Your Heartbreak Would Lead To Our Death (Manmarziyan and Ishqbaaz OS) Birthday Gift

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Happy birthday my cutie pie… My starieeee….. My swaru.. n everyone’s Aana… I really can’t believe that I met u… It was a my birthday when we met n now it’s yours so,lets make it extra special with this OS… N plzz don’t kill me after reading this… Well others must be thinking that why it’s not called as a surprise.. that’s because my cute sis sadu unintentionally spilled the beans… To ab kya kr skte h… Waise leave all this let’s start with the story…
The screen focuses on 4 girls chit-chatting…But they arent looking happy… Rather they are looking tensed and one of them is teary eyed…(So wondering who are they… Let’s give a small intro guys..)
1 girl:-(miss tears…???)Radhika Mishra aka Swaru …aka Aana … Our birthday girl..
2nd:-Samira Khanna aka Samm..aka Sadu..aka Sarayu…???(meri surprise ki gangaram karne wali shaks…)
3rd girl:-Anika aka Ani aka your very own author.. yani ki main.. Janvi…???
Or ab ati h meri TU ki don… Put your hands together for my cutie sis…
4th girl:-Gauri Kumari Sharma aka IME aka meri ishu don??

Back to the story…
Samm:-Tujhe samajh kyu nh aa raha h Radhu… He is just playing with your feelings… Tu usse bhul ja…
Gauri:-Arre aise kaise bhul jayengi.. wo pyar krti h usse bass accept nh kr rahi h isliye wo bhi kuch nh kr pa rahe h…
Ani:-Tu bol toh sahi Radhu.. abhi usko sidha kar dungi… Kan pakad k laingik yaha..
Samm:-Whats guys… Wo bacha h kya that usse kuch samajh nh aa raha h.. He should understand na…
Radhu:-Enough guys.. I don’t wanna talk abt him… I’m trying to forget him… N u all should help me in doing that… Bass khtm karo ye sab… I’m really tired… I’m going home…
Ani:-Radhu listen… Arre sunna…..
Sammie:-Ye ab kya kare????
Gauri:-Hey sankar ji… Ab aap hi sab kuch thik kijiye….
Ani:-Whats yr ….. Wo kuch nh krne wale… Humein hi kuch karna padega… Waise I have a plan… Jisse wo gadha kahi nh jayenga… Or confess bhi karega…
Samm:-Ha toh bata na… Chup kyu h…
Gauri:-Sadu ji chilaye matt… Unhe bolne toh dijiye…
Ani:-So the plan is…(hamesha ki tarah muted… Aree hum hindi serial ki story likh rahe h.. or kya chahte the tum log???)
Samm:-Awsm dude… Now this rascal would know that confess na krna bht bada paap h…???
Next scene(camera focuses on a lamba,good looking manav…( Arre naam nh h… It’s a substitute for man…) running… Then the camera focusses on his face… He is looking extremely tensed…)
The man reaches near a building n climbs the stairs as fast as he can n reaches near a door… His breath is irregular n he is trying to catch his breath…. After few mins.. he knocks on the door.. bt there’s no response… He continues doing the same but there’s no response… Frustrated he tries to break the door… But…(kitne filmy ho yr tum sab… Hero h to kya.. darwaza tod dega… Ye meri story h.. yaha cliche bhi hatke hota h…lol??) he is not able to break it… N gets hurt.. then aisa lagta h ki ladke k dimaag m koi idea aiya h… Let’s see kya h..
He runs towards the roof of the building… N climbs down the pipe…(lol… I know it’s super cheeseey…???)he reaches on the balcony of the same flat and….(Hadd hoti h fairytale ki… Nh hone wala waisa kuch bhi… Matt karo ulti sidhi cheeze expect… Disappointment hi hath lagne wali h…)n he tries opening the window but alas!it’s locked from inside…. N again he starts on knocking on the window .. bt no response…. Frustratedly n tensedly the man starts shouting…
Man:-Radhu open the door… Oops… Open the window Radhu… Kya hua h… Plzz talk to me… Kuch ulta-sidha matt krna… Plzz talk to me Radhu…
Ab tak bechari andar baithi ladki gusse m aag – baboola ho gayi thi.. kyuki usse laga ki koi psycho usse marne k liye aaya h… Par ye toh koi or hi h… ????
Radhu:-whatttt the hell … Koi gate ya window nh kholne wali m… Bhadd m jao tum…
Man:-Radhu plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz… I cant stand here for long… Plzzz…
Radhu:-Shut up Arjun…. Khade nh ho skte toh hero ban ne ki zaroorat kya thi… Idiot!!!!
(A/N:-So the man is revealed to be Arjun Mehra jo birthday girl k dil or dimag par filhaal raaj krte h…????)
Arjun:-Radhu plzzz open the door… Don’t do this to me plzz open it….
Radhu:-……….
Arjun:-I need to do it now…. 1…. 2….. 3……(“dhhhhhadaaaaanmmmmmm”)
Radhu…. Kaha ho tum…????Radhuuuuu….
(In mind) ohh god!!!The screen focuses on 4 girls chit-chatting…But they arent looking happy… Rather they are looking tensed and one of them is teary eyed…(So wondering who are they… Let’s give a small intro guys..)

1 girl:-(miss tears…???)Radhika Mishra aka Swaru …aka Aana … Our birthday girl..
2nd:-Samira Khanna aka Samm..aka Sadu..aka Sarayu…???(meri surprise ki gangaram karne wali shaks…)
3rd girl:-Anika aka Ani aka your very own author.. yani ki main.. Janvi…???
Or ab ati h meri TU ki don… Put your hands together for my cutie sis…
4th girl:-Gauri Kumari Sharma aka IME aka meri ishu don??
Back to the story…
Samm:-Tujhe samajh kyu nh aa raha h Radhu… He is just playing with your feelings… Tu usse bhul ja…
Gauri:-Arre aise kaise bhul jayengi.. wo pyar krti h usse bass accept nh kr rahi h isliye wo bhi kuch nh kr pa rahe h…
Ani:-Tu bol toh sahi Radhu.. abhi usko sidha kar dungi… Kan pakad k laingik yaha..
Samm:-Whats guys… Wo bacha h kya that usse kuch samajh nh aa raha h.. He should understand na…
Radhu:-Enough guys.. I don’t wanna talk abt him… I’m trying to forget him… N u all should help me in doing that… Bass khtm karo ye sab… I’m really tired… I’m going home…
Ani:-Radhu listen… Arre sunna…..
Sammie:-Ye ab kya kare????
Gauri:-Hey sankar ji… Ab aap hi sab kuch thik kijiye….
Ani:-Whats yr ….. Wo kuch nh krne wale… Humein hi kuch karna padega… Waise I have a plan… Jisse wo gadha kahi nh jayenga… Or confess bhi karega…
Samm:-Ha toh bata na… Chup kyu h…
Gauri:-Sadu ji chilaye matt… Unhe bolne toh dijiye…
Ani:-So the plan is…(hamesha ki tarah muted… Aree hum hindi serial ki story likh rahe h.. or kya chahte the tum log???)
Samm:-Awsm dude… Now this rascal would know that confess na krna bht bada paap h…???
Next scene(camera focuses on a lamba,good looking manav…( Arre naam nh h… It’s a substitute for man…) running… Then the camera focusses on his face… He is looking extremely tensed…)
The man reaches near a building n climbs the stairs as fast as he can n reaches near a door… His breath is irregular n he is trying to catch his breath…. After few mins.. he knocks on the door.. bt there’s no response… He continues doing the same but there’s no response… Frustrated he tries to break the door… But…(kitne filmy ho yr tum sab… Hero h to kya.. darwaza tod dega… Ye meri story h.. yaha cliche bhi hatke hota h…lol??) he is not able to break it… N gets hurt.. then aisa lagta h ki ladke k dimaag m koi idea aiya h… Let’s see kya h..
He runs towards the roof of the building… N climbs down the pipe…(lol… I know it’s super cheeseey…???)he reaches on the balcony of the same flat and….(Hadd hoti h fairytale ki… Nh hone wala waisa kuch bhi… Matt karo ulti sidhi cheeze expect… Disappointment hi hath lagne wali h…)n he tries opening the window but alas!it’s locked from inside…. N again he starts on knocking on the window .. bt no response…. Frustratedly n tensedly the man starts shouting…
Man:-Radhu open the door… Oops… Open the window Radhu… Kya hua h… Plzz talk to me… Kuch ulta-sidha matt krna… Plzz talk to me Radhu…
Ab tak bechari andar baithi ladki gusse m aag – baboola ho gayi thi.. kyuki usse laga ki koi psycho usse marne k liye aaya h… Par ye toh koi or hi h… ????
Radhu:-whatttt the hell … Koi gate ya window nh kholne wali m… Bhadd m jao tum…
Man:-Radhu plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz… I cant stand here for long… Plzzz…
Radhu:-Shut up Arjun…. Khade nh ho skte toh hero ban ne ki zaroorat kya thi… Idiot!!!!
(A/N:-So the man is revealed to be Arjun Mehra jo birthday girl k dil or dimag par filhaal raaj krte h…????)
Arjun:-Radhu plzzz open the door… Don’t do this to me plzz open it….
Radhu:-……….
Arjun:-I need to do it now…. 1…. 2….. 3……(“dhhhhhadaaaaanmmmmmm”)
Radhu…. Kaha ho tum…????Radhuuuuu….
(In mind)
mind) ohh god!!!!! U can do this to me…) Raaaadhiiiikaaaaaaaa…..I’m sorry…. I’m sorry Radhu… I know u can’t forgive me…. N I don’t deserve it too… Bt tumne ye kya kiya….. U don’t deserve all these problems… Sirf isse liye tumhe khud se door rakha tha… Taki tumhe koi hurt na kr sake… But my bad luck followed u everywhere… I failed….. I failed to protect u Radhu…. I’m sorrryyyyyyyyy….. I luv u Radhika….. I luv u……… Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz come back… Don’t do this to me…. Don’t do this to yourself…. Don’t….
Voice:-Arjun…..

Arjun:-(looking up) Radhika… Thank God u r fine…. U scared me Radhu…. Ohhh god…… N he hugs her tightly to make sure that she is safe…
Radhika:-(releasing from the hug) If course I’m fine… Bt what were u saying….????
Arjun:-whatttt?? I didn’t say anything….
Radhika:-Stop lying Arjun… Tum kuch keh rahe the… I wanna know….Plzz arjun… I can’t take it anymore… (Teary eyed)
Arjun:-kuch nh Radhika… U r just assuming…
Radhika:-assuming huh…. M assume kr rahi hu… Ha… stop faking everything arjun…Say it arjun…
Say something damn it… N kuch nh keh skte then go… get lost…(n she breaks down…)
Arjun:-Radhika… radhika… Look at me… I’m sorry… I’m sorry for lying… Sorry for not confessing… But it’s enough now… Plzz stand up Radhu…
Radhika gives him a confused look…
Arjun:-u trust me na Radhu…(she nods…) Then plzz stand… He takes out a beautiful solitaire ring from his pocket and goes on his… N says” I know I’m not as intelligent as u Radhu ,neither do I like sweets… Like u do but trust me in our case we are compatible… N I can assure u that in this case the opposite attracts… So, miss Radhika Mishra,will u be my attractive magnet for the rest of my life”

Radhika:-Yes…. (With happy tears… )
Arjun:-I luv u Radhu….
Radhika:-I luv u too Arjun…
Suddenly a voice… Oops… Not one but mixture of three voice is heard…. “Kya yr…. Ye gate kyu band hai??”
Radhika goes n open the door n let them in… N as soon as three toofan enter arjun starts shooting questions on them….(Dhishhhkiyaaaooonnnn???)
Arjun:-Tum teeno… Tum 3no ko toh m abhi batata hu… What nonsense yr… Tum logo ne to mujhe dara diya tha….
Ani:-Arre agar hum kuch bolte nh toh tum agle 10,000 saalon m bhi confess nh krte…
Samm:-Exactly…!!!
Gauri:-Or dekhiye Arjun ji … Humara irada bilkul nek tha…hum toh bass aap dono ko milana chahte the…
Arjun:-lekin kuch or bolte… Pata h m kitna darr gaya tha ..
All 3 of them together:-Wo toh tum deserve krte ho….
Radhika:-wait wait wait guys… Kya ho raha h yaha.. or tum 3no n arjun ko kya kaha that wo aise bhagate hue yaha aaya…
Gauri:-Wo hua ye ki…..
Flashback…..
Anika ,Gauri n Samm goes to Arjun place n tells him that due to his ignorance n rude behavior n lies Radhika got really upset n she even came to know that he lied that he won’t leave the city…. N after knowing all this she started crying badly n ran to her home… N has locked herself n they are scared that she might harm herself…”(Toh ye tha Anika ka yani ki mera khidki tod plan?)
Ani:-Ha bass itna hi kiya humne toh…
Arjun:-Ye bass h!!!!
Radhika:-waise they are almost right… I was upset on u… Bt I wasn’t thinking about ending my life…
Arjun:-waise ye idea tum 3no m se tha kiska…??
Samm n gauri:-Jalebi ka…
Ani:-(giving a sheepish smile??) sorry arjun…
Arjun:- no need to say sorry … N thanks a lot jalebi….
Ani:-aaahhh… Don’t call me that…. Waise Arjun aj kafi tez hawa chal rahi h… Don’t u think humein windows band kr dena chahiye .. wrna gauri or Radhu udd jayenge… N Sammie to ludak hi jayegi…????? Isn’t it???
Arjun:-(laughing)yeah… True…
All the 3 girls together:-Jalebiiiiiiiiii……????
N the camera focuses on Arjun n Ani’s smiling faces and sukkhad gang’s annoyed face…
***The End***

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60 Comments
  1. Aana

    My jaan…my sweeto…my love….
    I really love u lyk anything my sweet jalebi….nd yes such a awsm journey from ur birthday to mine . …we cherished such wonderful moments together ryt??? U kn wt… I think u were ryt that in very short span of tym we became such grt frnds…honestly I haven’t expected this… But see….its lyk we are janmo janmo k frnds….lol but true…

    I don’t kn he…but now I really need u as my besti, my guide , my love in my love. …my amazing sissy…

    Well abt this story …its as usual super duper hit….u kn na…I love ur stories…. Nd wt a gft sweeto.. Truly loved it….naa hoke bhi hone ka ehsaas dilwa Diya. .isse zada an Aur kya…

    Nd yes lyk this story only.. I want my these best frnds forever in my lyf….
    For arjun once I can think to compromise also…but for u all never…

    Love u guyzzz
    Love u jalebi. My sweet love…just stay always on my side..
    Bye nd thank u so much
    So so much..

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwww….. Rulayegi kya yr…..
      Sach mein yr… I never expected such a sweet n long reply…..
      N abt leaving u… U know na I’m a special version of bhatakti atma. … So hone can I leave u….
      I’ll always be there with u starieeee…
      Luv u bhna….???????

  2. Aana

    Nd forget to mention 1 thing that I am not patli…. PlzZ maaf kar yr….nd sukkhad gang.. Seriously???? I am becoming fat day by day. Nd u all r here to say sukkhad gang….oo goddd..
    Huff. …but koi nai maaf kiya…
    Tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi…

    1. JanviSingh

      Ohhh…. Mera dialogue mujhi par use kiya…
      Not fair sadu…. Bt it’s true that u r thin…
      N u all are my sukkhad gang….
      N I luv u my thinie girls????????

  3. loved it…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear…..?☺?

  4. Rads

    It’s outstanding yaar, and arjun plan to enter into the room is awesome, I like the part where arjun can’t break the door?? I just really enjoyed this. Love you lots ?

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwww….. Thank u soo much dear….
      I’m glad that u liked it n enjoyed reading….
      N luv u too dear?????

  5. its fantabolous yaar toh ye os tera tha
    do read and COMMENT plsssssssss http://www.tellyupdates.com/broken-without-youshivika/

    1. JanviSingh

      Yeah… Ye meri hi kartoot thi?????
      N thanks for reading yr….or yaha m thanks bol skti hu…
      To gussa mat hona….
      N I read it n commented too….?☺

  6. Chanya

    Awesome jaanu dear(although I understand bit as idk Hindi)well portrayed… Keep writing…Again happy birthday swara!!!!

    1. JanviSingh

      Ohhh…. Sorry di… From next time na… I’ll try to add subtitles too….
      N thanks for reading…
      I’m soo happy to see u all here….
      Luv u?????

    2. Aana

      Thank u chanya

  7. Amazing story

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear….?☺??

  8. B_isha

    Oh my gosh toot diya tu ka floor tumne awesome mind bobbling mild struck kya bolo loved it to the core yaar !!

    But y did it end I wanted to read more but I know u will write more

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwww…..
      I’m soooo damn happy di…..
      I’m flying super high after reading your comment di….
      N I’ll try to write more di…
      Love u????

  9. AditiB

    vah vah kya baat h jaanu…lamba good looking manav….sahi h…..mujhe toh bada pasand aaya yr….likhte rahiyo aise and come out with amazing stories…aur Happy Birthday Aana dear…even I’ve sent you something…I am a person with an incredible sweet tooth so decided to gift you a cake….jaake check karo fatafat….
    nd Jannu…teri yeh kartoot badi sahi nikli….dono serials mere favourite h….love you and keep writing like this….I love it..

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwww….. Love u too di…..
      N I’m sooo sooo sooo happy that u liked it….
      N all the best for your exams??
      Rock kr dena exams…

    2. Aana

      I did…nd thank u so much. Love u

  10. AMkideewani

    Superb dear, I love it and happy birthday to the birthday girl?????????

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u soo much sissy?????

      1. AMkideewani

        Welcome sista?

    2. Aana

      Thank u dear

      1. AMkideewani

        Welcome dear?

  11. Niriha

    Awesome????loved it

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u soooo much dear….
      Thanks a lot??

  12. Superb di ??????
    Happy birthday to u diiiii?????
    Love u

    1. Aana

      thank u

    2. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear???

  13. Alekhika20

    Superb os

    1. JanviSingh

      Thank u soo much dear….luv u?????

  14. Shoryu

    Aham aham… Zara kabhi kabhi humare jese logo ko bhi yaad Kar lo. . kabhi kabaar kaam aa jayenge … Well.. coming to the story.. yeh story ke Piche bht saare secrets ha .. Jo shayad jalebi ko bhi nhi pata .. ??.. I am very happy and glad that you both have became besties .. now let me reveal some secrets of Birthday girl .. Bahar se vo bht innocent boli baali bachi dikhti ha but vo andar se it mastikhor, kamini, romantic,pagali and kind-hearted ha … I am very lucky that I got a best friend like ritika aka Swara. Love you both till eternity…. enjoy ur day ritika .. oh sorry story ke baare mein bolna bhul hi gayi. .. anyways breathtaking and excellent story ????

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwww….tu koi bhulane wali cheez thodi na h sadu… Or nahi m gajhni ki aamir khan hu?????
      Or tere taraf sara dhyan akarshit karungi na december m…
      Tension matt le…
      Luv u sadu….
      Tere jaisi atrangi dost kisi ko nh mil skti….
      Luv u a lot yr???

    2. Aana

      are..meri Jan..itni Tarif….kahin mai Kar naa jau…uff..well thank u sadu….love u too…nd miss u baby.. abt secrets let it be…
      that will be better…

  15. N.M

    kya likhti ho yaar jaan!!!! i felt like all this is happening in front of my eyes, superb , pata nahi kin shabdou mai iski tareef karu but by reading this i got to know ur sweet pet name jelabi , how cute u know i love both the jelabi’s ek khane wali or ek tum ,yeeppi got a name to tease u abb aayga maza ?? anyways loved it and once morr happy wala birthday to u di???

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwww….. Luv u niddu… .
      Itni tarif sun kar toh meri ankhein bhar ayi….
      Or ha jalebi is the pet name given by the birthday girl…..???☺
      Thanks for reading niddu????

      1. N.M

        jaan tum bhi mardo mujhe thank u khe khe kar!!

    2. Aana

      thanks a lot sweetie..
      well jalebi name is given by me only…bcoz it’s my fav sweet..lyk she is my besti..nd plzz zada Kat pareshan Karna meri jalebi ko…

      1. N.M

        no need of thanks dear?u and ur jelabi r just ????

  16. Awww sooper janu I made 1000 Google search to understand the Hindi lines…but it’s worth it….I want more this is short for me…lov you darling????????

    1. JanviSingh

      Awww…. Sorry chandu di….
      Bt this was really sweet of u….
      After all u are my sister na?????
      Bt from next time I’ll add the subtitles so that u can read it freely….
      Luv u di?????

  17. Soumya85

    Wow janu it was amazing…loved it yar u r really a very good no awesome friend??love u janu??waiting for more such OS on ur friend’s b’day’s I hope u understand what I’m saying?
    Happy birthday swara???????

    1. Soumya85

      And the nick name jalebi??is superb I love jalebi??(I’m talking about u not sweet jalebi)

      1. JanviSingh

        Awwww…. Of course somu….
        Tera birthday aane to de…
        Kuch acha plan kiya h….?????
        N I luv u too somu?????

  18. Anu16

    Nice Os…

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot dear?☺

  19. Kehkasha

    Wah Janvi…
    Yeh toh super amazing hai…
    Ek Dum mind-blowing…
    Kya awesome intro tha boss….
    And ur amazing humour….
    Wah…
    And yes not to forget our birthday girl…
    A VERY HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY AANA….MAY GOD BLESS U…. I KNOW I AM LATE PAR KYA KARUN….
    And baaki tere OS Ki detailed depiction sabne kar hi di hai….
    Par meri taraf se????
    Luv u to infinity meri chotu sis….
    Chalo gn…

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwww…… I luv u di….. Luv u sooooooooooooooooooo much…..???????????????????????????????????????????????????
      I’m soo happy that u liked it….
      Your appreciation is like I’m getting appreciation from a teacher….
      As u n Samm di are my inspiration…
      Luv u di….???
      N thanks for reading??

    2. Aana

      Thank u so much Di…love u…

  20. Fenil

    Awesome
    Gujju Don har jagah aa hi jati hain.
    I think u both of u sharing strong frdship @ TU.

    1. JanviSingh

      Hihihi… Yes bhai….
      Gujju fon ki entry to karwani hi thi…..????
      N yeah…m we both have strong connection due to TU…. .

  21. Arti viswanathan

    Janvisingh darling superb, excellent, outstanding, nice, awesome, mind-blowing, fabulous, good episode. ….. i loved it to the core…… i liked all the scenes. . . . . . Tc lots of love to u from me and teddy hugs to you. . . . . . And keep writing dear……

    1. JanviSingh

      Awwwwww….. Thank u sooo much dear …
      I’m really happy that u liked the story…..
      Luv u????
      N teddy hugs from my side too?☺??

  22. Samm

    nice 🙂 sorry for the late comment 🙂 but it was really nice. happy ending… 🙂

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot Sammie di….
      N no need to say sorry…
      Luv u?????

  23. Neha_Pheonix

    Such a great bday gift Janu….haha..jilebi…!!!! I am sure your friendship will flourish like this.
    You are a truely outstanding friend.

    Talking about the update – Superb! Enjoyed Sukkad gang and arjun anika..!

    1. JanviSingh

      Thanks a lot di…..
      N I hope we remain friends till eternity…
      Luv u di..
      U r such an amazing sister???????

  24. Ahaana

    Awesome sweety .. sorry kuch jyada hi late ho gya comment mai but i was not knowing about it just now i was posting on ur wall so came to know about it… I MUST SAY U R A BRILLIANT WRITER!!!

    1. JanviSingh

      Ommmmmmmmmmmgggggg….. Thank u sooooooooooooooooooo much sweety….
      Luv u yr….
      I’m glad that u liked ……
      Luv u sooo much sweety????

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