Hold me in the rain…….os

A rainy evening is overcrowding in the atmosphere of love.A night of love,of being one,two bodiesbecoming one soul is not far.
Perfect evening fr a perfect love.
Although people are bzee with no time for each other there are 2 souls or say two bodies ready to become one,starving for hold of each other.
Starving to melt in each other and to not care of world.
Nothing has its voice………………………………………
But the only voice is LOVE……………….Pure LOVE
To have each other’s fragrance of love in that full empowering fragrance of rainy mud.

A lonely beach is full of love shown like a beautifully decorated bride just for two bodies and to make them a soul…….
A car stops there and a handsome lover steps out dressed in a tuxedo looking beautiful and he is only for his love……………..
He moves towards car’s other side and opens the window just to let a beautiful srry the most beautiful lady for him in the world his life his LOVE………………………..
The lady is blindfolded wid a beautiful rosy silky cloth the colour of love.

She stepped out and cannot feel the sand below her foot but a sheet of roses in that rainy atmosphere.
Small droplets of rain drizzle over her shiny body
The lady is dressed in a beautiful red gown with black outlines fliffy from down looking a queen of her king in red and black tuxedo………….

The man holds lady’s prety hand and proceeds.
He opens her blindfold and .

GIRL:kunj (guys u might have guessed ) its the most beautiful date ever any husband might have given to his useless wife
Kunj:hey twinki star(so girl is ovio twinki only) dont u even dare to say anything about my star the one who brought me into light from darkness
one who taught me wat is life wat is called love
That rain was the best rain of my life when u saved me twinki that night wen i was saying a goodbye to my dark life from that cliff it was u who held my supportless hand in that rain.

It was u who by holding my hand made me realised the happiness that rain gives and helped me to forget all my sorrows.
I was haviing no one in my life bt a mere darkness and u left ur own for me it was not freindship bt love which u always proved by HOLDING MY HAND and making me perfect.

Although i had money but u made me realise that that money was not worthy for our love.
We fell in LOVE………………………
And that was hte moment where world actually the universe stopped for me and everyday when u r with me universe stops……….

We got married but i promised u not to proceed our relation till i give u alll comforts with my money. u respected it was the happiest moment of my life.I left all the wealth i had cos u said it was not mine and it was you who hold my hand….
That were the days when we have only a small shelter on us bt it was heaven.
I promised to not take further our relation till i become smthng and u supported me.
Thet were the days where we have a single bed to sleep and u were there who held my hand.
U slept over me adjusting on that bed and that was the most comfortable bed of my life.
I was hapyy to be ur matress over there i love u………………..

You hold my hand and i completed my study to become the biggest tycoon MR.KUNJ SARNA for the world but for u i will be always your HUBBY SARNA AS u call me………….

I LOVE U TWINKI STAR MORE THAN ANYTHING OR ANYONE IN THIS WORLD CAN DO TO SOMEONE………
I am yours twinki totally…………………..

That was the moment he saw a trail of blood flowing from his love’s eyes.
He panicked
Twinki i said something wrong??????? pls say why were u crying haan pls say na say i cant bear tears in ur eyes
I ll die twinki pls dont cry plssssss

TWI:hey mere hubby sarna u r the best (while sobbing) person u came in my life was the best moment of my life u became my hope to live my life fr smone i left my family fr my life only and that is u kunj i love u more than u

KUNJ comes close to her and holds her by waist with hand and their bodies touch as they both are melting in that drzzling rain.
He puts his rosy lips on her beautiful bubbly soft rosy cheeks and SUCKS the trail of flowing tears

Same he does with her second cheek while his LOVE closes her eyes.

He then moves backward and says
Twinkle i can never see u crying u r my star who brought light to my body not life bcos before u i was not having any life to live but you came to give me life.

He was also crying now and…………………………
He feels a pair of rosy lips sucking his tears it was his lady love his star TWINKI……………

Kunj:twinki today i ve fulfilled my promise and hav owned a name just or u and now(HE SITS ON HIS KNEES)
Will u like to be mine frever…………………

Twi:i was urs always and will be my hubby sarna today i wanna be ur soul………………. and she lifts him up and hugs him tightly……….

RAIN started heavily making run the droplets of water roll on two lover’s shiny bodies………………..

( guys read or listen this song while reading brackets full episode is in brackets in that song )
*WARNING: READ ON UR OWN RISK BUT U CAN READ ITNA BHI ZYADA NAHI Hoga u all can read if u want*

Boond boond karke mujh mein girna tera
Aur mujh mein mujhse zyaada hona tera (x2)
(Kunj hold twi’s hand and brings her to the beach inside the beach.He lifts her up sensuously and while lifting he plants kisses on her whole gown.
He brings her down and opens her hair from a bun.He then takes her to a swimming pool made their by lifting her in a bridal style.Twinkle’s eyes are closed and she can only feel her beinginto kunj)

Bheega bheega sa mujhko tan tera lage
Aaja tujhko peelun mann mera kahe
(Due to rain and pool both are wet.Kunj proceeds towards her as she moves backwards in the pool and is stopped by a pool wall.
She moves her face to side while kunj brings her mouth in front by his mouth’s side and holds her tightly by waist.
He turns her around and removes his coat.Her back is pressed into kunj her naked back as her gown was backless was melting in that rain on kunj.
Kunj kisses her shoulder her full neck and back with lakhs of kisses an also leave his love bites while twinkle closing her eyes felt that bautiful pain groaning his name softly)

Main naa bachaa mujh mein thoda sa bhi
Dekh tu naa bachaa tujhme bhi
Jalne lagaa garm saanson se main
Tu pighalne lagaa mujhme hi
(Twinkle can feel hot breaths of kunj passing over her bare back and she melts in that breathes)

Qatra qatra main jalun
Sharm se tere milun
Jism tera moum ka pighla dun…
(She turns around and removes his black shirt.Now kunj has his upper body bare.His each and every abs cut is perfectly showcased and twinkle while having both her hands floating above water sensuously lifts her eyes with a thirsty glazre.
Her eyes shows the thirst to melt in her love KUNJ………
She bends her upper body backwards and lifts her leg upward as to float in water but she keeps digging in water sensuously with her s*xy figure perfectly lined.Kunj too dips him in water and both start swimming from opposite sides……. and proceeding towards each other……………

Tune plays……….
Now only their faces are outside the water their full bodies are inside water.Kunj’s upper body is bare only……..Both hold
each other’s hands and starts to slide in water down…………….)
Karwatein bhi tang ho
Raat bhar tu sang ho
Tere har ek ang ko sulga dun…
(they both swim beautifully inside the water withe bubbles popping out of their mouths and they both hold each other’s hand and……………………………..
A deep passionate water liplock turning the clear bluish water red wid blood of their lips and red reflections of love……………………………………………………………………………………………………
Now both come out of sea to get their breaths but love cannot be stopped.Kunj holds twinkle from his hands at her bare back
Twinkle hangs her head down exposing her neck to kunj’s mouth……
Kunj kisses,sucks and licks her neck by opening his lips and grabbing her flesh only within his lips……………)

Bheega bheega sa mujhko tan tera lage
Aaja tujhko peelun mann mera kahe
(Twinkle just throws her whole body for kunj hanging her head and her one hand floating in water.Kunj is holding her from side by her waist means kunj is standing in water and twinkle is being held like in bridal style not so properly like that.
Twinkle moves her one leg on other sensuously as some of her gown lifts up………………….
Kunj is bzee tasting her and she just enjoys it,………………)

Main naa bachaa mujh mein thoda sa bhi
Dekh tu naa bachaa tujhme bhi
Jalne lagaa garm saanson se main
Tu pighalne lagaa mujhme hi
(they both now stnad in water and kunj lifts wet hair from her face to tuck on her ears while she also sides her face both of them jumps inside the water only facing their back to the floor of pool just like laying on bed with front facing forward and back touching the bed they both make themselves float by doing leg swimming slowly and sensuously.Both roll over and kunj lifts her up to proceed towards that beautifully decorated bed)

Hone de kuch ghaltiyan
Rengti yeh ungliyaan
Jism ke tu darmiyaan thehra de
(He lays her on that bed and opens the side zip of her gown… by coming over her.)

Lamha koi garm tu yaa ubalti barf tu
Mujhpe hoja kharch tu yun aake
(Kunj stands and now twinkle slides her foot on his trousers and then his bare stomach upto chest leaving the signs of her nails………………..
Kunj holds her foot and pulls her dress up throwing it near bed……………………)

Bhiga bhiga sa mujhko tan tera lage
Aaja tujhko peelun mann mera kahe
(now twinkle is just left in a shots type thing and a black rose net crop top a backless crop top(as her gown was backless too but) this crop top has its hold above butt of twinkle.
Kunj moves his hand through the legs of twinkle squeezing upto her thighs and pushing her back on bed coming upon her with knees digged into bed ………………)

Main naa bachaa mujh mein thoda sa bhi
Dekh tu naa bachaa tujhme bhi
Jalne lagaa garm saason se main
Tu pighalne lagaa mujhme hi
Song ends but os abhi baaki hai

(Now without brackets only)
Twinkle lifts herself wildly and sensually.She comes near kunjs ear and starts chewing it while he is removing her crop top .
Now she stops chewing it and kunj with a sebastical look comes more close to her and holds her br*asts and squeeze them tightly making her groan in pain and pleasure……………………………
Now twinkle comes over him removing his trousers and by the time now they are fully naked kunj opens the curtains and whole of their bed surrounded by it only and a light of love peeps……………..
She preeses her body her stomach on his and her br*asts on his abs just like ine body one soul.

She implants a lascivious kiss on his lips both fondle for each other’s mouth increasing hotness of that rainy night

Now kunj comes over her and while kissing onle she entangle her legs tightly on his waist pulling him more into her…………
The kiss is deepening although it lacked air but air of love was enough now they pulled out from kiss and both started making love to each other …………………………………
THAT DAY MADE THAT TWO SOULS ONE FOREVER
ITS NOT A LUST BUT LOVE “PURE LOVE”
LOVE IS NOT HAVING s*x BUT IT IS HOLDING SOMEONE’S HAND
AND MAKING HIM SHOW WHAT THAT PERSON IS TO YOU……….

PHewwwwwwwww. boht hua omg itna lamba pata hai kitna time laga main isse pure one week se likh rahi thi jab time milta tha nw its completed hope u all like it jitni feelings thi sab daal di i think this one is my best writing till now i know u all ll not like it fr u i think it ll just a crap only but iss crap pe bhi comment kar dena
i know thoda sensuous tha but koi nahi shayad itna toh chalega…………………..
Plssssssssssssssssssssssssss commnt love u my jaanssssssssssssssssssss

37 comments

  1. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Woaaaah itna romantic osπŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€
    Kts awesome
    Lovely. I really liked it. U rock sweetheart
    Loved it
    Lots of loveπŸ’•

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Shukr hai meetu madam ne bhi commnt kia I tjot inki toh mujhse katti hai isiliye toh koi ff pe bhi commnt nnahi kia well thanku soook mich love u …….

  2. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Was it really my paavu di !!???? Mah god…u drove me crazy..
    How dare u call it a crap hnn ?? Are u over smart..no u aren’t…well sooo romantic..
    Hayyeeeeeee loved it…my darling….u really rock yr di..
    I just have one reaction 😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Hope u understood….keep writing nd yeah post ur ff soon…
    Love u….

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Ghabra mat adyu teri paavu di hi hun koi aur nahi………
      sachi I drove u crazy????……
      Well crap hi kahingi kyunki mere sabhi ffs bhi crap hi lagte hain sab ko tabhi toh sirf 7 commnts……
      well happy dat u liked it…..
      I loved ur reacn………
      Yeah i ll post it soon bt ll cont agar uspe zyada commnts mile toh

      • Adya

        |Registered Member

        Pagalon wali Baat mt Kro !!!
        7 comments mile ya 20 …It doesn’t matters…what matters is how much we love u….Aur vo to ap janti hee ho…well do write more…Aur hnn plss don’t be sad…
        Yaad h n…hamari frndship kaise hui thi ????
        Arre ni yaad h…to go check out the comments on ur previous episodes..
        Fir se aisa kaha n ….to Mai…Mai..Mai..n vapis usi tarah datungi !!!! Smjhi ….
        BUDDHU ….ab se aapka new name
        MY BUDDHU DI !!!!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Love u soo much….

      • Paavu

        |Author

        Acha baba ty fr ur love I love u more than u do me and I do remember evrythng and dis name yrr chnge karde buddhu nahi plshhhhh

  3. Baby

    |Registered Member

    ohhhooooooooo my paavu darling β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯ ☺☻β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
    ohhhhhh god bas dil ghum rhe hain iss baarish ke mosm mein uffff
    kya likha tha yr sis mein kya khun fbulous i loved it sooo much hmmm romantic to tha woh bhi full on dhamake wala yr wwoowww speechless i am… πŸ˜€
    this story stabbed my heart srsly but wid awe of love
    kya khun yr mein love hi love ab or kuch nhi ikh rha hai mujhe hahahaa…… β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
    yr kya khete hain
    THIS IS IT……….
    PERFECT………..
    ohhhoooo sweetheart bas ab kya khun mein tere samne toh bolne layak naa chode tumne hmko bilkul bhi………mun par tape laga kar bitha dia hai…..bas heartbeats kaam kar rhin hain…
    DHAK DHAK romance uff DHAK DHAK OS….β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
    lovely os
    charm was dere as sid was dere….
    romance toh tha hi kunki do souls the….. πŸ˜€
    uff hot bhi thi voh bhi spr hot n sey gal
    haan haan i know jyada hi likh rhi hun vohh bhi kaisa kaisa kya kya par kya karun…
    words will be less to describe u love you sis………..lods n lods………… πŸ˜€ β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Rula diya na socha hi tha na hunnh damu jaan kyun mujhe diabetes karane par tuli hai khud bhi itti shweetu hai aur commnt toh honey mein dooba hi pada hai mujhe diabetes ho jayegi apni ishu ka khayal rakh teri frnd hun mera khayal rakh par sachi aise commnts toh roz chalenge phir chahe jitni marzi siabetes ho tu sachi mwi damu mera khayal rakhti hai wid ur extra swt commnts loved it meri pyari damu lots and lots of love frm ur ishu and ya teri ishu abhi tak rahi hai itna swt commnt jo diya hai yrr tune apni paavu urf ishu ko love u

  4. twinj

    Hey paavu,
    Luved it.Title ki tarra story bhi bahat cute hai. amazing plus awesome os.Did u change ur writing style paavu? I really luved this writing style of urs.Too gud.Pls do write more os.

    Lots of luv,
    twinj

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Thanks dear and ya I ve totally changed my wrtng style cos none was liking and commnting on it on dis also noone is commnting bt I feel dis styke is gud

  5. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    Wow! U made me sweat! I liked it…it was beautifully sculpted! My fav part was the beginning…it was simply pretty. Loved it.

  6. SidVee

    😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    This was so beautiful and romantic.. its beautifully written😍😍.. you nailed it πŸ™‚ keep writing more like this ❀❀

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Ty dear and ya I changed my wrtng style cos none was liking my prev style nw I ll wrt my all ffs also in dis style so that’s why

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Angu dear ty soo much I m happy u loved it at own right sk wala bhi itna dangerous nahi hai soo u can read its nic only nothing dangerous at all

  7. Aamu

    |Registered Member

    Omg….wat to say yaar…
    Tu to romance queen nikli….
    Chupa rustam…
    Oh yay…it was amazing…
    U know wat i woke up now n remember ur os…last time u fell bad so i m reading on d bed…
    No long cmnt…mumma gussa karegi..
    Bahbye
    Love uβ™₯β™₯β™₯β™‘β™₯β™₯β™₯

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Thanks meri jaan aamu dear u write nice only and rwad my writings is enough fr me I can understand isliye dun ask fr srry thanks fr saying me romance queen thanks its a swt name love u tooooooo

  8. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hey Paavu! firstly I’m really very very very very very very very sorry for late cmmnt…actually busy sedule but jab bhi time milta hai to cmnt karti rahti hu… pls forgive me…

    Anyways cmng the epi… wowwww yarrr what was that haan? I mean it was superb fabulous os… really such a hot n romantic but too beautiful… n that pool scene hayeee somewhere I feel like a connection with TEI… really yarr serial ki yaad dila di… it was so sweet ….. loved twinj love for eo… well I like ur this new style of writing but love old too…… do write more like this….

    Waise I’m also writing a ff”TEI-Ishq chupta nahi chupane se(A possessive n blind love)~Twinj ff” pls do read it if u can…. don’t worry I’ m not forcing …

    Lots of love n keep smiling

    “Shalini/Neha”

    • Paavu

      |Author

      Hey ty vipul dear happy dat u loved it bt I dun thought to take serial’s pool romabce I vee seen it anf utd simple snx diff frm mine one in mine dey do romsnce under watrr twinkle’s throwing herself to kunj in water senaatio hst read it u ll get to know nt rven a singke moment is similar bt only dey rkmanve in pool is that and I changed vrnud yoo its beach sife and d stry is aldo diff gere u read it its saving life etc….
      And ya I saw ur post actually I ws bzee yesterday today in fact nw only I ll read frst epi was awesome of ur ff love u

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