hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 6

hy guysss me!!! agin!!
wid prt 6~~~
guysss i am so happy with ur rspndingss thankss alot… keep cmmnting!! ๐Ÿ™‚
so lets strt!!
continue frm previous ep:
(shraman are dancing sddenly sumo ws abt to fall n he hlds her dey have n eyelock)
(shr slwly leaves her)
shr: i.. am sorry i didnt…mean..to
(he left the stage n sumo with confusion)
sumo: ise…kya ho gaya….(sddenly she saw nirmala she goes near her)
sumo: aunty…. shr kya baat kr rha tha mujh se…. i mean ap ko pata hai kya…
nir: kya hoa beta…??
(sumo tells her about whole convo)
(nir is shocked)
nir: kya……? sorry sumo beta mai tumhe btana bhool gai ( she also tells her about everythng i mean d whole conversation frm frst ep)
sumo is shocked—- ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
sumo: ooo my thabhi…..
no prob aunty m wid u ( she winks at her) ( nir smiles)

next day:
sumo is talking to bobby on d phne—-
s: kya ( happily )
ye hoi na baat ๐Ÿ˜€ bobby tu mera saccha dost gai acha by baad mai milti hoon… —— she hangs up n calls tanya ——- chal tanya kaam ho gaya ab vicky ke ghar chalte hai uski tabahi dekhne….. ( she laughs)
(she goes downstairs silently bt collides wth push who was came fr some work)
s: hyyy push!! by pushh!!
(she starts to leav but he stps her)
push: kahan ja rai hai tu??
sumo: nai…… nai toh kai nai….
push : jhoot na bol bta…
sumo: abay mere bhai…..( she takes out smthng frm her bag ) ye le ( it was a paper on which vicky address is written) pakar na….. dekh agar 1 hour mai mai ghar na aai…… ya call nai kiya toh is address pr police ko le kr pohonch jana ok?? …… by…. (she runs away)
( push is shocked) sumo!!!! sumo!!!!!
here shr also come kapoors mantion n collides wid sumo—–
sumo: srry……( she runs towrds her car n leve)
shr is confused——
(he cms inside d house n see push standinc in shock he asked him wat happened amd push tells him evrythng)
(shr snaches the paper frm his hand n leves after sumo)
VICKY’S HOUSE:
v: kya !!!!!??????? hows dat possible mera account or dosra……. sab band…… kaise….(he is very much angry) ( a voice cms frm behind aise!!)
(he luks behind n is shocked to c tanya n sumo)
(sumo tells him everything dey did) she laughs—— beta tu toh barbaad ho gaya haahahahah
v: mai tujhe choru ga nai…. he coms towrds dem
s: tanya bhaaaj!!!!!! tanya runs
vicky: tujhe toh……
( sumo picks a pillow)
s : ye le ye kha……. she laughs—- kha na(she tears d pillow n all dye feathers cms out frm pillow) hhahahaha ye le ye kha….. she puts all d feathers on him whole room fill wid white feathers she takes out d peper sprayy frm her bag n spry on his eyes he screams in pain n takes out his gun she run frm their)
she cms outside running n collide wid smone…. sumo: shr……. bhaaag!!!!!! she strts run bt stops —– shr pagal ho gaya hai kya bhaaag na!!!!!! she hlds his hand n make him run wid her——
shr: wait hum bhaag kyun rai hai???
sumo: car kahan hai chal usmai phir bata ti hoon…..
shr: car opposite direction mai hai…..
(sumo is shocked )
kya oposite or hum….. shr!!!!fl toh wahan bhaaaj na tujhe mazak sujh raha hai..!!!!!!!
dey runs towards car n find tanya also their—–
sumo: oh thank god shr start kar car…. ( sumo sits on frnt seat wid him)
on the way back to home—–
shr: mujhe batao kyaaaa hoa????? bhaag kyun rai thai???
(tanya tells him evrythng)
(he is shocked n very much guilty) ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
shr: wat ????!!!!!!!
they drop tanya n bss ab the r alon in d car—–
(shr is very much guilty n doesnt say anything but he breaks d silence)
so tum…….uski help kar rai thi……
sumo nods—-
shr in his mind——
—- mai bhi kitna ullo hoon yr mai ne bechari ke bare mai kya kya socha n she……. o my god…… shr tu ek num ka pagal hai kasam se……—–
sumo: kya hoa??? acha ek baat poochni thi tum mujh se naraz kyun ho i mean u said i m monyminded mai ne aisa kya kia…….
(he stops d car n sys in his mind)
ab mai kya kahoon is se…… sach bataya toh gussa ho jai gi……
(he luks at her n coms her closer)
sumo: oy tum kya kar rahe hoo….??? ( she is nervous) ๐Ÿ˜€
shr makes her wear d seat belt——-
aisi cheezon ka dhiyaan rakhte hain sumo——–
(sumo is surprizeddd wid his such behavior)
ยซยซยซยซยซยซยซthey reach the house n luks at eachothrยปยปยปยปยปยปยปยป
“““ screen freezes on their faces“““““

precap: shraman spent some romantic moments…….

( so guysss gud news here ends the hate part get ready fr love part) ๐Ÿ˜‰
so guysss how was the epi——-
plz plz plz cmment i really need ur comments!!
note: all d chappal & tomatoes r allowed ๐Ÿ˜€
—— LOVE U ALL—–

Credit to: maria

27 comments

  1. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    as usual bahut acha tha…. i mean it was vry good…….. this telly updates will make me forgot my hindi…..
    u kn wht hppn to my ff that of few shots…. it was cncelled by telly updates twice…… cnt u imagine what is gng on me…… finally they hv agreed to publish my ff if i wrt english of all the hindi lines in brackets…….
    now tmrrw i wll edit that long epi n agian send it to moderatn … till thn maria n all my frns u hv to wait….. i m sry

  2. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    mairaaaaaaaaa

    seriouslyyyyyy yar ab bta do where u live in pak i wana meet such a amazing writer ๐Ÿ˜€

    it was funnyyyy yar loved it ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Maria

    Awwwww thanxxxx a lot di !! ๐Ÿ˜€
    m really glad u like it!!
    N dats soooooo sweet of u I live in karachi!!
    But where do u live in india?? Even I want to meet such an intelligent n wonderful writers like all of u !! ๐Ÿ˜‰
    U r soooooo sweet ๐Ÿ™‚ love u dii!!!!

  4. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Maria Maria Maria….. Kya khati ho yr tum…..Matlab mast part tha yr….u r too good……and the last was amazing…. Sumo was thinking something something….. But Shravan ko belt ki padi thi….yr awesome keep it up and post soon

    • maria

      Haahhaha thank u soooo much khushi ๐Ÿ˜€ lekin agr tumne mjhe dekha na kabhi toh kaho gi ke mai kuch nai khaati ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ will post soon ๐Ÿ˜‰

  5. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    This was soooooo awesome maria….actually mujhe samajh as gya k TU wale asa kyu kr rae h…

    They r jealous of us m sure.. WO jante h ki tm sare kitna acha likhte ho hence they r just jealous…???????

  6. Vaishali BBZ

    Hi Maria… Iam always a silent reader of all FF’s but I must say u have this special talent of writing which has forced me to comment on your FF
    Iam soo happy reading ur FF’s…
    They are just Outstanding and Superb.. No words to describe how much I love your writing style and stories both on this serial and on KRPKAB…
    Keep writing and keep entertaining us
    Thanks
    ??โค

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