hate to love a shraman fan fiction part 13

Hy guys!! 😀
thanks alot fr commnting on prev prts…..!
M so happy n obliged! Keep loving n cmmnting!
Prt 13:
Continue……..
—-Shr is drving car thinking how he punchered the car tires—
Sumo: Shr!!!?? Shr!!!!!! R u listning to me???! Stop d car where r we going??!!! Ans me!! Luk dont evn think abt kiddnapping me i will call police!
—-she checks hr mob—-
Where is my mob…..?
—suddenly she remembrs how her bag got stolen—-
—Shr luks at hr—
Shr: i think u forgot ke tumhra mob bag ke saath chori hoa hai…..
Sumo realizes smthng : wi8 how do u kne my mob also got stolen?? N how did u knw my bag also got…….
—Shr takes hr bag frm back seat n gives it to hr—-
(Sumo was shocked)
Sumo: huh!!!?? U…..u..stole my bag??!
Shr: not me ……..my frnds!
Sumo takes hr mob out fr d bag n checks it—
Wait……where is my sim card??
Shr!!
— they reach some farm house—-
Sumo: mjhe yahan kyun lai ho?? 😮 oy tumhare irade toh theek hain na?
Shr: chup chap car se utro……
They goes inside d F.H
Sumo: plz tell me yr…. Y did u kidnapped me…. dekho if u r angry at me slap me…. But plzzz yr…
Shr: yr tum kitna bolti ho!!!!! Wo bhi fazool!! Why would i angry wid u!!??
–Sumo makes a puppy face–
Shr: i take u here to save u dam it!!
—-Sumo is shocked—
Wat!!?? Save!? Kis se!??
Shr: vicky se! (Sumo is double shock)
Shr: han…. ek toh tumne panga kar dia itna bada…. Mjhe pata Tha is pange ke baad…he will nt stay quite… or phir…u didnt go to shopping… Tumhari wajah se last moment pr Mjhe apni tickets cacel karwani pari…
Socha tha tumse bat nai karoon ga kuch din…..pr jitna door jana chahta hoon utna hi paas ajata hoon (he gets emotionL)
Sumo: oh……toh thats y u kidnapped me.?
Shr: will u stop saying d wrd ‘kidnp’
Sumo: oh….sry.. but humere ghat kyun nai gai is F.H pr kyun?
Shr: cause vicky is aftr u! He is planning smthng big! Wo police ko bhi nai mil rha….. is incident ko 1 week ho chuk hai…. 5 day se wo tumhare upar nazr rakh rha Tha n two days se missing hai……he is definately planning smthng big!
Sumo: oh……. Umm….
Shr: ek or baat is F.H se bahar mt jana it is d safest place ok?? Security cameras ……. Protective shields sb hain!
—-Sumo ws impressed—
Uper jao ab rest kro……ur room is d left 1 n yeah everything is in d room…… If u need anything then tell me i am here……go
Sumo goes to hr room—
She think in her mind: thanks Shr fr saving me…….she goes near window….u did a lot fr me… how can i repay u?? –
—she also thinks abt punchered tires—-
Hmm…. Toh is liay mere tire punchered kiay….poora did mujhe ignor kara Tha na…..pta Tha tmhe ke mai itni easily nai maanne wali……smart 😀
(she smiles)
on d othr side Shr is sitting in tv launch…..–….
He thinks abt d whole day……….
Maine usky liay itna kuch kyun kia……? He ws confused—-
Agr uski jagah koi aur hota toh kya mai itna kuch krta…..?
—he also luks at the sky frm window—–
Screen freezes on both faces—

Precap: sm masti n romance…….

So guys how ws d ep ??!! 😀
get ready fr sm masti n romance— 😉

n yeah wat u think?? who will fall fr othr frst Shr or Sumo?? 🙂
Socho socho…… 😀
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Luv u all!! 😀 [4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ❤❤
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ?

Credit to: maria

27 comments

    • maria

      Thanks alot yr….! M really glad u liked it……. 🙂
      Keep luving n cmmnting.. 🙂

  1. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Maria meri jaan aaj toh tune kamaal kar diya….ab main aur kya kahin…I salute u dear…kya mast episode tha….loved it to the core….oh that Vicky i know shravan will not leave him so I have no tension…. But yr next jaldi post karna….m desperately waiting for sharman scenes
    Love u yr???

    • maria

      Awwww thank u soooo much khushi!! 😀 m really glad u like it yr…..!
      I will definately postcl soon…… 🙂

  2. Perry

    Awwww ??? …. what an ep …. super duper hit ????? … Nd I think k sharavan ko pehly apni feelings k bary me pta chaly gaa ??? …. will b waiting for the next ff … update soon ??

    • maria

      Thanks alot dear……!!!!
      Well thanks agin fr d ans!! Lets see wat happen!
      Will post soon…..!

  3. MissAaira

    Omg.omg.omggggg mariaaaaa kya mast hai yaar!!!! Kitni bhi tareef karo kam hoga
    Tumhari skillls kitni achi wowwwwww I juz loved it.. plss next update jaldi karo desperately waitngggggg
    Aaj hi karna plssssssss!!!

    • maria

      Awww thanks alot Aaira…..!!
      Thanks fr such sweet cmplments! But i am nt dat much good yr…….. 😀
      I will definately post soon….. :l glad u liked it….
      Keep loving n cmmnting!

  4. nikita

    amaazingg……….!! good to know that shravan’s innocent.. i think sumo would fall first..

    -nikita (same one.. just not logged in.. 🙂 the smallest one 🙂 )

  5. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Wow amazing….loved it….Yaah really I didn’t expect that Vicky angle to come….it was really good…post soon!!
    🙂

  6. LovelyLady

    |Registered Member

    Maria… wt shd i say after readng this …… no wrds at all… speechless……???
    I cn say jst one thng that i m proud to be sis of sch a beautiful wrtr..
    Waiting fr the nxt epi eagerly…. ???????

    • maria

      Awwww thank u soo mch fr such a sweet cmmnt Di…….. 🙂
      M also consider myself really lucky to have such an amazing ,talented n supportive sis lyk u…..!! 😀

  7. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    yaar maria tuney kya shi plan socha kidnapping ka.. loved it yaar shravan is so sweet.. thanks it was mast???

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