I hate u too…..Episode 19

Hello people….I’m back with another episode of I HATE U TOO……i hope u liked the maha episode…..now lets start…
Its morning…
Swara wakes up and sees Laksh sleeping…..she kisses his forehead and is about to go when Laksh holds her hand…..
Laksh:Good morning…
Swara:Good morning lanka pati…..btw Laksh u know…i’m feeling that everything is going to be fine soon……this is no less than an miracle that Ragini is alive…
Laksh:Yes…
Laksh kisses her on her cheeks……Swara smiles
The scene shifts to Sanskar….
Sanskar calls Ragini…
Sanskar:Hello my Muskan….
Ragini:How come I became your muskan?
Sanskar:U bring smile to my face…so huyi na tum meri muskan…
Ragini:So…why did u call me?
Sanskar:To propose u……
Ragini:What?

SSanskar:Areeh….u r so dumb….i called u to talk to u and u always ask me why did I call u…..u don’t like me…..i understood that…
Ragini:Nothing like that….
Sanskar;That means u like me….
Ragini:Ahhh..
Sanskar:So…whats the plan for today?
Ragini:Same schedule….radio office and home…thats my life na….
Sanskar:My life is really interesting….after all I have my lady love with me….
Ragini’s smile vanishes.:Your lady love?
Sanskar:Yes….
Ragini:So……….who is that girl?
Sanskar:Ragini….
Rags is shocked….
Rags;What? Ragini?
Sanskar:Why u know her? Ragini Singhania……
Rags is relieved….
Rags:No….i don’t know anyone of Raginis name….
Sanskar in a low voice:How will u know when u r yourself Ragini….
Rags:Did u say something?
Sanskar;Um..no…
Ragini:So…who r there in your family?

Sanskar:My family? my family is really big….badi ma,bade papa,mom,dad,my two brothers and two sisters in law….and a sister….kami hai toh serf meri biwi ki…..
Ragini:Tumhari Ragini hai na….
Sanskar:Yes…but now she is a bit confused….she has lost her way..so its my duty to bring her on track clear all her misunderstanding….as soon as she understands…she’ll come to me…and my full family will be completed….btw who r in your family?
Ragini:I have my best friend Aradhya..who calls me di…she is my family now….
Sanskar;Your mom dad?
Ragini:I don’t leave with them……
Sanskar:Ohh..
Swara comes there….
Sanskar asks Swara to be quite as he is talking to Ragini….Swara says okay…he keeps the phone in speaker…
Ragini:Avinash..u there?
Swara has tears in her eyes as she is haring her sister’s voice after three years….
Sanksar;Yeah..i’m here….so……madam..whom do u love the most in this world?
Ragini:I….I love my sister the most……
Sanskar;Who Ardhya?

Ragini:No…Aradhya is my best friend and muh boli behen…….i love her too…but I am talking about Swara….my elder sister….
Sanskar;Oh……(Looking at Swara)
Sanskar:Btw…..sisters r really annoying…right?
Swara hits Sanskar….
Ragini:Not at all….according to me brothers r more annoying…i just think…how your sister tolerate u three brothers…..sisters r awesome…they r understanding sweet and kind unlike brothers who can only tease the sisters and disturb them…..its fun to fight with sister….my sister understands whats going on my mind before I tell her about it…she knows when I’m worried or sad……she never hides anything from me…(Swara is crying silently listening to Ragini)
Sanskar:And u have hidden yourself from her….
Ragini:What did u say?
Sanskar:Nothing…..i was just saying…that now u don’t leave with her na?
Ragini:Yes…okay so I’m hanging up…
Sanskar;Bye….Muski..
Ragini:Muski?
Sanskar:Short form of Muskan…

Ragini:Kuch bhi ha?…
Sanskar;As I’m your friend, I can call Muski right?
Rags:Muski? Chiiii…
Sanskar:Okay Muskan….
Rags;Bye…
Sanskar:Bye meri muski…
He hangs up…
Ragini:He is idiot but why do I find him so cute?
The scene shifts to swalak’s room…Swara comes there and sees Laksh working….
Swara;Hayyy..mere patidev…sometime I think that this laptop is my sautan……
Laksh:And I find Ragini my sautan….u r always talking about her(Sarcastically)
Swara:Very funny…even u always talk about your brother Sanskar……
Laksh holds Swara’s hand and drags her towards him….they r now really close…
Swara:Laksh…
Laksh:So now lets talk about ourselves…..

Swara:What can we talk about ourselves?
Laksh:We can….
Swara pushes him….
Swara:Itni jaldi bhi kya hai?(Sarcastically)(Then she becomes serious) And waise bhi Laksh….i have decided to take our relation to next level after Ragini and Sanskar’s marriage….Ragini and Sanskar bought us together….now its our turn to help them right?
Laksh:Swara….today u gave me another reason to love u…..your selfless nature makes u the best and different from others…..i respect your decision…
Sujata comes there…
Sujata:Swara..Laksh…jiji wants to talk to u both about something……she is waiting for u both in her room….
Swara:Okay chachi…we will go and meet her….
Swalak knock Ap’s room’s door…

Ap:Aa jao…
Swara;Ma…u called us?
Ap:Yes….
Laksh:Something imp?
Ap:Yes its imp…..u both should had thought about it…but since…u guys don’t understand anything I have to talk to u both…
Swara;Ma…did we do any mistake?
Ap:Swara..its not a mistake….
Laksh:then what is it ma?
Ap:Laksh Swara…..i want u to start your family….
Laksh starts coughing….
Swara:Ma…
Laksh:Ma why so soon? We r kids now…..

Ap:this is parent’s dialogue….and u guys r not kids….its your age to have kids…..it has been three years of your marriage…even I have a dream of being grandma…….
Laksh is about to say something when Swara stops him by holding his hand…
Swara makes Ap sit in the bed and holds her hand….
Swara:Ma….fine…..we’ll think about it…..but give us some time…
Ap:Ok…
Swalak leave for their room….
Laksh:Swara……just now we decided this and ma…
Swara:She is not wrong…..she is correct on her part…..and I asked for some time na? Till then I’m sure Mr Sanskar will get his Muskan and we’ll get our Ragini……so no worries…
Laksh hugs Swara…..
The scene shifts Kajal’s home..Sanskar comes there….
Kajal:Who r u?
Sanksar tells him everything….
Kajal:So u r Ragini di’s Sanskar?
Sanskar:Yes…

Kajal:u need any help from me?
Sanskar:Yes….i need u to inform me everything about what Ragini does and in other words u have to be my informer….will u help me? For your Ragini di’s sake?
Kajal:Ragini di ke liye kuch bhi….
Its night….Kajal is going to stay with Rags and Aradhya for a week as her parents r out of town and she is alone….at home….she is waiting for Aradhya and Ragini as they went out…….She sees Ragini and Aradhya coming…Ragini has tears in her eyes….and Ardhya is consoling her….
Kajal:What happened Ragini di? Y r u crying?
Aradhya;Batati hu…but let me drop Ragini di to her room….
Ardhya comes back after leaving Ragini to her room…
Kajal:Now tell me…what happened?
Aradhya starts speaking…..

FB shown….
Rags and Ardhya r walking…Aradhya gets a call and goes to receive it…..Ragini is still walking….suddenly a car comes at a high speed..nd is about to hit her but brakes….Driver comes out of the car
Driver:Areeh what happened? Don’t u know how to walk in roads?
Aradhya;I’m sorry…..wohh…she can’t see so…
Driver:Why do u leave such andhe/blind people alone in roads? And madam(To Ragini) why do u trouble everyone because of your blindness? People like u should not come out of their homes……
Ardhya gives him a tight slap…..
Ardhya:If u were in her place then u would have understood her pain…..but I’m sure about something……though u r physically fit but your heart is made of stone…idiot kahika….
FB ends….
Kajal:How dare he? Meh uska sar phor dungi……..how can he talk to Ragini di like that?
Ara:No worries…i gave him a tight slap…….
Kajal:Thik kiya..
Ara;But Ragini di is very sad now…
Kajal in mind:I think I know what to do to make her happy..
She calls Sanskar and tells him everything….

Sanky:If I find that guys…i’ll kill him…..because of him my Ragini is sad….u don’t worry…i know how to pacify her…
Kajal;Okay….
Sanky calls Ragini….
Sanky;Hello…
Ragini doesn’t answer…
Sanky;Muski…..pleas etalk na…..u received the call and u r not talking…
Ragini:Hello…
Sanky;Thank god…kuch boli toh sahi….waise….your mood is off right?
Ragini;How do u know?
Sanky:I said na…i know u very well….
Ragini tells him everything…Sanky pretends to be laughing…
Ragini;Avinash…r u laughing?
Sanky;Yes…cause that driver is andha…..i mean…after seeing such a beautiful girl like u he should try to flirt with u and wohh banda tumhe andha keheraha hai…gochu kahika,,,,,
Ragini smiles…
Sanky:Thank god…atleast u smiled na….

Rags:I guess u know me more than I know myself….
Sanky;Wohh toh hai….see Muskan….i know u can’t see but no one can deny the fact that your heart is made of gold…..u r pure as ganga…..generous as Laxmi….intelligent as Saraswati ..u have answer and solutions to all your prob…except for your own prob…….u can bring smile to anyone’s face…..u live for everyone….u r special….and u should know that….and yes…your name is Muskan….tears r not meant for your eyes….
Rags;I’m feel better after talking to u…..
Sanky:Btw…i read your book I HATE U TOO…..it was outstanding yar……..i mean so emotional…as if its your life story.btw….was it your story..cause u showed a girl blind in your story?
Ragini;Maybe..i could write like that because its my life story…..
Sanky:Really?
Ragini:Yes….
Sanky:So..who r u in the story?
Ragini:Sanskruti…
Sanky;And who is your Raunak?
Ragini;My Sanskar…

Sankskar starts crying silently…tears r rolling down his cheeks….
Sanskar:So u love him?

Precap:More…and more…..

Credit to: Eva

62 comments

  1. Niharika

    The was your story is going ahead……..its getting more amazing….I loved each and every episode of your ff yar….and yes Ragini’s and Sanky’s convo was a cute one…..

  2. Kayra

    U r writing something that’s very true…we don’t understand the ones’ feeling who r in pain cause we r not in that situation….u beautifully expressed this thing that it is us who criticize such people who r blind or deaf or they have some physical weaknesses…..if we don’t criticize them and encourage them to lead a normal life like everybody does then that will be a better job…..

      • Eva

        Yes….true fact…I agree with u Kayra that we should encourage such people and not criticize them…if we can’t reduce their pain ,we should not atleast increase it…..

  3. Nidhi

    Outstanding,,,,,,each and very character is extremely good and sacrifice minded……that’s the best part….

  4. Siddhi

    Best life partner a girl can get….Sanskar….he is the best yar…the way he is supporting Ragini without revealing the truth…its really praiseworthy…..

  5. Anahita

    Di…u nailed it again….your every episode is excellent..and yes….i only read your ff, and One month agreement ff…..

  6. Ananya

    Hey Eva, I am a silent reader but since I have started to write my own ff I understand how tough is the thinking process.your ff is my most favourite one and I wait for it daily.

  7. Avanya

    lovely episode…..u portrayed the actual behaviour of us human beings towards a disable or physically weak person……

  8. Krystal

    My mood was off today..but after reading it, I have a broad smile on my face…I loved each and every part of this ff……

  9. Anji

    Eva…I was a silent reader till now..but today I felt like commenting on your ff…..when I read the title of your story I found it really interesting…”.I hate u too”…..I love your I hate u too ff…….u wrote that Swaraginiti ki Kahani right? I read some parts of that story as well…..

    • Eva

      I always wanted to write something interesting and i’m really happy that I could write something interesting….and the title….that just came into my mind all of a sudden….and I started writing…

  10. Joona

    Heart touching…. Loved it from bottom of my heart…Eva..I am really serious yaar…u have a great future in writing… Keep writing dear….
    BTW Eva …will u be my friend?..really waiting for your reply.. Dear where r u from?

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