I hate love..but I love u…a shraman OS ( ek duje ke vaaste )

Hy guys!!
Maria here wid d 12 OS..!!
Today is a very special day fr me…!!! Ahhaha Batao Batao nai ji guess karo…!! πŸ˜€
Hahahah so I thought to write it fr u all….it’s a treat fr me to all…!!
Hope u enjoy this OS……

Story strts wid…a girl is sitting on couch taking to her FRND…..
FRND: yr sumo this Tania won’t get changed…
Sumo: u r ri8..Meghna… Abhi abhi is ka breakup hoa hai n she again fell in love?
M: no yr koi luv nai hai…..awain bs attraction As always….
—both laughs—
Tania cms singing I m In love….

M: ufff sumo plzz do smthing paka dia hai is ne…
Sumo: wait…
Sumo goes to Tania.
Aww Tania baby….u r in love..??
T: no ishq true ishq one n only ishq..!!
S: haha ooohoooo ishq ek bar wala…
T: yep…!!
S: so that means u don’t luv ur tablet..
T: who said it’s my jaan…,
S: really bt u said that u love only that who..?
T: Rohan. Bt I love him…
S: so u don’t love ur tablet..??

T: no I love it…! More than anything!
S: bingo..! U only love ur tablet not that Rohan..
(T gets confused )
S: that’s why it hate boys n I don’t have any bf….
S: ok then m going n u think abt ur tab n Rohan by…
Meghna giggles…..
—n Tania goes in a deep thought—-

On the othr side a boy is consoling his FRND…
FRND crying: shr she left…me…
Shr: awww rohit…plz don’t cry…
(Shr luks at his second FRND abhi who is trying hard to control his laugh)
Shr: it’s her mistake she didn’t c our heera….
—-After hearing this abhi bursts out in laugh…—-
R: Saale tu hans raha hai…!
A: abay u r crying lyk child jail insan….did u c any boy crying after break up its girls thing…bewaaqoooooooof….
S: that’s y I hate girls n don’t have any gf..
R: shut up…(he throws pillow at abhi)
Shr: hahahah acha m leaving talk yo u later…..is ko sambhal
(he laughs n leaves)

On d way two cars are driving at Same speed side by side showing as they r reaching wid EACHOTHR…..
In black car shr is sitting…..
N in white one sumo…..
Shr thinks: I won’t let u win this easily girls can’t win over boys….
S thinks: I will never let u win….girls can do anything…
—-Suddenly shr car goes above her….she gets shock n he strt teasing her by not giving her way……—-

S: ahhhhh y is he no moving a side n also not giving me space…!! She beeps…..
Shr: no dear…u will not win….
They race lyk this n suddenly sumo drifts …n turns.her car…in such a ways that she gets abbΓ© his car…..
S: ye hoi na baat…!
Shr: wat the hell…?
(Both cars stops n they both get down frm their cars in anger)
S: wat d hell do u think u r huh???!!!!!! Y were u nt me way..??
Shr: ooo hello Jhansi ki rani…chup…u were racing wid me..?? Remember..!!
S: so were u nt!!!?
Shr: Ooo hello !! Yes I admitt I WS racing cause it’s only boys thing..
S: aaahaaaa u told u mr akroooooo khadooos??
Shr: excuse me wat did u call me..??
S: haww I think u need full treatment…!! Paise kam parhen na toh mujhse mang Lena…
(Actually guys she knows that he is rich.after all she can c such an expensive car of him….she is just saying these things to make him angry)

Shr cms to her n splashes his drink on her dress—-
S: wat the hell…!!
–she got so angry that she WS abt to slap him bt he holds her hand n pindps her to her car—
Shr: don’t even think to do dat wid me…..I m not that type of boy who will bear this…
—she can c the anger in his eyes n can only hears his breath cause shr is so close to her face—
Sumo gets a little scared…..
Shr leaves her n goes towards his car…
Sumo: I will c u mr khadooos..,
—shr wid out lurking back–
Shr: .nt khadooos it shravan malhotra..or Han dekhlena 2290 malhotra mansion
S is so irked now….

Scene chages that sumo goes home in anger…
Her dad Aditya: beta wats all this??
P her mom: uff ye larki phir panga karke aai hai na..!
S: mom nai wo……
P: sumo how many tyms I told u not to do this panga go chage don’t u knw that we have to meet adi’s best FRND ram bhai sahab….or Han dress Nicely in karti no pant shirt……
S: mom..!!!
P: go!

Scene chages to the way….
—sumo thinks whole way that bcz of dat creep shr her parents scold her she will nt leave him—-
They reach….
Sumo gets out of car n strt walk towards d entrance….
While walking…she sees 2290 malhotra mansion…
—she wonders that she heard this name before—
—suddenly she remembers n give a dead expression—-
They enter n malhotra’s greets them…
They all sit n chit chat…..
Sumo eyes r searching fr shr…..she says in mind dat she is gone now if it’s really his house….
Nir : aahhhh shr aagaya….

—s luks back…n shraman gets shocked to c EACHOTHR—-
Shr cms n take blessing of elders then sits wid all….
—shraman keeps staring EACHOTHR—-

Nir: so ab baat Karen..??
P: kyun nai…(smiles)
Ram: adi…Mai hamari dosti ko rishtedaari Mai badalna Chanta hoon….Mai APNE bΓͺte shr ke liay tumhari beti sumo ka hath manga hoon….
—shraman jaws drop in shock as they heard abt their alliance—
Adi: hame manzoor hai….

Nir: so bachoan se pooch te hain…
They ask to shraman….n they Luk at EACHOTHR……
Shr thinks smthing…..n says yes which gives a double shock to sumo……
Sumo has no option left instead of saying yes….
Ram: so should we fix engagement date…..
Adi: ram……..I think we should fix d date after 3 days wats say….????
(Everyone agrees…..except shraman…..they didn’t say a word but gets agree)

Everyone is talking ……
While talking sumo by mistake splits juice on shr…which makes him angry but he doesn’t say a word n goes to his room fr changing…..
—-sumo follows him…in order to talk to him——
(She opens d door widout knocking…don’t knw dat shr is changing…cause she is hell angry wid his decision)
S: shr….!!! (She gets shock seeing him shirtless…..n turns back) aahhhh sorryyyy….!!!!
Shr: don’t u have any manners…???
S: can’t u lock ur door….?????
Shr: watever…..
S: put ur shirt on I want to talk to u…..
Shr: no I won’t….
S: wat….
Shr: yes can’t u talk to me wid out my shirt ohhh…!!!! I remember u girls can’t control ur self seeing a handsome n hunk boy shirtless… Haina…????
S: wat the hell….!!!! (She turns to him wod full attitude) look mister I knw tumhe APNE baare Mai bht si ghalat faimiaaaan hain….pr as fr ur knowledge….I tell u that m not that type of girl…!!!!! Ok…..!!!!!
(She goes out pf d room wid anger)
(Shr gets impressed by her….cause she didn’t even blink while talking to him….)
(On d othr side…..sumo get out n breaths heavily)
Both: wat is happening to me……..

Scenes changes after 1 day……..
Sumo is sitting in her room reading sm books….
A servant cms to her…..
Ser: ma’am ur engagement dress is here…..
(Sumo gets up to c)
(It’s a beautiful baby pink gown wid silver stones……)
S: wow….!!!! Wat a beautiful gown…!
She goes near d gown…..
N reads a chit….she was continuously smiling…..
“Don’t smile too much”

Her eyes widen in shock..she luks around her….
S: how does he knw…..(she reads)
“I knw u liked it isn’t it…..?? Well that’s my choice…”
Her smiles fades aways…..(she reads)
“Aray where is ur smile….?? Bcz it’s my choice aww it’s not I was lying…u can smile now”
S gets shocked: how d hell does he know..????
(She smiles)
S: uff….!!

Engagement day:
Sumo cms down wearing d same gown….n shr gets mesmerized to c her…..
She stands in front of him….
Shr: looking so so…..
S: u r luking qutub minar as always….
Shr: Oy…!

(Then they exchange rings….while luking at eaChOther)
Sumo thinks: ahhh …….he is d person now which I have to spent my whole life…OMG….but he is handsome…nai.,.oooohhoo wat m I thinking…I can he is my fiancΓ©….

Shr thinks: I have many gf’s but I never think that I will marry I girl whom I didn’t knw…..who is so……(he luks in her deep eyes) beautiful…..hey….wat m u saying…..?? I don’t like her…..no…no…she is not that bad…….

After two days……
Both r going fr shopping…..n they r alone in d car….
Shr: u know wat….I never understand y girls have so much tym fr wasting I mean seriously….??? Shopping…??? Uff
S: hahah like u r so busy na….??? U r always free don’t u have evn 3 hours fr ur own fiancΓ©….??
(She gets quite fr a while…..on d name of fiancΓ©…she to looking at her)
(She suddenly changes d topic)

Shr: u knw wat…tumna ek CHATI phir it musibat ho…!
S: wat…?!!! D hell!!
Shr: yes….
S: hawww itna hi tangg aai hoi hona then shadi kyun kar rahe ho…??
Shr: hahaha majboori….mujhe ek moqa Milne do tumhe APNE raste se hat doon ga..!!
S: so mean….!! Go to hell!!
Shr: along wid u…!!
(She hits his shoulder)
Shr: ouch…!!
Suddenly they stop d car bcz of sm People standing in front of them…..
Shraman luks at eaChOther….
Shr strts to go out of d car……
Snholds his hand: plz don’t go….
(He signs her nothing will happen…he tells her to lock d car frm inside)
Shr: Han bhee…..wat d prob?? Y r u standing in b/w!??
(Goons c sumo….)
One of them: chale Jaain gai……but…..

(Shr understands their motivations)
Shr: don’t even think abt it….!
2nd one: hey don’t cm in b/w we will go but we will take d girl wid us….
(Sumo gets shocked….n one if them strts to go towards d car)
Shr: hey…!..!!!! (D goons strt to hit him)
S shouts : shr!!!
Shr: do to cm outside!!!!
(Goons tries to open d door……but failing….they broke d glass with stone n sumo shouts…..)
Shr: don’t touch her…!!!!!!
S: plzzzz don’t !!
One goon: come out frm this car warna…..

(He keeps d knife on shr neck)
Sumo gets shocked…..
G: cm out…
Shr: no!!!!
G laughs: hahaha I heard some where ke Jo pyaar karta hai wo kuch Bhi kar Sakta hai…!!
Shr gets shocked……
2nd goon: hey girl cm out….if u don’t come out n go with us than u can c…..
(She c’s d goon is standing wid a knife oh shr throat….
Sumo cms out frm d car silently….
Shr gets more shocked…..
S: plz leave him…..I will go wid u…..
Goon: wo toh Jana hi pade ga baby…!
(He touches her cheeks….it makes his (shr) anger unbearable…..he gets a chance n beats than hard n hard…..)
S cms to him: plzzz shr plzz leave them…..
(His hands was full of blood…..some of his…n some of goons…)
Shr: no..!!! I will not leave them!!!!
S: plzzz shr….!!!
Goons run away…!!
Shr: y did u stop me….!!
S: plzzz cm wid me…!!

(They sit in d car n goes home)
S: wait I will dress it….(his wound)
Shr: no m alright…
(She insists…..n dresses his wound…they share a cute eyelock…)
Shr: y did u cm out frm the car…u could have strt it….n run away…
S: y did u let them beat u….?? Fr me….
(Both gets silent…n a voice spams frm their…”it’s love”)
S: I…I think I should go…,
(She strts to go….but shr says)

Shr while luking down: y….??
(She luks back wid confusion)
S luks at her….: y..?? Y did u cm in my life…! U r making me crazy..!! Day n ni8 I think abt u only…!!
(Sumo has tears….)
Shr pins her to d wall: ahhh again m thinking abt u….?? Aahhh m going crazy.,,!!!! CRAZY IN LOVE WITH U….!!!!
(Sumo gets shocked n tearly eyed…..)
Shr too gets shock by his confession……he luks at her….n she goes…..
Shr sits their……thinking abt everything….

2 DAYS PASSES….n in two days they both think abt eaChOther only…..
Sumo cms to him….
S: I….I…was thinking…….
Shr: no…need….I understand……
S: I think abt it….n….
Shr: Luk I don’t know…..wat happened to me…I was….
S: ummm it’s it’s Oky…..actually I also want to say d same maybe….
(She gets shy n he luks at her in confusion….surprise n happiness)
S: so…..
Shr: so can we strt our relation….wait a good strt…??
S: hmm…..we r going to marry….so..Han we can….
Shr hugs her…..: so u r my FRND…..!! My fiancΓ©…!! N my would be wifey !!
(She gets more shy)

3 years later…..
Shraman r now a happily married couple….
(A pic of their marriage is shown on wall)
S is reading a diary which was written by her….

“I never think that I will marry someone….whom I never knw whom I hated at Frst….but he…maybe he knws how to control me….how to control my anger….he is d man…who made me fell in love wid him…I HATED LOVE BUT I FELL IN LOVE WID HIM”

She sees shr….who is coming wid a baby….named neeti….
Shr: Han…!! (He claps) my baby strts to walk Luk sumo…
(Sumo also cheers….)
S: god give me everything…..I can never wish fr more……she smiles…..n luks outside……
S: thank u so much god….!
Shr: hey sumo cms here…!
S: ya coming…!!
(She closes d diary n goes to them fr playing…,)

HAPPY ENDING…!!!

So guys done…..
Now tell me how’s it….??
Was it good or okok….
Sho shorty fr making u all bored if it’s boring….
Aray yr Aj toh maaf kardo…. πŸ˜€

Acha acha now if loved it itto sa Bhi them cmmnt….I need it today…!! N Han ur love too…!!
By by
Love u all…!!!

55 comments

  1. pretty preeti

    Maro yaar happy birthday may youive for long itni aachi ff diary kaha se sochti hai meri sis
    Love u infinity
    Loved os very muchmuch
    Meri maro ka bday hai cake toh kila de tera gift pohanch gya ki nhi
    Happy birthday to you
    Happy birthday to you
    Happy birthday to you
    Happy birthday to dear mark
    Happy birthday to you
    Happy birthday dear
    Aaj kaisa banaya bday tune
    Mujhe toh invite nhi kiya very bad chocolate toh de deti
    But tune itni aachi is deni no need of Amy thing
    Love u
    Mera mn kr raha hai ki maii likti rho lekin hath izazat nhi de rhe
    Happy birthday once more
    Love u
    May God bless u
    Take care
    Lot s of luv
    Happy birthday
    Os was just awesome loved it
    Love u

    • Marie

      |Author

      ❀❀❀😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 omg thank u thank u so much yr….!!!!
      U r soo sweet my dear ❀❀❀ the best ever wish……!! Ur cmmnt is just amazing……!! It made my day more more n more special my preeto…..!!!
      thank u so much
      u r such a sweet heart yr……..!!!!
      Aww sho sorry my sweeto pr yr tu invited hai tujhe invitations ki zaroorat hai kya ye bata……??
      Hahahaha maine bhi neeche cake gift kardia…….hope u like it πŸ˜‰
      Thank u so much dear
      so sweet of u…..
      Love u more than everything……!!
      Take care
      muahhhhhh
      love u
      by bh

  2. Nikita

    |Registered Member

    Ayy hayy !!
    Happyy birthdayy… !! I have wished you, but once again a happyy birthdayy!!
    Kya OS tha yaar.. Loved it to the core..
    Very cute.. Very adorable.. Bichari Tania.. Does she love her tablet or Rohan??
    Aww.. Neeti would be so touched by this!!
    Loved it..
    Once again,
    Happpyyy birthdayy!! Enjoy hard.. All the best for your exam..
    Loads of love,
    Nikko

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey my Nikki……!!!!!
      Aww thank u once again yr…..!!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Thank u so much glad that u liked d OS…. I was praying that u all like this n u liked…! Yay…!! Mehnat wasool πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      Hahaha Tania baby……
      I hope neeto like this…… πŸ™‚
      Thank u dear….!!! Thank u so much….!!!
      M considering my sip elf d luckiest girl on earth…..biz I have loving sisoooooz like u all….!!!
      Love u so so so much se bht bht ziada!
      Take care….!!
      Thanks alt fr best wishes….!!
      Love u….!!! A lot of kisses…!!
      Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

  3. Angel_pari

    |Registered Member

    Alyyyy my cutiee pie….
    Wish u a very very happy birthday may u will get all the happiness of world….
    May God bless u with a happy peacefull and successfull life…..
    May ur every dream come true….
    Love u loads nd loads….

    Ary yeh kya birthday girl ne hme e gift de diya or wo b itna pyara!!!! Loveed it it was really nyc….

    Wese how is gng day….
    Gifts mile????? Sbse cute gift kya tha πŸ™‚

    love u be happy and stay blessed πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey angel API……!!!
      Thank u sooo so soooo much fr such sweet n lovely wishes….!!! πŸ™‚
      Really lucky to have a loving sis like u….!!!

      Hahaha glad that u liked it…….I was praying that u all like dis….n thank god…. πŸ˜€
      Hmm good….I enjoyed….but but I was he’ll busy in studies so…..didn’t get much tum….but pair Bhutto I enjoyed….. πŸ˜‰
      Hahaha Beshumaar gifts mile……but sabre cute gift……yahan pr Ana or ap Sab ka pyaar,sweet wishes….dekhna thi……n it is d most special bday fr me till now……..!!
      .
      .
      Love u so much API…….!!!
      Always remain happy happy………….!!
      Take care …!!!

  4. Zainab

    Heyy it’s your bday πŸ˜€ I didn’t know that πŸ™ˆ
    Anyway,
    A very happy birthday to you. May you live a long, happy, healthy and successful life. May all your wishes and dreams come true.
    Happy birthday sweetie 😘

    And yeah nice os πŸ‘
    Loads of love sweetheart πŸ’œ

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey stainable API…..!!
      Aww that’s not a prob……!! Now u knw…… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ m glad that u liked the OS…..!!
      Thank u so much fr ur sweet wishes……!!!
      Lucky to have a sis like u….!!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Love u so much
      Take care…..!!!!!

  5. sneha

    Happy birthday Marie dii….this was so amazing …may be I’m new fr u ….becoz I’m silent reader..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey sneha….!! Thank u so much sweeto….! Really glad to c that u commented…… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      U r new but……u r my reader….so ur a frnd….!! Keep commenting dear…..!!
      Again thank u lots of luv….!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  6. Sss

    |Registered Member

    bah bah kya story hein hai mein marjaba..you know what am amazed itna sara kahani tomhate dimag mein ate kahase I mean very os is splendid awesome new plot everything that too in perfection loved it dear seriously this os kind of similar to our original shraman character Always fighting but care for eachother also as always amazing os loved it..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey SSS……. Hahahah thank u so so so much fr itinerary ziada tareef yr…..hahaha itni mama be bhi nai ki…..!!! Glad that u liked it……!! I was hoping dat u like it….n u did…! Thank u…!!
      Hahha bs aahijata hai an he se dimaagh Mai….. πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ anyways thanks a lot fr such a sweet comment……!!
      Lots of luv
      Take care

  7. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria my cute sissi..
    Happy Birthday dear..
    May god bless u wid lots of happiness and success…
    Sorry yr maaf krde mjhe pta n that ki Aaj tumhara birthday hai… m very sorry..
    How r u dear??
    Wow.. OS was mindblowing …
    loved it…
    Love you..
    Ruchi… πŸ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Ruchi API…..!!!
      Thank u thank u sooooo much API…..!!!!!!
      Thanks a lot fr ur sweet n lovely wishes……!!
      Awwww no prob at all…..!!! But u wished na….!! πŸ˜€
      M good how r u…?? πŸ™‚ all fun shine….??
      How r studies going….?
      Thank u so much API…..!!
      Glad that u liked it….
      Love u so much
      Take care
      Frm ur siso Maria πŸ˜‰

  8. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    happy birthday maro di…!!
    happy birthday maro di…..!!
    happy birthday maro di…..!!
    it was fabulous jhakas kamaal dhamaal episode…!! love u lotssssssssssssss maro di….!! take care…..!! keep smiling always???….!!

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey my sweeto !!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Aww thank u so much
      Thank u so much
      Thank u so much my dear…..!!! πŸ™‚ thanks a tone fr ur sweet wishes…..!!
      Thanks atone m really glad that u liked it yr…..!!! I too love u more than se bhi bht bht ziada….!!
      Love u baby….!!!
      Muahhhhhhhh
      Take care….!!!

    • Marie

      |Author

      hey niyati !! Thank u so much yr……!!
      M really glad that u liked it…..!!
      Love u tooooo dear…..!!
      Take care…..!!
      Stay blessed….!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  9. sona

    Happy birthday maria…
    And lots of love to u…πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
    Ya…I liked the os very much😊😊

  10. Anamika

    Happy bday maro
    Kno m late bt yet
    God bless uh bany
    Hope u get all th happiness in life
    Have a bindass yr ahead….😘
    N ya this shot was awesome
    Loved it so so much

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Anna API&….!
      No..no u r not late it’s still 11:58 here πŸ™‚
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u so much API…..!! Glad that u liked it…..!!!
      Take care
      Love u so much…..!!!
      Ur sisoooo
      Maria….,!
      Muahhhhh

  11. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwww…Such a cute OS. Loved it a lot. Ur writing girl! Touched my heart. Nd a special day…. Happy birthday sweetie. Have a wonderful year ahead. Stay cute like this. U r sooo adorable. A huge heart from me (sry typing from PC so no emoji) <3 Love u alotttt. Stay blessed nd keep smiling. Hugs nd kisses
    Muuuuaaaahhhhh
    LOVE x a billion
    Ariana

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey Ariana….!!! Omg thank u so much fr such a wonderful comment my dear…!!! M so glad that u liked it……. I was hoping ke pas and a jai…..hah thank god pas and a Gaya…..!!!
      Thank u so much fr b’day wish my sweetheart…..!!!! U r so sweet n amazinggggg thank u so much …..!!!
      Luckiest……to have a sisooo like u……!!!
      Thank u so much sweeto……!!! God bless u dear…….!!
      I LOVE U……INFINITY SE BHI BHT ZIADA………!!!!
      Take care…..!!! Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

  12. ......Kaya......

    |Registered Member

    Whoa…such a cute and sweet OS…….loved it …….. you wrote it really beautifully….loved reading it……it was awesome…. amazing…… perfect…….and ya Happy birthday……… have a wonderful day ahead…… God bless you……… many many happy returns of the day……….love you….
    Hugs and kisses from my side…….

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey maya darling……..!!! Thank u sooooo soooo sooo much fr commenting dear….!!! M really glad that u liked d OS thank god…… πŸ™‚
      Away that’s so sweet thank u so much fr bday wishes yr……!!! Luckiest to have a sisoooo like u….!!
      God bless u dear…..always be happy….n keep smiling,laughing….!!!
      Love u too…..!!!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

  13. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    hehehehehe Shravan pehle se uska reaction janta tha…..
    awwww so sweet Shravu ne Sumo ke liye sab kiya
    sry again late
    woowwww Mere nam pe Shraman ke beti ka nam, birthday apka tha aur gift apne mujhe de diya, Nikki di sahi keh rahi thi
    Happy Belated Birthday again
    thanks fr d gift, I’m having heart attack u know wen I saw my name mera mu khul gaya
    luv u itna itna itna zyada ki koi itna luv kar nahi sakta- Leeti

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey darling…!!!
      Hahahahahha yr Tera comment padh kar dil khush hojata hai……!! Tu itni itni itni sweet hai Mai kya batao…….!!!! M really happy that u liked d OS…….!!!
      Thank god…..!! Hahahaha koi nai koi nai….!! Tu mere laity special hai dear…..!!!! Bht special…!!!
      Hahah thank u so much my sweetheart……!!! Wish u always remain happy……n funny…!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      Hahahaha beta Herat attack mat la……agar tujhe heart attack agar toh mera Kay hoga…!!! Mai waise hi mar jaon gi bhe……!!! Behen ka Socho….!!! Tune mujhe itne ache ache gift diay a return frm me….!!!!
      Love u us se bhi ziada ke koi soch bhi nai sakta……..ab behessss mat Karan πŸ˜€ is bar I won’t give up…..!!! Never…….!!!
      Meriii cutooooo leetoooooooooo πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

      • Neeti

        |Registered Member

        😭 me behes karungi jab tak ap har nai manoge I luv u usse bhi zyada ki duniya wale kya aliens bhi nai soch sakte
        huh marne ki bat mat karna ap jante hona me apse kitna pyaar karti hu mare apke dushman, maru me ap aisi bate mat karna…πŸ˜­πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹ye sab hearts and kisses apke liyaπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œye bhiπŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹ πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹πŸ’‹aur ye bhi hehehehehe

      • Marie

        |Author

        Awww hahahahah aliens bhi hairan…..!!! Hnhahahaha mai tujhse bhess mai nai jeet sakti…..!!!! Lekin still i love u….more than anything else….!!! Tu maan ya na maan…!!!
        Haye mera behna ro rai hai acha nai ro mat bhe…!!! Emotional blackmailer kahin ki…!!! Ja i give up this tym bt nxt tym ye rona bhi kaam nia aaye ga..!!!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

        Awwwwwww thank u so much fr loving a crazyyyy person like me this much !!!!!
        I LOVE U MORE THAN ANYTHING ELSE….!!!!!!
        these hearts n kisses r so sweet of u……!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 or ue sab dil tumhare liay…!!!! My sweetheart……!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  14. Smile

    Happy birthday marie ………πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ«πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ«πŸ°πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ«πŸ« many many happy returns of the day …… I know that I& u are not so close … But I wish u from core if my ….heart ……..may God bless u with a long life…

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey smile…….!!! Awww thank u so so so much dear….!!! Hahahah itne tasty cakes !! Thank u so much dear….!!! M really glad that u cmmnted….!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Hmm that not a prob then so can we be friends….??? If u dont mind….. πŸ™‚

      Thank u so much fr ur sweet wishes my dear….!!!
      Keep loving n cmmnting my dear…..!!

      Lots of luv…!!!
      Maria….. πŸ˜‰

  15. DevSona

    |Registered Member

    Oh! Maria….The OS was awesumm πŸ™‚ an cute….. the line stole my heart “I HATED LOVE BUT I FELL IN LOVE WID HIM” ssssuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    lots of luv,
    ummmmmm
    DevSona πŸ˜‰

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey devsona……!!!
      Omg u commented…….!!! M so happy……thank unso much fr this sweet comment my dear….!! M so glad that u lied this OS…..!!! Thank u yr…..!!!
      Well 1 thing can we be frnds….??? If u don’t mind…. πŸ™‚

      Love u too dear…..!!! Muahhhhhhhhhh
      Frm Maria…..! πŸ˜‰

      • DevSona

        |Registered Member

        Sorry, that u got surprised….I know I don’t comment frequently and only comment if I liked it way much and you got that πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ N no need to thank dear…I truly liked it…

        I’ll be more than happy to be friends with you Maria….So friends???

        P.s. : Good times+Crazy friends= Amazing Memories. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

      • Marie

        |Author

        Hahaha no worries of corse we r frnds yr…..!!!! πŸ˜€ now we r frnds so can i knw ur age..?? N somthing abt u ……. If u dont mind πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

        Let me introduce my self frst…..
        Hello my name is maria…..i 14 years old crazy girl πŸ˜€ lives in Karachi Pakistan…n m in class 10 πŸ™‚

        πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

      • DevSona

        |Registered Member

        Ohh! so I’m elder than you πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ I’m 16 and studying in 11th std in Gujarat, India. πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  16. Vanshika

    |Registered Member

    Maria di hi πŸ™‹ I love ur OS very much u r awesome writer u dint bore at al I love u 😘..
    Wish u a very very happy belated birthday πŸŽ‚ and a happy Janamashtami πŸ˜ŠπŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽˆπŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸ©πŸ«πŸ¦πŸ§πŸ¨
    Loved shraman. Hate to love u r awesome.. 😊 😘

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hey vanshika…,,.!!! M so so so happy that u cmmnted my dear….!!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Awww thank u so so so much se bhi ziada yr… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ cakes choclates n ice creams r so yummy yummy….!!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
      Thank u so much dear….!! M glad that u liked the os…….. πŸ™‚
      Omg u read my prev ff……hate to love….tahrs so sweet of u….!!! N yeah happy janmashtami to u too dear……!!! Enjoy….!!!
      Lots of love
      Maria….!!!
      P.S can we be friends if u dont mind…,?? πŸ™‚

      • Vanshika

        |Registered Member

        Yup di v cn b friends I’m in class 8th… Love you 😍 😘 😍 😘 😍 I loved urfanfic bt never gt time to comment.. Ur OS was fab…

      • Marie

        |Author

        Yay….!! Thats great than…..!!! Aww i love u too dear….!! Hahah 8 class phit toh tum meri choto behna hoi…!! Cause m in 10th πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
        No prob yr…..!!! Lekin thank u so much glad that u liked it πŸ™‚
        Love u so much
        Take care…!!

  17. Ufaaq

    |Registered Member

    U know what today first time in my life I did something. Which resulted my eyes to flow and my head bend in shame
    First of all sorry love I m very very sorry I really didn’t knw that it was ur birthday I always wish everyone firstly I m sorry but I got busy with my bro but that doesn’t mean u will forgive me u can give me any punishment any u can
    Love I m very very sorry
    Happy birthday mmy love may god give u honourof celebrating this day 100 more time I ur life and may u get all those which u have wished love
    I m sooooo sooooorrrrrrryyyyyy but dnt be angry u can give me a any any punishment
    Os as usual was amazing bt still ufaq API is very sad
    It was tooooo gud infact was amazing I loved it
    Sorry love
    ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀ ❀
    Happy birthday again
    Take care my jan
    Love u my love
    API is first time very guilty in her life I m sorry

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awwwwwwwww Kia hogaya hai API….!!!!! Itna sorry itna guilt…???? Uff meri API ok koi Samhain bheeeee kitni bholi Hain bheeeee ye…….. πŸ˜€ btw apka guilty hone walk record kabhi nai tote ga ye toh mera promise hai kyun ek is baat bhi nai Toota or I knw ap kabhi nai toro gi…..!!!
      My API is d worlds most intelligent n brilliant girl ever…….!!!!!!!
      Sweet kind hearted….!!! Cutooooo and n amazing sisoooooooooooooooo
      Mujhe itto as bhi bura nai lag itttttoooo as bhi koi baat nai agar ap Bohol gai Kia mera b day ziada gi Mai ek hi baar ata hai ?? nai na toh phir y so guilty….?? Agle ASAP nai toh us se Agle saal nai toh us se Agle saal hahahahahahha or Han ek or baat meri bday to 24 se le kar Mai 30 august tak Manati Ranhoon gi…!! Kyun ek frst sep se grand tests strt Hain…..so aj toh 26 hai….!!! Hahaha ap bilk up bhi late nai hoi API…..!!! Or I can understand ap college student ho…n bros Jo itne Dino bad aai thai…..koi baat nai API…..!!!!
      Plz don’t be soryyyyyy
      N thank u soooooooooooooooo much fr dis sweetest comment ever…!!!
      Love u uncountable……!!!!!!!!!!!

  18. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    First of all m shoooooooooo shoooooooooo shoooooooooolyyyyyyyyy for being so much late … this OS was just amazinggggg yr .. don’t hv words .. in love wid this one .. nd a very happy belated birthday dear πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰βœ¨πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽŠπŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰βœ¨πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽˆβœ¨πŸŽ‰πŸŽ‰πŸŽˆπŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽŠπŸŽŠπŸŽ‡πŸŽ‰βœ¨βœ¨πŸŽˆπŸŽˆπŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽŠπŸŽ†πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ‡πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ†πŸŽ† ..
    Nd again very very sorry dear ..
    May Almighty Allah bless u with everything u want in ur life ..
    Stay blessed always .
    πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awwwwww don’t say sorry my dear…..!!!!❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 u r sooooo sweet my dear…..!!! Definitely no need to say sorry….!! U wished me that’s enough fr me….!!
      ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
      Awww thank u so so so much my dear….!! M really happy that u liked the OS my dear…!!!
      N thank u so much fr ur sweet wishes…!!
      Love u so much!!!!!!

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