I hate u too…..Episode 18 Maha episode…

Hello people…I’m back with another episode of my story…….please do comment on this episode and tell me how was it…cause…this episode is the maha episode..and this is going to be a long one…..so enjoy….
The episode starts with…
Scene:Swalak room.(Night)..Laksh is sleeping……he wakes up for water and sees Swara crying…
Laksh:Swara!!!!! Why r u crying? Everything is fine na? What happened? Did someone say something?
Swara:No Laksh…nothing like that..its just that ki….i’m missing Ragini a lot…
Laksh:Swara..
He hugs her….
Laksh:Swara…..we all believe that Muskan is Ragini…that means we still have hope….if we r right then Ragini will be with us in some days…
Swara:May your words come true….
Laksh kisses her forhead…
Scene:Morning…

Swara does the puja…..Laksh goes to call Sanskar..but sees that he is not in his room….so he calls Sanskar…
Laksh:Bhai, where r u?
Sanskar:Lucky…i had some work…so I’m out…i’ll call u later…
Laksh:Okay bhai(He is about to cut the call)
Sanksar:Lucky…Lucky….
Laksh:Yes bhai?
Sanskar:I’m going for and imp work…won’t u wish me luck?
Laksh:Best of luck bhai….may u get successful….
Sanskar;Thank u…
Sanskar is actually going to Khanna house….He sees Aradhya leaving…..He goes to their house and rings the bell….
Maid:Yes…..u again?
Sanskar:Yes….
Maid:Please don’t annoy me….i’m already tensed…..i need to go to market but badi madam is alone…i can’t leave her alone………
Sanskar thinks for a while…
Sanskar;Okay u go…i’ll stay with her..
Maid;Oh really….how can I leave madam with an unknown person?
Sanskar:I’m not unknown….that day u saw na….Muskan…she welcomed us here….but we had some work so we left….if I would be a stranger then why would she let us come in? I am her friend….
(The maid was not there when Swara said that they r her fans)
Maid thinks for a while…

Maid:Okay…i’ll be back soon…but yes….take care of her…
Maid leaves…
Sanskar:Yes,….yes……i did it….
Ragini is in her room….she is singing……
Sanskar listens to this….
Sanskar goes near her room……
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….Yes……he now opened the door….
Sanskar is shocked to see Ragini…tears r rolling down his cheeks…
Ragini stops singing….she gets a call and gets up from her bed……she starts walking….and bumps into Sanskar…..Ragini cuts the call…she holds Sanskar’s hand…
Ragini:Kaki….ap agayi?
Sanskar stairs at her shockingly…..
Ragini:Kaki…..can u please get me water from the side table?
Sanskar sees the side table and gives er water….
Ragini:I have become dependent on u and Aradhya….now I can’t do a single work alone….my world in black….previously I would do all the things by my self….but when I lost my vision…i got dependent on u all………………
Sanskar is crying silently……..
Ragini gets a call from Kajal….
Kajal;Di u okay?
Ragini:Yes…
Kajal:Di..i don’t know how r u enduring so much pain…
Ragini:I am giving pain to myself and my dear ones to save them from a bigger pain…if they get to know that I have become blind then they will be broken…my sister Swara….she is cursing herself…for my death..now if she gets to know about my blindness..then she won’t be able to forgive herself………………………….(Sanskar is looking at her ) And Sanskar…………..i know if I go infront of him then he will accept me……cause he loves me a lot….my blindness won’t affect his love…..but how can I be so selfish? How can I give him my misfortunes? He can get a better girl the me……If Sanskar sees me..he will bring me back in his life…but I know..i’ll be just a burden in his shoulder…….i can’t destroy his life…
Sanskar sist crying silently:How can u think like that Ragini? U r a burden? How can u even say that? I love u….if u can share your happiness with me then why nit your u pain? Itna paray kar diya mujhe? Fine…Ragini…i’ll bring u back to my life after making u realize that u r not my pain but my muskan……u r the most special in my life…..
Rags:Okay…Kajal..i’ll call u later…
She hangs up….
Sanskar goes to the living room…maid comes back…..and Sanskar leaves……………………………………..
Scene;Sanskar’s room..

Swalak come there..
Swara;Sanskar…u okau na?
Sanksar:I wanted to speak to u both regarding Ragini…
Laksh;What bhai?
Swara;Ragini is alive right?
Sanskar:Swara…..
Swara:Sansk…
Sanskar;She is alive….
Swalak have a broad smile on their face…..
Sanskar:But….
Laksh;But?
Sanskar starts crying…

Laksh;What happened bhai? Why r u crying?
Sanskar:Because her world has only darkness….
Swara;What do u mean?
Sanskar;She lost her vision in that plane crash…….
Swara;No…………….this can’t happen…… How can god to this to Ragini?
Laksh:That’s why she is hiding from us…..
Sanskar:She thinks that if she comes back then she will be a burden on us….
Swara;How can she think like this? Doesn’t she trust us?
They all cry….
The next morning….
Sanskar has a plan in his mind…FB is shown.when Ragini was busy in her work Sanskar took her phone and made a call on his phone in order to take her phone number….
Sanskar in his mind:Ms.Ragini Gadodia…..now I’ll make u realize your mistake……..
Sanskar calls Ragini….

Sanskar:Hello…Muskan…
Ragini is shocked as she hasn’t given her cell number to any of her fans…….(Her fans only call her Muskan)and she finds this voice similar to Sanskar’s…
Ragini:Who’s this?
Sanskar:Avinash…apka favourite caller…
Ragini:Avinash….okay…..so how did u get my cell number?
Sanskar;I’m your biggest fan madam…so its not very difficult for me to get your number…..
Ragini:Okay…so why did u call me?

Sanskar:Cause…i wanted to be your friend?
Ragini:Ek andhi ladki ke dost banoge?
Sanskar;Madam… I love your voice…..i like u because of your soch/thoughts….and I know that u lost your vision…..
Ragini;First time..someone said that I lost my vision….everyone addresses me as andhi….
Sanskar;That’s because I don’t think u r andhi/blind……u can judge people….u can feel your dear ones…u can see your dear ones’ pain..feel their happiness,,,..and u r saying that u r blind? Itna kuch toh jinke pass aakho ki roshni hai wohh bhi nehi deksaktehai…
Ragini:How do u know about me so much? How r u speaking so confidently about me?
Sanskar:Cause I know u very well…
Rags:How? We haven’t meet even once….
Sanskar;We don’t need to see someone in order to understand him or her…
Rags;I’m hanging up….

Sanskar;Madam..u didn’t answer…will u be my friend?
Rags:There r less people who understands me…and……u r one of them…..i can’t lose kind hearted friend like u…..so friendship accepted…..
Sanskar:Bye….my new friend…
Rags:Bye…Avinash….
Sanky cuts the call and turns….he sees Swara….
Swara;The Sanskaar Maheshwari….is flirting with someone? And that too my sister?
Sanky:She is my love……flirting with our love is justified…..
Swara;Yeah…..btw..i did not understand…why did u call Ragini and said that u r Avinash?
Sanky:I want to make her realize that she is not a burden on anyone…she lost her vision but I won’t let her lose her courage, self confidence and her hope
Swara;I am so happy that u r with Ragini…now I have no worries for her…..
Sanskar;But I always worry for my brother…(Sarcastically)
Laksh comes from behind..

Laksh:Even I worry for myself…
Swara;U both….(She starts hitting them with the pillows)
They get tired and sit on the bed…
Swara:Now what next Sanskar?
Sanskar:Growing the friendship……
Laksh;And then?
Sanskar:And then I have to make her realize everything so that she herself returns to us….but I have to do this as Avinash..cause…she won’t talk to me if she gets to know that I’m Sanskar….
Laksh;Okay bhai..if u need any help then plz inform us…..we’ll be glad to help u..
Sanskar;Areeh…chor formalities…..
Its night….Khanna house…..bell rings….Ardhya opens the door and sees a bouquet….
Aru takes it to Ragini…..
Aru;Di…i guess I found a new ashiq….
She opens it and finds Ragini’s name in it…
Aru;Areh no di….its your ashiq….hai na?Teasingly)
Rags;How am I supposed to know?
Aru:Its written to Muskan….from Avinash……..awhhhh who is Avinash?
Rags:My fan and friend….
Ary:Something else is also written…
Rags:What?
Aru:Keep smiling….your muskan is very precious…..good night Avinash….
Rags starts smiling……
Aru:Di…u r smiling?

Rags:No….nothing like that…
Aru giggles…..
Rags calls on the number by which Sanky had called her…
Rags:U had send that bouquet?
Sanky:My name is written so I’m the one na?
Rags:Why did u?
Sanky:Now I need your permission to send u something? I’m your friend right?
Rags:U also know that I love orchids right?
Sanky:Yap…and that’s why I had send u orchids…..
Rags:Thank u…my name is muskan and u bring muskan in my face…thank u…
Sanky:Madam….your smile is very precious to me……and yes…no sorry and no thank u in friendship okay?

Rags:Okay…good night…
Sanky:Good night….sweet dreams……
He hangs up and starts jumping in the bed….Ragini too smiles…
Ragini while smiling:What is happening to me? I’m smiling at this idiot’s actions? Okay..he is not idiot….jeisa bhi hai accha hai…….and realizes what she said…..no Ragini….u can’t think about anyone else other than Sanskar…he is your first and last love…..and even Avinash deserves someone better than me….u can’t think about him..he is only friend…..
She gets a message….Its Avinash’s…..he has written…
Don’t give your brain so much pressure by thinking that am I only a friend to u or something else……
Ragini starts smiling…
Ragini:Pagal….

Precap:Ragini…………………………………………

Credit to: Eva

95 comments

    • Eva

      Hehehe…I forgot that…sorry….but yes…Ragini can smell her fav flowers…can’t she? And the message thingi…Aradhya reads all the messages for Ragini…I forgot to mention that…..

  1. Siddhi

    U r a fab writer yar..i mean…the way u r portraying ragsan’s ❤…..its fabulous…keep writing dear…

  2. Mayra

    U know i was waiting for Wednesday only for your ff….its amazing…i loved today’s episode…the best episode of this ff….full of ragsan..but emotional too…

  3. Pari

    Mind blowing episode……u r suprb yar..i was waiting for your ff and finally its here….awesome maha episode….

  4. Avanya

    Poor ragsan…still they r apart but I know Muskan and Avinash will reunite cause ragsan Ko tohh milna hii hai….

  5. Anahita

    Di u r an awesome writer….i am in love with this ff…..u have amazing writing skills and this story line is awesome…

      • Anahita

        No di…you should not doubt your writing skills as if u wouldn’t had been an amazing writer then u wouldn’t had gotten so many readers…….

  6. Niti

    OMG..what an episode….i love the Ragini of your ff….both ragsan and swalak r awesome….agar Ragini serial mehh bhi aisi hii sacrifice minded aur selfless hoti tohh aj serial mehh swalak aur ragsan hote…Swaragini ke life mehh koi problem nehi hoti.

    • Eva

      I know right….I even disliked Ragini’s character in the serial but now she has turned positive…and I agree with u that if Ragini would be the same as I have portrayed her in my ff then chinta ki toh koi baat hii nehi thi…..

    • Eva

      Thanks Riya..and I’ll try to give swalak scenes…..but at first I gave imp to Swalak and now its ragsan’s part…still i’ll give swalak scenes…..

  7. Nisha

    Eva…it was an excellent episode…..and yes update soon…btw r u planning to show Muskan and Avinash’s love story?

    • Eva

      Maybe yes…maybe no…….wait for the next updates…..Sanskar has become Avinash in order to make Ragini realize that she is not a burden…..and dear Ragsan will be together in any ways….so no worries….

  8. Kayra

    kya baat hai….I love Ragini’s character in your story…..keep writing..I was waiting for this ff..lovely episode…

    • Eva

      Thank u Kayra….i want Ragini to be like this in the serial…Tesjaswi doesn’t look good as villain….so in my story she’ll be the protagonist….

  9. anamika

    Im a silent reader. I really like ur ff! First time im commenting, as i want to appreciate ur ff! Its great

  10. Niharika

    I loved the last part…Sanskar’s message “Don’t give your brain so much pressure by thinking that am I only a friend to u or something else.” Its was awesome…and your dialogues r really amazing…hats off yar…today’s maha episode was a dhamaka…..now I have some idea about whats gonna happen next…Sanskar is going to make Ragini realize his love’s intensity being Avinash….and I guess Ragini will fall for Avinash….Am I right?

    • Eva

      To be honest…I haven’t decided that yet….anyways thanks dear…but I doubt my own dialogue writing…..

  11. Nikita

    Avinash and Muskan…Avian…..so from now on our Ragsan is avian….awesome and very different from other ff….update soon dear..

  12. Joona

    Wow superb episode… I never missed any of your episode… I loved it…
    But dear ….last ,a msg from avinash….ragini is blind na?I think it was a voice mail.
    But ur ff is amazing. Keep writing…

    • Eva

      Yes Joona…thank u so much from understanding this…after getting everyone’s comments I realized what I have written…..Aradhya reads all the messages for Ragini…I forgot to mention that…but voice mail is a good idea…i’ll apply that for sure….now on….its gonna be only voice mails…..

      • Joona

        Thanks for reading my msg dear…
        U r really good writer.. I really mean it… Because.. Reading everyones comments and replaying is really difficult. But u did it..it is a great quality…only a good writer will go through every comments so deeply..
        Keep writing dear.. Have a good day…

  13. Vidhi

    Your ff is awesome Eva….I mean..the love between Ragsan……its amazing…..this is called true love……your ff is the true definition of love….Ragini is keeping herself away from Sanskar for his betterment…such a selfless love….and Sanskar will now accept her as he doesn’t care about Ragini’s eye sight…..as he loves Ragini truly…I read your ff because its very heart touching…keep writing…….I wait for this ff…..everyday….kash Ragini sacchi meh asi hoti(In the serial)……..then Ragini would be my favourite character in the serial….

    • Riddhi

      Yes Eva….your ff depicts true love…..Ragsan only think about each other….they love each other so much…….I just imagine…what a couple they would make if they would be paired in the serial Swaragini……..After reading your ff…I have started loving them more than Swasan and Raglak……

  14. Eva

    Okay people…I am kinda bhulakkar.I really forgot that I showed Ragini blind…now i have realized what i have written about the message…i forgot to mention that its Aradhya who reads out all the messages for Ragini…from now on i’ll show only voice messages that would be send from Sanskar to Ragini….

    • Radhika

      Oh…that’s not a prob dear…..the thing is your story track is amazing….so keep writing and yes….I loved today’s episode…..update soon….and yes….my mom says that i’m the biggest bulakkar…so don’t steal my complement hehehe…:P

    • Eva

      I should be the one saying thanks Piyashree cause u complemented my story…so thanks dear….and I’m glad that I could bring muskan in your faces….

  15. Anita

    Eva…your Ragini rocks……the Ragini of your story is different….and I like this Ragini a lot…..And the couple Ragsan…they r amazing..though i’m a swasan fan…still I like reading your ff…Muahhhhhhhh…..awesome….

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