heart beat a show changed my life (epi 17) (back to fm)

Hi guys i am back with another part of heart beat. Thanks for ur lovely comments. It made my day so happy to see ur love.

Precap : sameer gave permission to dhani for continuing rj job.
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Here is previous all epi links
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=heart+beat+a+show+changed+my+life

Here is link for previous partπŸ‘‡
http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-beat-show-changed-life-epi-16/

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Fm station#

Ready to on-line 1,2,3. . Here u go

Good evening mumbai. this is rj payal here from ur favorite show heart beat.. time slot to show may change but not show. Welcome to new season of heart beat. As it is new season something new added to show.. yes it is people interaction. From now on people can call on show. If any question in life u wanna ask then call on this no. is 8911000567. So don’t think just make call on no.

Today quote is “To love is nothing. To be loved is something. But to love and be loved, that’s everything.”

She said each word remembering her and viplav. She then sees him standing infront of her. She blink her eyes to clear doubt if he really there or not. Then when she open her eyes found place empty alas she is dreaming about viplav. She slightly hit her head by hand.
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On otherhand viplav is sitting sitting on car. He listening keenly to show (don’t forgot he is die hard fan of showπŸ˜‰) he murmurs himself “wow what a quote u making me fall on u more… there is something in u that attracts me towards u.” He brushed his hair on head while saying it. He remember their moment which they spend on clg before an hour.

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@fm station

“Guys here is a first call to us.
She connects call to airline.

Rj : hi this is rj payal. May i know who is calling and ur from?

Caller : i am anushka from chandigarh. I just want to talk regarding my boyfriend. When we go together, he always do remember moments which he spent with his ex. He can’t move on from his past. First i took it as normal but later on it become common. On every our conversation he talks about his ex. Even he spends time with me he will only remember his and ex gf moments. Sometimes i feel i don’t exist to him.

Rj : ohh ur problem seem to be so tough. I understand how hard it may be for u.

Anushka : i feeling he took me as granted for his broken heart. I can’t take it anymore. I love him so much but i realize it was one sided love. I am emotionally depressed not able to concentrate on studies. I can’t bear it anymore. Should i let him go? or fight with my feelings ? Pls help me to take decision.

Rj : it finds so complicated. Anushka in life everything happens for a reason. It’s a battle with yourself. I know it is hard to accept reality but u have to make up ur mind strong to accept fact. In life, if it was meant to be happen; then it surely happen.

U urself said ur unable to concentrate on studies because of it. So first u make ur mind strong. my advice is spend time as much as possible with ur friends. Do anything which makes ur mind off of him. And find urself again. But DONT talk to him. Gave him time to think about what he wants. Then , he will surely talk to you. Just let him know that u will always be there for him. Be patient. maybe u guys will make up, maybe u wont. But at least u will get to know by this what actually he feel for u by this.

Anushkha : (with determine tune) thanks payal for helping me. Ur words boosted me to get out of this trauma. I try my best to get out of depression.

Rj : thanks Anushkha for calling heart beat. And congratulations u r first caller to our show. Keep calling to show.

She cuts call. “So as u heard anushka talk u may realise life is not so easy but it was not though tough too.. lets hear a beautiful love song from movie ms dhoni.
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Viplav who listening show feel proud on dhani. That her quote helped to take a girl her life decision.

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She track on music.. song plays.

Tu aata hai seene mein
Jab jab saansein bhar
Tere dil ki galiyon se
Main har roz guzarti hoon

Dhani imagines herself and viplav on middle of road walking holding each other hand. Suddenly rain comes. Both took shelter on tree while share eyelock.
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In car
Viplav closes his eyes and feels dhani siting infront sit near him. Her hair is also moving on direction of wind.

Hawa ke jaise chalta hai tu
Main ret jaisi udti hoon
Kaun tujhe yoon pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

He tuck her hair to side and share an eyelock. He move more closer to her but gets hit by seat side and foundout seat beside him empty. Realising it dream he slightly hit his head.

Meri nazar ka safar
Tujhpe hi aake ruke
Kehne ko baaki hai kya
Kehna tha jo keh chhuke
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Dhani who closed her eyes feeling lyrics and feels like someone keeping head on her shoulder turns and finds Viplav. She look at him lovely.

Meri nigahein hain teri nigahon ki
Tujhe khabar kya bekabar

She look to his eyes and caressess his hair. She open her eyes and found it as dream. She smiles for her stupidity.

Main tujhse hi chup chup kar
Teri aankhein padhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yun pyar karega
Jaise main karti hoon

“Isn’t song was amazing. It was another awestruck song of palak. ”

Time to say heart beat tips. Today heart beat tip is “Build things up slowly when you make love. You don’t have to do everything at once: there’s always tomorrow.”

Love is a like a thing which one can’t get so easily. It take its own time. And if anything destined to be happen it will surely gonna happen.

So now time to say bye to u… ok guys bye. C u tomorrow on ur favourite show heart beat. Stay tuned on heart beat to rise ur heart beat. And this is rj payal signing off.
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Dhani pov~~~

Show ended. I was walking towrds parking area. It was so dark and Its so scary to found ur alone on dark. I felt like someone following me but when i turned i found road empty. I ignored thought as my illusion and went near my car. But i found my car as punctured. Perfect in time that to when I feeling so scared it has to be punctured. But suddenly a car passed near me scaring me to death. And someone grab her hand and making her fall inside car. I am frightened but i am not so weak person also. So made up some carriage and asked “what the hell?? When i turned i found the one who sitting besides me was none other than Viplav.

It’s irritating so i slightly him “Vipu u scared me to dea…… before complete sentence Viplav kept his hand on mouth. And gave her angry look to talk about death.

Dhani pov ends~~~~

“Vipu u here” dhani said smiling at him. Viplav hold her hand and says “wherever my princess i be thereπŸ˜‰”
Dhani : Vipu… and pout face
Vip : what vipu bipu.. how childish name. Sounds as if i am kid. I am Viplav. Viplav tripati.
Dhani : still isn’t it cute.. vipu vipu

She goes on calling him after sometimes instead of irritating viplav smiled. As if he started loving with his new name vipuπŸ˜‰

Viplav was driving car looking at dhani. She founds it and yell at him to keep his eyes on road.

“When such beautiful creature of god infront of me how can i see anywhere else..” said viplav winking.

Dhani blushes hardly to hear it.

Vip : ” if u blush this much. Then i may loose my control yaarπŸ˜‰
Dhani : “Viplav…

Dhani then looks outside. She enjoy outside view. Suddenly she ask viplav to stop. It was junction. Viplav stop the car and ask “what happen?

Dhani points her index figure towrds panipuri stall. Dhani mouth watered seeing golgappas. Viplav hit his head with head. Both get down of car.

Dhani : bhaiya 2 plate golgappa.
Vip : i don’t need.
Dhani : anyways who asked u huh?
Vip opens his mouth wider.
Dhani : u forgot our golgappa competition.
Viplav remembers it.

Flashback shown~~
Golgappa Competition begins. Amit,viplav and dhani in equal spirit.. Viplav finished 40 golgappa in 30 min.. Dhani holds her stomach after finishing 30 golgappa.. she says “i can’t eat anymore..” so does amit… viplav wins competition. He looked at dhani expression and smiles.
Flashback ends~~

Dhani gets thinking something. Gets determine that she will find answer soon.
Then eats golgappa thinks some prank put one full golgappa on viplav mouth before he can react and chuckles. Viplav too smile adoring her.

Screen ends on Viplav and dhani smiling face.
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Precap : A car stopped infront of malhotra mansion. A young man of age 22 comes out of it. He goes inside mansion and calls dhani who in return runs to him and hug him “sharvuuu…..” viplav looks on.

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To know who is that boy keep reading heart beat.

I ask few questions reply must

1.Did u remember real ikrs golgappa part?
2. Whom did u like in my ff most otherthan vidha answer frankly.
3. Did remember when i showed golgappa competition part in my ff?
4. Rate my ff from 0 to 10. I need honest answer. So that i improve myself.
5. What did u think dhani thinking?

Did u liked this epi. After so many days i added fm part hope u liked it. And it met ur expectations.

Guys i can’t take full credit to fm part as i taken it slightly from one show. And ya didn’t copied fully i made changes.

Pls put ur valuable comments .
Criticism too heartily welcome.

And also read other ff of ikrs by wonderful writers.

Take care.

37 comments

  1. Sujie

    |Registered Member

    meghs ……. the episode was lovely….. and the tips….along with the songs…..lovely…..
    I do remember ths golgappa competition in real IKRS……but dont exactly remember when it came in heart beat….. So many ffs…. so many creative ideas…..I do tend to forget…bit trust me I love HB…a show changed my life……
    talking about this new entry….he might be dhaani’s friend…or relative….
    and another thing…… I liked all the characters …as you said except VIDhaani …it has to be Kriti….
    Waise toh Amit is also good…but let me telk you why I like her….
    She understood Amit and the whole situation….when Amit revealed his truth…. She seems like very understanding…sensible….so I like her….
    About rating your ff…. i will give you full marks…. Its not my judgement that proves your worth….. You are giving us such a lovely story….and we are enjoying it…rating it in such scale would be of no meaning…. we love your story and are reading it…..
    Okay….god bless you….lots of love to you…

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Thanks alot. Glad u liked it. I tried to do as rj hope i made unique show in fmπŸ˜‰

      Its ok not ur fault if u not remember that part i actually added past conversation to make u all remember something lets c who remember that part still. I know yaar u love it.

      Lets c who is new entry. So ur fav is kriti i too liked her character. Perfect grl she is. So sweet of sujie. But i actually need ranking to improve my writing it improves writing style alt dear trust me. I also will love frank comments if u ever feel it not going crt way u can say it openly i won’t mind.

      Love u loads❀
      Sucha a sweet comment

      Keep reading

  2. Aiswarya

    |Registered Member

    Diiiiii…………….episode was amazing…tips was awesome……liked it very much….actually I expected romance in fm station in this episode 😜…..lovely song πŸ˜€
    I do remember that episode in ikrs actually 1 week before I watched it 😊😊….I like all the characters especially amit n kriti😊
    Di i don’t remember that part in HB ….was it there??……..there are soo many ff na…I think I have not read it on hb. ….sorry if I made a mistake in remembering
    About rating of ur ff…………I will give u 9 😊………..I’m reducing because then only u will try to improve more n more …….what is the need of rating? ?? The big thing is that we love ur ff
    No idea of what dhani was thinking 😌
    I’m sooo surprised after reading the episode u didn’t say sorry today 😲but I liked ur change n u didn’t even told boring too.
    Precap is soooooooo interesting di………that boy must be her friend or relative she is sooo attached to him ……..waiting to see viplav’s jealousy 😊.
    Post the next part whenever you are free
    Love u 😘😘
    Take care 😊

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Aishu wr was u missing alot dear… how r u?

      Thanks alot. Its ok u remember real ikrs part na its enough.

      Its ok u don’t remember that scene i showed it read flashback part carefully i used same before πŸ˜…πŸ˜… sorry to stress ur mind but golgappa competition was there. I will give u clue think. It was time before singing competition and day after dhani knowing viplav love to payal. Think think
      I wanna answer. Amit dhani viplav spent time with each other. If u don’t remember it hard to say what she thinking

      That one i am sure it won’t bore u so i not added that sentence.πŸ˜‚

      I need rating becs i wanna improve my writing dear. It needs most thanks for ur honest mark.

      Thanks alot dear
      Keep reading

      • Aiswarya

        |Registered Member

        Sorry for replying late
        2 day’s before when I fainted my right hand had hit hardly on the side of the bed Dr has put bandage on my hand so it’s difficult for me to type with my left hand only 😌

        Di i remember know it’s dhani telling flashback to kriti na. That was dhani’s idea na. She was telling that fb when viplav came to know truth na Amit was also there .di fb happened before the competition na n it was revealed after the competition (thanks for giving the clues )

        Dii I gave u less rating because then only u will try to improve n hb is very special for me because sometimes I can see myself in dhani’s position 😊

        Me too was missing u badly.
        Love u too 😘😘
        Take care

      • Aiswarya

        |Registered Member

        Di i used to read ur ff on them 😊n yesterday only i completed reading it πŸ˜‚.Oh I was not knowing that was swara n sanskar πŸ˜…but there is also an another girl who looks like swara her name was starting with R. I has watched only one episode of that show .happy to know she is maha didi’s younger sis πŸ˜€

      • Meghs

        |Author

        Aishu how r u ? And ur hand

        Hahaha sry i made u stress na for typing. Finally u remember i needed it future part so i made u remember thoseπŸ‘πŸ‘ congo u remember

        Its ok i will improve myself n sure writing too😊😊

        Take care
        Love u too

  3. Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Megha! Episode was too beautiful that quote was indeed good.. poor Anushka, though I feel how can she loves that person who isn’t ready to move on but dhani’s tip boosted her, that’s good then that imagination part was also cute😍😍 last scene was too superbly written.. No idea about her thinking however precap is amazing now jealousy track (which is my favorite) is on the way.. I guess!
    Now coming to ur questions:
    1. Yeah I remembered that scene even I’ve watched it two days back on YouTube
    2. That’s a hard question, umm! Kriti as she is too supportive though I love kanak’s part too
    3. No, I don’t remember and I think u haven’t mentioned this scene ever.. well that’s my memory tells!
    4. I’ll give u full points, though my rating doesn’t matter as u are an amazing writer so it’s worthy enough!
    5. No idea
    So these are the answers and I enjoyed a lot as I love answering questions and all!
    Keep going and post the next one soon..

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Thanks alot. Its ok u remember real ikrs part na its enough. Though i need u remember that part as it confused one.

      Its ok u don’t remember that scene i showed it read flashback part carefully i used same before πŸ˜…πŸ˜… sorry to stress ur mind but golgappa competition was there. I will give u clue think. It was time before singing competition and day after dhani knowing viplav love to payal. Think think
      I wanna answer. Amit dhani viplav spent time with each other. If u don’t remember it hard to say what she thinking. SorryπŸ˜• kya karu kisiko yaad nahi atha h scene tum tho yaad karo na

      I need rating becs i wanna improve my writing dear. It needs most thanks for ur lovely words. such an honour !!

      Thanks alot dear
      Keep reading

      • Shrinjal

        |Registered Member

        Dii it’s showing me in notification that u have sent me a private msg but I can’t open ur chat n in members page I m not getting the option to msg u…tell me what should I do??

    • Mahaaijaz

      |Registered Member

      Yeah I have remembered that scene now, that was a flashback.. viplav asked about payal from dhani actually she was doubting dhani as if she is payal and dhani acts like she had listened this name first time then next day he comes to know everything and was broken to know that she lied as he hate lies.. Yahooooo finally I remembered! Oh God my memory is so bad but thanks to u πŸ™‚
      But I don’t know what dhani was thinking may be u will reveal it in upcoming episodes.. Right ?

      • Meghs

        |Author

        Thanks maha for finally remember it.. ya it chapter name to lies she lied viplav hate lies.. no worries what Dhani think also in that chapter nothing serious will reveal in nxt part..

  4. Maria

    |Registered Member

    It was awesome my dear! Specially the FM part😍😍 and finally Shravan😍😍
    Maza to ab ayega…πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ post it soon!!
    Love you😘😘

  5. Areeb

    |Registered Member

    Hey Megha! Fabulous Episode. 😍 The Fm station part where Dhaani aka Payal advices the girl, liked it! πŸ‘ I also don’t like Vipu. πŸ˜‘ Sounds a bit childish yet doesn’t suit with Viplav’s personality. 😜
    Answers to your question;
    1. Yes I remember! 😍 In fact few days back I got to see the same scene on Rishtey! 😘😘
    2. I like Amit. The parhakoo boi tho in the initial story he was seemingly kind of a nerd but then when he developed love relation with the girl ( And her name skipped from my mind. πŸ˜‘ ) he was quite good as well with the common mindset of a boy. πŸ˜‚ Yet I admired the character when the Bhaiyaa wala relationship disclosed. So ya, he’s a good additional character that pulled up the story well.
    3. I do remember that the competition held ( thanks to the flashback glimpse in today’s episode. πŸ˜‚ ). Still I’m unable to recall the actual happening. Bad memory case you see. πŸ˜‚
    4. Okay. So when you yourself is giving the option to rate. πŸ˜‚ I will do my favorite thing – the critical observations ( which my friends declared that my favorite hobby – And I do stand on the same. πŸ˜‚ ) So basically the story was moving good but when the whole revelation and confrontation took place amid Dhaani-Dad-Amit and all I was like now what’s next.. Then the career matter started. At that time my rate will go like about 8 out of the 10. But now with this precap and the new entry *already boosted up my excitement* rating stars increased with a +1. So 9/10 goes the figure right now. Hopefully with next episode itself the bar will be filled with 10 stars! πŸ™Œ
    5. Hmm. I don’t know of which question’s answer Dhaani os about to find. I’ll just sit back and enjoy! 😍
    And yes yes.. Post next episode soon Megha!!! πŸ™Œ

    • Meghs

      |Author

      Hi areeb… thanks for ur lovely comments glad u liked fm part😊 i know too vipu sounds so childish n won’t suit his personality will use just for funπŸ˜‚

      Ohh ya even i saw that scene again in rishthey. Glad u liked amit role.. her name is kriti. Wah i got critical rating person πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ to rate yipeeπŸ’ƒ that say perfect rating hope i meet up ur expectations in nxt part ..

      Will post nxt when i get time😊

  6. Lakshmi

    |Registered Member

    hai meghs di…..I am actually continously reading all the ffs.but never get time to comment on it.so first of all I am really sorry di.

    and the epi….oh wow…dream sequence hi sehi vidhani ke romance dekhne mili..and the song kaun tujhe…haaye haaye kya selection hai…back to fm nice caption…and about ur questions…kya aap interview le rehe ho..? anyways i will answer it..

    1.haan how can i forget golgappa scene..? I think it was the first scene where dhani started to talk to viplav nicely and started to live more than a widow. widows don’t have the rights to eat these kind of food na..? ps: as per the show, i really don’t know this exists or not.

    2. sameer, dhani’s papa. i don’t know why…..

    3. no di…i think i have missed that epi…exam time par i was offline…

    4. hmm….9.9

    5. i didn’t get that…i mean the question…

    so waiting for the next one…..love u di…

  7. shanitics

    Meghz di.. Superb episode.. Fm part is aww😍😍 Seems like u’ve falln in lve once😜😀

    Yaa.. I remembrd the golgappe part.. Superb scenes r always remembrd di..

    Amika jodi is gud!! Anthr fab jodi it is na!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    Ur fm is soo gud.. To rate ur ff.. Ur my cmpany’s supr RJ na!!😜😜😜

    Lt Dhaani thnk anythng.. I knw wat Dhaani is gussing.. I won’t say otherwise every1 wl cme to knw na!!

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