hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 14


Hy guys !
Fst of all i wnt to sy srry fr d incident on prev prt…..
Then i would lyk to thank u all again fr ur precious Cmmnts……!

Lets strt:
In mrning—–
Sumo wakes up n goes out of her room—-
—-she saw smoke in d whole house—
Sumo: o my god!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ fire!!
—she goes down stairs running—
Sumo: Shr!! Shr!!
—suddenly she saw Shr in d kitchen n smoke is cmng out frm d kitchen—
Sumo: Shr!! Shr aag lag gai…!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ Shr!!
—she goes inside d kitchen n ws surprised to see Shr ws trying to making smthing—
—Shr while coughing—
Ooy tum yahan kya kar rai…..(coughs) ho…..?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
Sumo: tum ye kya kar rai ho…. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ oven mai kya hai?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
—she strts to go near d ovn sddenly Shr blocks hr way—-
Kuch nai hai….!!
Sumo: ooy !! leave my way….! Kia hai dekhne do!!
Shr: no !! wapis jao table pr wi8 karo…..
(Sumo picks a belan frm d shelf)
Sumo: i m giving u 5 sec leave my way or ye belan tumhaare sar pr…. ๐Ÿ˜€
Shr: ok….ok….cake hai usmay……. vanilla cake….
Sumo: cake!! hatooo!! cake jal gaya hai!! pooore ghar mai smoke hai can u see?? Pagal!!
–she open d ovn n takes out burnd cake–
Sumo laughs—
hahahahha ๐Ÿ˜€ vanilla cake choclate cake bn gaya!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Shr: shut up!
Sumo:hahahha who told u to do dis….if u dont knw how to bake…hahah zaroort kya thi….
Shr: acha na…… enough of dis bestii!!
Tum kuch banado na…. waise bhi i am vry hungry….

Wat abt parathas ?? Aloo prathas… ๐Ÿ˜€
Shr: u lyk parathas i think……..u lived in London so u lyk some u knw….
Sumo: ohoooooo…. tbhi cake !! ๐Ÿ˜€ no definately nt i may lived in london pr parathas are always my fav….!! ๐Ÿ˜€
they help eachothr in making parathas—–
Shr: um… Sumk ur nose…. kuch laga hai…..
Sumo: kahan pr…..??
Shr: wi8…. he cms closer to hr….n puts flour on hr face ๐Ÿ˜€
Sumo: oy..!!!! Shr le bache!! I will nt leave u!
They run behind each othr—- n aftr sm masti they eat paraths togthr–
At ni8….—-…..
It is stormy raining outside with lightning—-
Sumo is restless in hr room n tries to sleep but cant— she ws scared thinking abt vicky chap—-
—she goes to Shr room n knocks—
Shr: yeah!!

—she opns d door—
Sumo: actually i was……
Shr luks outside– oh raining scared!??? ๐Ÿ˜€
Sumo: no!!! Umm….. Yes ๐Ÿ™ i m scared remembring abt vicky….
Shr cms near her—-
Shh…… Jab tk tum mere saath ho nthing will happen to u i promise u r safe wid me ok ๐Ÿ™‚
–Sumo nods—
Shr: cm… tum bed pr so jao… i will sleep on d couch… ok mai yahi hoon
—he makes hr lie on d bed n they have n evylelock—-
—Sumo hears d soung of lightning n hugs Shr—
—aftr sme tym she breaks d hug n both feels awkward—

–Sumo ws sleeping while Shr ws working on d laptop—
—he saws her shivring—
—he goes near her n puts blanket on hr–
—he sits near her n crsses hr face—
—he was lost in her n ws abt to kiss hr suddenly he cms to his senses—
Shr: o my god….. wat am i doing….??
—he stands up n luks at her—
Ye ho kya rha hai mujhe….?? how can i even though abt kissing hr??
He goes near wi
—it is shown dat Sumo ws actually nt sleeping, she wake up when Shr puts blanket on hr—

Precap: Trisha n Sumo convo!!

So guys how ws d ep??….
Do comments n share ur views
n wat u think abt trisha n Sumo convo wat wipl be d reason behind??
Give ur views n ans !! ๐Ÿ˜€
n silent reader AP bhip plzzzz cmmnt karo cause i really need it… ๐Ÿ™‚
Till then byyyy
Lov u all ๐Ÿ™‚ [4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: โคโค
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ?

Credit to: maria

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  1. U rock Maria
    Osm epi …. I luv aalo parantha too….???

    1. Thankx alot dear….!
      Keep cmmntng

  2. Kavina

    I loved it. Funny part. Please update soon

    1. Thanks dear!!
      Will post soon….!
      I will be glad to c ur cmmnt on my. nxt prt also…… ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. Nice epi….. Post ur next part soon…….eagerly waiting for it

    1. Thanks dear….!
      Will post soon!

  4. That’s..so..gud..so..nice ff..keep it on mariaโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ

    1. Thanks alot sona Di!! M really glad u lyk it!!

  5. WeirdSister

    Amazing maria…loved it..plz post soon

    1. Ahh ๐Ÿ˜€ thanks dear…..!
      Will definately post soon!! ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. Sharmansangel

    Excellent Maria ma’am

    1. Hahhahaah ๐Ÿ˜€ ma’am..?? Well thanks

  7. Nikita

    Amazing.. maybe abt the kiss the convo could be..post soon

    1. Thanks nikki dear….!
      Lets see wat will happen! ๐Ÿ˜€
      thanks fr d ans n yeah definately post soon…!

  8. Maira maira maira…,.,,. Kya kahun yar ab words e nh bache islye i,m quite ๐Ÿ˜‰

    but epi was sweet cute and romantic loved it and lov u too sweeto keep rocking

    1. Aww thank u soooo much pari Di!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Love u 3,4,5,6…… Moreeeee!!

  9. LovelyLady

    superb epi….full of masti n romAnce….. loved it really….. post nxt epi ASAP ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Thank u soooo much lovly Di!!
      Will post nxt 1 soon…… ๐Ÿ™‚

  10. Khushi

    Ohh Maria….u r just so good….I mean mujhe saara din tere ff ka intezaar rehta hai and u always have a suspense in the end this is not fair…I m not able to sleep yr??anyways I really loved it…especially that belan wala scene I was laughing like mad after reading that???
    And then the almost hug….???
    U always manage to surprise me yr??
    And I have no idea what must be the combo maybe trisha will make her realise her feelings or his feelings….. Btw yt is Trisha positive or negative…. Plz tell m a lil confused…..
    Love u meri jaanโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค

    1. Aww thank u soo much dear……hahah suspence rakhna thora zaroori hai dear….! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€
      hahah khushi plzzz so jaya kr warna agr phir se bemaar parh gai. cause the lack of sleep toh i will feel guily yr…..! ๐Ÿ˜€
      N yeah trisha is a negative character… yet…

  11. It was as usual amazing…..by the way maria i wanna ask u smthng actually ma ne abhi start kiya ha sab ffs pe comment karna and yahan par bht se log hain jo apas ma frnds hain ma b ap sab se frndship karna chahti hn ap sab mery se frndship karo gy ???????

    1. Thank u soooo much fr the comment naina…..!
      Of course why not i will be very pleased if i become my frnd…!! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Welcome to our sweet little family dear… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  12. Hey maria I really loved ur ff this is the first time I am commenting.i am commenting bcoz u asked the silent readers to comment.through reading I could imagine the scenes in my mind it was awesome. I am waiting for ur next post

    1. Aww thanks alot loga…..!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      M soo happy that u comment n loved my ff
      i will be vry happy to see ur cmmnt on nxt part also….!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

  13. Fantastic….????…i just loved it..vanilla cake into chocolate cake???….yaar i cant bear dis suspence…jaldi katam karo plzzz

    1. Thanks alot dear!! ๐Ÿ˜€
      hahahahah ye suspence jaldi hi khatam ho jai ga…..!

  14. Hey maria I really loved ur ff through reading I could imagine the scenes in my mind it was awesome ep.this is the first time I am commenting I have not even commented in the edkv daily updates and I am commenting bcoz u askd the silent readers to comment.I am waiting eagerly for ur next post

    1. Thank u soooo much loga dear !! I am so glad dat u cmmnt ……..!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Keep loving n cmmntng lyk dis….!!

  15. Fatimagulesarfraz

    Fab ep ??? .. r abi mjhy kch idea nae hy abt conversation … ?

    1. Thanks alot dear…… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      No prob.. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thanks fr cmmnting…!

  16. Sumo

    no idea about d convo.. but m sure it would be masaledaar.. u r too good maria … loved it..??

    1. No prob Di……… ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thank u sooooo much Sumo Di!! ๐Ÿ˜€ m really glad u loved it !

  17. Shalini Naicker

    Superb loved it.

    1. Thanks a lot dear….! ๐Ÿ™‚

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