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HIS HEART OUT (OS)

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Dedicated to my friend Anu as she is the one who always wanted Shivaay to apologise Annika….
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“Annika”-Shivaay Singh Oberoi whispered,”jyada tadi mat maro”.
Annika looked at her packed bag and her limping brother. She have to leave Oberoi mansion. She was never a choice of Shivaay Singh Oberoi … his hypothesis and phenomenon of Name-Blood- Lineage… She have no money.
He was always the Tadibaaz SSO for her till they both along with OmRu joined hands to expose Tia Kapoor.
“It does matter Annika”- He never was easy at explaining emotions,”It does matter a lot to you”.

“Mujhe koi fark nahi padta Shivaay”-Annika replied back suddenly.
He lost the last round of their personal and Private romantic war of fark padta hai..and he could not accept that easily.

He just picked her packed suitcase and ran to his… no their room.
“Shivaay mera bag wapas dijiye”-Annika told her voice more cold then ice..
Annika followed to snatch her bag to live her life independently once again like she was doing till she meet the Kanji eyed Bhagad Billa who changed her life…made fun of a sacred bond like marriage by asking for a divorce on the very next day of marriage… introduced an other married women as his wife before the press and media…
Dadi smiled at the usual fight of her children . Her Billu and his Billi and same time felt proud for the amazing job they did by exposing Tia Kapoor..
OmRu were very happy and satisfied as they know that Shivaay Singh Oberoi their super hero can make every thing alright when he is willing to …
“Finally some sense come in his business brain that money is not every thing”-Shakti gave free gyaan..

“That it is Annika he can not live with out”- Omkara added,”his money could not buy him any support like Annika did “.
“Lets go and lock the door of their room”- Rudra’s duffer bain gave a good idea,”they will fight.. and then make it up for each other but could not ignore each other”.
Priyanka and Rudra locked the glass door as soon as Annika entered inside of the room.
“Clicked!!!”-Shivaay felt proud for the support his family gave him.
“Annika … you should not go any where”-He started the topic that was interrupted down stair in living room”You will be left alone with out any family support”.
“I was an orphan Shivaay”- Annika is always truthful,”before and after my marriage”.
“I want to resume my normal life”- She is some times at very daring mode,”It was never my dream to trap a rich man and enjoy his wealth like you accused me of being a gold digger”.
“It was me Annika”- Shivaay accepted,”Who was addicted to your presence Annika… its me who was obsessed with you”.
“I am not attached to anyone Shivaay except Saahil”- Annika said,”I can never be”.
“I was sad for this reason. I wanted to be attached with you right from the first time I saw you”- SSO let his emotions in open.
“You wanted to get attached to a girl who has not even a surname”- Annika tried best to shut his mouth.

“She have a surname and a very big family now”-Shivaay accepted her in his family.
“and a husband who have a big and fat ego”-Annika had preparers well to win this argument from Bhagad Billa at any cost.
Shivaay had no other way to stop him rather then using his charm now. He came very close to her and hold her hand gently.
“I am asking for the last time Annika”-He was dangerously close to her now,”tumhe sach mein koi fark nahi padta!!”.

How can she deny his this close ness as it always does some mich michi feeling to her and rang a ghanti in her heart.
“Bilkul nahi padta hai fark”- She managed to lie.
“Why did you tried to save me from the evil clutch of Kapoor’s then??”- Shivaay threw a long question at his wife,”why did you trust me over the DNA report??”.
” I am an optimist Shivaay”-Annika gave the wrong answer as he noticed her eyes was down,”I never judge people by trusting other’s words when I know about the character of that person very well”.
“Tum bhi mujhe Tadti thi that too before marriage”- Shivaay was determined to hear the truth,”like I was doing the same to you”.
“I was just being with truth”- by now her heart was doing Summersault.
“At a point when I was losing trust over my self confidence and control”- He encouraged her to speak her heart out.

“I always told you about Tia being married before but you was just blind by a damn deal to see the truth”- She accused him.
“That was the huge mistake I did Annika”- Shivaay regretted of not trusting her .
She is the selfless girl saved him and his family from all troubles without expecting anything in return at the cost of her self respect and dignity some times.
“Tumhe fark padta hai Annika for every situation I fell with”- He looked at her eyes,”bahut fark like the same fark mujhe bhi padta hai”.
“Tumhari har baat se.. every happiness tears smile fight”- He was madly in love with her.
“A special ghanti bajta hai … in my heart like it does to you… by your nearness”- He tried to impress her.
“Your habbit of throwing things at me and my habit of breaking things are interconnected like our two heart.

“Where is your business mind Shivaay”-Annika threw his principle at him,”brain on front seat and heart on back seat”.
He smiled once she will finish talking her heart out … it will be fine.
“My heart was on winter hibernation until the time I met you”- He confessed,” you were hell bend to spread a special raita in my life but now I love the raita just way I love you”.
“This is love Shivaay”-Annika wondered”- Annika have a doubt on all the lovely and romantic confession she saw in Hindi movies.

“This is love Annika ..”- Shivaay agreed,”our love is unusual”.
“Aap to bade chantumai nikle”-Annika praised,” love with an attitude… full tadibaaz”.
“I want to be a real Ishqbaaz now Annika only for you”- Shivaay wanted to follow the foot step of his late Dadaji…
“I am like this only… you have to manage with my Tadi your whole life”- He for the first time thought marriage as a matter of heart… a deal from Dil.
“I am sorry … hit me ..fight with me… throw water on me… but don’t leave me Annika”- He desired for her presence in his life..,”I will not be able to live with out you”.
“Like air..water…oxygen!!”-,She asked.

“more then that … coz all these are support system for life and you are my life itself'”- A romantic Oberoi is hard to resist.
Annika hugged him with a right .. like she is his wife.
“You are my wife”-He gave her the right,”I am expecting some more hugs like this in near future from you”.
“I too felt the same for you”- Annika whispered,”I was afraid to tell you as you are a person who even asks enemies about their NKK”.
“I was a fool to hurt you”- Shivaay also accepted.

“You are SSO”- she can’t see his emotional side… a
watching a vulnerable Shivaay hurt her.
“Call me Billuji some times Annika”- He invited,”I felt near and attached to you”.
“I will call you Bhagad Billa”-She threat,”one day I front of your client’s in a business meeting”.
Shivaay smiled in a genuine way… Yes she is now not leaving him alone.
“Leave me.. I want to go now”- She ordered.
He stared at his wife in a disbelieve way.
“I want to go down stair to meet Saahil”- She learned to tease her husband.
“Go by pool side door”- He suggested,”OmRu had locked the front door”.
This revelation turned her in to a beautiful shade of pink.
“Annika you are blushing!!!”- Shivaay shouted from behind….

65 Comments
  1. Nita D

    It’s awesome…loved it….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx.Nita D. It means a lot to me.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Setu…

  2. Jerry_36

    Astha di, it was damn wonderful. Loved every inch of it. Hatts off☺

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx.Jerry. Shivaay taste the bitterness of his own medicine here lolz…

  3. Pooja26

    amazing……..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Pooja….

  4. Awesome….superbbbbbbb

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Bhavana…

  5. Surbhi Sharma

    Aww .. astha di . Muahh 😘😘😘. Ekdum jhakkas . Loved it . 😘😘😘😘😘😘.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx.Surbhi .. you read my OS even in your tight and busy schedule…love you…

  6. Wow… Loved it… Wonderful.. πŸ˜πŸ‘

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arya… thank you dear..

  7. Astha di ekdum jahakkas
    a really fanatbulous os

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Laasya…
      I love your name…it gives me a buttery fellings…

  8. You rocked dii…. Love you a lot dii….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. for the love you have for me and my shivika….

  9. Superb….. loved it….

  10. Piyuu

    wow ….really fantastic dear

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Piyuu dear….

  11. Gayathri.visu

    Fantastic Astha di…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Gayathri….

  12. Good yaar …I liked it ….please read yesterday ib page and all the last comment from me is to u……if u want read it…or I will be so sad…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I went a day back and read you…
      From your cmt. I understand only one thing… that you are still innocent only… but when you can put cmt. on a web site to a popular show… and can keep your point of view there… you are not a child…you are mature enough to keep your thought about a character…
      and about not talking with you… I have nothing against you… neither Archi have….just act as one responsible girl not to hurt others feelings when you are on a public page…
      I was not angry at you… just upset ki just because of me..
      you were leaving IB page… which is not granted by me.
      I am very dangerously truthful …and I have a sharp cutting tongue and hand too to type my thought lolz….and I am more then stubborn…
      And this is a capricorn thing… out burst come to us coz. it stays suppresses for a long time….(I had literally no idea about it… but my mammaya gave me the horoscope gyaan yesterday only…ha ha…)
      I always love all members here… so the same is applied for you too…
      Forget the past… focus on present… stop thinking about things that are beyond control….
      Love you always….

      1. I was crying yesterday after reading ur comments so I returned to IB back….but yaar u are the most wonderful person I have everseen because …..I don’t have words anyway love u a lot my chunkkk sis….I don’t know the meaning of chunkkkkk sis because my fend priya used to call me always…….tears coming ….if u have never replied to me I don’t know what will happen to me….so tomorrow onwards talk with me or today itself because I like to read ur comments…….

  13. And should give reply….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. for reading my OS even during our personal
      miss- understanding…..

      1. Yaar…sorry and thanx a lot is everything fine…..so except me as ur frnd ..is it…

  14. Aasthu Gaaru!!!! Oh my sweet darling!! πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ˜˜
    I am speechless!! This is just too far amazing.. thank you dear!! I just hope we see a similar apology from SSO in IB too! Wah what dialogs yaar..
    My favourite.. call me billuji sometimes annika!! Am feeling so πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

    1. ,It was me who was obsessed with you.. ‘I just so wanna hear it from Shivaay!!
      Am reading this again n again.. and still don’t feel satisfied!!

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu Darling ….
      I always thought to insult Shivaay in a way that never will hurt any of his fan… as all were saying that I am a blind fan of my brother Shivaay…and supporting him in all situations…
      So this was my way of making him accept all his misdeed to Annika…
      Thnx. for loving it … that you read it up to numerous times….love you always…

  15. Awesome….
    Ekdum khidkitod….
    Romantic SSO is hard to resist….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Shivika… Thnx.
      Romantic SSO is hard to resist is only for Annika….not for all
      .. in my OS….lolz…

  16. Anujohnson

    It is super duper awesome…loved it…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anujohnson….thank you… keep loving Shivika…..

  17. Astha
    I was missing Annika calling him Billuji..!! Good job Astha. πŸ˜„

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I too was missing “Billuji” from Annika….
      Lax…Thank you…

  18. Aweosme OS…keep writing… all the very best..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Zaveesha….

  19. Sumitha

    nice one dr…………like it………….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Sumitha…

  20. No words to say about ur OS astha reddy… It’s wonderful n I enjoyed n feel d whole essence of ur writing.. Awesome dear..keep on writing yaar…all d best dear..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Chavi…. keep loving…

  21. Astha baby.you rocked it.
    Tum to itni acchi likhti ho.toh kal ke episode ke last part ke baare main ek os likho na accha lagega. (Just my suggestion. )

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Arpita…
      kal ke last part lekar os… I will try it soon…

  22. Excellent

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Charitha…

  23. Nice…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      thnx. Fffan1234….

  24. Akshaya_13

    I toh loved it!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. dear…

  25. I gave reply in this page itself….now can u say me one thing what is meant by ff….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      If its about my writing then ff means fan fiction…
      If its about me and other ishquies then ff means friends forever….

  26. Fati

    The dialougesπŸ‘Œ I loved it ❀
    Simple and beautifully written…❀❀😍😍

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Fati dear….

  27. astha dear just like ur analysis , ur os is also kidkithod. I loved it yaar ….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Aska… ha ha… keep loving it…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Alekhika dear…

  28. Shuklarashi

    Awesome

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx.Rashi… keep loving…keep reading….

  29. Kanfi

    Awwwwsmmm creativty dear,,amazimhgggh

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Kanfi… and amazing reader …amazing our Shvika…

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