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hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 16

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Hy guys !! 😀
Thank u all fr cmmnting!! On prev prt !! Keep cmmntng n loving….! 😉 😉
Part 16:
continue frm prev prt…….
— Shr is thinking.abt Sumo—
—he remembers smthng n goes to ram n nirmala—
«« door knocked »»
Ram : cm in….
Shr: hey dad……i wanna talk to u abt smthng…..
Ram: yeah sure…..
Shr: dad i will join company…….aftr i will get my engineering degree 🙂
Ram is soo surprised n nirmala also she stands up…..
Nir: but u said u will nvr evr join malhotra industries as it is boring …….. 😮
Shr: i said dat…….but now wat i am syng is my final desicion….
Nir: oh lekin is ka mtlb ye nh ke tumhari shaadi nh karwai jai gi…. 😀
suman se…… (she says naughtily)
Shr: AP ki marzi (he smiles) (n go bck to his room)…..
Both r cmpletly surprised by dis…….nirmala thinks smthng……—–…..—-
—-3 days pass lyk dis—-
At kapoors villa all r gather for dinner includinf shravan group—-
Nir: priya……actually i want to talk abt smthng if u dont mind…..
Pri: ofcourse u can y would i mind…..???
Nir luks at ram—
Ram: anurag….priya bhabi….hum Shr ke liay suman ka rishta mangana chahte hain… 🙂 🙂
All r shocked—-
—-silence—- fr secs….
Shraman luk at eachothr—in shock—
Anurag n priya breaks d silence—
Aurag: ram ye hamare liay boht khushi ki baat hogi agr Shr se Sumo ki shaadi hoti hai……
Priya hugs Nir—-
All r happy except trisha……
Tia gives a thumbs up to Shr- 😀 — he smiles 🙂
ram : aray ek bar baccho ki marzi toh pooch lo…… 😀
anurag: suman Shr kya tumhe ye rishta manzoor hai…???
Both say : if u r agree then i have no prob….. (n den luks at eachothr)
(both r happy vryyyy happy 😀 but didnt show their happiness)
Sumo cms to Shr: hey……umm…..tumne shaadi ke liay han kyun kari….??
Shr: kyun ke mom chati thi…… Or tum bhi toh yhi chahti thi na….?? 🙂 (he smiles n walks awy leaving hr confused) she smiles 🙂
Sumo: chati thi toh nai lekin ab chati hoon…..
Trisha cms frm behind:
Oooh Sumo how can u say yes fr marriage?? 😮
s: y nt????
T: i think u dont want Shr to be happy…..huh??
S: wat u mean?? 😮
t: babyyy……. Cant u evn c…..he is nt happy wid dis marriage….!!
S:wat…!!!???
T: yep!! he dont evn luv u how can he be happy!???
—-Sumo luks dwn in sadness—
S: but he said yes……….. 🙁
T: dats because or Nir aunty……u knw that he nvr evr deny his parents order…..or phir us ne tumse khaa bhi toh hai ………..
Sumo is vry sad—–
Tr: luk at him…..( she makes Sumo luks at Shr)
He is so happy wid his frnds……. ( shr was laughing wid his frnds)
—-actually dey all r teasing him by d name of Sumo—–
—-n trishaaa ki bacchi knws dis—-
Tri: he is so happy……but if be will marry u his happiness will be ruined fr evr…..
S: no i….i cant see him sad….i….i love him
—–trisha is shocked—-
Wat!!?? U…u luv him??
Sumo sadly nods—–
Tri in mind– no no no…..Shr ko ye kbhi pta nai chlna chahiay…..
Tr: plzzz yr return him his lyf……..plzz
Sumo: Wat should i do……??
Tri: go back to London……..
Screen freezes—-

Precap: Shr to arrange a date fr Sumo 🙂 🙂 aaj mai usy bata doon ga how much i luv her!!!! 😀 Tia: i am vry happy fr both of u……on d othr hand Sumo to leave India forever…….

So guys how ws d ep n how ws d Precap…..!?? 😀
dont worry sm good moment will cm up soon 🙂 🙂 😉 🙂 🙂
So here is d ques: Wat do u think will Shr find dat Sumo is leving him?? will he able to stop her???
Give ur views through Cmmnts …….! 🙂
N yeah socho sochoooo ans bhi zarooir dena 😉
silent reader m dsprtly waiting fr ur Cmmnts…..!
By frnds !!
Love u all!! 😀

Credit to: maria

45 Comments
  1. Amazing … I am waiting for the next part…..

    1. Thanks dear…..! Keep loving n commenting !! 🙂

  2. Plz don’t create misunderstanding btw them,n I think shravan will stop sumo n confess the feelings

    1. Hahahah don’t worry dear I already sad in lasts at good things r going to happen soon!!
      Stay tuned……. 🙂 🙂

  3. WeirdSister

    Very good….keep it up…waiting eagerly for f next epi
    🙂

    1. Thanks a lot WS !! Keep loving n commuting like dis !! 😀

  4. Maria..shravan..ya..suman..ka tho pata nahi..??par yadhi tum chaho..tho ek pal mey sub kuch badal sakti ho..?????
    Aur..mujhey lagta..hai..shr pakka sumo ko ROK lega ..aur ha..us good time k liye..him besabarisey..intzaar rahega..???☺☺

  5. Hahah thanks a lot sona di!! 😀
    Nice tukka 🙂 let’s see wat will happen 🙂
    N yeah good tym and wala hai

  6. Ahhhhhh this trisha!!!!!!!!
    Loved the epi ohhh i,m eagerly waiting for that good thing post soon

    1. I hate hr but dont worry us ka bhi ilaaj ho jai ga 😉 😉
      Thanks fr cmmnting Di!!!

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Ohhh Trisha ki bachiii ?? .. ep was superb … I think suman will not go … sharavan will stop her? .. waiting for shraman moments .. post soon ??

    1. Thanks alot dear……!!!! M really glad u lyked it….!! Keep cmmnting dear…
      Yeah their will be shraman moments soon… 🙂

      1. Btw fatima will u be my frnd??

      2. Fatimagulesarfraz

        Ohhh so sorry !!!! Mene apka reply abi dekhaaa … well frndship … I think I don’t know u … so m feeling hesitation? .. hopefully u will don’t mind Han ?

  8. Maria ap hum se itny questions pochti ho lekin ap ne abhi tak mery question ka reply nahi kiya…….kya ap sab i mean ffs writers and readers mujhse frndship karo gy …….mujhy apni shoti si ffs ki family ma accept karo gy????? plz yarr do reply I’ll be waiting

    1. Aray naina dear i already said dat in my prev prt Cmmnts u can c….
      I m saying again dear y nt….. 😀 i will be very pleased to have such a nice frnd lyk u dear….!! 🙂 welcome to our choti si family…… 🙂 🙂 🙂 !!!!!
      Lots of luv…..!!

    2. Plzzzz yr ab tum bhi replyyy kari i am alsooo waitingg 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 dat if u read it dear…..!!

      1. Yeah i read it and thanks for accepting me can i do me a favor plz????? Can u introduce me wd ir choti si family????? Actually i love making frnds but mujhy samajh nahi aati k frndship ka start kesy karon

      2. Yes ofcourse but kuch memebers aj kl missing hain such as Fatarajo lavwly Di n khusi
        baqi members angel Di nikita ufaq aff Sumo Di sona Di abhi kittu n many more….tum already is family ka part Jo dear…..!! Kisi se bhi baat karlo every treats u lyk a family member….! 🙂

      3. Oh hod naina y r u asking permission of getting entry sweetu
        Anyway welcome to our family sweetheart
        Kese ho????
        Age kia h apki?????
        Kis class main parhti ho?????
        From where u belong????
        So sorrrry itne share questions k liye answers needed
        And ya will u be my friend main a
        Naina naina naina oh god I like ur name very much

  9. Pretty Preeti

    Outstanding and I think shravan will definitely stop her and misunderstanding will be cleared soon

    1. Thanks alot Preeti dear…..!!
      Nice tukka lets c Wat will happen….!!
      I will be vry glad to c ur Cmmnts on next parts also dear…..!

  10. Pretty Preeti

    By the way I am preeti and I love ur ff a lot

    1. I m Maria….! naam toh sunna hi hoga :D. hahha just kidding (its a dialoge of srk) thank u sooo much fr loving my ff dear……
      U also loved d way u described abt me n othr brillant ff writers ……..
      Dear u r amazing tooo i believe….!! 🙂

      1. Btw Preeti will u be my frnd??

  11. Yeah my guess was right….. osm epi Maria …. waiting for nxt part….??

    1. Ur guess is always ri8 dear….! 😀
      thanksssss alot fr cmmnting keep loving dear…..!

  12. Knock knock Mario kese ho I hope u don’t mind if I call u Mario will u?? Anyway the epi was amazing but there should b no separation plzzzzzzz order h mera lol acha keep it up love u and ya plzzzzzz pray

    1. Opening d door………
      Hy api mai theek AP kaisi ho??
      Absolutly nt a problem Pyaar se Jo bhi kho 😀
      Thankssss alot api m really glad y lyked it!!
      AP ka order slakhon pr….. 🙂 🙂
      Their will be a happy ending fr sure..!!

      1. I m gud Mario and weather oh god garmi ki hakumat h

  13. Karachiiiiiii Mario halat tho hain wahan ke ?????
    And ya I don’t mind and I m from lower punjab

    1. Hah!! 😀 halat sahi hain…….. Karachi kai!!
      Wow lower punjab !! 😀 nice how’s d weather their!??? 😀

      1. Karachi main garmi??? Seriously????

    2. Garmi!!!?? same here 😀

      1. Yep !! Boht!!

  14. Pretty Preeti

    maria u r my friend already dear no need to ask

    1. Awwww thanks alot dear….! 🙂

      1. Pretty Preeti

        BTW I m from Punjab

      2. Wow punjab !! 😀 btw India wala punjab ya pak wala 😉

      3. Prettypreeti

        India wala punjab

      4. Ooooohoo 😀 wow!!

  15. silent reader

    awesome story….waiting for the next part…plsss update soon…

    1. Thanks alot silent reader…..!! I will be very glad to c ur commnts on my nxr parts also!! 🙂

  16. Nikita

    This was amzing..ShraMan ki shaadi but sumo leaving.. No… I think shravan will go to the airport n propose… Post soon

    1. Well very nice tukka dear…! 😀 lets se Wat will happen !! n thanks fr cmmnting!!

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