Hate Filled With Love!! Chapter-9

Hii guys….Gopika here again…Thank you so much for your support…and here we go with chappy 9 ?


At Neil’s home…

Shwetha is doing first aid to Neil…
Shwetha; I never thought Juhi will do it… I called her here thinking she will patch up you with Avni as I think she is a good girl but she becomes the most wicked woman…

Neil; Maa…please stop it… I don’t hear anything about juhi..or think anything about him…I just want to think about my love…my Avni and my lil princess Nevia…i want to bring them back in my life…

Neil hugs Shwetha tightly and sadly…tears were filled I his eyes…

Neil; I want them in my life… I want my wife and my daughter back in my life… I can’t live without them maa. If I have shown belief in Avni..in our love…then this day wouldn’t have come… I could have my daughter and wife with me…but all went upside down by my mistake…Today she showed the belief in me…she proved I didn’t do anything…she showed the belief which I couldn’t do…whenever I close my eyes…My Avni’s and Nevia’s face comes to my mind…their hate to me comes to my mind…I cannot bear their hate… I cannot maa…

Neil cries in his mother’s arms…Shwetha rubs her hand throw his hair.

Shwetha; You have to bear that Neil…you are responsible to bear that hate…because the pain you give Avni is limitless…She married you thinking…you will always with her….will always be with her in hard and good times….and you will believe her even the whole world goes against her…but what did you do…you throw her out of your life in one second…even didn’t give her a chance for explaining her side….so don’t you think Neil..Avni’s hate is valid…and about Nevia…from the moment she born…she saw her mother in pain…..she would have seen her mother crying and the only reason she saw for her mothers pain was her father….and that led her to hate you…But still even inside their hate…they have the love for you…you should wipe that hate with your love…and bring their love out from that hate…

Neil(sadly); I don’t deserve them maa…

But they deserve you“…… Shwetha and Neil turn hearing the sound…

Neil; Aman…

Aman; Yes me… You said right Neil…you don’t deserve them…But they deserve you…they deserve a person like you…What you did to them is wrong…you can’t change what you did… but can change the future by bringing back in life…and not repeating your mistakes again…

Neil; but you…

Aman; Yea I told you to stay away from Avni…to not hurt her by coming again to her…But today I am saying to bring back Avni in your life…She still loves you…she needs you in her life…you guys won’t be happy if you both are not together… you should bring her back..because they deserve you…I am sorry I accused you of shooting Avni… I am sorry

Neil; don’t be sorry… if anyone other was in your position they will do the same… That was my punishment and I deserve that for what I did with my love…

Aman; promise me Neil…you will bring back the happiness in Nevia and Avni…

Neil; I promise… I will bring back them in my life…will not repeat my mistake…and will always be with her at both good and bad times…

Aman hugs him….and in his ears says..(harsh voice)
“everything is ok…but if you hurt her again…you will see my worst face…you will not able to bear it…did you get that”

Neil smiles seeing the brother’s concern and says; nothing will happen like that anymore…

Aman; good…ok bye…

Neil nods…Aman leaves…

Neil; I should do something to bring my queen and princess back in my life…I should wipe that hate they have for me… I will fill there life’s with love again…

Neil smiles …

At Avni’s home…

Nevia; maa…Mr.Neil Khanna wasn’t the one who shoot you…

Avni; yea…I am sorry I hide the fact that he is your father.

Nevia; Its ok maa…

By saying Nevia leaves…

Avni (sadly); I am sorry Nevia… I know how much you wanted a father…


Flashback…

One day,…Avni was cleaning Nevia’s room
She gets a diary and she smiles seeing Cute smilies …she opens it…
There was Avni’s photo between a lot of hearts…and it was written
“My mom…My queen…My best friend…My everything…”

She turns the page happily….but next moment her happiness vanished…tears roll down from her eyes…

There was an empty space…and was written
“My dad…whom I haven’t seen it…whom I want to be in my life… I miss dad in my life… I used to cry when my friends go with their fathers after school…while my friends say about their father I always kept quiet as I have nothing to say…when my friends fight saying their father is best… I moved away from there as I don’t even know who he is… I miss you… I hope I know who you are… I hope you were in my life…I can’t ask about you to mom…because I can’t hurt her..”

Avni closes the diary painfully

Flashback ends…


Avni; ‘I am sorry Nevia…i am really sorry…these much years you eagerly waited to know about your dad…to know about him…to live with him…Now when he is here you don’t want to go to him as you don’t want to see your mom hurt… I am hurt by what your dad did…and I will never go back to his life…that doesn’t mean I will let you be away from your dad… I will make everything alright between you and your dad…but I will never return to his life as a wife… I will do this as a mother…I will try to wipe the hate you have for him’

At Garden
Nevia is sitting sadly thinking about Neil and Avni…
She smiles happily seeing ice cream? in front of her…He smilingly looks up saying “maa…”
Soon her smile vanish off as it wasn’t her maa…but her papa
Nevia angrily turns her head..Neil sits beside her and asks

Neil; won’t you like to have ice cream princess…

Nevia angrily looks at Neil and says “maa says don’t accept or eat food from strangers”

The word stranger hurts him deeply… It was hard for him to be called as a stranger from his daughter…

Neil(sadly); I am your father, not any stranger.

Nevia; for me the one who makes my mother cry is always a stranger to me

Neil sadly looks at Nevia hearing her words…
But suddenly smiles and says “ok if you don’t want to have ice cream its ok… I will have it..”

By saying he starts to eat…
Nevia cutely looks at Neil through one eye…

Neil looks at her smilingly seeing that…
Nevia getting alerted by Neil’s staring looks away…
She again turns and keeps staring at ice cream?…with her tongue licking her lips…????

Neil smiles seeing his cute daughter and shows the ice cream? in front of her

Nevia looks away seeing that…
Neil; ok…you don’t need…
Before he takes it away…
Nevia takes it from him…

Nevia; I am eating this as I don’t hate icecreams… I can’t hurt icecream by rejecting it…

By saying he looks at Neil with the angry cute face…
And suddenly looks at Icecream ? happily…and enjoys it happily…

Nevia; sorry ice cream ? ji….i will eat you as fast as I can….so you don’t get hurt by melting down…

Neil laughs and smiles seeing his daughter’s sweet gestures and the way she talking…

Nevia happily eats the ice cream…While Neil adorns his child having icecreams…

After Nevia finishes her ice cream…she looks sadly at the plate…
Neil seeing it…worriedly asks... “what happen, dear”

She looks sadly at Neil and says… “It finished… I wanted more”

Neil smiles at her cute sad face…and pulls her cheeks and says “I will get you more..

Nevia smiles at him happily…but suddenly her smile vanishes and her angry face comes back…

She takes off his hand from him and says ” Why should you get it…I have my maa…she will get it…you don’t need to get anything for me…”

Neil gets hurt by her cold behaviour…but he knows he deserved that….and he hides his pain…and smilingly says “Ok…”

Nevia; why you come here?

Neil (smilingly); to meet my princess and my queen…

Nevia(excitedly); wow…you have seen the princess in real…

Neil nods happily seeing his daughters excitement…

Nevia; which princess have you seen…Cinderella? Rapunzel?

Neil; Do you want to know the name of the princess…

Nevia(cutely); Yes…tell me….and also where she is…so I can meet the princess… I will tell Maa to take me…

Neil(smiles); You don’t want to go anywhere to see the princess dear…

Nevia; why?

Neil takes his phone…and put the selfie mood…and turns the screen towards her…

Nevia; This is the princess I am talking about…

Nevia cluelessly looks at Neil…

Neil puts back his phone in pocket and says “I mean..the princess I am talking about is you and the queen is your mother…”

Nevia smiles hearing that but suddenly looks angrily at Neil

Nevia; stop it! stop it! Don’t try to powder me by your words...

Neil; no..its not like that princes…

Nevia; don’t call me princess

Neil; I can’t stop calling you that…you are my princess

Nevia; I said not to call me princess…

Neil; listen to me, princess…

Nevia; if you call me that again…then…

She looks around angrily…and takes the hose laid down keeps her hand in the pipe and says…“I will throw water if you call me that again… “

Neil; ok princess…

Nevia hearing it opens the pipe and throws water at him…

Neil tries hard to cover him and run away…but fails and gets wet…

Neil suddenly notices his laughing hardly and jumping in happiness throwing water at him…he stands still getting hit by the water drops…He moves towards Nevia…takes the hose…And throws water at her…while Nevia happily enjoying…she forget all the hate at the moment and happily enjoys with her papa…They smile…and plays with water happily…

Neil suddenly feels the presence of his love…He looks up and sees His love smilingly looking at him and their daughter who was playing…He feels soo happy seeing the smile on his love’s face,..on his queen’s face

Avni’s smiles vanish off getting alerted by Neil’s staring…
She stares at him back…
There was silence…but their eyes were talking a lot…the hidden love was making the way through their eyes
Avni turns away…
Avni(in mind); I can’t ever forget that You made me feel like the queen of your…and the next moment you also made me feel like I am nothing…


PRECAP; Nevia misses Neil…..Aman love story caught


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  1. Aghellia

    Hi Gopika iam so enjoying today chapter father-daughter best cute fight, i will keep waiting for next chapter. I love your story and keep hope bringing fresh story everyday. Thanks for share this amazing story 😀

  2. 8B4756

    Awesome yarr loved the Ice cream Scene

  3. Hi gopika
    I am a constant silent reader of many ff of which our ff is a part. I always await for this awesome ff as it reminds me of special relation that a daughter shares with her father.. keep writing, and I will keep waiting

  4. Avneil_adiza_fan

    Superb episode…loved the father daughter bond…I love the way you portray avni as the loving mother…hope to see avneil’s patch up …do update soon

  5. Sadhusirisha

    Di next episode plz

    1. Gopika.S

      sry for being late…was lil busy…will update tonight

  6. Sadhusirisha

    Di episode plz I’m so adicted to it can’t be with out reading next episode plz

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