Heart Connection (Undefined Love) Episode 1

Heart Connection Season 3… Undefined Love!
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Hey everyone, I’m back with another season of Heart connection… I hope you enjoy it and if it’s not good then do tell me, I’ll stop…
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Episode 1:

“Hmmm… In every household, everyone lives like a perfect family, but in my eyes, Maheshwari mansion is a zoo… Every mother wants her sons to become like Ram Lakshman but Sanskaar, Aansh and Laksh? Nah… Sawal hi Nahi uththa!” A manly voice narrates.

Maheshwari mansion is shown, inside the mansion a small boy is running.

“Maa! Maa!” The boy screams.

“Rukho Vahi!” A man shouts in an anger and strict tone.

The man is shown running behind him, he is then revealed to be DP.

DP: Padhai mein fail! Toh Sab mein fail! Learn something from your brother!

The boy then huffs in anger.

It then shifts to a school, a boy around the age of 14 years old is playing basket ball with his friends, suddenly a boy runs up to him.

“Sanskaar! Your brother stole Mrs Ranchita’s Laddo’s!” The boy who came running shouts.

“Kya?!” A shocked young Sanskaar says.

Then Sanskaar enters a room and sees a boys back faced towards him.

“Laksh!” Sanskaar angrily says.

“Laksh Nahi Lucky!” The boy says and turns around, he is revealed to be the same boy DP was running after.

He looks around 10 years old.

The screen freezes on Younger Laksh’s face.

“Yeh hai Laksh who has now changed his name to Lucky…” A manly voice says

Then the screen unfreezes.

“Why did you steal Ma’am’s Laddo’s?!” Sanskaar asks.

“What’s it to you?!” Laksh says with attitude.

“Who are these losers?” Sanskaar says while looking at few boys.

“Hey! They’re my friends!” Laksh says.

Sanskaar shakes his head and leaves out of the room while Laksh smirks.

Sanskaar is shown then studying.

Screen freezes.

“This is Sanskaar… Durga Prasad Maheshwari’s layak son. He is first in everything.” A manly voice says

Sanskaar is shown doing karate in the ring. While Laksh is shown fighting outside with other boys.

“Ek does fight in the ring while other does it outside the ring.” A manly voice says.

Sanskaar is then shown sitting on the sofa, DP is reading the newspaper, Laksh comes home hiding the bruises. DP then hears Laksh’s foot steps.

“Where are you coming from?!” DP strictly says.

Laksh gasps and looks down. DP turns around and AP comes out of the kitchen, Sanskaar looks up and sees him.

“What’s that?” DP asks.

“What’s what?” Laksh tries to avoid the topic.

“You fought again?!” DP angrily says and stands up.

Laksh gulps while DP glares at him.

“Phir se?! Look Annapurna! He brought dirt into the house again!” An angry DP says.

DP then gets his belt out and Laksh’s eyes widen, DP starts walking slowly.

“Bas Papa, you stop, I’ll come there.” Laksh says and walks down.

DP is surprised, Laksh stands in front of DP. DP then hits him while AP is pained, Laksh jumps. DP then stops and throws the belt angrily. Sanskaar smirks.

“Kya Papa? At least stop for today? Ek Kaam Karo, save your stick for tomorrow and take rest today.” Laksh says and starts walking.

DP shakes his head in a disagreement, AP brings the first aid box and makes Laksh sit on the steps.

“Kya Laksh?” AP asks.

DP sits on the sofa and sighs.

“It’s not my fault Maa, he just need reasons to hit me!” Laksh says while looking at DP.

“Why can’t you two be the same?” A worried AP asks.

“We can’t Maa! I’m Lucky and he’s not! God gave you three sons, one is Maas ladla while the other is Papa’s! The third one ka patah Nahi… And one has to be different, what’s the point of having three sons that are the same?” Laksh says.

DP hears and looks on angrily.

“I sent Aansh away because of his bad deeds! Lagta hai Iss ko bhi bejhna chahiye!” DP angrily huffs.

“Beta, you two are brothers, why can’t you behave like Ram Lakshman?” AP says.

“Because we aren’t Ram Lakshman, I already told you, I’m Lucky and he’s Raavan!” Laksh says and stands up.

DP and Sanskaar glare at Laksh and Laksh walks up the stairs.

“Kuch Nahi Ho sakta is ladke ka!” DP sighs.

AP follows him to do his aid.

“Raavan? Ram and Lakshman? Not a chance!” A manly voice says.

It shifts to school, Laksh is seen teasing a fat and chubby girl, she is crying.

“Moti!” Laksh teases the girl.

The girl cries “Didi!”

Laksh starts laughing.

“Ho, Kya hua moti?” Laksh laughs and teases.

Sanskaar walks past and hears the girl crying.

“What happened?” Sanskaar asks the girl.

“It’s none of your business! So stay out of it!” Laksh says and glares at him.

“He’s teasing me and calling me Moti.” The girl cries.

She looks around 9 years old.

“Laksh… Stop it!” Sanskaar says.

“I told you it’s Lucky!” Laksh says.

Laksh and Sanskaar start arguing and then Laksh pushes Sanskaar and Sanskaar pushes Laksh. The girl looks on.

Then after few days, the girl is at the gate, Laksh comes out and she goes up to him.

“Lucky… Today is my last day and this school, I’m leaving.” The chubby 9 year old girl says.

“What?” A shocked Laksh says.

“Not fair, now who will I tease?” Laksh sadly says and pouts.

“I’m sorry if I ever hurt you.” The girl says and turns around.

“Arey… Before leaving, tell me your name.” Laksh asks.

“Kishmish.” The girl says and runs off.

“Kishmish?” Laksh thinks and giggles.

“Kishmish toh chali Gayi, but chod Gayi Kuch.” The manly voice says.

Laksh looks down and sees a locket, he picks it up and looks around but Kishmish was gone.

“Now read the story yourself…” The manly voice says and laughs.

Precap: 12 YEARS LATER… Hero’s introduced…
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Young Sanskaar – Gautam Ahuja
Young Laksh – Shivansh Kotia
Young Kishmish – Amrita Mukherjee

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Do tell me how it is and wether I should continue or not… I also have added some changes…

95 comments

  1. rabia

    Its wonderful dear… Really veryyy interesting … Plz plz plzzz continue but plzzzz make it raglak plz really wanna see raglak as a couple ….its a request plz

    • Halima

      |Author

      Thank you Rabia…😊
      I’m glad you find it wonderful and interesting…
      Well about the pairs… Let’s see…πŸ™‚

  2. Alisha

    |Registered Member

    OMG! Perfect, I loved it! That so cool, superb! Mindblowing.. That cute nok jhok of our Kishmish and Laksh was so adorable. 😘😍
    Well.. That’s gonna be another big twist as I read the promo, some other actors are gonna play Sanskaar, Laksh and Ragini, Hmm.. Seems kinda interesting.
    Eagerly waiting for the next episode..
    Stay blessed! βœ¨πŸ˜€

    • Halima

      |Author

      Thank you for Alisha…😊
      I’m glad you love it, this is the first time I have seen your comment on my FF… I’m glad you’re loving it… And you loved the story… Don’t need to say sorry…☺️

  3. Anisha

    |Registered Member

    kuch bolu???…. Haluli dear… chal bol hi deti hu i love you….
    bohut jyada wala….ok??
    i promised I’ll read see???…
    so wonderful chapter… i am waiting for the next part eagerly….<3 <3

    • Halima

      |Author

      Haw… Thank you Anku… 😊
      Tune apna promise nibhaya… Mein Khush hoon tera comment Dekh kar…
      I love you too and bahot zyada wala…
      I’ll upload soon and mein jaanti hoon ki tujhe kiska Intezaar hai πŸ˜‰

  4. _Angel_

    |Registered Member

    It was awesome and hillarious loved DPs scenes lol he’s always funny

    Can’t wait till te next episode
    Till then
    Take care
    Keep smiling
    Stay blessed

    -angel

  5. lisa

    yeh heart connection is my favorite especially ragini
    one more thing in s1 the bromance between laksh and ansh was the best when ansh accidentally slip in laksh arm and the cute eyelock
    just loved it kindly request bring more bromance and ya romance tu hoga hee
    and also bring ragini tooo soon pljjj

    • Halima

      |Author

      I’m glad that heart connection is your favourite…😊
      Even I don’t remember the bromance😁
      But I will try… And Ragini would be introduced in episode 3 along with Swara…

      Thank you for reading and commenting Lisa…😊

  6. Ret

    Wow amazing love it fantasci

    Wow fantasy love it thaks for your story’s

    Jehdhcjfjjrjdiciisjduxuwijfjcksiehhchduwu love it

  7. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    wow halima its very interestingd dear loved the intro and I think i read season1 or 2 but I dont remember which one as too many ffs and update next part soon and do inform me πŸ™‚

  8. Nusz Khan

    |Registered Member

    My Bali or ducky!!!! You rocked this new Fan-Fiction.

    God I love reading your Fan-Fictions so much they’re amazing xx.

    Also why aren’t you Skype much but here?

    Come on there and tell mebout your new stories.

    Also I posted my Destiny vs love Fan-Fiction, hope you can read it Hun.

    Love you xx.

    Anyways keep smiling/Shining like always.

    ~Nusz/ নুসরাঀ xx

    • Halima

      |Author

      Thank you Nus/Bara… 😊
      I’m glad that you love reading my fan fictions…πŸ˜ƒ
      I would come there soon and start gossiping πŸ˜‰
      I’ll read Destiny Vs Love… And love you tooπŸ’«
      Take care 😬

  9. Xxxxx

    Di have u written any other ff before heart connection season 1 . Please tell if u have written as I love your ff…

    • Halima

      |Author

      Heart connection season 1 was my first FF that I have ever wrote… But I wrote FF’s after that…πŸ™‚
      I’m happy to find out that you love reading my FFs 😊

  10. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

    πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ thank u di πŸ˜€ . Today was a very special Day for me . I got a prize from my school…. And a happy belated birthday to u di… Do you mind me asking your age? ( if you have read my comment then do please reply)

    Your friend
    Shrinjal.

  11. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

    And is your real name Halima? ( please forgive ur friend if I asked more questions ):-P:-P

    • Halima

      |Author

      Haa, my real name is Halima and I recently turned 16 years old…πŸ™‚
      No need to say sorry… Friends don’t say sorry to each other 😊

  12. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

    Oh didi, even one of my friend tells me … And thank u for forgiving ur little friend…. πŸ™‚

    • Halima

      |Author

      Why thank you?
      Meine toh Kuch Nahi Kiya…😜
      Anyways do you have any social media accounts?
      Jaise Ki Skype… Facebook…
      And that’s all I have…πŸ˜†πŸ˜Š

      • Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

        Nahi sadly I don’t have … 😣😣…. actually I am tied up with my schedule so don’t have this Skype, Facebook. …. And thank u isliye kyuki in the above post u said congrats … ☺ and please post ur another ff ch 3 also .. waiting for it .

        Shrinjal

  13. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

    Well, if you are my friend the please do tell me that how do you write so perfectly?:-:-P:$ ur writing skills are awesome.

    Shrinjal

    • Halima

      |Author

      Of course I’m your friend… Thank you…😊
      But I don’t think I write soo good or perfectly…
      Well writing doesn’t matter… It’s the plot that matters… You should write with your imagination…😊

  14. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal ) Hal

    And in which city do u live? I know u must be 😑😑on me , right ? But what to do yaar….I just want to talk to u and di u r my first friend on TU…

    • Halima

      |Author

      Nahi toh… I’m not angry and it’s so good to hear that I’m your first friend that you talk to and trust…😊
      But have you got some other place we can talk? Like Facebook or Skype or Snapchat?
      Vaha baat karna easier hoga…πŸ™‚

  15. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Well Hali, I am sorry 4r being late, actually I am busy winding up school stuff as after 2 days school will reopen! Well I have not read the previous season, but I am pretty sure you are going to rock this FF 😊
    Well coming to the pairs, whatever u wish, as pairs doesn’t matter, what matter is content lying in the story 😊

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚ Halima πŸ™‚ Api πŸ™‚

    -Zuha

    • Halima

      |Author

      Thank you Zuha… I’m glad you think like that… Even that’s my thought too… You shouldn’t care about the pairs… Just the storyline…πŸ˜€

  16. Prakriti19

    |Registered Member

    Sorry Di for late comment…Busy with school..That’s why…Its awesome Di…Your both seasons are awesome… Actually I gave not commented on your previous seasons…. Reason is Di that I gave recently joined TU and that time you were not posting ff…That’s why not commented I hope you will forgive ur lil sis…ur age is sixteen well mine is twelve…Can I ask a question…Why u kept such a big name..I even can’t read properly…I wish all the best for ur ff….I m sure u will rock this season also…
    Bye and Take care…
    Low u loads…
    Keep writing Di

    • Halima

      |Author

      Thank you Prakriti…😊😊😊
      Well about the name… My name is Halima… But you can just ignore the rest of it…😬😜
      Thank you for believing in me but I don’t want to disappoint anyone…
      You also take care… Love you tooπŸ’«

  17. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

    Halima di, I have joined Facebook … Please tell me ur full name . So it will be easier for me to find u .. and di one more thing, I don’t want to be in Facebook for so long.. .. so di can u send me ur phone number then we can chat through WhatsApp. .. I know it’s not safe to give numbers . But friends don’t suspect each other,right? Well u can give me ur phone number . I won’t do anything

  18. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

    Yes I got it ! So di when they give u a firm type to fill and they give u to fill name and surname .. so in that u have filled Zobia HN?

  19. Xxxxx ( Shrinjal )

    And di. . It’s from Shrinjal Agrawal . N the one with no profile picture . It’s empty . That’s my .

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