Heart touching love story – twinj… OS

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Hello guyz…I have written this short OS on our loved twinj
This is my second os first was on qubool hai
http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-touching-love-story-qubool-hai-os/
So have a look at this…hope u like it
Kunj: one whole day you have to live without me …no phone..no email..no msg nothing ….if u do like this then I will marry you..n thn I will say you truly love me

Twinkle: truth is that I can’t live one moment without you but I have to do this bcoz you have challenged me…n I accept this challenge..i will not contact wid you whole day
One whole day gone without no contact.
Next day at early moring twinkle waked up…went to kunj’s house with much excitement but she was shocked to see that atmosphere…she saw kunj body was covered with white clothes and wid garland
Twinkle was very much shocked she doesn’t understand hoe this happen..why this happen..she was wid full of tears…full memories were infront of twinkles eyes

Just then kunj’s mom came and gave one letter to twinkle
“dear twinkle’
Only one day had left of my life so I have given this challenge to you..n you have done it
Baby now you have to live these all days with accepting this challenge
I LOVE YOU baby
Your kunj”

Guyz how is this….plz comment

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32 Comments
  1. it was cute … it was very emotional.. short and heart touching

    1. Nivika

      tysm sharman

  2. Really heart touching os ??

    1. Nivika

      thnx lama for cmnting

  3. It really made me emotional…. Plz someone tell me properly to add dp and status

    1. Nivika

      tysm 4 cmnting..u can create ur own acc on TU n then u can add dp n status

  4. Short n cute bcz Ik it hehehe

    1. Nivika

      hehehe…i m happy that u liked it

  5. Rashiverma2199

    This was truly heart touching…. Quite emotional….

    1. Nivika

      thnx thnx yaar rashmi for cmnting

  6. Tanishasharma2108

    Very emotional I litteraly cried

    1. Nivika

      tysm tanisha for cmnting….n sorry for making u cry..???.hehehe

  7. Shatakshi

    Hey Snehal I have read this story
    It was damn emotional
    Do write some more…like this one??

    1. Nivika

      tysm shatakshi….keep supporting…n i will surely write more n more stories……

  8. The last part was really sad….but I loved it….too good..

    1. Nivika

      thanx a lot sayeeda

  9. Such an emotional os…… do write some more….

    1. Nivika

      thnx komu..i will surely write more

  10. Dreamer...arundhati

    Snehal aheart touching one
    Do write more

    1. Nivika

      thnx thnx dreamer arundhati…i will write more

  11. amazingggg

  12. Ria

    It was short but emotional

    1. Nivika

      tysm ria..keep supporting

  13. Usvathul

    Really nice Nd short plot………… loved it……….

    1. Nivika

      tysm usvathul

  14. I loved it . Good job snehal

    1. Nivika

      tysm sanam

  15. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    awesome. ..really amazing…ur status is funny. ….do write more

    1. Nivika

      hehehe…thnx ..will surely write more

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