my heart with u only (ragsan nd swalak) episode 16~pavani

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Rag:dadddd??
Dayal:yess
Rag immediately hugged him emotionally
Dayal:I told u naa Janaki she too missing mee
Rag released the hug
Rag:I really missed u dad nd u know wt I want (with a weak smile)
Janaki:if ur serial is completed then can we come in
Rag:sorry maa I missed u too
Janaki:lierr I know u loves ur dad more than mee (with fake anger)
Rag(with proud face):y not he is like that
Rag nd dayal gave hifi Janaki gave an angry look
Ram nd suji welcomed them
Dayal:wr is sanky??
Rag was shocked
Ram nd suji were abbout to say truth
Voice:iam hear unclee..
Ram,rag nd sujiwere shocked
ram rag suji (at a time):sanskarr
Sanky,dayal and janaki were surprised for their reaction
Dayal:y all r u were shocked
Ram:nothing voo he went to tour nd came suddenly that’s y??
Ram nd suja saw Sanky angrily
Sanky didn’t understand anything (he dont know that every one knows truth)
Ram:u came early??
Sanky:haa my work completed soo .
Dayal:very nice soo we can have some fun time then
Rag was still in a shock there were many questions running in her mind
Dayal:rag wr have u lost ?is everything fine ?
Rag came to senses
Rag:nothing just like that nd she saw Sanky questiongly

Scene shifts
Laksh was preparing breakfast while cutting onions he cutted his finger (as he is very disturbed he is thinking about swara)
Suddenly some one hold his hand
Laksh saw them
Laksh(with a shock):swara??
Swara:can’t u be carefull see how deep it was cutted
Laksh at once hugged her tightly
Laksh:u came backk
Swara was shocked nd she released the hug
Swara:u know it already
Laksh by bending his head :yess nd he explained her everything
Swara was crying due to happiness
She hugged him with lot of love
Swara:u know everything nd send mee with him
Laksh(with tears escaping from his eyes):u will bee happy naa
Swara:closed her eyes with pain .iam sorry laksh I didn’t recognized it till noww
Laksh:hugged her more tightly
(He have no words to tell about his happiness )
Swara released the hug
Swara:I want to tell wt happened there
Laksh:by putting his finger on her lips :noo need I trust u
Swara:hold his hand nd kissed it :I know u trust mee but I should tell u wt have happened there if any day in an anger if u point out my charecter then I can’t live .then ur respect in my eyes will become low which I can’t bare
Swara explained everything
He hugged her again
Swara:I love u laksh.
Laksh:I love u too

Scene shifts
Sanky:I will come by having bath
Rag gave a fake smile

Dayal was observing rag don’t know y he feels that there is something fishy

Rag:u too get fresh up dad nd mom we will have our lunch all together

Dayal:yehh I was also little tired due to travelling I will sleep for sometime
Janaki:I will help u in kitchen
Suji:noo need u too take some rest we two will managee
Dayal nd janaki left
Ram nd suji hold rag hand nd took her to her room
He saw Sanky there nd gave him a tight slap
Sanky was shocked he hold his cheek nd was looking with confusion
Suji:now y u came back .
Sanky:wt do u mean mom??
Ram:u really don’t know wt we r talking about ??
Suji pushed rag towards him
Suji:u never tought of her before running away with that girl.
Ram:how can he think of a girl when he never tought about his parents
Sanky and rag were shocked
Suji:u have done this much but still atleast she didn’t told us too as we will be heart broken if we come to know about ur truth
Rag was shocked after knowing that they came to know about the truth
Sanky saw rag who is crying nd feels very bad
Sanky was about to say the truth they heared a sound of a glass broken
Every one turned that side nd were shocked to see the person

Epi ends
Screen freezes with shocking face of rag,ram,suji nd Sanky
I know its smalll one but situation demanded nd sorry for not updating yesterday voo actually ur jijuu feels insecure that I gives much time to my home than him he he he actually he needs some attention when he is at home soo trying to give him some timee(otherwise noo net offer naa)

56 comments

  1. Priya15

    |Registered Member

    first of all….jiju is so possessive haaa…aap jiju se kahiye ki even we need time with our di….haha just kidding di…..emotional epi..waiting for next epi….and di u r enjoying my stress in studies haa??? u know di 11th is so interesting they are asking us to concentrate in academics then they itself say us to participate in all competitions..really lot of enjoyment with study load…i think i cant cmnt regular next week as i m having my mid term xm…it starts on 11th and ends on 18th…from 18th onwards i l cmnt…and ya i l try to cmnt whenever i get time..but surely l read it..but cmnt karna mushkil hai..par koshish karungi..aaj jaldi cmnt kar liya na……jiju ko bhi time nikhalo varna vo naaraz ho jaayenge ham sab par….haha just kidding di..love u dii…

    • Pavani

      |Author

      He he he noo worries studies are main u carry on nd all the best nd I think iam going to end this before onlyy .

      • Aastha

        enduku akka intha thoraga end sesthunnanv….no akka …we want more from u…ofcourse akka net offer ki bawa kavali. akka nenu sepenu ragsan seperation kavali kani san susthey pavanga undi akka….try to post next part soon.

  2. jezzachinnuS

    HEHEH GIVE MORE TYM TO JIJU AND UR HOME.
    NO WORRIES WE WILL WAIT DI..
    AND THANKU FOR THE UPDATE IT WAS AWSOME. πŸ™‚
    WILL BE WAITING FOR NEXT EAGERLY.

  3. Fairy

    Wowwww….loved it di….its awesome…..plz update nxt part soon…i thnk dayal is dat person…

  4. Ashrita

    Fabulous slap… Nice dear so u r going to start ur way of story now… This Rag makes me remind of ha ha hasini ???

  5. sss

    awesome episode Di..atlest swalak got together now its time for ragsan bechara shanky has to suffer so much n I’m enjoying it….n of course give some time to jiju but don’t forget us in that even we need our di to spent time with us also right…waiting for next part

  6. Rafeee

    |Registered Member

    hehe jiju is so possessive ri8??? ?… inik ff sama superb…. nethu panvnganu wait panite irndn rmba neram… anyways thanks akka….

  7. Pammy

    |Registered Member

    Yeah dii..its good bt short anyway we can understand…so come bak with nxt epi as soon as possible

  8. fira

    Wow….what a epi sis….I have no words to express my feelings…..pls make more ragsan scenes and eagerly waiting for ur updates

  9. Megha123

    |Registered Member

    Nyc akka bare sometime for ur husband .otherwise we don’t get our updates .haha ?? just joking ?? I can understand ur situation as my family also does the same thing especially my amma she scolds me 4 nt spending time with family and then will warn to snatch my mobile & I pad ????BTW today’s epi is awsm now it’ll be interesting to watch dayal so what he does with ragini

  10. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb
    Now what will happen dayal came to know the truth
    Waiting for the next one ……….

  11. Nami

    |Registered Member

    Di u again ended it on an interesting note. Any ways no worries. It’s becoming really intresting now. Loved it. Try to post the next part soon. Till then enjoy with jiju??

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