heart beat ., a show changed my life (epi 14) (slap)


Hi guys i am sorry for being irregular updater … sorry to make u all wait.. thanks for all my readers without ur support i shouldn’t reach till here.

Today is my kiddo birthday ? so i dedicating this part to her and all ikrs fans.

Happy birthday
Happy birthday
Happy birthday to u my dear kiddo.. may ur wishes come true..
Piyali writer of her blush took him away birthday today?

And here u go special epi?

Happy reading..

Precap : Rithika asked viplav and amit to stay in their home as it was late!!

Link to previous epi??

@malhotra mansion

The rays of the sun fall on viplav eyes waking him. He could hear the chirpping of the birds. He goes near window and siden curtain of the room and then saw the beauty of nature, a cool breeze was blowing making his hair flying according to it direction. The sunlight added shinning to Viplav face..

he sees Amit still sleeping throws pillow to his face.. amit wakesup in jerk but again fall in bed!.. viplav get angry seeing this !
“amit yaar wake up… viplav said.
Amit cover his face with pillow say”5 more min viplav bro let me sleep. U know na i slept on late night ..”
viplav remove pillow which on amit face say ” that’s what i always saying u don’t study that much leaving ur sleep. U r becoming nerd day by day.”
Amit slowly open his eyes and stare vip angrily “bro u called me nerd na wait i will not leave u now.. saying he runs to viplav.
viplav runs around room. After sometime both gets tired of running and fall on bed breathing heavily. “we have to leave soon. we had clg today naa….”said Amit. Viplav giggle saying “topper inside our amit is finally waken up!!? amit pouts his face “viplav bro… vip smiles. Then both get ready to leave…
@ dhani room

Dhani who is sleeping wakes up in jerk hearing shout of kritika “Ahhhaaaaa… who sleeping next to her.. dhani sees kritika worried face and asks “kriti what happen did u saw bad dream….! Kriti her nod no!

Dhani gets irritated “then y u shouting in early morning! Kriti innocently point her finger towards the kitten sitting next to kritika. dhani lough to her thought as in sleep she thought cat as tiger!! Kriti too realise her stupidity and giggle.. both then caress kitten.. It was so sweet and constantly meowing!! Kitten running all around kriti.. kriti patted her back and hold kitten in arm caringly as if it is newborn baby and said “wow her body fur was soft like velvet lovely!! Dhani what is name this cute kitty! Dhani pat kitten head and said “kushi reason of my smile! Kriti smiles?

Both of them get ready to leave to clg.
@guest room

Dhani slowly peek to room and sees amit sign him to leave she want to talk to Viplav..she asked it so cutely.. amit smiles and leave giving them privacy. Dhani enter room and saw viplav setting his hair seeing mirror.. dhani slowly go near him and hugs him from back.. saying good morning viplav? viplav spins her turning her face towards him and says ” morning is always good if someone so cutely hug and wish good morning.. ?

(Sab tera song in back gound)

(Phir dil ke raaston pe
Teri aahat jo hui
Har dhadkan jashan mein hai
Yeh inaayat jo hui)

dhani shies cover her face in her hand.
Dhani cutely asks “how am i looking? if i am looking pretty!
Viplav (shooks his head) : No
Dhani feel sad but composes herself and ask “if he wanted to be with her forever!!”
Viplav said “No”. Dhani gets angry plus sad to hear this reply.. she then asked controlling her tears “if he would cry if she walked away?
But he again said “No”. Enough that was limit how can he say so.. tears scroll down dhani eyes? she never thought viplav reply will be like this.. her face has both expression sad and also angry. She about to leave the room.

As she walked away he grabbed her hand stopping her from leaving. He said “You’re not pretty, you’re beautiful . I don’t want to be with you forever, I need to be with you forever. And I wouldn’t cry if you walked away, I would die.”

Dhani face brighten hearing it… and also get emotional to see his love.. she cover her hand on his mouth and warns him not to talk about death.. there was peaceful silence between them! Dhani hugs him tightly!! He hold dhani face caresses her hair.. he then wipe her tears. “Sshh jaanu from now on this tear have no space in ur life. Now pls smile… said viplav.
Dhani smiles?. viplav heart beat rise seeing his angel smile.. he hold her hand and kisses it? then he hold her by waist bringing her closer and closer that there is no inch space between them. Viplav kisses dhani forehead. Dhani feels butterflies in her Stomach.. she closes her eyes feeling their proximity…

(Main toh tujhe milke jee uthi hoon
Teri dhadkan mein chhupi hoon
Mera mujhme kuch nahin
Sab tera, sab tera..
Sab tera, sab tera..

Hey… ha…(humming of track))

Kriti enters Room and sees vidhani in that position she turn her face and knock the door.
“Aham aham can i come inside room… if u both romance over? can we go to clg” said kriti by winking.

Viplav take his hand back which was on dhani waist..kritika notices Dhani staring at her . “arre dhani y u angry if u angry that i disturbed ur romance? cholly(sorry) said pouting her face?

“Guys hurry up we are getting late to college!! And exam comming so we can’t bunk any cls” said amit entering room.

Vidhani and kritika together says “topper not again?

“Oh god what u done i fallen love with someone who already love.. that too with his books.. maybe i am first one who got my southan before marriage great in whole world i only got padaku as bf? who not even know meaning of romance! Romance is far he still not say i love u till.. if i not proposed him he couldn’t even said his feelings till now… Poor me!! said Kritika dramatically..

Viplav loughes hearing her statement holding his stomach said “finally kriti realised truth great naa…. !
while amit giving him i not leave u wala look.. dhani ask them to stop..
“Enough don’t tease my jeeju ok! ? said angry bird dhani.

Kriti : dhani whom team u r in jeeju or mine
Dhani : hmm.. i am in my jeeju team..
Kriti : then who be my team (pouts)
Vip : of course me i am in ur team kriti .
Kriti smiles ?

Dhani whisper in amit ears. Amit signs ok he will do it.. dhani smiles.
Amit(slowly) : Kriti listen
Kriti (uninterestingly) : what?
Amit : I … .. wo i.. l
Kriti (feels irritated): r u learning english alphabets then go ahead i,j,k,l,m,n,o,p,q,r,s,t,u,v,w,x,y,z!
Dhani : arre atleast hear once what he trying to say y r u interrupting.

Kriti getting irritated. She turns and about to leave from room but stopped hearing gitar tune… she turned to see person playing it..

Amit is singing song looking at her. What he actually feel for her is revealed by his singing.. did anyone know what is love ?no then hear this song?

Love is adorable it has no specific meaning..it is feeling happen at unexpected time ..

(Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love
Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love…)

Don’t know what has happened, how it happen he started loving her more than usual now she means everything to him. He wanted to know if it happened the same way to her too, but i know i love more her than she love me. Kritika smiles.. amit hold her hand and spins her. Viplav continue song.. he sing looking at dhani. Love is unexpected how it happens no answer to this question.

(Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love)

Dhani continue song … her feelings to viplav .. she given the space of her heart
to viplav. But slowly, he occupied her heart and become the owner of heart.

(Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love)

Kritika sings remembering all their incident how they used to fight when vidha fight how amit and she tried to unite vidhani.. she lost herself such a way that she didn’t find her as she find her life in amit he is her life..

(Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love)

Amit feels kriti changed his fate in such a way that she have brought a new morning for him.. his now only wish to pass with her all his lives.. Amit continue song..

(Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love)

Amit made closes his eyes and said “i love u kriti… kriti finally get what she wanted to hear from long. Her happiness has no bounds.. she runs to amit and hug him… seeing them vidhani also hugs.. then they have group hug and take selfies to remember this moment.
@dining hall

Rithika calls all 4 to breakfast.. it was first time to dhani having bf with family so she feeling happy.. she having happy tears. Kriti and amit who understands this are happy for her.. whereas viplav is clueless about this.

All sits in breakfast table.. dhani feels her family finally completed she got what she wanted since many years.. but again something is missing.. she gets flashes of 2 kid playing.. small girl calling chinku bhai is echoing in her ears… dhani is missing her chinku bhai.

Rithika : viplav beta u not coming our home nowadays.. y beta isn’t it ur house too!!
Viplav : rithu maa now onwards i came here regularly afterall my life is here…(looking at dhani) he said in flow not realise what he said.
Dhani bites her tongue on his statement… sameer(dhani papa) ask ur life?
Viplav : rithu maa ur my life naa?
Rithika : u becoming naughty day by day
Vip (himself murmer): in ur daughter love.

Amit and kriti who sitting near viplav giggles hearing this.

They finishes bf and ready to go to clg.

Sameer notices dhani and viplav talks and smile thinking something… Rithika comes there and says now time for doing vidhani marriage come.. which we dreaming since long.. sameer keep his hand on shoulder says “first career then marriage .let both complete their mba then we can do their engagement after it marriage.. ”
Rithika nods agreeing.

Sameer gets call.. and shocked to what he heared.

Person? is it sameer malhotra number.
Sam ? yes may i know who is talking ?
Person? this is from upmc college… i wanted to inform u that ur daughter had attendance shortage.. even if she misses one cls from nowon it may cost her.. there is possibility of not letting her sit in final exam.. pls take care of it.
Sam? but dhani made holidays on health issue naa as she had accident.. i produced medical report regard it then how come attendance shortage.
Person? no not that medical holiday she already bunk so much cls perhaps it.. is reason to her shortage. Sir pls take care of it..
Sam ? thnks for information.
Cuts the call

This enough to increase Peek of his anger. He ever given importance to something then it is career then how can he tolerate dhani spoiling her career that too some stupid fm station.

Rithika consoles him and says i make her understand but he not listen to her. He goes near dhani..

Viplav : me and dhani go clg in my car and amit u n kriti go by urs.
Amika agrees.
Dhani : sorry viplav bt i can’t come. I have meeting in fm station have to attend it.
Viplav : then ok i drop u to fm station come..
Dhani agrees.. viplav gets call and he move outside to lift call..

That moment sameer come and confront dhani regarding attendance shortage.
Dhani explain him that she bunk one cls each day for her show which result so..
Sam shout at her to giving more importance to rj job than studies.. dhani what need of the job .. if u need money u could asked me no rj job seriously u spoiling my reputation and your career both.. what will i say anyone that my daughter is rj in fm station oh wow daughter of famous lawyer is rj how funny. U spoiled ur career in ur hand dhani.. r u leaving job or not” sameer shouted.

Dhani eyes filled hearing those words leaving job how can she.. it is her life.
“No papa whatever happen i won’t leave job (with determination) u think its easy for leaving me job papa u know what if i am alive naa then reason of my alive is this job… in this house i was dieing each moment in loneliness that time i got offer… when i worked rj i talk my heart out it reduced my tension my only means to live is it.. i not doing job to earn money it is for some satisfaction u talking about ur so called reputation naa my foot this reputation is more important to u than me”?? she not getting words to explain how much she loved to do job as rj… yes even it means her more than studies she don’t want like all people working in mncs and all she want rj job till end.. it means lot to her.. but sameer never understand it.. he is not wrong in his way he was securing his daughter career life that’s it but…… dhani tried hard to control tears but it didn’t stopped… she broken

Rithika wanted to stop sam but his anger increase if anyone stops him so she not dared to moved forward.

Sam asked “i don’t understand still u want that job ok fine i asking u last time dhani r u leaving job or not..

Dhani wipes her tear and nods no.. no matter what happens she won’t leave job.

Sameer shout aloud dhani and about to slap her. but one hand stops him.. its turn out to be Amit.

Amit(shout) : mr malhotra u can’t slap dhani
Sameer : who the hell r u too interfere in family matter?
Amit : i have full right (shout loudly) chachu to interefere ! And i have right on dhani too …did u know who am i.. amit malhotra son of sunil malhotra and dhani she is my kiddo..

All r shocked to this revelation.. especially dhani she already broken of father rudness now this to broke her completely … viplav who come after finishing call also shocked to hear this statement.

Screen flashes on shocked dhani face in oneside and otherside vip shocked face.

Precap : Dhani is sleeping on viplav lap.. ” this is all happening because of me… because of me my family separated i failed as sister.. i am very bad naa viplav… said sobbing.


I am so sorry for super long epi i guess it is boring… as i posted after week i post Longer part as compensation..

I request if silent readers any there to comment. Ur one wrd means alot to me.

And also read other ff on ikrs and comment all ff r good..

Thanks for all my readers and those who comment regularly.. ur support means alot to me..

How is this epi?

pls comment whether good or bad.. criticism too heartily welcome

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  1. Aiswarya

    Megha diiii it was an awesome episode
    1st half was simply mind blowing ?? Amit n kriti is soooooooooooo cute couples ☺☺ Atlast Amit told I LOVE YOU kriti .I loved that part sooo much ???
    Kriti’s shouting remembered me the day I kicked my cousin from bed n she the way she was screaming Aaaaahhhhh ???
    kriti teasing Amit by saying” r u learning English alphabet then go ahead i, j,k,l, …..
    Was sooooooooo cute di
    I’m not getting words to decribe about
    vidhani’s romance
    When viplav told Rithika that “u are my life na” I was laughing ??
    2nd part was very emotional why Sam is not understanding her feeling di why he is only thinking about career ‘??? he is her father na so he should know na in which all things her happiness lies but here he is asking her to quit the job
    Amit did a very good job .he saved his kiddo from getting slapped .dhani is soooo lucky to have a brother like him ? Rithika is such a nice mother yar love her soooo much ???
    Why dhani I failed as a sis ?? I had done nothing na

    Di don’t say sorry how many times I have told u not to say sorry . Di I was eagerly waiting to read today’s epi as u told me yesterday
    Thank u soooo much for the long epi
    Love u???

    Happy birthday Piyali

    1. Meghs

      Thanks alot aish so cute comment ?? ur first longer comment in my ff naa.. glad u liked amika.. awwwe glad u liked it ya finally he confessed. Me too liked that part? afterall confession part na?

      Hahaha u kicked ur cousin poor she fallen from bed.. its so dangerous to sleep near u naa?? just kidding. .
      Y to lough he actually meant dhani is his life?? ya for vidha wrds really less to describe such adorable couple

      Sam wanted to secure dhani future so he thought she spoiling her career in this.. she had to choose only one now rj or mba both can’t go together now.

      I wish i had elder bro like him but alas i got younger bro who always tease me?

      Oops that line i wrote in excitement she dine nothing wrong..
      Acha baba i won’t say sry again..
      Ur always welcome dear
      Love u too

  2. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Megha! Finally u have posted 🙂 This was long though but I loved it very much, first part was too beautiful.. Their conversation was amazing yaar, the way he holds her hands and said those lines my goodness jhakas! u always select a fantastic song ishq wala love was also wonderful finally kriti gets what he wants than breakfast scenes were also good.. So reason behind sameer’s anger is revealed and that was little surprising though but his father is wrong nothing is more important than happiness than she is continuing her studies with same spirit so I don’t think this RJ job will affect her career and I hope her father too realizes it soon.. At last Amit came front and took a stand for dhani that was nice.. Viplav’s shocked expression was funny though it was not but I was smiling reading that line because he must be thinking Mai call pe baat kia karne gaya sab kuch he badal gaya 😀
    Precap is emotional but eagerly waiting for it so post it soon
    Love u!

    1. Meghs

      Hi maha.. ya finally i posted. . Don’t u like longer epi?? Glad u liked conversations.. i wish so if he cared her happiness than career well both can’t go together only one she had to choose now rj or mba her choice.. as she can’t step in 2 boats naa.. vip case was actually funny he not know anything just one sentence he become stunned.. he just like with his absence whole world changed?

      I post it as soon as possible
      Keep reading

      Love u too

  3. Swara

    U rocked it sis…amir is so cute..why dhanni crying.. How she failed as a sis.. Update next part soon

    1. Meghs

      Thnks sis?

      Aree if i answer this question wt u read in nxt epi?? u guess flashback of amit n dhani i showed in that i showed everything

      I post asap

      Keep reading
      Love u loads?

  4. Sujie

    Meghs….my dear you are a ROCKSTAR …..
    Amit and Kriti….finally amit poured his heart out…. It was really ISHQ WALA LOVE …..
    And finally revealed….. Amit is DHaani ka Chinku bhaaiya..and Dhaani ia s Amit’s kiddo….
    Keep going dear….

    1. Meghs

      Sujie?? rockstar n me r u kidding wow such a honour am i deserve it?

      Yup ishqwala love to all ?
      Glad u liked it

      Keep reading and commenting

      Love u

  5. Angel20

    It was fantastic??? Vidhaa romance awww??? just loved it! Aye haye Viplav kitna romantic hai?? amit NE finally ily bol diya?? I.. You dont know abcd… Haha??
    Aur mujhe maaf kardo plssss… Sorry!!??

    1. Meghs

      Thnks angel? i added vidha romance part as u asked ?

      Hahaha i know abcd bt they said i l naa so i continue after i?? if i don’t know u would teach it for me naa?

      Arre angel don’t ask sry i just pulling ur leg u too it serious ok i am sry maaf kardo and don’t cry i won’t anger on my angel

  6. Shruthy

    Awww this was way adorable. Like both couples living some romantic moments, singing and all… So cute!
    Just loved the way Dhaani went into the guest room and romanced with her prince, and then that hug and kiss. I knew he was going to say something more special than what she said… He loves her so much after all!
    And uff, Dhaani’s keen on her RJ job that she can never let her. Why cannot her parents unerstand its importance? Isnt their daughter’s happiness more important than a stupid reputation? She has missed that joy since her childhood growing up as busy parents’ kid. And now that she is making her dreams come true, they are against it..
    And Amit reveals his real identity to them. I am really excited and thrilled to know what will be each of their reaction knowing it. But as per the precap and the episode reveal, Dhaani really misses her bhaiyaa.
    Post the next part soon sweety 🙂 Will be waiting

    1. Meghs

      Thanks shruthi i am missing ur comments.. finally u commented. Glad ur liking it.. yup after vip should do special naa? he is so special … yup i agree reputation not matter than daughter feeling lets see wt happens in future.. the grl who brought up busy parents kid her life taking turn now.. lets wish all end for good note..

      Yup u got to know what may happen nxt don’t guess too much i write n post before u think full stry of nxt part??

      I post nxt asap shru.. love u loads??? keep commenting

      1. Shruthy

        Awww i am sorry really, I was not often on computer, that’s why. Even I missed talking to you all actually
        He is indeed. <3
        Haan let's see indeed *fingers crossed*
        Haan I guess you will not bring a sad ending so… Though it can be interesting depending the way is taken away 🙂
        Hahaha acha baba theek hai, wont gues much. At least wont tell anything in public xD lmao yeah yeah of course I will let the credit to the author so now, mouth closed.
        alright! take all your time, I wont pressurize. Love you too <3

      2. Meghs

        Awwe so sweet of u ..

        Sad ending will be unique btw i not make it sad end i personally not like it… don’t wry it end on good note? but not so soon ?

        U r really a sweet heart.. love u

        i just thought to strt working on it… if i get time i finish n submit it tonight

  7. Which kiddo’s b’dy?

    1. Meghs

      Piyali hope so her birthday. .. by the way when is ur birthday

  8. Renuverma

    Hi meghu. N belsted birthday to dear piyali.
    It was not super long not boring but interesting n fabulous.
    U deserve to be a writer dear.
    Pl give this story to ekta kapoor. ?

    Love both couples n the way they teased each other n enjoyed special moments.
    Best part is your song expression technique. U really know wonderful dongs n find the right one according to situstion.☝☝
    Good to see dhanis happiness on breakfast table. Aftersll she had yearned for it for years.
    Dhani missing her cousin n now it was revealed yo them thst amit is the person. Ofcourse dhani has to be excited.
    Sameer n dhani r both right.
    Dhani dis job to fight her lonliness but now she shud understand sameers
    feelings . She shud concentrate on her career too.
    Precap is too emotional

    1. Meghs

      Wow di thnk u so much?? u think so i deserve to be writer wow such a compliment… hahaha ? i gave this story to ektha she bring all villain n drag stry na??

      U r comments made my day di.. i feeling blissed to read ur comments… sngs i usually choose which is my fav list sng though list is so long…

      Lets see what she plans to…
      Keep reading
      Love u di

  9. RANdomfANCreationz

    Hey meghs sorry for being late and ur ff is amazing loved it precap is so cute ?

    1. Meghs

      Hi jo? nonned to be sry ur commented that’s enough ??

      Keep reading
      Love u

  10. Areeb

    Hey Megha! Lovely episode!! First half was for the lovre birds! Loved their friendship bond! Last half was my favorite! Very well explained povs of Dhaani & her father. Both are right at their places! Waiting for next anxiously!

    And Happy Birthday Piyaali! ? And when will you post your next episode? ?

    1. Meghs

      Hi areeb.. thnks ? glad u liked it..

      Next part even i don’t know when i post but pakka i won’t make u too wait

      Keep reading i post nxt part by tonight or tmrw

  11. After reading all these love stories I feel like experiencing myself a love? (ghar walon ne suna toh ?? )
    Supr stry!! Alas,relations being expose.. The mrng scenes were ?? Feeling like to read ot mre than once..?

    1. Meghs

      Naughty grl… i tell ur family ?

      Wow such a complimentary

      Keep reading and commenting
      Love u chotti??

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