I Hate You (Episode 44)

Recap: The new year commences. Kunj’s friend Sheila comes and Twinkle feels jealous seeing the close bonding of the two. Kunj invites Sheila for dinner.


Twinkle was helping Usha set make food and set the table for dinner. Kunj walks into the kitchen.
Usha- Kunj, you seem happy, what’s the occasion? Are you happy that you are going to eat Twinkle’s food again?
Twinkle smiles.
Kunj- Are nahi mom. Actually, I’m excited that Sheila is coming over for dinner.
Twinkle’s smile fades away.
Kunj- You know, I am meeting her after so long, we have so many things to talk about.
Usha- Ha beta. When is she coming?
Kunj checks his watch.
Kunj- Omg, I should be picking her up now. Ok bye mom. Twinkle, prepare the dinner nicely. I have a reputation you know.
Kunj runs out while Usha laughs. Twinkle fumes.
Usha- You know Twinkle, every time those two are together, they go crazy.
Twinkle- Ma, they are close right?
Usha- Yes very. Ok Twinkle, you go set the table. Sheila should be here now.

The Next Scene…

Sheila comes over and the whole Sarna family sit for dinner. Kunj sits next to Sheila while Twinkle is left with the seat opposite of Kunj. Twinkle picks at her food while she watches Kunj feed Sheila and have fun.
Manohar- What happened Twinkle? Not hungry?
Mahi teases Twinkle.
Mahi- Papa, I think Twinkle is going on a diet. I think she is gaining some weight and becoming too heavy for Kunj right?
Kunj- What? No, Twinkle your not gaining weight. Teri kamar meri baho mein ekdam perfect hai.
Everyone giggles while Twinkle blushes.
Sheila- Well, if Kunj is saying that Twinkle fits perfectly into his arms, then problem solved right? Don’t worry Twinkle, we were just teasing you. Vaise, aunty and uncle, I wanted to take Twinkle out and show her around the village. Is that okay?
Manohar- Of course.

The Next Scene….
Shila, Kunj, and Twinkle were walking in the cool night air. Twinkle was amazed by the serene beauty and silence of the night. She wrapped a shawl around herself and looked around amazed. Kunj looked and Twinkle lovingly. (Zaalima from Raes plays in bg).

Jo teri khatir tadpe pehle se hi
Kya usey tadpana o zaalima, o zaalima
Jo tere ishq mein behka pehle se hi
Kya usey behkana o zaalima, o zaalima

Sheila notices Kunj looking at Twinkle.
Sheila- You love her a lot right?
Kunj- More than I can say.

Aankhen marhaba, baatein marhaba
Main sau martaba deewana huaa
Mera na raha jab se dil mera
Tere husn ka nishana hua

Twinkle walked up to a lake and looked at the fireflies lighting up the night. Kunj stood next to her and watched as her hair fluttered in the wind.

Jiski har dhadkan tu ho
Aise dil ko kya dhadkana
O zaalima, o zalima..

Twinkle looks at Kunj.
Twinkle- What?
Kunj- You.
Twinkle- Why are you looking at me? Don’t you have Sheila?
Twinkle walks away, leaving Kunj baffled.
Kunj thinks- Ohhhh, so that explains your attitude today. Mrs. Kunj Sarna, you have become jealous.
Sheila- Kunj, is Twinkle okay? What happened to her?
Kunj- Shiela, Twinkle is still a child. She is so innocent. She thinks there is something between us.
Sheila- What?
Sheila laughs- Kunj, did you tell her what our relationship is? You are like my brother. Kunj, I even celebrate raksha bandhan with you.
Kunj laughs- Twinkle is crazy.
Sheila- She loves you too much. Now go to her. Go!
Back at Kunj’s house…

Kunj- Twinkle wait!
Twinkle was pacing back and forth in their room.
Kunj- Twinkle…
Kunj turns Twinkle towards him. He lifts her face and looks into her eyes.
Kunj- Twinkle, I love you and only you.
He bent down, his lips against her cheek, brushing it lightly. That light touch sent shivers through her nerves, shivers that made her whole body tremble.
Kunj whispered- If you want me to stop, tell me now.
Twinkle didn’t speak, but closed her eyes and felt Kunj’s touch. He brushed his mouth against her forehead.
Kunj- How about now?
Twinkle clenched the side of her dress.
He traced the line of her cheekbone.
Kunj- Now?
Twinkle could feel the warmth of Kunj’s breath on her cheek. Kunj looked at Twinkle’s closed eyes and then at her lips, her lower lip trembling a little from the gentleness of his touch. He leaned gently held her cheek and came closer. Twinkle anticipated for the feel of Kunj’s lips on her own. When no such thing happened, she opened her eyes to see Kunj standing in front of her with his arms crossed against his chest.
Kunj- Ur promise. We won’t consummate our marriage now.
Twinkle held Kunj’s collar and pulled him towards herself. The two lips met for the first time. He kissed her gently, but it wasn’t gentleness she wanted, not now, not after all this time. Twinkle knotted her fists in his shirt. Kunj smiled against her lips and then wrapped his arms around her petite waist, pulling her closer to him. Twinkle pulled back and slowly let go of her breath with closed eyes.
Twinkle- Who said kissing would mean consummating a marriage?
Kunj smiles- So, should we do it again?

Precap: Twinkle is kidnapped, and secrets are revealed…

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  1. Soumyad

    Hey Sara I was waiting for your ff only…it was amazing and twinj’s scene were amazing…post soon

  2. SidMin23

    First it took so many days for this ff and if you could post soon do continue and I love twinj moment and twinkle jealous and that your completely fit into my arm kunj dialogue.

  3. Awesome episode i loved it Sara and the precap seems scary post asap

  4. Sohi

    The episode was damn cute nd fabulous
    But iam angry ? with you ?
    Precap made me more excited to read next part
    Plz plz post soon

  5. Sohi

    Nd that kunjs dialogue which he said in tei was am

  6. Sohi

    Nd that kunjs dialogue which he said in tei was amazing loved it keep writing such things ok bye

  7. SidMin

    Loved it too good and that dialogue I swear TEI ke yaad dila de ??????
    I really liked it ❤❤
    Love you post soon ❣❣ precap looks scary

  8. Kritika14

    So happy to finally see your ff posted! Talking about it, it was amazing, as usual! Twinkle’s jealousy and all Twinj moments were beautiful, specially the kiss! It was damn cute and adorable! ?

    Can’t say much due to shortage of time so all I’ll say is post the next epiosde soon cause the precap already excites me! Okay, I know you’ve been busy these days but try please?

    And yes, build a snowman from my side too! ?

    Love you! x

    1. Sara28

      ?? Come over and we will build it together.

  9. sara…
    it is so lovely…??????

  10. The episode was really good
    Twinkles jealousy part was cute
    I remember the dialogue of kunj ? he said in tei
    Do continue

  11. sara dii loved it and the dialogues were awsm loved it to the core and kiss was so nice loved u

  12. Chiku

    So happy that u posted ur ff finally ??
    Awwieee!! Its sooo sweet. I loved twinkles jealousy and kunj ls dialogue. Its hust mindblowing. Lovely.
    Twinj moments are a bliss to read. I enjoyed it
    Its so short???post a long episode if possible
    Post soon??

  13. SidMinTwiNj

    It’s amazingly amazing… Kunj’s dialogue teri kamar meri baho mein ekdam perfect hai ????????????? reminded me of tei ??????? oh God how much i miss my babies ?????? precap seems scary… Do post next asap…

    Love you ❤

  14. Monaa

    Aww.. So cute episode.. Twinkle jealousy.. Omg.. Yr plz revel full suspense na.. N precap is exciting.. Twinkle kidnap.. Nice.. Continue soon..☺

  15. Twinjfan.tamanna

    hey sara,
    yaar it was too cute… nd the dialogue reminded me of tei… I loved it
    post soon

    with love,
    Urs Tamanna

  16. Ria

    Heya Sara,
    I’ve been waiting since eternity ? Okay, you know why though, but erm.. never mind and it’s our small secret. ??

    Well, episode was really really brilliant. I loved how you showed the Twinkle’s jealousy and Oh. My. God. Did you just put that “Koi zarurat nahi. Twinkle ki kamar meri baahon mein ek dam perfect fit Hoti hai”!! I’m so proud of you Sara? I love this dialogue a lot.. The first kiss was just so marvellously written? I hope you post the next one soon like, really soon. Hope you aren’t really entangled up in your busy schedule though.

    All my love,

  17. Kiss ka kissaa Wass ????and thee precap iss suspenseee??posttt soon sara

  18. SidVee_Yashvee

    Awesomeee???.. that line ”
    Kunj- What? No, Twinkle your not gaining weight. Teri kamar meri baho mein ekdam perfect hai.” reminded me of tei???.. and their first kiss was amazing.. loved it.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤

  19. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely epi

  20. Presha

    Hey sara its indeed awesome cute loved it to the core
    Kunj dialogue reninded me of tei just loved it

  21. Ramya

    Hey Sara IT was so cute
    Awesome amazing
    N Sheila is kunj sis so cute
    N I’m excited fr PRECAP

    Post soon
    Loads of love keep smiling

  22. Aanya_pandey

    Hayee soo cute.. jealous twinkle.. n that kiss ??
    N yrr really sorry for commenting this late

  23. Baby

    ohhhhhh god di…………
    even anybody can get jelous bdw kunj was behaving wid sheila haahhaaaa 😀
    ohhhhhh goody srsly it was toooooooo cute loved it sooooo mch
    dere first kiss hot ohhhh lord yeah it was♥♥
    n d precap is too interesting………….
    i cant w8 more for it… 😀
    plsss post nxt asap di n twinkle ka promise kya hai?
    mujhe samaj nhi aaya diii……. 😀 can u tell it plssss
    love u lods♥♥♥♥♥

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