heart beat., a show changed my life (epi3)(dhani emotions & musical tashan)

Hi guys meghs here… how r u all …

Recap : vidha tom & jerry fight.. vidha challenge of musical tashan…

Here is link of previous part
http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-beat-show-change-life-epi2/

Today epi divided to two parts part one dhani emotions and part 2 music tashan

#dhani emotions#
Epi starts dhani driving car… she reaches mansion… and goes inside it… its big bungalow like palace… a 45 aged lady shown walking on stairs on sees dhani… she moves towards her… dhani too sees her.. dhani runs to her her and hugs her calling mumma… (it is not dhani mom guys someone else guess it who)
Its none other than kanak… from childhood dhani calls her mumma(reason is her lonliness she craved a mother love that she got from kanak not with her real mom)

Kanak shows fake anger on dhani and says finally dhani malhotra got time to meet me… dhani smiles and says mumma its not like that i was little busy … kanak cuts her word from middle and says haha ur busy afterall ur famous rj payal of heart beat am i right dhani…. my heat beat even rised when i come to know it .. dhani is shocked to hear it how come kanak know this and stares angrily at kriti..
kriti : wo dhani trust me i didn’t say anything. ..
kanak : why r u staring her. she is ur pet.. she didn’t say me anything. Dhani u hide such big this from ur mumma i not expect this from u.. what is use of this rj drama and all y u working as rj .. u no need to working ..
dhani shocked to hear it… she can’t even dream of quitting rj job..
dhani : mumma do u trust me..
kanak nods yes
Dhani (continues ) : mumma i not working to earn money.. u know all about me.. my papa and mom have no time for me .. so i just want to avoid this lonliness and i choose this… if i done anything wrong pls forgive me .. dhani strted crying and says in sobbing voice mumma plz don’t ask me to quit this rj job it really means alot me this rj job is quite relaxing from lonliness…. mumma i just ..dhani unable to stop her tears while talking.. kanak also had tears in her eyes she immidiately hugs dhani… and says its not like that dhani… ur mom is cardioligist she have losts of patients whom she has to care and she is..
Dhani not let kanak to speak and says ya famous cardioligist.. she is best doctor as a mother she not there when i need her… mumma pls don’t defend ur best frnd who even have no time to say hello to her daughter it has been year since i lastly talk to her.. in that house i was lonely … forgot it all if i start saying it never ends…

Kritika also have tears in her eyes… Dhani hardly controls her tears. .. kanak to change topic to change dhani mood .. says slowly hitting dhani u again fought with Viplav naa… dhani understand kanak trying to change her mood stopped crying and smiles saying no mumma fight not at all infact we r best frnds now….
Kritika gaves her oh really look and says herself bestfrnds seriously …

Viplav comes home and sees dhani actually he not saw kanak and Kritika there .. viplav moves to dhani and says arre miss complaint box u come to complaint if u scared then y did u agree my challenge to tomorrow’s musical tashan… dhani hold her hand in head… kanak fumes in angry listening this… she holds stick and started beating viplav…
Viplav shock to see kanak and says mom i just …. and started running and says mom my sweet mom my dear mom my lovely mom… kanak says stop buttering viplav what did u say just now.. challenge and musical tashan… u 2 never change naa… dhani panic but mumma what i have done (gives viplav ur gone look)Viplav its all because of u what is need of saying this all.. see mumma is upset …. viplav says oi what did i done..
kanak says stop u both u not listen like this… and started beating both on stick… vidha starts running and kanak too runs behind them holding sticks.. kritika smiles seeing this cute scene😊

Vidha and kanak get tired and sits on sofa… kanak holds vidha ears when will u stop fighting. ..anyway i too come college and see how will be ur tashan music ..
Dhani : mumma r u upset with us
Kanak will mumma can ever be upset on kids saying this hugs vidha.. vidha smiles looking each other… kritika notices this and smiles thinking something…
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Dhani says oh shit its so late come kriti lets go… bye mumma.. kanak asks her to drive slowly and take care urself beta… vip stops dhani and asks her slowly that only dhani can hear u remember our challenge. .. dhani nods yes.. kanak ask whats going on.. dhani says nothing mumma bye…
Dhani leaves from tripati mansion with kriti..
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#Malhotra mansion #

Dhani reaches her home.. no matter how she wamt to runaway from there she reached that place only which she hates most.. It is not home a place filled of emptiness. .. she ask kriti to stay tonight with her… kriti agrees and inform her mom calling permission… kriti mom knows dhani well as kriti n dhani is childhood frnds … she even know dhani feels loneliness so she agres kritika to stay with dhani …
Dhani says kriti ur so lucky to have such a nice family.. n look at this house here this house filled of loneliness … there might be many servants but family is family… here no family.. its only me n 2 strangers leaving… i have no one to care … i am alone in this big mansion… kriti playfully hits her and shouts don’t u dare to say ur alone. ..ur not alone ur kriti is with u got it and hugs her… they share some emotional time ..
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It is night which she always spend with her loneliness but this night she is not alone her kriti is with her.. she feels for the first time there is someone too her too.. the love she craved from mom is got by her kanak mumma who loves her so much … n kriti is more than her life who cares dhani … kriti supports in her situations. .. dhani feels her family pic completed but its not like that somewhere in heart she want her real mom love and her papa care too..
This all thought running from dhani mind when kriti calls to sleep… and both sleep.
Its so peacefull night to dhani….
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Morning
Kriti and dhani getting ready to college .. dhani thinks today i will teach u a lesson viplav just wait and watch…
Dhani smirks ….
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Part one ended .. now welcome to part 2 musical tashan
Note : this part includes songs so pls read songs then only u can enjoy musical tashan… if u not listen music pls do listen..pls imagine scenes in mind..
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Part 2
☆musical tashan☆

#upmc college#

Viplav saying amit is everything ready ..
Amit nodes yes n asks vip bro is it necessary this tashan … viplav smiles and put hand on his shoulder n says this is very essential to teach lesson to miss express…

Screen shift to kritika and dhani..
Dhani think once again is this tashan is necessary. .. dhani smiles and says ofcourse i thought well i have to teach that akdoo a lesson..

In auditorium almost whole college gather too see this musical tashan.. amika r worried …
Amit adresses crowd and say welcome to musical tashan… keep enjoying

Viplav comes there .. he weared a white t shirt with orange shirt and black jeens…he is looking so handsome … n coming to dhani she wore a pink gown … which increased her beauty or u can say she is stunning ..

Countdown to musical tashan
1,2,3 here u go

Viplav starts singing seeing dhani..

Aa dekhen jara kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam mere saathiya
(2)
Aage nikal aaye hum woh pichhe reh gaye
Upar chale aaye hum woh nichhe reh gaye …. ( 2)

Woh humse haarenge hum baaji maarenge
Hum unse kya hai kam
Naachenge aaise hum – 2 naachenge woh kya

Viplav sings song with passion. .
Aa dekhen jara kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam mere saathiya

Saare shehar mein hami hai humsa kaun hai – 2
Dekho idhar hum yahi hai humsa kaun hai – 2
Dekhenge dekha hai jaadu kya aaisa hai
Yaaron se jalne ka kaaton pe chalne ka
Kaaton pe chalne ka kya hai faayda
Aa dekhen jara kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam mere saathiya
Aa dekhen jara kismein kitna hai dam
Jamke rakhna kadam mere saathiya

Now dhani turn…. dhani strted singing

Gore Gore Yeh Chore(2)..
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Shaadi Ki Degar Na Jaaye Magar
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore (6)

Andher Se Chahe Kuch Bhi Ho Yeh
Adha Magar Hai Heero Wali
Din Raat Kitaabein Parthe Hai Yeh
Ladki Ki Tasweero Wali
Kahin Jeevan Mela…
Oye Shava(Chorus)
Par Shaadi Jamela…
Oye Shava(Chorus )
Darwaza Inhe Dikhlaon Zara
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(6)

Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Dhani tease viplav and stating him sings
Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Shaadi Ki Jo Baat Karo To
Budi Yeh Haalat Karthe Hai… Achcha Mmm
Bin Shaadi Sang Rehne Ki Yeh
Badi Waqalat Karte Hai
Har Ladki Pyaari… Oye Shava
Bin Zimivari… Oye Shava
Laila Ke Bina Yeh Majhnu Bane
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(6)

Dhani also acts according to song. ..
Jab Yeh Budhe Ho Jayenge(she shows holding stick n walking like old man)
Kaans Kaans Ke Reh Jayenge(she fakely coughs)
Kande Par Koi Haath Na Hoga
Hum Dum Koi Saath Na Hoga
Tokar Kayenge… Oye Shava(she shows hands to viplav while singing this)
Phir Pachtayenge… Oye Shava
Tab Yaad Inne Aayenge Hum
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(3)
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Shaadi Ki Degar Na Jaaye Magar
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(3)
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(3)

Now its time for both of them singing..
Dhani sings
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana) (2)

Now viplav strts singing
Haye haye re haye yeh ladki
Haye haye re haye (Hey)
Karti naadaniyaan kyun poocho to haye (Yo)
Kabhi yeh hamse ladti hai
Kabhi akadti hai
Karo door se chhedh khaani
Yeh ladki hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani) (2)

Turututurururu..

(Vip continues singing )
Iski baatein (Hey)
Yahi jaane (Hey)
Koi bhi toh jaane na..
Aisi vaisi (Hey)
Kaisi hai yeh (Hey)
Koi pehchaane na..
Toh bhaago
Oh yaaron
Kar na de shaitaani
Yeh ladki hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani)

Dhani sings
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana)

Aate jaate (Hey)
Chhedhe hamko (Hey)
Ke maane na yeh kehna..
Dekho dekho (Hey)
Paagal hai yeh
Haan bachke zara rehna..
Yeh aisa
Hai phir bhi
Apna isko maana
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana)

Ho yeh ladka hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani)

Haan haye haye re haye yeh ladka
Haye haye re haye (Hye)
Karti naadaniyaan kyun poocho toh haye (Yo)
Viplav sings…
Kabhi yeh hamse ladti hai
Kabhi akadti hai
Karo door se chhedh khaani

Yeh ladki hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani)
Dhani sings…
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana)
(Sry guys i am not good in explaining songs)
Dhani smiles …

Viplav now sings song ..(shows dhani who standing)
Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladaki hai ya chhadi hai
Shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
Aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pe gaali hai( Viplav remember dhani anger while singing this)
Dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya… (2)(he addresses whole audience stating what did she think of herself)

(He taughts well dhani and continue singing )
Aayi hai college mein padhane ke liye
Jab dekho taiyaar hai ladane ke liye… (2)
Hamne khaayi hai kasam todenge isaka guroor hum… (2) ha ha ha ha ha ha

Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladaki hai ya chhadi hai
Shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
Aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pe gaali hai(vip remember dhani anger while singing this)
Dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya… (2)
Viplav adresses crowd stating what she thinks herself..

Gore Gore Yeh Chore(2)..
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah(Chorus)
Shaadi Ki Degar Na Jaaye Magar
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore (6)

Andher Se Chahe Kuch Bhi Ho Yeh
Adha Magar Hai Heero Wali
Din Raat Kitaabein Parthe Hai Yeh
Ladki Ki Tasweero Wali
Kahin Jeevan Mela…
Oye Shava(Chorus)
Par Shaadi Jamela…
Oye Shava(Chorus )
Darwaza Inhe Dikhlaon Zara
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(6)

Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Dhani tease viplav and stating him sings
Gore Gore Yeh Chore
Shaadi Ki Jo Baat Karo To
Budi Yeh Haalat Karthe Hai… Achcha Mmm
Bin Shaadi Sang Rehne Ki Yeh
Badi Waqalat Karte Hai
Har Ladki Pyaari… Oye Shava
Bin Zimivari… Oye Shava
Laila Ke Bina Yeh Majhnu Bane
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(6)

Dhani also acts according to song. ..
Jab Yeh Budhe Ho Jayenge(she shows holding stick n walking like old man)
Kaans Kaans Ke Reh Jayenge(she fakely coughs)
Kande Par Koi Haath Na Hoga
Hum Dum Koi Saath Na Hoga
Tokar Kayenge… Oye Shava(she shows hands to viplav while singing this)
Phir Pachtayenge… Oye Shava
Tab Yaad Inne Aayenge Hum
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(3)
Yeh Ishq Ishq Chilaatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Yeh Gali Gali Mand Raatein Hai
Oooh Yeah
Shaadi Ki Degar Na Jaaye Magar
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(3)
Yeh Gore Gore Se Chore(3)

Now its time for both of them singing..
Dhani sings
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana) (2)

Now viplav strts singing
Haye haye re haye yeh ladki
Haye haye re haye (Hey)
Karti naadaniyaan kyun poocho to haye (Yo)
Kabhi yeh hamse ladti hai
Kabhi akadti hai
Karo door se chhedh khaani
Yeh ladki hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani) (2)

Turututurururu..

(Vip continues singing )
Iski baatein (Hey)
Yahi jaane (Hey)
Koi bhi toh jaane na..
Aisi vaisi (Hey)
Kaisi hai yeh (Hey)
Koi pehchaane na..
Toh bhaago
Oh yaaron
Kar na de shaitaani
Yeh ladki hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani)

Dhani sings
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana)

Aate jaate (Hey)
Chhedhe hamko (Hey)
Ke maane na yeh kehna..
Dekho dekho (Hey)
Paagal hai yeh
Haan bachke zara rehna..
Yeh aisa
Hai phir bhi
Apna isko maana
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana)

Ho yeh ladka hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani)

Haan haye haye re haye yeh ladka
Haye haye re haye (Hye)
Karti naadaniyaan kyun poocho toh haye (Yo)
Viplav sings…
Kabhi yeh hamse ladti hai
Kabhi akadti hai
Karo door se chhedh khaani

Yeh ladki hai
Deewani hai deewani (Deewani, deewani, deewani)
Dhani sings…
Yeh ladka hai
Deewana hai deewana (Deewana, deewana, deewana)
(Sry guys i am not good in explaining songs)
Dhani smiles …

Viplav now sings song ..(shows dhani who standing)
Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladaki hai ya chhadi hai
Shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
Aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pe gaali hai( Viplav remember dhani anger while singing this)
Dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya… (2)(he addresses whole audience stating what did she think of herself)

(He taughts well dhani and continue singing )
Aayi hai college mein padhane ke liye
Jab dekho taiyaar hai ladane ke liye… (2)
Hamne khaayi hai kasam todenge isaka guroor hum… (2) ha ha ha ha ha ha

Khambe jaisi khadi hai ladaki hai ya chhadi hai
Shola hai phooljhadi hai pattakhe ki ladi hai
Aankhon mein ghussa hai labon pe gaali hai
Dekho jara dekhjo yaaron khudako samajhati hai kya… (2)

Viplav adresses crowrd stating what she thinks herself. .

Now its time for real face off girls vs boys…(guys if anybody not listen this song first listen this song of film hum tum as without listening song u may feel bored)

Viplav holds gittar and sings…
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Soch Thi Hai Zyada
Kham Woh Samajh Thi Hai
Dil Kuch Kehta Hai
Kuch Aur Hi Karti Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti.. ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti(2)

Viplav strts teasing girls ..
Pyaar Usse Bhi Hai Magar Shuruaat Tumhi Se Chahe
Khudh Mein Ulji Ulji Hai Par Bhaalo Ko Suljaayein….

(Viplav looks all girls and says)
I Mean You’re All The Same Yaar
Hum Achche Dost Hai Par Uss Nazar Se Tumko Dekha Nahin
Woh Sab To Teek Hai Par Uss Barein Mein Maine Socha Nahin…

(Vip continues singing ….)
Sab Se Alag Hai Tum Yeh Keh Ke Paas Tumhaare Aaye..
Aur Kuch Din Mein Tum Mein Alag Sa Kuch Bhi Na Usko Paiye.

(Viplav says)
Uff Yeh Kaisi Shirt Pehnthe Ho(holding his shirt in funny manner)
Yeh Kaise Bhaal Khatathe Ho(holding his hair)
Ghaadi Tehz Chalathe Ho
Tum Jaldi Mein Kyo Khaathe Ho(holds his head and says)
Give me a Break…

Viplav continue singing …
Tumhe Badalne Ko Paas Woh Aati Hai
Tumhe Mitaane Ko Chaal Bichati Hai
Baaton Baaton Mein Tumhe Pasathi Hai
Pehle Hasathi Hai… Phir Bada Rulaati Hai
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti..
Ladki Kyon Na Jaane Kyon Ladko Si Nahin Hoti ..

Viplav twirls dhani and dances with her.. put his hand on her shoulder.. dhani moves aways starts singing looking viplav …

Eh Itna Hi Khudh Se Khush Ho To Peeche Kyon Aate Ho
Phool Kabhi To Hazar Thofein Akhir Kyon Laaten Ho…

(Dhani says funny manner)
Apna Naam Nahin Bataya Aapne
Coffee Peene Chalenge
Main Aapko Ghar Chod Doon
Phir Kab Milenge..

Dhani continue singing …
Bikhra Bikhra Be Matlab Sa Toota Phoota Jeena
Aur Kehte Ho Alag Se Hai Hum Taan Ke Apna Seena…

(Dhani says acting while saying)
Bheega Tolya Kahin Farsh Pe
Toothpaste Ka Dakhan Kahin
Kal Ke Mauze Ulat Ke Pehne
Waqt Ka Khuch Bhi Hosh Nahin

Dhani continues singing. .
Jeena Ka Tumko Dang Sikhlati Hai
Tumhe Jaanwar Se Insaan Banaati Hai
Uske Bina Ek Pal Rehna Sakhoge Tum
Usko Pata Hai Yeh Keh Na Sakhoge Tum
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Dhani teases viplav … and shows thumbs down manner… Viplav not less than dhani he continues sings..
Jaane Kaun Kaun Se Din Woh Tumkoyaad Dilaayein
Pyaar Ko Chahe Bhool Bhi Jaayein
Taareeqein Na Bhoolayein..

(Ok now all listen Viplav what he saying )
First March Ko Nazar Milaayee
Chaar April Ko Main Milne Aayee
Ikees May Ko Tumne Chuwa Tha
Che June Mujhe Kuch Hua Tha

Now Dhani sings…
Ladko Ka Kya Hai Kissi Bhi Mor Pe Woh Mur Jaayein
Abhi Kissi Ke Hai Abhi Kissi Aur Se Woh Jud Jaayein…

(Dhani says mocking boys)
Tumhaare Mummy Daddy Ghar Par Nahin Hai
Great… Main Aaa Jaon?
Tumhaari Friend Akeli Ghar Jaa Rahi Hai
Bechari… Main Chod Aaon(teasing boys)
Uff(with attitude)

Viplav sings…
Ek Haan Kehne Ko Kitna Dehlati Hai
Thak Jaate Hai Hum Woh Jee Behlati Hai

Dhani sings…
Woh Sharmati Hai Kabhi Chupati Hai
Ladki Jo Haan Kehde Usse Nibhati Hai
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti

Viplav nodes and says Na Na Na ..

Dhani sings..
Iss Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti Ladki Kyon…
(Vip holds his head)Oh God
(Dhani continues singing) so Liye Ladkiya Ladko Si Nahin Hoti Na (vip nodes nono)Na Na Na,

(vip)Oh God Shut Up (he strted getting irritated)
(Vip now talks softly to dhani)Alright Alright Iss Mein Jagadne Ki Kya Baat Hai Yaar..

(Dhani )Pehle Pehle Bawarein Jaise Aas Paas Mand Rai Arre…
(vip)But I …
(Dhani sings)Phir Busy Hoon Kehkar Tumko Woh Tarkai
(vip says)come on dhani …(actually its come on ria i changed it)

(Dhani says)Samjha Karo Darling Aaj Bohat Kaam
(vip try to stop dhani and says)Arre… Meri Bhi To Suno
(Dhani continuous saying)To Kya Dil Mein Tumhaara Naam Hai
(Vip says)Oh… Wow

(Dhani)Jiss Chehre Par Marte Hai Woh Boring Ho Jaaye
(vip holds his ears) I’m Not Listening To You
(Dhani )Kuch Hi Din Mein Nazrein Inki Idhar Udhar Mand Rai
(vip)I’m Not Listening To You
(Dhani )Sirf Pyaar Se Zindagi Nahin Chalti
(vip now says to crowd)Ok I’m Not With Her
(Dhani says)my Interior Decoration Ka Course Kyon Nahin Karti..
(Vip says)OK That’s it..

Viplav quits….

Dhani smirks so guess the winner its dhani…. Dhani talking skill actually made her winner…

Dhani goes to Viplav and says someone said rockstar viplav tripati never loose… but oops beter luck next time… viplav gets angry shouts dhani … this is nothing lets see singing competition in that i will show u what can Viplav tripati do and its a challenge …

Screen flashes on Dhani tensed face and viplav angry face…

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Precap : Viplav and dhani seeing something in noticeboard and shouts noway…

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vidha to shocked to know something what is it…

And payal truth now only revealed to kanak .. kanak is here positive did u like that part….

And guys so sry not to update yesterday… here is long epi for u..

I guess its boring one songs r more in tashan part and nothing more scene…
And thanks for song selection renu di and maha … it helped me alot in tashan part…
Thank u all of u for ur co constant support and keep commenting .

Guys how it is did u like it… is it good or bad..
Criticism too heartly welcome. .
Keep reading. ..
Take care…

26 comments

  1. Sri

    Its too great my dear… I loved both part…. But I am not sure about all songs because its all Hindi song…. I am not good in Hindi but loved it ….. Unique story… Great work…..😘💜

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Thanks sri… i am happy u liked it even if i not sure of both part.. songs i too not know its renu di n maha suggested i used to tashan … its so sweet comment..

      Keep reading 😊

  2. Piyali

    |Registered Member

    you know what dii , i want to bash myself now(mera muh mat dodna please) , means seriously……….why i didn’t ask you before to write……..such amazing writing skills you have diiii………….seriously……………i love the way you express the story and more than that the stories……….mind blowing……….seriously dii…….i am in love with it………….frienship, mother’s love, love story, hatred……everything in one story……………i am in love with it dii……………………………now na……..update as soon as possible……………..still diiiiii…….its wonderful……….love you dii……….be happy……………

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Kiddo don’t u dare… u only made me writer dear .. its early or now what is difference… i thinking u buttering me so much.. i have good writing skill such an honour but morethan me u have good writing talent and unique thinking. ..
      Nxt part update will be tmrw… i post nxt part soon …
      Ur comments r really encourages. ..
      Love u too…
      Keep reading

      • Piyali

        |Registered Member

        no , no dii……….i am not at all buttering you……….am a huge , mad fan of your mehendi os and this ff too…………….and i am totally in love with your writing skills……infact waiting for your swasan ff to start………………because i know you’ll rock there too…….

  3. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Not boring, it was awesome!!👏👏
    Precap!!! What happened??
    And Kanak in positive role is wow!! Felt so good when Dhaani calls her mom☺☺

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Angel thanks for liking it.. precap guess karo.. u liked kanak as dhani mumma here… thanks.. keep reading

  4. maha

    Meghan it was superb👏👏starting was awesome and cute💕.. imagining kanak as caring and loving mother woh bhe of dhani was so adorable💓.. she and dhani shared a wonderful bonding😊poor dhani in spite of her family she feels alone😣but she is lucky to have such a caring mumma and friend😇viplav was amazing the way kanak runs behind vidhani with a stick was super cute😘.. I literally loved their sweet relationship😚
    Musical tashan was not at all boring so please don’t say like that☺.. I enjoyed each song💓.. imagining vidhani in this form was something different😍😍.. larki kyun naa Jane kyun larkon se nahe hote hayee hayee viplav singing this song with attitude and passion😍😍 and yeh larka hai deewana hai deewana OMG all songs were excellent👌 I enjoyed thoroughly because I love songs💓overall episode was wonderful👌.. waiting for the next one and in precap vidhani will come to know that they are singing together.. I guess😛
    And don’t say thanks yaar u can ask me whenever u need any help😘

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Thanks so maha…. so big comment … u liked kanak as caring mom… kanak and dhani bond r different. .. me too feels sad for dhani to feel lonliness but she have her kanak maa n kriti who complete her..
      U liked that part kanak running behind vidha ….

      Tashan part was nothing if u n renu di not help me in suggesting songs…. u gave perfect song to them which made it nice…
      Thank u so much😊😊😊

      Keep reading to know if ur guess is crt or not…

      • maha

        Oh just now I have asked u not say thanks and u again started its ur writing dear which made this song more beautiful and interesting💓

  5. Shruthy

    |Registered Member

    Wowow haha that was a fun ride yaar. Both parts were really good actually. The first part was quite an introduction to Dhaani & Kanak’s relationship and Dhaani’s loneliness. And I am happy both Kanak & Dhaani share a good relationship. Poor Dhaani, not having that parents’ love is indeed hurting. I hope that everything will be fine by the end xD Anyways
    Viplav is damn hilarious. He got trapped on his own. That moment ViDha were pursued by Kanak who was trying to hit them and then the way they fell on the sofa and then that cute hug. ViDha looking at each other smiling *__* Then that musical tashan was so funny and cute. I was loving it able to imagine it. It was really good. But… Viplav got angry yaar. xD bad boy! He didnt like defeats I guess. and then Dhaani looking tensed…
    Precap : I guess they got to know they would have to perform together.

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Thanks yaar for liking kanak and dhani relationship… dhani lonliness problem will be solved so soon… she will get what she deserves. .
      Actually viplav not like defeat and moreover dhani made him loose made his anger he indeed angry young man..
      U observed small to small part of stry good analysing. ..
      Musical tashan is quite difficult to portray thanks for liking and imagine it… don’t say vip bad boy yaar.. he is good but anger of defeat only..
      To know Precap ur guess maybe crt or not u have to wait..
      Keep reading

      • Shruthy

        |Registered Member

        Oh I see that’s good <3 Oh ok angry young man *__*
        LOL thanks xD
        I cant understand but well as readers you can still imagine how teasing and confident they might be singing while the other one listens to the person smirking/laughing and all and then vice versa…
        I was just kidding yaar please dont mind it :/
        And I will be waiting for sure <3

  6. Shruthy

    |Registered Member

    Wowow haha that was a fun ride yaar. Both parts were really good actually. The first part was quite an introduction to Dhaani & Kanak’s relationship and Dhaani’s loneliness. And I am happy both Kanak & Dhaani share a good relationship. Poor Dhaani, not having that parents’ love is indeed hurting. I hope that everything will be fine by the end xD Anyways
    Viplav is damn hilarious. He got trapped on his own. That moment ViDha were pursued by Kanak who was trying to hit them and then the way they fell on the sofa and then that cute hug. ViDha looking at each other smiling *__* Then that musical tashan was so funny and cute. I was loving it able to imagine it. It was really good. But… Viplav got angry yaar. xD bad boy! He didnt like defeats I guess. and then Dhaani looking tensed…
    Precap : I guess they got to know they would have to perform together, that’s why they are shocked 😉

  7. Renuverma

    |Registered Member

    DEAR megha like yr concept of breaking episode in parts n naming it too.👌👍👍👍👍
    First part showed us sweet kanak considered as mother by dhani. Its lovely to see kanak in positive form😋 Felt sad for dhani as she yearns for her parents time n is all alone in palatial house surrounded by servants.
    Great that kanak is aware of dhanis working as Rj
    Again got to read tom n jerry fights between vidhani n today kanak too was there after them like hous3 owner is after tom n jerry 😀😂 enjoyed kanak running with a stick after them 😗

    Second part musical tashan was equally enjoyable n u did a great effort.😊 in penning down all lyrics of many songs.thks for selecting the ones i suggested. Ofcourse other people choice is also there☺good u cared for everyone n tried to adjust all. It was fantastic.

    Wondering till now they r not aware of that they 4 singing as a couple. I am sure both would win n when they wud see themelves as a winner couple then😀😁😂🤔🤔🤔🤗🤗🤗😥😥😥
    Looking forward for next. ☺

  8. Meghs

    |Author

    Thanks renu di for liking naming of epi… in previous part too i name as tom & jerry fight but forgot while posting to give subtitle. .
    Thanks di for liking kanak as dhani mumma here…. indeed its new form of kanak… dhani is alone in house surrounded servants but soon her life going to take turn with some unexpected twists..
    Here vidha is like tom n jerry so more more scenes will like this only…
    So much appreciation di did i desrve it trully. .. second part is nothing if di if u didn’t select choose for me ur suggestions made it possible…. to gave all equal role i am still trying. ..

    Well winner couple is vidhani only but will both agree to sing together is big question. ..

  9. Sujie

    |Registered Member

    Meghs Di….. Lovely episode….. You divided in in parts…. Awesome….
    Emotional part of kanak and Dhani…. Loving Kanak’s positive character …… Go on……
    And the musical TASHANN ……. Wonderful…. 🎶🎤😍😍😍😀😀

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