Our Hearts Are Connected Chapter-1

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Hi evry1! I m poor in writing ff but I tried this. I have previously written 2 is n thnx 2 every1 who commented n supported me. I hav not given any intro / character sketch / prologue n have directly started wid d main plot as I want u all 2 form ur own intro / sketch of characters n understand d plot of d story as it progresses. Do put ur valuable comments.

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A Big & Beautiful House Like A Haveli Is Shown. That Is Gm. A Woman’s Voice Calling Someone Can Be Heard. She Is Calling One Of The Lady Servants.

A Woman Wearing A Dark Pink Saree To The Servant- “Have U Seen Swara?” With A Worried Face.

She Is Revealed To Be Sumi.

Servant- “Does Flying Bird Also Have Any Fixed Place? Now Where Your Golden Bird Is Flying, How Will I Know?”

Another Women Wearing Green Saree Comes- “U R Right! Our Swara Is Golden Bird. N Di Wants To Keep Her Locked In A Cage.” With A Smile.

She’s Janki.

Sumi- “U Surely Know How 2 Praise Ur Daughter. Ok U R Only Her Mother. Who M I 2 Say Her Anything?

Servant- “Ya Absolutely. Both Of U Luv More 4 Eo’s Child. That Way She Has More Rights 2 Care About Swara Di.”

Sumi- “Ya So Wen Am I Stopping Her? But Tell Her This Also That A Mother’s Duty Gets Over Wen Her Daughter Is Sent To Her In-Laws House. N Here Janki Is Not In Any Thought Of Her Marriage.”

Another Woman Frm Back- “If U’ll Lock Golden Bird In Cage Won’t It Stop Chirping?”

She’s Parvati / Dadi

Sumi- “Ok I M Not Locking Her In Cage But Tell Me Her Location, Don’t Know Whr Ur Bird Has Gone. I M Finding Her Frm Mrng. She Is Nowhere 2 B Found In D House. N Her Father 1side Is Seeing His Files N Another Side Asking For Swara”

Parvati- “She Must B Coming. I’ve Only Sent Her 2 D Ayurvedic Doc. 2 Bring Ur Medicine 4 Relief Frm Headache.”

Sumi- “So Far N That Too Alone?”

Parvati- “Wat Happened? She’s Not A Kid.”

Sumi- “2day’s World Is Also Bad N……

Janki- “Di She’ll Come. Y R U Getting So Much Worried?”

Sumi- “U R Asking Me Y…. Wenever She Goes Out Of House Alone, I Get Worried She Behaves As Kid.”

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Outside A Girl In White Anarkali Is Shown Shouting Wait, Uncle Wait, Wait. A Lake Is Shown Wid Many Boats. She Gets On 1 Of Dem N Takes Deep Breathes N Then Smiles. D Boat Then Moves. She Is Swara. Flower Petals R Kept On 1 Side Of D Boat Wich R Falling On Her Face Due 2 Wind. She Sits N Then Bends N Feels D Water N Plays Wid It. Music Bg Plays. They Reach On D Other Side. She Climbs Numerous Stairs As If She Is Dancing N Evry1 Luks At Her N She Has A Wide Smile On Her Face. She Then Runs 2wrds D Temple. Wen She Luks Down, She Sees A Baraat Going. She Goes Whr D Birds R Present N Eating Grains.

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Below D Stairs At D Same Place. Voice Of Girl Can Be Heard Shouting Swara, Swara, Swara.

Upstairs Swara Stops Running N Luks Down- “Wat R U Doing There, Ragini? Come Up Fast.”

She Is Ragini Wearing Purple Salwar Suit.

Rag- “Stop It Swara Stop It I Can’t Walk More Fast.” Saying This She Starts Climbing Stairs.

Swa- “Hav U Bcome Old? U Cant Climb These Stairs Also?”

Rag Cursing Herself- “Coming God Coming” With A Tired Luk.

Swa- “Do Fast!”

Rag Gives A I Can’t Do This Luk N Nodes Her Head In A No.

Swa- “Ok Sit There Only. I Don’t Hav Any Prob.”

Rag Reaches Up.

Rag- “U R Girl Or Thunder. Running Lyk A Thunder Whole Day. Aren’t U Tired? Climbing These Many Stairs, 1 Day I’ll Die.”

Swara Is Shown Buying Puja Items.

Swa- “Dadi Says Faith Should In Heart N Trust In Mind. 4 Cmpleting Desires, People Go On Hard Pilgrimages. They Cross All Mountains, Etc. N U Lost Now Only.”

Rag- “U R Grt Goddess.” Both Laugh.

Temple-

Pandit- “2day U Hav Come 4 Worshipping Early Mrng, Swara Daughter, Any Desire?”

Swa Luks At Rag N Innocently Says- “Desire Is There, A Vry Big 1 Just Wish That It’s Fulfilled.”

Pt.- “It’ll B Fulfilled, Gud.”

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Rag- “Pt. Must Be Thinking Tat U Hav Come 2 Pray 4 Gud Boy’s Marriage Proposal But Listening 2 Ur Desire He Would Faint”

Swa- “So U Mean It Has Less Imp. 2 Tak Dad’s Permission 4 Watching A Film 4 Wich I M Waiting Since Long That’swhy I Came Here 2 Do Buttering 2 Lord. I Won’t Tak Any Risk.”

Both Laugh.

Rag- “Yes, Yes. In Talks, V 4got Abt Tym, It’s Vry Late, Don’t U Hav 2 Go Home.”

Swa- “Come, Come, Come, Do Fast”

Both Run.

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Gm-

Parvati (Monologue)- “It’s Vry Late. Don’t Know Whr Is Dis Girl? First Tym She Is So Late. See D Tym. If Her Mother’ll Ask Wat Wil I Answer Her? Leave It, She’s Kid, She’ll Come. Btw I Also Nvr Cared Tym. I M Sure My Daughter Is My Copy N Laughs. She Sees Swara Coming. Came, See Now How I’ll Take Her Class.Truth Is Tat After Seeing My Granddaughter’s Face, I’ll Forget Everything.”

Swara Shouts N Back Hugs Her N Kisses On Cheek- “Dadi, Dadi”

Parvati Breaks Hug- “Leave All This. Whr Were U Till Now? U Said I’ll Go Now N Come Now N U R Coming Now Do U Know How Many Things I Hav 2 Say 2 Ur Mother?”

Swa- “Dadi Is Vry Angry? Won’t U See Wat I Hav Brought 4 U…. Hmm See Na.” N She Takes Out A Box Of Sweets.

Parvati Smiles.

Sumi Comes Frm Back- She Knows Ma How 2 Make U Happy. 1st Away All Alone Frm House Since Mrng N Behaving Lyk A Kid. Behave Lyk Marwadi Girls But U Won’t Understand. Ok Leave” N She Forwards Her Hand.

Swa- “Wat”

Sumi- “Medicine Or Wat?”

Swara Mumbles Medicine N Luks Confused.

Sumi- “U Went 2 Ayurvedic Doc. No?”

She Then Mumbles Ayurvedic Doc. N Luks At Parvati Who Signs Her Seen By Sumi.

Sumi- “Maa. Again U Were Saving Her

Parvati-“No That That That”

Sumi Was Abt 2 Say Smthing But Stops Seeing Servants Laughing At Dem N Smiles- “Wat Should I Do Of U Both? N Yes Ur Dearest Father Is Hungry Frm Mrng Just Bcoz Of U Go N Show Ur Face Fast.”

She Runs.

Sumi ;Ets A Sigh- “Thank God!”

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In Corridor, She Collides Wid A Small Kid.

Swa- “Hmm…. Ayush Tell Me In These Clothes Whr R U Going 2day School Isn’t There?”

Ayu- “It Is But I M Having Stomachache. Promise”.

Swa- “Ur Promise Won’t Do Anything Choti Maa Won’t Agree.”

Ayush Smiles- “But Badi Maa Will Agree.”

Swa- “Areyyy Ayush Those Who Hav Stomachache They Don’t Run On Air’s Horse’s Back.”

Ayush Gives Hi-5 To Swa- “Right, Thnx Di” N Starts Acting N Goes.

Downstairs-

Janki- “Di Di Hav U Seen Ayush? Its Schooltym N His Is Nowhere 2 B Seen.”

Sumi- “He May B Here N There Only… See”

Ayush Comes Doing Acting

Sumi- “Wat Happened”

Ayu-“ My Stomach Is Paining Vry Much.”

Sumi-“ U Go N Take Rest.”

Ayu- “No Badi Maa, I Hav 2 Go 2 School I Can’t Miss My School”

Janki Scolding Ayush- “Whom R U Believing Di?”

Sumi- “Wen Its Ur Daughter Swara’s Case Everything Is Ok N In My Ayush’sh Case Everything Goes Reverse.”

Parvati- “O My Ayush Got Stomachache.”

He Nods.

Parvati- “Ahh Wat Happened? I Had Bought Sweets. Now They’ll Get Wasted.”

Ayu- “Sweets?”

She Nods- “No Prob. I’ll Distribute Dem.”

Ayu- “No No No No I’ll Eat Dem None Else Only Me.”

Janki Holds His Ears N Sarcastically- “But U R Having Stomachache, So Sad.”

Ayu- “Yes, But Now It’s Getting Cured Slowly.”

Janki- “Ohh..”

He Nods.

Janki- “Nthing Will Work, U Hav 2 Go 2 School.”

Ayu- “Not Fair Dadi U Cheated Me.”

Upstairs-

A Man Is Shown Reading Files With Heading “Gadodia Grp Of Hotels”

Swara Opens Room’s Door- “Dad!”

Man- “Swara! Come In Front Of Me.”

She Comes Wid A Smile. He Removes File In Front Of His Face N Is Revealed 2 Be Shekhar.

Swa Luks Nervous- “I Became A Little Late While Coming. I Went 2 Temple. I Mean I Had Taken Dadi’s Permission.”

Sumi Comes Frm Back- “Little Late? In Tat Tym Ur Dad Has Aksed 4 U A Dozen Of Tym. Is He Carefree? Wenever He Is 2 Do Smthing Gud, Wil 1st See Ur Face N Then Do.”

Shekhar- “After Many Days, Dis Happiness Has Come 2 Our House After Her Birth N Our Business Spread, V Gained A Lot, U Know Only How Ausipicious She Is 4 Us. Its R8, Daughters’re Another Face Of Goddess Of Wealth.”

Sumi- “Ok Agreed, But Does Ur Goddess Of Wealth Remembers Dis Tat Till Now Puja Hasn’t Happened? Who’ll Do Bhajan? Now Come.”

Shekhar Sees Swa- “Do U Want 2 Say Smthing Swara?”

Swa- “Yes, Dad I Want 2 See New Movie Wid Ragini”. N Luks Nervous.

Sumi- “No Need 2 See Any Film. I Don’t Lyk Dis. Who All Come There?”

Shekhar- “Wich Show?”

Swa- “12:00p.M.”

Shekhar- “Do U Want Money?” N Takes Out His Wallet N Gives Money “Keep It, U May Need It.”

Swa- “Thnx Dad”

Scene-7

Inhouse Temple- A Vry Melodious Voice Can Be Heard Singing A Krishna Bhajan. V See A Girl Playing Veena N Singing D Bhajan In Front Of D Krishna Idol N Some People Sitting Around Her.

Upstairs- A Man Comes Out Listening D Bhajan N Is Revealed 2 B Swara’s Uncle N Janki’s Husband Dinesh Gadodia.

*Precap: Swara Wid A Boy*

Sorry if u felt its a tym waste story n 4 grammatical errors n typos. Positive n negative comments welcomed wholeheartedly.
Even if I have given d precap I won’t post nxt chappy if u all don’t lyk it.
N my 1 humble request 2 all writers n commentors even if swaragini serial ends don’t stop providing ur articles…
#Luv frndz

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8 Comments
  1. Swasan

  2. nyc. swasan

  3. Soujanya

    awesome….. Plz swasan…

  4. Arshaanya

    Nyc…

  5. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Anshhh, it’s really interesting dear.. Plz continue..Plz continue..
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

  6. A.xx

    Nice wonder who he is. Xx

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