hate to love a shraman fan fiction part-1

hy guysss !!
my name is maria hope u know me i started comments on some ff’s well this is my first fanfiction i am inspired by great ff writers like khushii sumo and lovely ladyyy my fav !! so guysss plzz do comment on my ff i really want ur support plzzzz
so lets start .
a big mansion is shown
yes it is malhotra mansion:
a boy is shown sitting on a sofa playing video games on tab
one lady came near him with fake anger
lady: shravan ye tum hameshaaa games khelte rehto beta kuch parh lia karo papa ki business mai help kara dia karo
yes the guy is our tall n handsome shravan : mom ! abhi toh meri khelne khudne ki umar hai naughtily 😛
and the lady is lovely nirmala shravan’s mom
nirmala gets angry for real
n: kuch toh sharam karo 20 ke ho gai ho is or sab choro apne chote bhai se hi kuch seekh lo tumse chota hai phir bhi dad ki help bhi karata hai study bhi karta hai or shaadi bhi kar raha hai
shr : mom to wo puhskar hai mai shravan hoon u know na andaaz apna apna 😀
nir: shravan boht ho gaya agar ab tum nai sudhre na toh mai !!
shr: toh mai kya mom
nir: toh mai tumhaari shadi karadoon gi
shr: acha kis se kon si larki aisi hai dunya mai jo mujhe jaise play boy se shaadi karana chahe gi han??
nir: confused ek hai
shr: kon batain mujhe bhi..
nir: amm amm wo she gets a name suman!!
shr: shocked kon kon wo suman..suman kapoor mrs kapoor ki beti london wali
nir: yes beta…!
shr: laughs out loud hahahahah what a joke mom ap ko kya lagta hai wo london mai beth kar mujh se shaadi kare gi ??!
nir: ji nai london mai nh india aakar gi kare gi han ji beta aaarahi hai wi india tumhe sudhaaarne !! ( saying this she goes away) smiling
shravan was standing there in shock
shr : what the !? mujhe sudhaare gi !! mai bhi dekhta hoon ke….
( before he can complete a cute faced guy is shoen coming towards him he shouts )
guy : ooo bhaiya kya ho kis ko dekho gai bhee??
shr: abay yr phuskar paka mar
yes he is our cutie pushkar
push: kya hai bhai itna shadoo kyun ho rahe hooo chote bhai ki shaadi hai enjoy!!
shr : chup kar ja saaale pata nh tujhe bhi abhi hi shaadi karni thi kya
push : kyun bhai kya ho gaya???
shr: avay yr shaadi teri ho gi or lagta hai band baaja mera baje gaaa 🙁
push : kyun bhai ? kya hoa
shr: yr wo aarahi hai mujh se shaadi karne
push: confuse kon?!!!
shr: suman!!
push: hain!??? kon kon??! suman
shravan : nods angrily yes!
on the other side a plane is shown landing on runway and a girl is shown getting our of the plane wearing white jeans , black top and glasses
girl : hello INDIA !!!!!!!!!
screen freezes on both shravan angry and girl’s happy face
precap : shravan sees a girls playing with kids ..
so how was the epi guysss plz do comment i really need ur comment i know i am not as expert as great ff writers but i will definately improve my writing skills and will do my best !!
love u all
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ❤❤
[4:11pm, 2016-06-16] H: ?

Credit to: maria

34 comments

  1. BEING A SILENT READER

    its an awesome ff maria nice efforts but don’t u think pushku is marrying so early i mean u understand that : )

  2. Khushi

    |Registered Member

    Wow…. Maria….u r amazing kaun kehta hai ki yeh tumahari first ff hai….it’s awesome…..loved it yr…..and especially the mother son convo….yeh padh me mujhe meri and my mom ki yaad aa gyi…..meri mom bhi hamesha mujhe yahi kehti hai…..han but shaadi wali baat nhi kehti??
    Awesome yr…..keep it up….love u

  3. Maria

    Thank a lot bhoomi di !

    Really guyssss thank u soooooo much for supporting me i am really glad that u like it and I will try my best to make it better and better thank a lot again
    Love u all….!!! 🙂

  4. sumo

    it was sooo sweet … “aa rai hai tujhe sudharne” awww.. it was so cute… waise u kept me in ur inspiration list dats so sweet of u … I don’t think m worth it but its really sweet .. thanks.. ❤

    • Maria

      Thank u so much sumo di I was waiting for ur comment !! And yeah u r also my inspiration u r amazing ! Writer!! 🙂

  5. sona

    First thing..maria..you tried..it..very well..and its a nice entry..and gud starting..☺
    Second..I’m happy to listen that u r inspired from our friends..khushi..sumo..lovely..??
    Ya.. I may read ur name on some comments..I’m getting some slashes in my mind..??
    Yaar..even..I too feel to write..ff.when I involve in reading..all (kushi..sumo ..lovely..and u and others)of ur ff*s..but I’m not at all a writer..but..wanna be justt a good reader..for all of you..??☺

  6. Maria

    Awwww sona that’s sooooo sweet of u thank u soooo much for commenting …..! Love u dear glad that u loved it keep loving and commenting like this!! 🙂 🙂

  7. Maria

    No worries sona m Also not a writer but just write it cause I am inspired by all Amazing ff writers so u can also if u want to 🙂 🙂 🙂

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