my heart… (one shot)

hii!!! guys I am here with a one shot…..
it’s just a idea that which engrossed my mind ….so support me guys ….
here we go.. it’s happening Tamilnadu guys so pls. bear me …. i have used few Tamil slangs but it’s transitions are written in brackets…
a small tea stall is shown were two boys and few oldies are sitting reading the news paper and sipping their tea …suddenly a loud music was heard (a sort of marriage music) everyone in that surroundings turned towards a direction at least for a second or two…then they again started their own daily cores. There is a big marriage hall shown where the music plays and they started doing decorations the first thing they did in the decorating process was tying the flex in which there was bride’s and groom’s names with their pics and somebody was ordering..
a man:yeppa olunga flex ah kattunga pa ..ithu ennoda ponnu kaliyanam athunala ellam perfect ah irukanum…(excuse me!! tie the flex properly …this is my daughter’s marriage so everything should be perfect…)

seeing all this the two boys sitting in the table started conversing between each other..
boy 1:dei enna machan romba nala pootti kidantha mandabatha thirantha clean panna arambhichutanga…(what is this dude ??? after so many years they r opening this marriage hall and started cleaning and decorating it…)
boy 2:aama da machan !!! ethu periya periya actors ,celebrities mattum use pannu ra marriage hall.ippo yaarukku kalyanamnu theriyala…(ya dude !!!this marriage hall is only used by celebrities and actors and don’t know who’s marriage is going to happen now ???
boy 1: flex katturangala athula mapla name paaru da…(see the grooms name in the flex which is being tied…)

boy 2: avanga name lakshya mahesweri yan da..(its lakshya maheshweri it seems dude..)
boy 1:yennada name ithu lakshya , maheshweri nu ponnuga names vachuru kanga..seri vidu vaa polam (what is this dude ??? these all r girls name in our state na ???whatever come lets go …)
scene shifts towards a big mansion … its name board contains..
BOSE ILLAM (BOSE FAMILY…)
slowly camera moves in… everyone were busy inside doing works for marriage..
a lady: yeh chori what r u doing ???
that girl comes to the lady and the lady is revealed to be annapurna(here annapurna has a characters like sujata in the serials…)
girl: aunty ji actually i was just taking these things to the bride’s room as she did not have any food from last night…
annapurna: oh kk but who r u ?? r u her frnd ???

girl: han aunty ji i am her childhood frnd name sara…
AP : ok beta go fast meri bahu will be hungry..
sara moves towards the brides room but meanwhile she encountered a young, handsome, hot boy …
sara : sorry sorry i did not see u …
boy : its ok by the i am laksh … lakshya mahesweri…the groom
sara : Ooooo….ok sorry for spoiling your dress brother…and by the i am ragini’s frnd…childhood frnd..

laksh: oh thats nice …where r u going ?? that too with this plate full of food…
sara: i am going to ur would be wife’s room only …from yesterday’s night she did not have food thats why …
laksh :why didn’t she have food ??? she is spoiling her health by not having food ??? what is this ur her frnd only know … u should have insisted her to have food
sara who stood like a statue …doesn’t know how to react…then thinking something she smiled broadly…
sara : so as rags is like meri sissy so i am going to call u as jiju r u ok with it…
laksh : ya of course u can …
sara :so jiju before marriage itself this much care means …then after marriage…
laksh understood she is going to pull his leg ..

laksh : go fast meri saali … as meri would be wife will be hungry na so go fast…
sara : of course … jiju i am going …and she starts moving…
laksh : wait wait wait ….meri saali ji do you know were is ragini’s room ???
sara :no i dont have any idea …so bye jiju i am going to ragini’s room…
and smiles and starts moving…
laksh in some other mood says :oh…kk

but soon he realizes what she told and smiles to himself and go’s in the opposite direction and hits with a boy…
laksh :hey dude how r u man ??? why r u late for my marriage i was angry on u for that but knowing the reason as uncle ‘s health is not well i was worried…now how is uncle …
the boy smiled : relax dude …papa is fine now so dont worry…ok now tell me something …
laksh :what is that dude ???
boy : why was you smiling like a idiot ???
laksh smiled sheepishly…
laksh : actually dude thats nothing simply …
till now the back of the boy is seen …
before the boy could tell something …

laksh :ah ma i am coming and runs from there…
seeing this the boy turned revealing that it’s our sanky…
then scene shifts towards the bride’s room,
sara enters the room,
ragini : what is this sara ??? this much time to bring this food ???know how much hungry i am ???
sara : what can i do my dear frnd …u r would be was not leaving and scolding for not being concerned about u not having dinner…
ragini started blushing… sara noticing this …

sara : aunty don’t need buy any tomatoes because someone turned into a red tomato…
ragini : now stop teasing me and give me the food…
after eating the food ragini washed her hands and was coming towards the bed
a girl came running towards ragini and hugged her tight…
ragini was confused by the girl’s behaviour and was not able to recognise who is that…
ragini : excuse me !!! who is this ??? sorry i couldn’t recoganise u …
the girl : oops sorry i forgot to introduce myself… i am priya..laksh bhai’s behen…and u will not recoganise me as we have not met before …so no sorry …saying this she smiles boardly..
ragini : so ur my deverani ji … am i crct …
priya : absolutely babhi ji..ok did u know i have never in my dreams expected that i would get such a beautiful babhi…

sara :of course …we too never expected that we would get groom from north india…
priya was in confusion that who is this talking but understanding that …
ragini : priya this is my childhood frnd sara…
sara: hai !! i am sara
priya :hai i am priya …nice meeting you..

ragini : so come lets sit and chat for some time as today evening 8:30pm only we should move out our house towards the mahal …so until then we are free to go anywhere in this house…
priya : really …that’s awesome babhi..did u have ur breakfast..
before ragini could say anything…
sara : no she had her last night dinner just now before u come only…so ak her y didn’t she eat anything…
ragini :it’s nothing like that …

sara : what nothing like…u listen priya..i will tell u why…see after marriage she will miss us it seems,so from last night she did not have food as well as she did not sleep a bit…only which she did from last evening is to cry!!! cry!!! cry!!!
priya : what is this babhi ji i can understand that u feel sad for leaving your family…but ur going to get a new family…so don’t worry babhi …
ragini : i never expected meri saali to talk like oldies …ur just like this oldie…
telling this she points towards sara…priya laughs and sara makes a pout face…
ragini : ok ok dont keep ur face like that …
sara smiles…
priya : babhi just now i came from mumbai by a filght ….still did not meet my bro even straight away came to u …and while coming from mumbai i brought family photos…
sara was super duper excited….

but ragini : not priya …dont take me in the wrong way …i dont want to see any of ur brother’s photo…
priya : but kyun babhi…
ragini with a slight blush :because i want first to see his eyes in real i want to feel how it will be when we meet our future better half’s eyes…then want to…
sara : feel hi lips i real ( in same romantic tone…) hmmm. yummy..
ragini as she was not in her senses also accepted that….
soon priya and sara bursted into laugh…
ragini again gained her senses and started blushing hard…
priya : so babhi u have not even seen my bro…
ragini : yes i have not even see tumhari bhai…
sara : but i saw actually not saw but bumped into him …

widening her eyes ragini : when ???
sara : i told na …when i was bringing food ur would be was torturing me for not taking care of you…
ragini : oh sorry ..i did not notice it due to the mad hunger…
priya : what if my bro is not handsome …

ragini : no problem as god wants me to spend my entire life with a person so no matter how is his physic …and even i wont bother about his psychology too… and one more thing i wont bother about his any kind of nature as it would change with time but the love between us would never change…
priya : babhi i never expected u will be such a optimistic person ….anyways come i will show u my bhai…
ragini in excited tone nodded her had showing positive response…
sara was attending a phone call…so she returned back to the bed where the remaining two where speaking…but she did not find anyone there…she went on searching for them…
coming back to the two ,they were going in search of the groom..
meanwhile from a didtance AP calls priya :priya came to AP where as ragini told she will go and search for laksh…

priya : but how babhi …u have not seen him na ???
ragini : as he is my would be .. i would get some or the other kind of hint …if not a feeling… so u go see aunty ji is calling think so no one in ur family knows that u reached madurai….
priya goes towards AP where as ragini moves in opposite direction…
AP : arey priya !!! when did you come to madurai …..why didn’t u meet me after ur arrival…where were u till now…where were going…
priya :ma relax…i was with babhi …and we r going to meet bhai as she has not met bhai …
AP : she would have seen in photo na ???

priya : no ma she did not !!! she wants her first meet with bhai face to face…so leave me i am going with babhi
AP : has she not seen bhai till date …
priya : no ma she has not …u know she is such a nice person that she loves bhai so much ma…so it’s better to tell the reason behind his marriage and do it..it’s not a great deal for …
AP : even i wish the same …but ur wishes that she should not know the truth…he says he doesn’t want her to marry him due to sympathy…

priya : anyways …i am going ma babhi will be searching for bhai …i should help her…
meanwhile ragini….
ragini : where will i go and search him …where will i find him i have gone a round in this floor but couldn’t find him…hmm i should ask help from priya only.. saying this she turned but due water spilled on the floor she slips and due to the fear of falling she closed her eyes…
but two strong and charming arms held her …he opened the eyes and saw the cute eyes and the smile that was on his lips…
realizing their position both composed themselves…

ragini’s pov: what is happening to me… his eyes wow so cut…those lips perfectly matches with his face …what a charming smile that could make any girl fall for him…think so he is laksh…when he held me i felt chill current passing through my spines…oh god what a feeling soon realizing the award position we composed ourselves… soon he led his had for shake to me and introduced himself..hai i am lakhy mahesweri …the groom and a cute smile spread all over his face..aww… so cute…so he is my man…but oon asked my name …i taught to tease him so told “hi i am swara” i dont no why but took this name my heart told even i did not for a second i just told that name…but after hearing this name his facial epressions changed … a drop of tear escaped from the corner of his eyes…
ragini : are u ok ??? come let’s go somewhere else speak come…

she did not listen to his reply instead dargged him from the place and took him to the terrace…
she gave some water to him and made him sit… he did not react for anything…
she was in tears seeing him in the tears… actually i am so sorry u asked my name and i told …
laksh : no problem … u told ur name only know…actually swara is the reason for this marriage…
ragini was shocked hear that…she don’t know how to react…
ragini : how ???

(actually guys i dont want to drag the upcoming part so there is no flashback instead laksh will be telling the events took place..)
laksh : swara …my love …she was my college frnd who encouraged me to do this profession…her family and my family were family frnds..by that we know each other frnd childhood…we used talk to each other very freely..i won’t hide anything from her same she will also not…each other developed feeling for each other ..that is the first thing that she hid from me …and i too hid that from her…actually i was scared that she will reject me …even in this she was thinking about me…it was valentine’s day i prepared myself to propose her …she was also planning something for me…i called her to come to the park which was the biggest mistake i did in my whole life…and started crying …

ragini who doesn’t know what to do .
she bend down and sat on her knees immediately laksh hugged her
she was first shocked due to the sudden movement but she too reciprocated it…
soon realizing their position ragini moved back…
laksh continued…
laksh : she was coming towards the destination where i have told…but to her fate … and it goes into a flash back…
FLASHBACK :
a small girl is standing in middle of road and crying …

small girl :mumma ! mumma !! mumma !!!
swara who was passing by and saw a truck rushing towards the small girl…
swara immediately rushed towards the girl and pushed the girl and indeed she herself was injured…as she saved the child the near by people helped her to take to the nearby hospital….
swara was in unconscious state… as laksh was the last one called him..
laksh as it was swara’s number he took the phone in excitement …
laksh : swara …what happened swara… why till u have not arrived ???
nurse in that hospital :excuse me sir …wait ir so the patient’s name is swara…ok sir relax ..actually there has a accident taken place..so it is patient’s phone…so pls. come to city hospital soon…
laksh couldn’t believe what he heard …he dropped the phone …tears r rolling down his cheeks…sanskar who was helping laksh, noticed the drastic change in laksh…he went to him and asked what happened…he hugged him and started crying …

sanskar : what happened laksh …anything serious…what happened ???
laksh told sanskar everything which shocked sanskar…they both immediately rushed to city hospital…
laksh ran inside the towards reception and asked abt the accident case the nurse told him the direction…
he went and stood in front of mortuary …he couldn’t understand anything now his only desire is to know whether swara is alive or not…
he was afraid now …a deathful fear…his hands was shaking like hell…
sanskar who saw this was full of tears…when he entered the room …he saw a body kept…he went to the body …
immediately he rushed out towards the exit…he couldn’t bear to see his shona lying without a soul… doctor who saw this called him…

in doctor cabin…
laksh couldn’t believe what he just saw there in that room…
Though the room is filled full of darkness but all he could see is
SWARA’S DEAD BODY LYING LIFELESSLY…
He entered the doctor’s cabin like lifeless body…
Sanskar had accompanied laksh…
Doctor: sorry we can understand the situation but you to move on…Actually I called u to speak about organ donation…when we searched her bag we found a organ donation card…So registering the number in it we have used an organ…

Sanskar: how can you transplant her organ with her families permission…
Laksh: sanky calm done…It’s Actually the plan itself tells that parents or any relations permission is not needed…OK doctor which organ did u use…

Docter: her heart …
Laksh: to whom…
Docter: a girl named ragini from tamilnadu…
Laksh: OK doctor…Can I see her…
Docter: operation is going on…
Sanskar: OK doctor…We r leaving…
Laksh could speak anything…As his love is dead or her love for mine is still there in this earth but in someone’s Body…
He Couldn ‘t tell anything…

Fb ends….
Laksh continued:days passed but I was same one who prepared to propose swara but God’s game… He took everything from me and gave only one that is the heart with full of her love…
Ragini hearing this fell down on her knees…Tears we’re Rolling down her cheeks… There is no sound or anything only tears…
Laksh saw this and wiped his tears…
Trying his best to smile..
Laksh: actually sorry… I got emotioned while hearing the name swara… so sorry… and less his hand for shake with Ragini..

Ragini couldn’t Tolerate anymore… She ran downstairs…
Meanwhile priya was searching for Ragini I’m The whole at last she decides to check in terrace and is climbing the stairs but Ragini cries and comes running downstairs… priya was confused… So quickly ran up to see who made her babhi I cry..but to her surprise she found her bhai…
Priya: bhai tum ??? Why is babhi crying and running downstairs…
Laksh was she’ll Shocked to that whom he told about reason behind this marriage is RAGINI…
Priya while shaking: bhai.. answer me Y was babhi crying…
Laksh: actually priya… I told her the reason behind the marriage…But she introduced herself as swara…That’s What made me weaker…And in emotion I told her everything….oh shit.. she is going to stop the marriage…

Priya with a smile: don’t Worry… I too wished that she comes to abt the reason… Thank God… She came to know…And moreover she is such a optimistic person so I damm sure this marriage happens…. So don’t Stress itself as ur the groom u should look handsome na??? Now smile…
Laksh and priya came downstairs everyone was packing there bags to move towards the hall for engagement and reception…

Laksh’s Mom dragged him with them towards the hall… Laksh couldn’t React as it took so fast but he signalled priya to take care of her but her mother dragged her too..
All members reach the hall…And both priya as well as laksh was he’ll Worried moreover tensed…
Then after few minutes laksh was made be seated as the groom for engagement…first priya came of the bride’s Room very tensely…This made Laksh’s Tension high…His bp is raising raising raising…But suddenly went too low…Yes he saw Ragini coming in the dress which was selected by him …Smiling ..having her head down due to shyness…
Laksh let a smile and sigh out.. she was made to stand next to him..they both exchanged rings with their smiling faces…and when ragini insert the ring in his hand she just kissed him standing in their own position…Laksh smiled seeing her doing such a act in public…But he Was sure that she became normal…

After few hours it’s Night 12:59…and everyone was busy chatting with their relatives.. so this was the oppurtuniy Laksh had so he used it…He went to bride’s Room where he saw a beautiful girl shunning in moonlight, standing in front him He went near her he hugged her from back…Tears escape from his eyes…She turns and wipes his tears…
Laksh: Ragini,I taught u will not accept this marriage ??? Thank you for understanding me…
Ragini smiled…
Ragini: why should I not accept this marriage…yes I cried when I came to know the reason….but I understood that u love my heart… Though not my heart..the heart is with me only know…So I decided….
He stares her eyes both became romantic in the moonlight…
He leans to kiss Ragini… But Ragini moves back..
Ragini: no… Romance is only after marriage…
Laksh made pout face…
Laksh: OK then bye…
Laksh moved few steps…
Ragini: Laksh…

Laksh turned around as soon as he turned he felt a soft lips kissing his lips… Soon he started reciprocate it then the immediate, unexpected kiss turned into a passionate kiss…
Then they parted away due to lack of oxygen…Ragini blushed hard…
Laksh: Ragini, u told u will complete the kiss tomorrow but u completed it today itself…
Ragini:Laksh…I decided u should get whatever u Wish…Because u have gone through a horrible pain in life that no one should undergo…So from then atleat u should get whatever you wish…..
Laksh had tears in his eyes hearing such a reply from Ragini…He nodded his head and went out of Ragini ‘s room…
The married and had a beautiful life…
At last at the end it’s Displayed…
THE END….

Then it becomes bright and the screen where the things above to place became dark…
Everyone seated There in that hall came out giving positive comments…Then it’s Revealed to be theatre…. That is the above story are as is a movie watched by the people…

So how is the story guys…So I the writer of mixtures…. I couldn’t Continue the story as I am suffering from severe stomach ache..so I will try to post it very soon may be today or tomorrow… So pls.

pardon me guys…This Tory itself I wrote it for past 4 days…I am really sorry for the delay…And this is my first one shot think so it is long…
Sorry if it’s Boring… And last but not the least pls. Comment guys… So pls. COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT…

Credit to: priya

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    • priya

      Thanks a lot for all who have commented…sorry I guys I couldn’t reply to each and every one separately…anyways thank u for ur support

  1. Its really an amazing story….a bit emotional….loved it….luv u raglak and swasan….come back soon with another one…keep writing dear…

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