hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 17

Hy guys!! πŸ˜€
so happy to c ur precious Cmmnts on prev prt…..!! Thank u soo much muaaaah…..!!! πŸ˜€
keep loving n cmmnting…..!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
Prt 17:
AT NI8 :
—Sumo is sitting on hr bed thinking abt d whole day—-
—she cries—
FLASHBACK : —- FARMHOUSE 2 DAYS AGO:—-
(Sumo is standing near window enjoying d rain )
(Shr cms frm behind)
Shr: booo…!!!! πŸ˜€
–she gets scared– screamed —-n then dhmmmmmm……. fell on him :D—– she accidently kiss on his cheek—-
—-she gets shy n runs awy n Shr smiles—
PRESENT:
(Sumo thinks abt dis n cries)

NEXF DAY EVENING:
(Shr wid his gang is in sm library doing d arrangment of confession)
Shr: yr i m scred……i ignored her whole day yr…..i dont think she will cm
—-he throws a pen at trisha—–
Its her idea!! She told me to ignore hr πŸ™
Abhi: ooy chill kar…….. pooora din ignore karke hurt karke.. confess karne mai Jo maza haina……!! πŸ˜€ wo kisi cheez mai nai…..
Shr: shut up….!!
Karan: dont worry yr….tri told u na dat she will brng her chill kar…… πŸ˜€ kyun tri..??? πŸ˜€
—tri nods— n smirks she sees tym —
In mind: only 1 hour left…….

Meanwhile Karan gets sumo’s call…–…—…
—…—he picks up d call…—-….
K: yes Sumo..???
S: hy Karan…..yr actually i wanna talk to Shr…..i tried to call him many times but his phone is switched off he is wid u guys na???
K: yes !! But sorry he is busy ….cant talk to u ri8 now…..
S: plzzzz yr atleast tell me where r u guyss i will lcome there…..its impo
k: no need….. he is wid us today….enjoying…plzz i cant sorry…..
—he hangs up—-
Karan : yr i think she is hurt wid d way i talk to hr…..
Tia: no prob yr……30 min or bssss usky baad wo hamri bhaaabi…!! πŸ˜€
Yr Shr i m vry happy fr both of u —
—she pats on his shoulder—-
—he smiles— πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

on d othr hand Sumo is shown standing in Shr room—-
S: today i got to knw that ur frnds r more impor to u than me…… πŸ™
—tears rolls down frm hr face—-
U dont have evn a minute to give me……
She keeps d letter on table n leaves…..
—-….—-Screen freezes—…—-

Precap: Tia to slap trisha……Sumo to leave India frever….

So guys how ws d ep…!??? πŸ˜€
do tell…through cmmnt…!!
Missing lovely Di n khushi alot……where r u guys…??
Here is d ques: will Shr find Sumo letter ?? is he able to stop hr..??
Socho socho n
give ur. views n answer through. Cmmnts …… πŸ˜€
by guyssss!!!
Love u all…!! πŸ˜€

Credit to: maria

26 comments

    • maria

      Thanks alot dear…..!! Yeah i will make dis longer next tym….. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ thanks frm telling me dear ….. πŸ™‚

  1. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    I hope so shravan will find leeter and will stop sumo but yeh to sirf do bznde hi jaante ki age kya hooga ek bagvaan and do maria

    • maria

      Hahaah bat toh sahi hai……lekin dont worry aj apko bhi pta chal jai ga πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰

  2. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    ya rite … I don’t know kya hoga.. maria dis was amaaaaazing.. bdhiya tha yaar…. I guess dere will be a dhamakedaar airport scene… ??

    • maria

      Thank u soo much sumo di!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Yeah airport scene is on d way…..!! πŸ˜€

  3. sona

    Maria..as usual..u rocked..ur line that..i*pura din ignore karkey..surprise dena*
    I too feel the same ….I’m glad that u have same thoughts as me..??☺
    Keep it up..

    • maria

      Awww thanks alot sona di….!! M really happy to knw dat we share same thoughts…!! πŸ˜€

    • maria

      Thanks alot dear….!! πŸ˜€
      Will post soon……. πŸ™‚
      Btw where r they do u knw?

    • maria

      Thanks alot anu dear….!! πŸ˜€ i will be very glad to c ur cmmnts on my nxt prt also…..! πŸ™‚

  4. Naina

    Yup i think shr full indian style ma ja k sumo ko end momoent pe airport pe rok le ga….

  5. ufaq

    Knock knock Mario kese ho sweetu epi was very short but its OKepi was bit emotional and sad but was good iin fact amzingggggg
    So sorry sweetu for lateness I was lil busy
    Chand Mubarak
    Eid Mubarak
    May this eid bring a lot of happiness in ur life
    Take care enjoy eid with garmi
    Love u sisi

  6. Maria

    Opening d door…………
    Mai theek ap kaisi ho API!! πŸ˜€
    Thanks a lot I WS waiting fr ur comments……!!
    No prob I can understand ! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
    Chand Mubarak!!
    EID Mubarak ap ko Bhi!!! πŸ˜€
    May god accept ur good deeds……!! N stay happy n smile !!
    Tc n epu toooo enjoy wid masti…!! πŸ˜€
    Love u tooo API!!

  7. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Hey mairo i,m sooooo sorry for late yar epi was…… Choro nh bolti jitni tareef kr sakkti already kr di h sbne πŸ˜‰ and offcourse airport sence to bnta h boss i.m waiting for it post soon

    • maria

      No prob yr di….!! πŸ˜€
      Hahahahhaha thankssss alot m really glad u lyked it..!! πŸ˜€
      yes i will post aft eid…!

    • maria

      No prob yr di….!! πŸ˜€
      Hahahahhaha thankssss alot m really glad u lyked it..!! πŸ˜€
      yes i will post aft eid…! hope u can wait plzz

  8. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Wow wow wow Maria….dear it’s amazing itna acha kaise likh leti ho tum…..love u yaar….but I want to kill this trisha….chi I just hope shravan sumo ko rok le and trisha ki band bajaye….and han meri taraf se bhi uss Trisha ko thapad lagana….hate her…… Yr tum sachi sumo ko bhej dogi…plz don’t do this….anyways loved it….
    EID MUBARAK dear….have fun

  9. Maria

    Hahahha no dear bs wait kr or dekh hota kya hai πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    I alsooooo hate her very much ……….
    Thank u thank u fr such o lovely cmmnt dear…..!!!! Boht khushi hoi Tera cmmnt parh kr

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