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hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 11

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Hy guys me again!! ๐Ÿ˜€ wid prt 11 hope u lyk it….. N thank to all for their precious comments!!
So lets strt!
After taking all classes Sumo is coming out of d univrsty—–
Here in uni garden Shr n his grp r talking —
But Shr eyes was searching Sumo….
Abhi: aray yr wo mai leh raha Tha ke…..
(suddenly Sumo came)
She smiles sees Shr n he smiles….
She Was abt to cm to d grp but sddenly stop she remembers d incident—- ๐Ÿ™‚
Sumo wids him by n strts to go…. ๐Ÿ™‚
(But Shr ws keep stairing at her wid much concerned as he was worried cause the floor was slipryyy due to rain)
Abhi: Shr?? (shakes him ) shr!?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Kahan khoya hoa hai ??
—-Shr ws abt to ans sddenly he her Sumo voice—-
She fall cause of slprnss—
He rushes to her—-
Shr: Sumo!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ o my god!!!
—-Sumo screams in pain—-
Ahh !!!! My foot!!!
Shr chcks hr foot—-
Moch aagai hai!! Sumi dheyan rakhna Tha na ! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Sumo: han or danto !!
Shr feels guilty he glares at abhi—-
Shr: wi8 here!
–aft 5 min he cms with his car—-
— he makes her sit in d car—
—n they drive away–
At 8:30
Tia cms to MM (malhotra mansion)
Tia straight goes to shr room—
Tia: hy champ!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Shr: hey ! (he luks tired) ๐Ÿ™‚
Tia : oyy r u ok?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Shr: ham wo bss……..
(Tia cuts him)
Sumo ke ghar Tha!
(he nods)
Kaisi hai wo??
He says fyn! ๐Ÿ™‚
Tia : hey yaad hai tune ek baar kaha Tha tukhe kabhi pyaar nai ho ga!! ๐Ÿ˜€
(Shr nods)
Tia: hahahahah ๐Ÿ˜€ tu wrong Tha dear !!
(Shr is confused)
Tia: ji han she strts singing!
Ho gaya hai tujh ko toh pyaar sajna
lakh karle tu inkar sajna
hai ye pyaar sajna……
Shr: pagal ho gai hai kya?? Mjhe? Pyaar??? Kis se!???
Tia : Sumo se!!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Shr is shocked ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
hav u gone crazy!!
Tia: no no!! u hav gone crazy abt her dear ๐Ÿ˜€
Shr: Mjhe koi Pyaar wyaar nai hai us se samjhi!!
Tia: hmmm u r ri8 is liay mai ne usko bhi bol dia ke tu n trishaa…….
Shr: ooy pagal toh nai hai kya bola tune usko!?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ mere or trisha ke beech kuch nai hai!!
Tia: hahahhaha ๐Ÿ˜€ beta tere andar yahi jazba junoon anger passion dekhne ke liay kaha !! ๐Ÿ˜€ man u r in luv!!!
(here Shr shocked Tia rocked) ๐Ÿ˜€
Screen freezes!!

Precap: Sumo’s car tire punchrd! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Shr cms to prking area n she luks at him…….

So how ws d ep guyss!!!
Do tell! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
N silent readers plZz AP bhi kro…… Cmmnts.! ๐Ÿ˜€
so here is d ques guys: who do u think puchrd sumo’s car’s tire?
Give ur views through Cmmnts
n han ans zaroor dena!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
Luv u guys!!! ๐Ÿ˜€
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: โคโค
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ?

Credit to: maria

36 Comments
  1. LovelyLady

    jhakas epi… yar aaj kl taarif k wrd km ho gye h… kuch nya nikalna prega….. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚
    i think tia n kiya h….. to arrenge cute romantic momnt between shraman….. hope i m rt….. fnger crosed…..
    love my sweeetuuuuu

    1. Hahhaa thank u so much Di!!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      well lets see kya hota hai….. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thnks fr d ans!!

      1. LovelyLady

        maria khi tumne to ni kia????? ๐Ÿ˜‰

      2. Ahahaha Di ๐Ÿ˜€

  2. Bhoomi

    Superb episode…. Bichari Sumo..
    i think tia ne kiya hoga tire puncture ?

    1. Thanks alot Di ๐Ÿ™‚
      will see u did dis ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Thnkx fr d ans…..

  3. WeirdSister

    Amazing maria…eagerly waiting for next epi…post soon
    ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thankx alot WS ……… ๐Ÿ™‚
      will post 1 soon ๐Ÿ™‚

  4. U did it..maria…u did a gud. Job..keep writing like this…?โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ

    1. Thnk u soooooo much sona Di ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Nice epi…..

    1. Thnks dear ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. Sumo

    are maria…. kamal kr dia tune yaar.. loved it.. ??
    itna sweet tha na Shravan???

    1. Awww thank u soo much Sumo Di!!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Soo sweet of u ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Nikita

    Kamaal ho gaya shravan ko toh ho gaya hai pyaar… I think tia punctured. Not sure.. Amazing ep.

    1. Thanks nikki!!
      hmm lets see !! wat will happen!

  8. Angel_pari

    such a cute n sweet epi maira u rock

    1. Thanks alot angel Di……!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. It was very cute epi keep writing…..??

    1. Thnks anamika dear….! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. Itss really nice

    1. Thankxx dear!!

  11. Affaa

    Amazing…..my sis superb…as usual ..loved it….Maria it’s bcoz email problem….how are you….how is preparation going for eid….

    1. Thank u sooooo much Di!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      ohh email hmmm no worries ๐Ÿ™‚
      I am perfectly fine… how r u Di?? ๐Ÿ™‚
      Eid prepations are going vry well how abt u?? Shopping ho gai! ๐Ÿ˜€

    2. Affaa

      Haa I did my shopping…how is your mom

      1. Mom is abosolutly fine Allah je karam se how is yr mom n family ๐Ÿ™‚ Di ??

  12. Superb ep ???? …. and I think Tia ny kiya hoga ?

    1. Aww thankx alot Perry !!
      ๐Ÿ™‚ lets see wat will happen! ๐Ÿ˜€

  13. Shalini Naicker

    loved it.

    1. Thanks dear…… ๐Ÿ™‚

  14. gourvi aggarwal

    Awesome and superb episode pls keep writing

    1. Thanks alot dear!! Keep commenting!! ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. Sharmansangel

    Mind blowing episode love ur ff sample haathon me to jaadu hai early waiting for next episode jaldi post limited ga

    1. Aww thanks alot yr fr ur complement ๐Ÿ™‚ will ve glad to see ur cmmnt on my nxt prt also ๐Ÿ™‚

  16. mario rocked readers shocked thats it
    tyre pnchered by trisha ithink so anyways take care result aaraha h r ramzan ja raha h so pray for urself and me too plz

    1. Hahaha Thanks ufaq ๐Ÿ˜€
      thanks fr d ans lets see wat will happen!!
      N yeah best of luck fr d result i will definately pray fr u ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

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