My horrible date ( Kanchi) OS – Dedicated to Abhi di & Anu by Niyu (Part 1)

Hii dear readers & silent readers, Your drama queen is back again with her stupid & brainless idea…..This OS is dedicated to our Abhi di , Inara & Anu….Guys get well soon….Miss u & luv u soo much …?

( Author’s note : Don’t expect this one is romantic OS because i don’t know how to write romantic things
? …… Sanchi & Kabir are already confessed their love from each other in my OS ).

Sanchi is tried to sleep but sleep is very far from her eyes. His thoughts disturb her & she continuously move here & there on bed. Suddenly her hand collide with water jug & water fall on Pragya’s face. Sanchi is shocked with this ,she closed her eyes like a innocent child & start doing drama that she is sleeping.

Pragya(scream) : Abe koi bachao……baadh aa gayi….??

Isha(while rubbing her eyes) : Pragya …..Why are u shouting in mid night .

Pragya : Abe o kumbhkarn ki behn….uth jao.

She throw water on her face.

Isha : What are u doing ??

Pragya : Baklol pehle paani phenka….aur ab maharani bhaut bholi ban rahi ho.

Isha : Yaar, Pragya ….i don’t do anything.

Pragya : Bhoot aakar phenk gaya….Sanchi toh so rahi hai.

Isha : Bhooot……I am leaving this room. I don’t want to die.

Suddenly, Sanchi’s phone beep .

Pragya : Aa gayi Dr. Kabir ki chitthi……lekin maharani ghode bech ke so rahi hai.

Sanchi get up & jump on her bed from the excitement after listening Kabir ‘s name.

Sanchi : Who say to u that i am sleeping.

She pick her phone & start checking his message while Pragya & Isha give deadly glare to her. Finally, she realized what she had done.

Pragya : Ha toh maharani tum toh so rahi thi….baklol kahi ki….how dare u to disturb my sleep.

Isha : Now , I get darkcircles….u also disturb my beauty sleep.

Sanchi : Sorry Pragya….i have no intention to do that.

Pragya : Sorry gayi tel lene…..

They start running after her & they trio messed the whole room with their tom & jerry fights.
After some time , trio fall on bed together.

Isha : Sanchi, u forget about the message.

Sanchi : I read it ….but u guys go…i need privacy.

Pragya : Maharani, privacy chaiye tumhe…

Isha snatch the phone from her hand & read the message .

Isha : Dr Kabir want that u should go on date with him….I am jealous from you….My hottie…

Sanchi give deadly glare to her.

Pragya : Tumhare gaal kahe tamatar se laal ho rakhe hai.

Isha : Ohoo….Sanchi, Are u blushing.

Sanchi : Shut up u both . Give my mobile back….i want to reply him.

Isha : I already say ‘ Yes’ .

Sanchi give shocked expression to them.

Pragya : Aaj tumne pehli bar koi akal ka kaam kiya hai.

Isha : Thanks Yaar….Pragya.

She remind her words in her mind & realized that it’s a insult for her. She throw pillow on her while Pragya catch it.

Pragya : Thank u …..i only need this.

She keep pillow while Isha cursing herself for her flop plan.

Isha : What are u wearing?

Sanchi : Umm……..My daily clothes which i am wearing in hospital.

They both fall from bed after getting shock .

Sanchi : What happen guys….I swear i don’t kick u….then how u guys fall down.

Isha : What else we expect from u ?

Pragya : Abe o maharani….You are going to date not for treating patients…..Wahan jaakar jagatmata na ban jaana.

Isha : We should decide in morning. I am going to sleep.

Pragya : Abe o maharani , we discuss so much important matter & u want to sleep.

Sanchi : Isha is right….

Pragya nods her head & throw a pillow on Isha. Trio go in deep slumber.

In morning –
Scene – Trio room which now become not at all less than dustbin.

All the room messed by dresses .

Isha : I think this one is good for u …(while holding her dress ?).

Sanchi : No way ….Isha….it’s look too short ….infact handkerchief is more lengthy than this.

Pragya start laughing like a maniac while Isha make irritated faces.

Isha : What are u trying to say….that i wear too much short dresses.

Sanchi : No, i didn’t mean that….i am not comfortable in this.

Pragya : Isha…u throw ur dresses ….these are useless like u.

Isha : Hahaa…very funny….u are saying like that u have better option.

Pragya : Sanchi, u wear saree…..You have na .

Sanchi : I don’t have.

Pragya : Khai main kood ke jaan de do….I think u refused Dr. Kabir for date.

Isha : Wait a sec….

Pragya : Now what ….Don’t tell me You also go with her to do suicide.

Isha : Nooo….I have Saree…

Pragya : Kya…..tere paas toh rumaal jaise kapde rehte hai….tune kahi churayi toh nahi.

Isha : Shut up ! Wo main maa ki le aayi thi.

She take out saree from her wardrobe & give it to Sanchi.

Sanchi : I don’t know how to wear it.

Isha : Oh noo… what should we do.

Pragya : No problem….I am with u.

Pragya start to wrap Saree ….

Isha : It’s looking good.

She wrap saree on her hand too.

Sanchi : I am not able to move guys…

Pragya : Oops….Take out ur hands .

Isha & Pragya hold each of her hand & start stretching.

Sanchi : Stop it ! You guys break my hands.

Pragya : We tried one more time.

They again started & take a deep breath after done it like that they are come after fighting any war.

Isha : It’s looking short yaar Pragya….why this not touching the floor.

Sanchi : Pragya, Isha I will kill u both.

Isha : Relax Sanchi…..we try one more time.

Pragya : Ya, try..try but don’t cry….last time.

Sanchi : Not at all ….. I am doing this .

She finally tied Saree with so much effort by taking help from video on internet.

Pragya : Ye idea humare dimag me kahe nahi aaya.

Isha : If u have brain , then idea only came in ur brain.

Pragya : Ha…u also zero size brain.

Sanchi : Not start again.

Isha : Now…we should done ur makeup.

Pragya : Isme toh ye maharani perfect hai.

Sanchi : No make up……..i don’t want to be Make up ki dukan like Isha.

Pragya chuckel on her statement while Isha throw juice on her from glass She escape & it falls on Sanchi’s saree accidentally. Both cupped their mouths in shock.

Pragya : Pher diya pani saari mehnat par.

Isha : Pani nahi juice.

Sanchi : Shut up ! You guys are not my friends….u are my enemies.

Pragya : Sanchi….ye is paglet ladki ka kaam hai

Isha : Sanchi…at least listen our plan.

She throw them out from the room.

She take out Pink Anarkali & get ready with minimal make up.


Hope u guys not bored with my useless idea….this is my chotu sa brain’s mistake as my lil brain give this much bakwaas idea. Tomatoes are acceptable but don’t throw eggs as i am pure vegitarian & chameli too as i get hurt.

I wrote this much….I know u miss Kabir….but i promise next part will consist Kanchi scenes only. Thanks for bearing my stupid writings.

With so much love


Niyu( Dramaqueen)?

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  1. So so beautiful story yaar

    1. Niyati

      Thank you sweetie for your comment…Glad that u like this.

  2. Riyarocks

    haha….such a hilarious one……u know what, inn 3 besties ki bonding dekhkar, main toh kabir ko bhool hi gayi…….haha….really yaar…saari duniya ek taraf, & hamare dost ek taraf… meri soch hai……..dusron ke baare mein main kuch nahi bol sakti……..luv u loads niyu dear…….gud nt….sweet drms……..

    1. Niyati

      Hey, didu thank u sooooo much for your comment….Ya, i am agree saari duniya ek taraf aur dost ek taraf…..Glad that u like this…..Lots of love & a big hug to u didu….Goodafternoon….hope ur day is good.

  3. Dhruti

    so amazing……..trio’s fight was awesome………………….. update next one soon…….

    1. Niyati

      Hey di, thanks for ur comment. Glad that u like this.Ya, will update soon & lots of love to u didu

  4. Ruhanika188

    Hahaha this is so nice Niyu di. Waiting for the next part. And yah l missed Kabir. Update soon. Love you

    1. Niyati

      Hey li sis , glad that u like this sweetie….thanks for ur comment dear. Aww,u missed kabir…no problem next one have only kanchi scenes….Ya, will update soon & lots of love to u.

  5. Priyanshipp

    Superb yaar. Awesome pls update soon.

    1. Niyati

      Hey thank u sweetie for ur comment….Glad that u found it superb….ya, will update very soon & lots of love to u.

  6. RuCh23

    ??? awesome Niyu ??? I don’t know why you said it’s useless ???? it’s so good ???

    1. Niyati

      Aww, thanks Ruwani dear for ur comment . Glad that u love this….mere baare main socha mat karo….dimaag main blast ho jayega….hahaaa…just kidding sweetie…..Lots of love to u sweetie.

  7. Haaaaaaye! Marjawa tumhare is os pe. It was awsom se bhi uper. Cute,funny,superb, minblowing amd beyond anything. Luv u for giving this to us. ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡[♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡. U r our ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆

    1. Niyati

      Hey, sweetie pie tanks for ur sooo sweet comment dear….Glad that u like this….u are also the OS queen dear…Lots of love to u sweetie.

  8. Anee

    hahaha…niyu….really amzing……..chhotu sa brain……………dhamakedaar ideas not bad….And pure vegitarian like me..hehehe…..happy to know that…..luv uh dear.

    1. Niyati

      Hey dearie, thanks for ur cute wala comment…..ya, my chotu sa brain…haha…Pure vegetarian…ohh, same pinch sweetie….Glad that u love this dear….Luv u soooo much dear.

  9. Seriously it was hortible nd sooo funny…this trio r tooooo cute…amazing… missed Kabir …update nxt soon…

    1. Niyati

      Hey, thank u Sanjukta for your comment dear….Glad that u like this….Cutie pie, u missed kabir don’t worry next one will be only kanchi scenes.Ya, will update soon& lots of love to u .

  10. Khamoshi

    Nitu … was hilarious dear..agar tumhara chhotu sa dimag itna achha article likh sakhta hai to tumhara bada sa brain kitna kuch likh sakhta hai yaar..? amazing article. Vaise to pura article mera fav hai par..

    Fav dialogue:
    Pragya : Abe o maharani….You are going to date not for treating patients…..Wahan jaakar jagatmata na ban jaana.
    Too good dear.

    1. Niyati

      Aww, so sweet comment dear….thank u sooooo much for your comment. Glad that u love dialogues…..itni tareef mat kiya karo, rona aa jaata hai…hehe…lots of love to u swetie & A big hug to u Mitu.

  11. Trisha139

    Awwww so hilarious yet cute one uff all thanks to you ! Amazing niyu !!! I loved it literally from the core of my heart !!!

    1. Niyati

      Hey didu thank u so much for ur comment. Your views really matter to me.Glad that u like this & all the credit for u as i learn from u…Lots of love to u.

  12. Aafiya


    1. Niyati

      Hey Aafiya, thank u so much for your comment dear….glad that u found it amazing . Lots of love to u.

  13. Niyaaa

    Hey niyu agar chotte se dimag me itne amaz idea aate h to plzz tumhare dimag ki copy karke mujhe bhej do mujhe kafi jarurat h nd trio ki bonding dekhkar to m kabir ko bhul gayi jab tumne yaad dilaya tab laga ohh teri kabir to qayab h..hehehe.. Nd super hilarious epi.. Nd kya sari pehnai hatts of to u puri mehnat pe pani i mean juice pher diya.. Lovv u choti post nxt asap

    1. Niyati

      Hahahaa….didu aapko mere chotu se brain ki zaroorat nahi kyunki aapke pas pehle se hi itne amaz ideas rehte hai.. It really means a lot to me. Glad that u like this. Thanks for ur sweet & cute comment.Ya, post very soon & lots of love to u didu…

  14. Hilarious one Niyu ! Loved it …updare soon dear

    1. Niyati

      Aww, thank u didu….glad that u like this….ya, will update soon. Lots of love to u & a big teddy hug for my didu.

  15. Awesome so funny

    1. Niyati

      Hey , thank u soo much sweetie. Glad that i bring smile on ur face….luv u dear.

  16. Abhilasha

    Niya dear u made my day ……I loved it bht Sara ……sachchi me yar tumne to dil garden garden kr dia …..kasam se agr samne hoti to mai ek dum tight wala hug kr leti …….sachchi me u r soo good ……and trio k efforts dekh ke ….haye bechari ……now excited for date!! Love uh !!! Lots of hugs and kisses to u!!!

    1. Niyati

      Abhi di, aww soo swweet comment…u also made my day with this comment. Thanks for this. Glad that i bring smile on ur face….koi baat nahi hug nahi toh kya flying kisses bhej rahi hun wo paunch jayenge aapke paas……pakad lena….Ya, will update soon & glad that u are excited….Lots of love & kisses to u didu.

  17. Hey Niyu di…..hope u are good now….i read Dastan someime ago, u again nailed it…..thanks for updating that…..When u going to update Rahasya….it’s almost one week….OMG di , such a hillarious one OS . I also fall from bed like Pragya & Isha after laughing……Saree part was amazing….title is perfectally suited .Luv u soo much. Wait a sec….u also not update Kanchi fs… why ???

    1. Niyati

      Hey Ishi, I am fine now. Glad u like Dastan update……aww, so sweet comment….thanks my babu for this.Glad that u love this OS title & plzz don’t fall from bad…..warna mujhe jail ho jayegi aise OS likhne par….hehe…just kidding….It will tae time to type babu….ok i will update Rahasya today only & my kanchi fs …i already submitted .. hope that publish soon. Luv u so so much my babu.

  18. Sajnana900

    Wooowww niyu diii u did best
    Friends must b like this if friend mn nok jhok nhn to friends friends nhn
    And it was best ever
    I cant understand that y u said it useless idea
    It was amazing and while reading it i totally forgot kabir
    Eagerly Waiting for nxt part

    1. Niyati

      Hey, my sweetie pie…..Aww, thank u soo much for your cute comment.Ya, right agar friends main fight na ho toh wo friends nahi hai as there is no place for formality between friends.Glad that u like this…accha baba…never say this useless…..update very soon & lots of love to u.

      1. Sajnana900

        Luv u 2222 3333 444 555 di ??????????????????

      2. Niyati

        Bas kar pagli…..ab rulagi kya….khushi ke aansun aa gaye aankh main.

  19. Amazing

    1. Niyati

      Thanks Amnaa for ur comment dear . Glad that u like this. Lots of love to u.

  20. Miss-Golgappa

    It’s suuuuppppeeeerrrrrbbbb bestieeee…… I just loved it to the core….. trio scenes where just hilarious…. i laughed a lot by thinking about the condition of their room just after their cute fight….. Last and the least hats off to you dearie…..

    1. Niyati

      Aww, so sweet of u bestiee. Thanks Yaar for ur comment.Glad that u like trio scenes.Glad that i bring smile on ur face sweetie. You too amazing writer. Salute to u too….lots of love & a big hug to u.

  21. Jessicca

    Niyu…. It was so cute… Wass so amazing… The cute nok jhoks was the best part… It was so hilarious… Loved it to the core… Brilliant…

    1. Niyati

      Aww, thank u so mucg comment….Glad that u love trios fights & cute nok -jhok …. Lots of love & a very big hug to u sweetie….

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