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hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 17

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Hy guys!! 😀
so happy to c ur precious Cmmnts on prev prt…..!! Thank u soo much muaaaah…..!!! 😀
keep loving n cmmnting…..!! 🙂 🙂 🙂
Prt 17:
AT NI8 :
—Sumo is sitting on hr bed thinking abt d whole day—-
—she cries—
FLASHBACK : —- FARMHOUSE 2 DAYS AGO:—-
(Sumo is standing near window enjoying d rain )
(Shr cms frm behind)
Shr: booo…!!!! 😀
–she gets scared– screamed —-n then dhmmmmmm……. fell on him :D—– she accidently kiss on his cheek—-
—-she gets shy n runs awy n Shr smiles—
PRESENT:
(Sumo thinks abt dis n cries)

NEXF DAY EVENING:
(Shr wid his gang is in sm library doing d arrangment of confession)
Shr: yr i m scred……i ignored her whole day yr…..i dont think she will cm
—-he throws a pen at trisha—–
Its her idea!! She told me to ignore hr 🙁
Abhi: ooy chill kar…….. pooora din ignore karke hurt karke.. confess karne mai Jo maza haina……!! 😀 wo kisi cheez mai nai…..
Shr: shut up….!!
Karan: dont worry yr….tri told u na dat she will brng her chill kar…… 😀 kyun tri..??? 😀
—tri nods— n smirks she sees tym —
In mind: only 1 hour left…….

Meanwhile Karan gets sumo’s call…–…—…
—…—he picks up d call…—-….
K: yes Sumo..???
S: hy Karan…..yr actually i wanna talk to Shr…..i tried to call him many times but his phone is switched off he is wid u guys na???
K: yes !! But sorry he is busy ….cant talk to u ri8 now…..
S: plzzzz yr atleast tell me where r u guyss i will lcome there…..its impo
k: no need….. he is wid us today….enjoying…plzz i cant sorry…..
—he hangs up—-
Karan : yr i think she is hurt wid d way i talk to hr…..
Tia: no prob yr……30 min or bssss usky baad wo hamri bhaaabi…!! 😀
Yr Shr i m vry happy fr both of u —
—she pats on his shoulder—-
—he smiles— 🙂 🙂 🙂

on d othr hand Sumo is shown standing in Shr room—-
S: today i got to knw that ur frnds r more impor to u than me…… 🙁
—tears rolls down frm hr face—-
U dont have evn a minute to give me……
She keeps d letter on table n leaves…..
—-….—-Screen freezes—…—-

Precap: Tia to slap trisha……Sumo to leave India frever….

So guys how ws d ep…!??? 😀
do tell…through cmmnt…!!
Missing lovely Di n khushi alot……where r u guys…??
Here is d ques: will Shr find Sumo letter ?? is he able to stop hr..??
Socho socho n
give ur. views n answer through. Cmmnts …… 😀
by guyssss!!!
Love u all…!! 😀

Credit to: maria

26 Comments
  1. WeirdSister

    It was good…plz try to keep f epi longer..they r vrt short …anyway..good work… Keep Going
    🙂

    1. Thanks alot dear…..!! Yeah i will make dis longer next tym….. 🙂 🙂 🙂 thanks frm telling me dear ….. 🙂

  2. Prettypreeti

    I hope so shravan will find leeter and will stop sumo but yeh to sirf do bznde hi jaante ki age kya hooga ek bagvaan and do maria

    1. Hahaah bat toh sahi hai……lekin dont worry aj apko bhi pta chal jai ga 🙂 😉

  3. Sumo

    ya rite … I don’t know kya hoga.. maria dis was amaaaaazing.. bdhiya tha yaar…. I guess dere will be a dhamakedaar airport scene… ??

    1. Thank u soo much sumo di!! 🙂 🙂
      Yeah airport scene is on d way…..!! 😀

  4. Maria..as usual..u rocked..ur line that..i*pura din ignore karkey..surprise dena*
    I too feel the same ….I’m glad that u have same thoughts as me..??☺
    Keep it up..

    1. Awww thanks alot sona di….!! M really happy to knw dat we share same thoughts…!! 😀

  5. It was amazing…….

    1. Thanks dear…! 🙂

  6. Nikita

    It was pretty amazing.. Great episode.. Post. Soon… I’m missing khushi di n lovely di too..

    1. Thanks alot dear….!! 😀
      Will post soon……. 🙂
      Btw where r they do u knw?

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Yess he will find the letter nd then he will rush to the airport nd stop her .. umm may b .. btw classy ep ???

    1. Ooh wow wat a nyc guess!! 😀 thanks dear….!!

  8. Anu_u

    beautiful!!!!!! waiting for next one eagerly……loved it

    1. Thanks alot anu dear….!! 😀 i will be very glad to c ur cmmnts on my nxt prt also…..! 🙂

  9. Yup i think shr full indian style ma ja k sumo ko end momoent pe airport pe rok le ga….

    1. Vry nyc tukka dear…..!! 🙂 🙂

  10. Knock knock Mario kese ho sweetu epi was very short but its OKepi was bit emotional and sad but was good iin fact amzingggggg
    So sorry sweetu for lateness I was lil busy
    Chand Mubarak
    Eid Mubarak
    May this eid bring a lot of happiness in ur life
    Take care enjoy eid with garmi
    Love u sisi

  11. Opening d door…………
    Mai theek ap kaisi ho API!! 😀
    Thanks a lot I WS waiting fr ur comments……!!
    No prob I can understand ! 🙂 🙂 🙂
    Chand Mubarak!!
    EID Mubarak ap ko Bhi!!! 😀
    May god accept ur good deeds……!! N stay happy n smile !!
    Tc n epu toooo enjoy wid masti…!! 😀
    Love u tooo API!!

    1. Main thk thak alhamdolilah

  12. Angel_pari

    Hey mairo i,m sooooo sorry for late yar epi was…… Choro nh bolti jitni tareef kr sakkti already kr di h sbne 😉 and offcourse airport sence to bnta h boss i.m waiting for it post soon

    1. No prob yr di….!! 😀
      Hahahahhaha thankssss alot m really glad u lyked it..!! 😀
      yes i will post aft eid…!

    2. No prob yr di….!! 😀
      Hahahahhaha thankssss alot m really glad u lyked it..!! 😀
      yes i will post aft eid…! hope u can wait plzz

  13. Khushi

    Wow wow wow Maria….dear it’s amazing itna acha kaise likh leti ho tum…..love u yaar….but I want to kill this trisha….chi I just hope shravan sumo ko rok le and trisha ki band bajaye….and han meri taraf se bhi uss Trisha ko thapad lagana….hate her…… Yr tum sachi sumo ko bhej dogi…plz don’t do this….anyways loved it….
    EID MUBARAK dear….have fun

  14. Hahahha no dear bs wait kr or dekh hota kya hai 😀 😀
    I alsooooo hate her very much ……….
    Thank u thank u fr such o lovely cmmnt dear…..!!!! Boht khushi hoi Tera cmmnt parh kr

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