hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 18 (second last part)

Hello!!!! Guys!! :D.
ITS “MARIA” ur old frnd….!!
finally cm back wid part second last prt….
Frst to congrats me ๐Ÿ˜€ continuosly 3 days ki koshish ke baad wid the help of “khushi” thank u sooo much yr…….. i finally got registered…….
Actually i decided to post d ep on sunday bt guysss m sooo happy so post it today…… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ hope u dont mind….so enough of dis bak bak….

Lets strt——-

Recap: shr to do arrangements fr confession n sumo to keeps d good by letter on shr table n goes away……

2nd last part
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Shr: finally all arrangments are done…..ahh such a relief ….. (he sees tym)
We made it in tym……
—-he checks his pocket—-ohhhh… ๐Ÿ˜ฎ shit…..!!!
Tia: wat happen now..???!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
shr: i forgot d ring at my home (he hits his head wid his hand)
Tia: ai bhagwaan…!!!! u will nrv evr change……..buddhu kahi ka ๐Ÿ˜€
tell me i will go where is it..???
Shr: in my room side table frst drawer….. Hurry up
Tia: ok…..phone do yr koi….(she snaches trisha’s phone fr her hand) tu de…. ๐Ÿ˜€ ab tera balance bhi khatam meri tarhan… ๐Ÿ˜€
—tia goes—-
Tri in mind: ja ja….. tia beta jis ke liay ye kar rahe ho us ne to aana hi nai hai….. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ (she smiles)

30 min later…. All r enjoying in library talking abt shraman…..
Shr: yr where is tia…???
Tri: i dont knw….
—-suddenly tia cms n slaps tri hard—–
—all are shocked—
Tri: have u gone mad..!!!????
—-tia again slaps hr—-
Shr: wat happened yr…??!!!!
(tia shows him letter)
Tia: see urself……!!
Shr reads d letter n is completely shocked—- ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
——-LETTER——-
“to my dear shr……
I dont knw wat to sayy…i knw u hate me. u dont want to c my face .u r evn nt happy wid d marriage but u didnt say it why??? why u didnt say dat u r nt happy i will myself break d marriage…… ๐Ÿ™ but no worries today i free u wid all my reponsibilities…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™ i m giving u ur lyf back ur frndship….cause frndship is more impor than luv to u…..
I tried to contact u many times but u ignored me…… ๐Ÿ™
But i want to say 1 thing “I LOVE U “. Yes…but i will nevr evr force u to love me back…….i just want to say be happy always n plzz remember me as ur frnd atlest…. i am going back to london…. ๐Ÿ™ forever….. by …..”

—–shr breaks down lyk his whole lyf has ended—–
—-he sits on d floor—–
Tia: n it is tri fault…..
—-she tells everythng to evrybdy—-

FLASHBACK:
—–whn tia ws in d car she gets a msg frm sumo—–
,,,,,remember guys it ws tri phone,,,,, ๐Ÿ˜‰
Msg: ” thank u”
Tia ws cnfused so she checked msgs n ws shocked….. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
—–she reads all d msg n it clearly proved dat tri forced sumo to leve india—–

PRESENT:
—-all r shocked—-
—-shr is nt in his senses in continuosly crying—-
K n abhi glares tri in anger…….
Karan shouts: why..!!!!!????? Why did u do dis !!???
Tri: cause i love him……(sbe strts crying ) yes…..bt no one evr sw dis n wo…wo sumo evrybodyyy ws just became her ghulaaam……
Tia: u dont love him…!!!! U just want to win over sumo dats It….watevr lets go to airport….!
Tri: its tooo late…..
—shr looks on in double shock ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ——

ON D OHER HAND
—AIRPORT—
—sumo is just so sad she strts walking—-
—she looks back—-
It ws ur last chance…..i am going…..if u love me u will definately come here…….
—she agin strts walking—-
—Suddunly her bag falls n she kneels down to pick up d bag—-
She imagines shr is helping hr picking up d bag—–
—she cms out frm her imagination—-n is so sad…. ๐Ÿ™
—she gets up—-

—she saw d reflection of shr ih d mirror in front of hr—–
Screen freezes !! ๐Ÿ˜€

Precap: last ep……

How ws d ep guyss!!!!????? ๐Ÿ˜€
hope u lyk it…….
Sorry if its long……maafi…..
N yeah if u lyk it a little bit than cmmnt plZzzzz plzz i realy need it…….!!
N silents readers i will be vry glad to c ur cmmnts also…. ๐Ÿ˜€

Wat do u think ws its really shr or sumo’s anothr imagination!??? ๐Ÿ˜€
Shre ur ans though cmmnt…. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Byy byy
love u all……!!! ๐Ÿ˜€

40 comments

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so much dear….!
      Aray m also writing another one “pyaar dosti hai ” I give d intro I d ff 3 days ago but when dis ff end I will ri8 ” PDH” ok….!! ๐Ÿ™‚
      So sweet of u ….!! ๐Ÿ™‚

  1. Naina

    Its really nice and i wish ye thora lamba ho jaye itni jaldi kyun finish kar rahi ho thory aur episodes likho na n han coming to d question i think it will be truly shr but sumo will think that its her imagination and she will ignore him

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thanks lot dear…!! M really happy dat u lyk it Mai kya Karoo I don’t want to drag it too much yr…!! It will look boring
      No worri mera nxt ff “PYAAR DOSTI HAI ” Parhna ok….. ๐Ÿ™‚
      N yeah ni.0Ce tukka dear….!!

  2. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Hey mark full emotional part and uff u r ending this no ???chalo please try to post next epi fast and write new ff okay so coming to ur ff ques main guess nhi kr pa rahi but I think ye shravan ya suman ki imagination hai haana am I right

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thanks dear……!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      End toh Karna pade ga na I don’t want to drag it too much it will look boring…!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      But read my nxt one ok “PYAAR DOSTI HAI”
      n yeah nice tukka….!!!

  3. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Wow amazing maria….Trisha deserved d slap….!???
    Well written..post soon…eagerly waiting for d confession by Shravan….โ˜บโ˜บ

  4. HarSHaN

    |Registered Member

    Nyc Epi Marie..1st time, read ur ff’s epi..bt easily catch the imagination..Writing is gud..Keep continue

  5. Marie

    |Author

    Thank u sooo much fr commenting harshan ….!! I will be very glad to c ur cmmnt on nxt part toooo !! ๐Ÿ˜€

  6. Nandu

    Read all your episodes. sorry couldn’t comment on those. But keep up the Gus work yaar. Keep writing.

  7. Nandu

    Read all your episodes. sorry couldn’t comment on those. But keep up the Gud work yaar. Keep writing.

  8. sona

    Wwooowww…the most awaiting part of shraman is gng to happen..I’m ssssooo..excited..and also sad..that it’s gng to be end..???โ˜บ????

  9. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    yaar.. ! intense moment pe khatam kar dia..!! I luved it.. sad to know you’re ending it .. im gonna miss you.. pls come back with another one.. trisha deserved those 2 slaps… poor shraMan.. post soon

    • Marie

      |Author

      Aww thanks a lot dear…..!!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      M really Glad u lyked it…!!
      Don’t worry I will be Bck with another 1….”pyaar dosti hai”…..!! ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. ufaq

    Knock knock Mario
    Hey u r ending this not fair seriously not fair
    The episode was emotional but cute
    I liked the slapping part ahahaahah
    I loved the epieven I love my little sisi
    But telly walon I hate u to the core batmeez logon
    Anyway take care sweetu
    Pray for me pllllzzzzzzzzzz
    Love u keep smiling

  11. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Wah wah Maria… Oops I mean Marie??
    The episode was out of the world acha hua tune uss Trisha ke 2 thapad lagaye kamini kahin ki??….huh
    Awww yr shravan crying do hell with this Trisha yr…..anyways next mein toh dono mil hi jaayenge….aur yeh kya next part last hai……nhi ….aisa nhi ho sakta..plz Maria ….but I understand that u don’t want to drag it ……so post the next part soon and the first part of PDH also soon…..waiting waiting….love u

    • Marie

      |Author

      Khair hai maria hi Bol do ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
      Thanks a lot yr!!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      Yep nxt 1 is d last…. ๐Ÿ™
      I will post nxt ep ooops last ep soon n yeah Frst I will give 2nd intro of “pyaar dosti hai…..” Dan I will strt posting ep…!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰
      After this ff ends I will strt write nxt 1 ok….!
      Love u tooo dear ! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Very nice ep ??? … nd congrats k ap register ho gyin … eagerly waiting for the last part ? … ohhh m sooooooo excited? … hopefully it will b awwwwesome? .. nd ur question.. I think it would b sharavan not her imagination??

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