final day. I hope that everyone stays fine. O god plz guide as to the right way.

The time is ticking 1 o clock. The night of darkness is near….

Precap: The ritual…. Will everyone survive?

This is again a short one. I can’t start anything without ur views.
Plz select an ending…

1. Kaira sacrifices herself while saving the trio. She is happy as she is going back to Ashish.( I wanted this one but its ur views that will decide)

2. Devil is trapped in an animal and none dies.

I already asked this once in Chapter 22 and thanks to Shaani, AbrahamEzra and Shivani for letting me know about their choice. I request all of u to plz reply…

Hope to hear ur feedbacks…

Till than bye… ?

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  1. I will go with 1st one…..
    Nice update. .

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot dwidha…glad u liked it.

  2. Absolutely fabulous episode anahita. This is an ice-breaker and gives us all the necessary information required before the real action starts. Its a wonderful one and horrifying. Tge story is just awesome and a superb one. Horror and kriyam in the right proportion make it a great cocoction.

    Enjoy new york and keep updating.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Shivani for ur beautiful words. I thought that it wasn’t good but glad u liked the episode….next epi is the part 1 of ritual…

    2. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Shivani for ur beautiful words. I thought that it wasn’t good but glad u liked the episode….next epi is the part 1 of ritual… And ?

  3. Hey .after a longggg time im commenting here . But i read all episode. Am just bz couldnt take review .but i think u knw that u nailed it as aways .superb episode .i want to choose 1 choice. Keep posting am eagrly waitng

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Asia. I missed u soo much. I am really glad u liked it. It means a lot when u appreciated it. And also thanks for choosing an ending… And I have already submitted the next one….

  4. The first option will be a good ending

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Shiza arif….

  5. Aarti32

    Amazinggg..Horror is building up inside me yaar!!

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Aaru. Glad u liked it…

  6. Nice update. 1st choice is better. Keep writing

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Yura….?

  7. 1st one will be so perfect?

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Zani….?

  8. I think 1st one will make a good story

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Hrn. Even I think option 1 is better.

  9. Hi i’m a silent reader. Bt i read all kriyam ffs.I only commented on shaani’s ff.bt after reading 2dy epi I thought 2 comment.I loved 2dy epi & I choose 1st end.i’m feeling bad 2 choose dat.bt it will be gd 4 kaira coz she has lost her family.

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Dinu. I really appreciate that u took time to comment.on. my ff and also Thanks for choosing an ending….?

  10. Ela

    Hey Annie the episode is very nice..nd u r very talented girl

    1. AnahitaAnnie

      Thanks a lot Ela….. I am glad u liked it…?

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