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Haunted – teaser

AstraBy AstraOctober 17, 201642 Comments3 Mins Read
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Rag: Please…don’t leave me….
Rag hugged lak from behind.
Lak: No, I have to go…
Lak said with expression less face but tears in eyes.
Rag turns him to her side.
Rag: Why? Why do you want to leave? I’m I not suitable to you?
Lak: I can’t say anything…
Rag holds his shoulders and looks straightly into his eyes.
Rag: No other girl can make you happy than me…! And I can never accept any other than you… look…look into deep my eyes. Don’t you feel any love in it… you thought compassion to this eyes… you thought smile to this lips… you thought feelings to this heart…can’t you listen that heart’s beat? That says only your name. this eye blinks say your name…and this lips keep murmuring your name. this innocent soul knows nothing than you…!
Rag keeps telling looking into his eyes. He looks helplessly at her.
Lak: No… I’m not suitable to a nice girl like you..
Rag: Why??
Lak: I’m not rich…
Rag: I don’t ask you any precious thing.
Lak: I don’t even earn properly.
Rag: I can adjust with you.
Lak: I have much anger…!
Rag moves closer to him.
Rag: I will bear it.
Lak: No… you have all good qualities. A nice groom is waiting for you. I can’t make you happy…
Rag hugs him.
Rag: Don’t say like that… I can’t live without you.
Lak moves her far.
Both look at each other.
Lak turns other side and about to go.
Rag bends to his legs and holds his leg strongly so that he can’t move.
No… I won’t let you go… you have to be with me forever.
But, lak removes her hands and start going away.
Rag looks on with teary eyes…
…………..

“Kavya…! please don’t harm Ragini.” Shouts Laksh.

Ragini was standing in front of him. Her hair was messed up, and her eyes are very big. She is seemed to be scary. She is holding a knife.

“Then, accept me Laksh. Become my slave… I want you…” says Ragini, who is possessed by Kavya.

“No Kavya… I have loved Ragini… and she loves me. I can’t accept you…” says Laksh.

Ragini cuts her hand.(kavya soul did it)
“Ragini..!” shouts Laksh.

Ragini laughs madly. Laksh tries to run near her. She throws a cupboard in between them. Laksh looks on shocked.
…………

Ragini slaps Laksh. She is normal now. Laksh just bends his head.
Rag: why did you cheat me??
She asks holding his collar. Laksh looks at her in pale face.

Rag: I have loved you a lot…and you did too. Then, why did you cheat me??
Lak: it is truth that I loved you ladoo… but, I didn’t cheat you..!

Ragini pushes him. He falls down and looks at her. she keeps crying and goes away. He looks on…

Suddenly, someone beats on his head. Laksh looks at his face but blur.
………….

So guys, this is the teaser of my new ff. this is going to be a love and ghost story…
I will update the 1st episode within few hours….

Thank you guys….

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    42 Comments

    1. DivzS on October 17, 2016 6:09 pm

      Woww! Excited! I love ghost stories.. Superb choiceeeee!!

      • Astra on October 17, 2016 7:17 pm

        thank you dear… enjoy…

    2. Sreevijayan on October 17, 2016 6:32 pm

      OMG…dt was scary..bt interestng..loved it dear…

      • Astra on October 17, 2016 7:18 pm

        thank you dear…

    3. Ashnoor on October 17, 2016 6:44 pm

      Amazing

      • Astra on October 17, 2016 7:18 pm

        thank you dear..

    4. Sindhura on October 17, 2016 7:01 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on October 17, 2016 7:18 pm

        thank you yar…

    5. saaaaara on October 17, 2016 7:08 pm

      this is the first part right di

      • Astra on October 17, 2016 7:20 pm

        thanq sara.. this is just teaser. 1st part will be tomorrow..

    6. saaaaara on October 17, 2016 7:12 pm

      looks amazing

    7. Fats on October 17, 2016 7:31 pm

      Wow Astra, this story sounds so unique and interesting. Can’t wait to read more ?

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:08 am

        thank you fats

    8. Fairy on October 17, 2016 7:34 pm

      Oh wowww ghost story…i jst loved to read such storiesss…n dat too on raglak yipppeeee m soooo excieted…its super awesome dear 😉 …waitng eagerly for nxt part..keep rockng n stay blessed dear 😉 😉

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:08 am

        thank you fairy

    9. Joyful Jessica on October 17, 2016 7:38 pm

      amazing astra di

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:09 am

        thank you dear

    10. nikky on October 17, 2016 7:40 pm

      awesome next part soon

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:09 am

        thank u nikky

    11. Sayana on October 17, 2016 7:51 pm

      Woow..

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:10 am

        thank you

    12. lovely on October 17, 2016 8:21 pm

      Wow?

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:10 am

        thank you

    13. saranya on October 17, 2016 8:30 pm

      very interesting
      just love ghost story tanq u for writing ghost story

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:11 am

        thank you saranya

    14. priya on October 17, 2016 9:30 pm

      that was nice and interesting

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:11 am

        thank you priya

    15. Ragz_teju on October 17, 2016 9:44 pm

      omg!!!! it’s too interesting chappy… loved it

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:11 am

        thank you dear

    16. Sharanya on October 17, 2016 9:55 pm

      Amazing episode

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:12 am

        thank you sharanya

    17. tani on October 18, 2016 12:33 am

      Amazing

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:12 am

        thank you tani

    18. A.xx on October 18, 2016 3:26 am

      Superb!!!.xx

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:12 am

        thank you yar..

    19. Ammu on October 18, 2016 9:59 am

      It’s interesting dear and eagerly waiting for 1st part

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:12 am

        thank you ammu….

    20. Malu on October 18, 2016 10:52 am

      Awesome teaser

      • Astra on October 18, 2016 11:25 am

        thanq malu

    21. Arjuna on October 18, 2016 12:10 pm

      Superb

    22. Kiddoo on October 18, 2016 12:49 pm

      amazing di nd plz continue

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