hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 4

hy guyss me maria again!! well thankss again for all ur supportings plzzzz keep loving and commenting like dis always…. plz plz plz πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
so lets start with part 4 :
continue frm previous epi:
(shr is shocked to know dat she is sumo)
( sumo is also shocked to know dat he is shr)
shr: tum….. sumo….
sumo: shravan.. oooo myy god..!!!!! tum?? hah!! i can’t believe i mean i was searching u in the entire library n u?? u r here wid me on the table?? ooo myy seriously kaisa hai yrr!! sab chor yr i am soo sorry kl tum milne aai or mai NGO……
(shr still shocked)
sumo: ooo bbeee. tumhe kya hogaya bhoot dekh lia kya..?????
shr: han..?? wo mai….. acha tum kaisi ho??
sumo: aray yr kya ho gaya hai??? mai kb se bak bak kiaaaa ja rai hoon or tumne itni dair mai ek swal pucha???
shr: nai wo……. yr kuch bss aise hi tum sunao… acha yr mujhe wo.. if u dont mind i have to do an urgrnt wrk…. so….
sumo: ary no no nvr mind tu m jao koi baat nai …….. mujh se mulakat hoti rai gi!! πŸ˜€
(shr stands up n starts to go ) he syssss by to her
sumo bids byyy
sumo : hmmm weird……
(itne mai a boy come to her n sits on her table widout her permission)
boy: hey beautiful!
sumo: o hello!! dont u have any manners kisi se bina poooche uske table pr nai bethte or kya bakwaas kar rai hoo beautiful….. dafa ho jao
boy: o tum toh gussa ho dai mai toh sirf dosti karne aaya hoon
sumo smiles: u knw wat even my sandals wants to find a friend
(she shows him her sandals)
want to become there friend
boy: excuse me..???
sumo: excuse me ke bacche agar agle do min mai yahan se dafa nai hoa na toh in sandals ki stemping tere mooooh pr hogi samjha!!
boy: oook ja raha hooo lekin jate jate ye mera num lelo(he gives her a card) here irada bdal jai to karlena bht dekhi hain jo shuru mai nakhre karti hain or baad mai khud hi…..
sumo: tu aise nai mane ga na tujhe toh mai……( she starts to stand up)
boy: acha acha ja raha hoon bheeee
sumo tears the card : o sun is ko le kar ja!!! bl**dy daffar pata naai khaan khaaan se ajate hain flirt karne….
malhotra mansion:
(here shr is all lost in his thinkings )
shr: o mh god !!! wo larki sumo…….
ye kaise ……
wo toh kitni….sweeet….. ( suddenly he remembers nirmala sid that she wants to marry him) nai nai( he gets angry) wo chahe jitni bhi sweet kyun na ho shaadi nai karooo ga mai us se….
kapoor villa:
(here suman is also lost in her thinkings )
yr kitna handsome ho gaya hai kitna polite bhi hai……
pr itna weirdly baat kyun kar raha tha…..
(itne mai priya comes to her)
( on the other side nirmala comes to shr)
nir: beta shr kuch batana hai..
shr: yes mom
nirmala: beta asal mai kl ek party organize kari hai malhotras or kapoors ne toh kl kahi mt jana ok??
shr: ok mom
( on the other sids priya says same to sumo n she agrees )
shr : aisa karoon ga kl us se baat kar looon ga ke dosti tk theek hai pr shaadi nai wo waise bhi itni buri bhi nai hai ….. she is sweet he smiles πŸ™‚
next day :
(all arrangments are start for party sumo hasnt ready yet
malhotas are in the resturant with kapooors bczz they all are organizing the same party)
here shr is finding sumo
shr to preeti
shr: yr tumne sumo ko dekha??
pree: yeah dii is on upstairs.. shr: thankxx a lot
( in some dressing room sumo is talking to her friend tanya)
sumo: kyaaaaa??? kitna kameeena hai yrr
t: yeah (crying) yr agr papa ko pata chal gay na plzz yr kuch kar plzzz
sumo: nai yr plzz mt ro πŸ™ tu dekh jaise usne tujhe blackmail kar ke property le li na teri ab tu dekh
(.meanwhile shr just arrived n hide to see her)
shr: who is she talking??
sumo : saala mere saath bhi flirt kar raha tha library mai ab tu dekh us ko kya inaam deti hoon mai ek baar uska sign pata cha jai na duplicate karwakar saari jaidaaad ( she laughs evily)
(shr is all shocked n cant believe wat he just hear)
shr: o my god ye meri baat kar rahi hai? han kyun ke library mai toh uske saath mai hi tha…. sumo mai ne kabhi nai socha tha tum aisi bhi ho gi!
(he leaves in anger)
sumo: acha tu na bs ab apna khayaal rak saala meri dost ko black mail kare ga na tu bss dekhti ja !! kameena !! she is also very angry
(here screen freezes on both angry faces)
precap: shraman convo and their first dance…..! πŸ™‚
hope u guyss like it
sorry it is a little bit long
well plzzz do comment cause i really need ur comments. πŸ™‚
sorry for all gramatical mistakes..! πŸ™‚
all chappals tomatoes n eggs r allowed here πŸ˜€
love u all…..! πŸ™‚ [4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ❀❀
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ?

Credit to: maria

21 comments

    • maria

      thanks alot pari ! n dont worry misunderstandings boht jald sort out hojain gi maybe in tommorow’s epi..!

    • maria

      thank u soooo much sanjyoti definately clear the misunderstandings veryyy veryyy soon…!!

  1. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    as usual awsm epi…… d way u created misunderstndn shows your creativity in wrtng……
    your wrtng is gettng fab day by day…
    keep it up…..

    • maria

      thankssss alotttt for commenting di i am really really happy dat u like it….!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  2. sona

    This story seems to be soooo… interesting..☺cute..?.lovely…?and entertaining..???
    Post..the next part
    ASAP.?
    Continue…

    • maria

      hahaha no prob devgyani πŸ™‚ the serial is veryyyyyy best !! and thanxxxx for liking my ff !!

  3. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Haaha awesome Maria….sorry for commenting late….love u yr…kya likhti ho tum…..meri jaan hi logi kya???.
    Bechara shravan phir misunderstanding haha I will love to c what will happen next….keep it up and post soon??

    • maria

      absolutelyyyyyy nt a problem fr commemting late atleat kara toh sahi na πŸ˜€ thankxx fr likinkg commenting n supporting yr…..!
      lots of love πŸ™‚

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