I hate u too…..Episode 20

Hello people…I’m back with another episode of I HATE U TOO……
The episode starts with…
Sanky;So do u love him?
Rags;That does not matter cause we’ll never be together….
Sanky:Why?
Rags:I can’t destroy his life….if I stay in his life then he will pay all attention to me and he’ll forget himself for me……
Sanky;Such typical love….
Rags:What typical love?
Sanky;I mean….love should be like…there should be dates…gifts…..roses…going for movies and all…and u and your Sanskar…r so Sanskari…typical lovers…..sacrifice and all….
Rags;Shut up..how can u say like that? Our love is not like today proposing,tomorrow’s date and day after tomorrow’s break up..okay?
Sanky:Areh areh…tum toh serious hogayi….yar..i was just kidding…even I believe in true love….

Rags;Fine….
Sanky:U stayed away from him for three years and still so much love..
Rags;yess…casue I only love him…..wait a min…how did u know that I am stayig away from him for past three years?
Sanky realizes what he said…
Sanky:Oh..Muski…don’t underestimate the power of a common man….i have the power to know everything about u…
Rags;Sometimes I feel that u know me more than know myself….
Sanky;Wohh toh hai….
Rags;Good night…
Sanky:Good night sweetheart…

They end the call.Sanky hears someone laughing and sees Swalak standing hear his room’s door…
Sanky:So u were hearing my convo right?
Swara;Yes…we were….
Laksh:My bhai has become so romantic..i mean sweetheart….and all that ha….
Sanky:Oh…shut up…okay?
Swara:Oh mister…we didn’t get a single chance to tease Rags….so tumse hi kamm chalana padega….
Swalak give hifi…
Sanky:Tum dono sudroge nehi na?

Swara and Laksh look at each other nodding no…..Sanky starts throwing pillows on them and they run away from his room…..
It’s the next day…Sanky starts listening to Muskan’s muskil ka safar….on radio and as always calls her….
Muskan:Yes who is this?
Sanky:Tumhara Avinash…
Rags looks on shocked.in mind:Oh god everyone is listening and he……
Sanky:I mean apsabka Avinash….
Rags:So whats your question?
Sanky:Okay..so my question is….my friend loves a give who can’t see…and that girl doesn’t wish to come in front of him as she thinks her blindness will destroy his life…so what should my friend do to pacify her?
Sanky is giving a victorious smile by making such a situation for Ragini…..
Rags:He should do nothing..and accept this…he should respect the girl’s decision if he really loves her…..
Sanky;Okay…..
Another caller calls…Its Sanskar..and he has called from a diff number…
Rags;Okay…so who is this?
Sanky:Sanskar Maheshwari……

Rags is shocked to hear the name….she is speechless…
Sanky;Sorry madam..but for the first time I don’t agree with u…..i mean the the boy loves the girl genuinely..and will accept her along it her blindness….atleast they will have eachothers love unlike us..people who don’t get their love ….and yes…the girl thinks that she will destroy her life but doesn’t she know that she is his life? How can she give pain to him the one whom she love and also herself? She is doing worse with him by not going in front of him…she is giving him more pain…I’m sorry if my words have hurt u…..
Rags is still speechless…she starts a song and leaves from there….
Rags is at home…she is crying….Avinash calls her…
Rags;Hello…
Avi:U crying? I’m so sorry…i shouldn’t had raised that question….
Rags;Its ok…..
Avi:Please forgive me…
Rags;I said na its okay…
Avi;Then why r u still crying?
Rags places her hands under her eyes…
Rags:How do u know that I’m still crying?
Avi:I understood this from the way u were talking to me….
Rags;Thank u Avinash…..for talking to me and giving me strength each and everyday cause till now I had been discouraged by everyone…
Avi:No sorry and no thank u in friendship…..
Rags:Oh mister then why did u say sorry to me?
Avinash:okay baba sorry for saying sorry…

Rags;Avinash!!!!
Avinash;Okay okay okay…no sorry no thank u…
Rags starts smiling…
Avinash:Thank god…u r smiling…
Rag:R u spying on me from somewhere? R u looking at me? How do u know everything so perfectly?
Avinash:I know everything….
Swara comes there saying:I need your help…
Rags hears this….
Sanky sighs Swara to not speak as he is talking to Swara….
Rags:Who is she? Who was talking to u right now?
Sanky keeps the phone on speaker….
Sanky:Wohh…(A idea hits Sanky’s head and he winks at Swara but Swara doesn’t understand why he winked)…..
Sanky:Muskan…it was Ragini’s voice….(Swara looks on confused)
Rags;Oh..your love…na?
Swara stares at Sanky angrily…..
Sanky keeps hand on his phone and say to Swara;Swara plz yar…samaj na ish baat ko….i told Ragini that I love someone named Ragini…and now after hearing your voice she thinks that ur that Ragini….okay?

Swara;Meri behen ko kitna sataraha hai tu Sanky…let her come to this house…accha maza chakhayege tujhe….
Ragini;U there Avinash…
Avi;Yes.yes…i was talking to Ragini….will u talk to her?
Rag:What will I talk to her?
Avi;How come I’ll say what u’ll talk about….
Sanky gives the phone to Swara and whispers:Talk to your sister..i know u r eager to talk to her….
Swara;Thank u Sanky…
Swara;Hello…
Rags;Hi…
Tears r rolling down Swara’s cheeks…and Ragini even find her voice similar to Swara’s..but ignores…
Swara:So u r Muskan…..your Avinash..i mean my Avinash talks about u a lot….he says that u r his smile…..
Rags:Yes….Avinash even talks about u a lot Ragini….
Swara in low tune;Bebakuv aurat..woh tere bareme baat karta hai….
Rags;Did u sy something?
Swara;No….
Rags;Okay…i’m hanging up…..
Swara:Yeah bye…
Rags:Bye…..

Precap:Not decided…..lacking of ideas..would be glad if u guys give suggestions……

Credit to: Eva

34 comments

  1. Rina Sivaguru

    Wow…. Today’s part was superb……. Eva why don’t u do some twist like sanskar’s get accident and muskan cones to know who is avinash and she take care of him….. Jus an idea….. Post the next part soon yar…..

    • Eva

      Thank u Amy…I said at the beginning that this ff will be based on friendship also….and I’ll unite Ragsan soon….

  2. Kangana

    I was a silent reader of your ff but I felt like to comment today…I read each and every episode of your story….all of them r really good..please unite Ragsan….

  3. Reethi

    Yeh I agree with Rina y don’t u keep an accident sequence n let ragini know that sanskar met with an accident n is in critical condition (not avinash).like swara calling to MUSKAAN n saying that I know ur my sis n sanskar had met with an accident n in critical condition n if she doesn’t come then anything may happen to sanskar n all
    ITS JUST MY IDEA IF U DON’T LIKE THIS TRACK LEAVE IT.BUT UPDATE NEXT EPISODE FAST WAITING FOR THAT.

  4. I guess avinash and muskan/ragini meet each other and there ragini suspects avinash’s character similar to sanskar. And then she gets know that avinash is sanskar in their third or fourth meeting and ragini decides to go away from sanskar then u can go with rina’s idea. Idk whether it’s good or not, but I can’t find a more suitable suggestion than this….

    • Eva

      Thank u dear for your suggestion….and I’ll think about it as I liked your suggestion too…. and I’ll try my best to come up with nice episodes….

  5. Joona

    Dear..
    Too good.. Ur ff is really special…
    Dear take ur own Time… I am sure that you will get mind blowing ideas better than us…
    Dear thanks for accepting my friend request… Hw can I contact you? Do u have fb or Instagram? Tell me…

  6. Vibha

    I have an idea…u can show Aradhya evil and she falls for Sanskar…and creates misunderstanding between them…or u can do another thing…Ragini plans to unite Sanskar with Aradhya…so that Sanskar gets a life partner…..

  7. Lila

    Eva yaar mind blowing epi. I agree with rina and reethi’s idea. But sorry I dont agree with vibha’s idea. I knw ur the writer so u should decide whats best ? keep up the good work. And plz upload daily

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