HAMARI KAHANI – Twinj Tiktik 19

HAMARI KAHANI-Twinj Tiktik 19

So here is my last epi….
Joking yaar! Who though that was the last? Do let me know in the comments๐Ÿ˜‚

I am here with the next part:

โค_________ready set go_________โค

Twinkle called Pallavi.

T-Pallu! Tu kya kr rhi hai? Tu ghar aa jaa. Mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni hai…
(Pallu where are u? Come home soon. I have to talk to u…)

P-ab kya hua siyappa queen? Phir se kaunsa naya kaand kr diya tum donnon ne?
(What happened siyappa queen? What did u both mess up this time?)

She said, irritated.

T-hawww! Mujhe siyappa queen kyu bulaya?
(Hawww! Why did u call me siyappa queen?)

P-kyunki Kunj sahi kehta hai…tum siyappe kiye bina ni reh sakti…achche moments ki band baja deti ho…
(Because kunj is right…you cannot live without making mistakes…u ruin good moments…)

T-areeee par maine kya kiya? Meri love story doob rhi hai aur tujhe taane soojh rhe hai…
(But what did i do? My love story is drowning and i need your help…)

P-teri love story titanic ki doobti jahaz hai kya? Maine khud dekha hai aaj playground pe…kaun kitne paani mein tha…aur haan love bite chupa diyo…aunty ko dikh gyi to babaji teri shaadi kara denge…

(Is your love story like the sinking titanic ship? Even i saw how much help u need…btw…do hide ur love bite otherwise aunty will get u married…)

T-meri vaise hi vaat lagi padi hai…beech mein dhongi baba ko ghussa diya…munh tod na dun uska…vaise…maine tere saath kaunsa siyappa kiya?
(I am already in trouble…on top of that u are talking about that baba…i want to break his face! Btw…what siyappa did i do?)

P-abhi abhi to Karan mujhe kiss krne….
(Karan was about to kiss me and u….)

She stopped in her words and blushed.

T-ohooooo romance huh! Chal aish kr! Lekin! Uske paas mat rahiyo…ghar vapas aa jayiyo…uss din maa ko samjhane mein kitni problem hui thi…tujhe pta hai na…
(Ohoooo romance huh! Enjoy! But do not stay over at night. Be back at home…u are aware of the problems we had the last time i was not there…)

Pallavi was about to reply when Karan snatched the phone.

Ka-hard luck bhabhi! Uss din Pallavi ne sambhala tha…aaj aap sambhaal lo…humein bhi ek kamra dhoondhna hai…
(Hard luck bhabhi! Pallavi handled it on that day…it is ur turn now…even we have to look for a room…)

He said teasingly.

T-chup! Tum log Kunj ke saath kam ghooma kro…uske saath rehke tum logon ka bhi dimaag tedha banta jaa rha hai…
(Shut up! Stop hanging out with Kunj….he is spoiling u guys…)

Ka-haan haan…aap mil gyi ho…vaise bhi kam hi dikhta hai ab…
(Of course…now that u r here…he is less available anyway…)

T-ok bye!
She said, rather shy. She knew that had she stretched the conversation, it would have become embarrassing for her as both Karan and Pallavi had seen what had happened on the playground earlier…

T-ab mein kya karun? Kisse poochoon? Vaise to kehte hai ek rishtey mein transparency honi chahiye…to mujhe Kunj se hi pooch leni chahiye…
(What shall i do now? Who should i ask for help? We say that there should be transparency in a relationship…so i should ask Kunj about it…)

She searched Kunj’s number which was saved as ‘bandar’ on her phone and was about to call him but stopped in her tracks.

T-no! Bilkul ni! Isse poochoungi to sar khujane lag jaayega…mujhe ni batayega…koi na koi khichdi to pakayi hai usne..par ab kaise pta lagaoun ki kiss baat ko lekar iske barah baj gye the…Pallu kal se pehle ghar aane se rhi…mein Kunj se poochne se rhi…phir?

(No! Absolutely not! He wont tell me…he knows he has done something bad…but how should i find out where he has faultered? Pallu is not going to be home before tomorrow morning and i’ll not ask Kunj…then?)

She started to think.

T-shreya! Right! How could i overlook her?

She called Shreya and asked her what had happened in class earlier.

S-Twinkle…ab tumhare aur Kunj ke beech sab theek ho gya hai…purane zakham kuredne se sirf dard milega…biti baaton ko bhool jaa aur aage badh…ek naya sawera tera intezaar kr rha hai…iss mauke ko gawa mat…

(Twinkle, now that everything is alright between u and Kunj, i feel you should just enjoy rather than relivong past sores…they will bring only sadness…you have got such a nice moment to live..dont lose it…)

T-please shreyu…tujhe pta hai meri life mein aajkal kya hua hai…maana ki ab mere aur Kunj ka sulah ho gya hai…par iska ye matlab ni hai ki humara beeta hua kal humare aaj par haavi ni ho sakta…aur baat meri zindagi ki thi…aakhir mujhe bhi to jaane ka hak hai…ki mere peet peeche kya hua tha…kaunsi aisi baat thi jo mere bandar ko andar hi andar khaa rhi thi…

(Please Shreyu! U are aware of all the recent happenings in my life…i know that Kunj and i have patched up but that does not mean that i should remain ignorant…all of that shit concerned my life! Atleast i should be having the right to know what has been up in my damn life…i want to know what has been irritating Kunj since so long…)

S-par Twinkle…
(But Twinkle…)

T-shreya…maine apne Kunj ko rote dekha hai…uske haathon ka zakham bhale hi sab se chip gya ho…par uske dil mein lage ghaavon ko maine mehsoos kiye hai…tumhein hamari dosti ki kasam…please bata do…

(Shreya, i have seen Kunj crying…his physical wounds may have been hidden from everyone…but i have felt the pain in his heart…ur under oath…please tell me…)

Finally, Shreya, being left with no other option, told her the happenings in the class. Twinkle thanked her and sat on the couch, lost in deep thoughts. She started joining the links.

T-pallu ne kaha tha Karan ne mujhe Yuvi ke saath dekha tha…Kunj ne mujhpe dhokhe ka ilzaam lagaya tha aur aaj…aaj class mein…
(Pallu had said that he had seen me with Karan…Kunj accused me of infidelity…and today in class they…)

She thought about all the words that Yuvi said and the reactions that Kunj had…

T-table ke neeche tooti pencil thi…uske baad…aur Yuvi ne mere character pe sawaal uthaya!
Ni! Vo ni ho sakta! Mera Kunj aisa ni soch sakta…vo…ni!
(I saw a broken pencil under the table…UV pointed at my chastity…
Bo! That cant happen! My Kunj cannot have such opinions…he…no!)

She stammered while tears automatically formed in her eyes.

T-haan! Ho sakta hai! Par Kunj agar aisa hua jaisa mein soch rahi hun…aur tumne itna bada kadam mere bina le liya…to apne siyappon ki kasam…mein tumhara jeena haraam karungi hi par mein apne dil ke darvaaze itni zor se band karungi ki ainda koi dhokhebaaz insaan usmein jagah ni bana paayega…ye Twinkle Taneja ka vada hai tumse…agar mein tashan se dosti kar sakti hun, junoon se pyaar kar sakti hoon to pure shiddat se nafrat bhi kar sakti hun…iss baar tumne mere dil ke uss taar ko chot pahunchayi hai jiske paas mere dil aur dimaag ka darvaaza hai…agar mein sahi hoon…to sab galat ho jaayega Kunj! Sab galat ho jaayega!

(Yes it may be…but on a serious note…if you have had such lowly opinions about me and misunderstood me without even comfronting me then i swear i will make life hell for u! Not only that, i will close the gates of my heart in such a way that no other cheater will be able to infiltrate in it! This time you have deeply hurt me…if i am right…then all is going to be over…all!)

She cried.

โคOn the Other sideโค

‘Twinkle! Twinkle puttar! Kithe hai tu! Cheti tayyar ho jaa! Pandit ji aaye hai…aur dhang ke kapde pehen lena…varna pta ni ye jhalli kudi kya pehen legi….’
(Twinkle! Twinkle! Where are u? Get ready soon! Pandit ji has come…and wear some decent clothes…otherwise i can’t even imagine what she’s going to wear…)

Twinkle quickly wiped her tears.

Twinkle’s POV
Meri life mein pehle hi kam pareshaani thi…jo ye darshan dene chala aaya! Mujhe iski shakal se bhi nafrat hai!!! Meri zindagi mein jo bhi phasad hai…ye uska jad hain! Ab pta chala aajkal mere life mein itni gadbad kyu hui…ye jo aane wala tha…huh! Ek din kasam se isse ped se latka dungi! Chor kahika!

(I have enough problems in life…now i have to bear him! I hate his mere appearance! He is the root cause of all my problems! I can now understand why my life has been going astray these days…i had to meet him…thats why! I swear i’ll hang him someday…blo*dy thief!)

‘Twinkle puttar! Kitthe reh gyi?’
(Twinkle! Where are u?)

T-haan maa! Aayi!
(Yes maa! I am coming!)

She quickly changed into a golden salwar kameez and did full coverage makeup to conceal her misery.

She came down and gave a disinterested look at the pandit. He had his back to her.

Twinkle’s POV
Aa gya thug! Mooft ka khaa pee bhi rha hai…agle ek mahine ka khana bhi leke jaayega…aur chande ke naam pe pure saal ki kamaai lekar jaayega! Aaj style change ho gya! Dhoti ni pehni…achchi baat hai…varna ussi se sooli pe chadane ka plan tha…koi ni…mere mann mein iske liye apaar pyaar ubhar ubhar ke naya plan bana dega.

(Here is the thug! He is munching on freely…he will even fill his pockets for the remaining month…and he will even take his alary in the form of donation…what happened to his style? He has come without his dhoti…it is good! Otherwise i would have hung him…)

She smirked naughtily, forgetting her anger for sometime.

T(to herself)-par ye kya? Ye suit kabse pehenne laga? Aur iski funny chuti kahan gyi? Aur ye iske baaraatiyon ko kya hua? No dhoti…aur ek ne to salwar kameez bhi pehni hai…isne shaadi kr li kya? Chi chi chi!
(What is this? Since when does he wear suits? Where are his followers? Even they are well represented…has he married at this age? Shame on him!)

Leela broke her trance.

L-ye tukur tukur kya dekh rhe ho? Ye chai le aur mehmaanon ko peela….
(What are you staring at! Take the tea and serve it to the guests…)

T-mehmaan? Par dhongi baba?
(Guests? But what about the thug?)

Leela gave her a death glare.

T-achcha sorry! Pandit ji??
(Ok sorry! Pandit ji??)

Pa-hum yahan hai balike! Humare swarg kamalon ke darshan kro putri…
(I am here dear! Take my blessings dear…)

T(to himself)-aa gya…ab agle ek ghante tak uske mooh se apni hi gun gaan suno….
(He’s come…he’ll praise himself for the next one hour now…)

She touched his feet hesitantly.

Pa-balike! Aaj hum apne divya shaktiyon se aapke ghar khushiyon ka bahar laye hai…aapke maa ki pareshaniyon ka udhaar laye hai…aapke haath peele karne hetu aapke liye ek rishta laye hai…
(Daughter! Today i have gotten rid of a burden from your mother’s heAd….i have got a mariage proposal for u…)

Twinkle was not giving any interest to his words as she was not understanding half of what he was saying but as she understood that he had brough a mariage proposal for her, she was utterly shocked.


Pa-jee haan aur hum unka parivaar apne samaksh laye hai…
(Yes and i have even brought his family with me…)

T-Twinkle! Ye to tere baaraati nikle! Siyappa!
(Twinkle! They turned out to be your in-laws! Siyappa!)

She turned towards the living room and what she saw left her…

Precap:i will marry him…

โค_______to be continued_______โค

Hey! Sorry for not being able to comment on your works! I am slightly taken up by some personal stuff…and i have joined instagram
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I hope u enjoyed this one! This is for all my commenters!

And let’s bid adieu to the last days of the year 2016 with a smile! Stay happy!

Love u all!๐Ÿ˜˜


  1. Aamna_2690

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    Hey Ayu!!

    U almost gave me heart attack by saying last epi…… I was like what? How could this be possible…….. seriously u shocked me……. but dear the episode was just awsum……. n twinkles assumption haye….. it’s scaring me….. n the rishta uff…… n I will marry him…. kitne shocks Deenay ka Irada hai yaar….. now plz post as soon as possible…..
    Loads of love๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜keep smiling….. luv u๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  2. RUTU.....

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    Hi Ayu,
    Really an amazing episode I don’t know you know me or not cause I m new to you but I seriously love your ff
    And yaa I m really shocked after seeing last update Dara hi diya tha OK bye lots of love
    Post next one soon ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ’

  3. Sushmitha

    Awesome episode ayu a bit shocking too and I loved it and i think it’s kunj’s family hope so and I’m there on instagram my account is sushmitha2689

  4. SidMin

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    Loved it Awesome ๐Ÿ™‚
    Feeling sad for Twinkle Kunj should have really trusted her but koi nahe I feel the boy is Kunj or maybe….. don’t know
    Love you ๐Ÿ™‚
    Post soon ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. Anayaali

    Ayu it was mind blowing….
    Superb…..awesome ๐Ÿ™†…..
    And excited for nxt…..
    But I am bit scare too bcz of twinkle what will she do when she will get to know that what she was thinking every thing was right…..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz try to post nxt asap…. Luv u๐Ÿ’–โค

  6. Chiku

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    Wohooo orange!!! Its lovelyโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
    I loved it. Hayeee itna achaa. Hai. Aaj sabse pehle episode maine padha๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚โค๏ธ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ
    I am feeling bad for twinkle though.
    My insta id – http_xxoxx. ( feel freee to follow ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™ˆ)
    Post soon
    Love uโค๏ธ

  7. Aksa_Nikoria

    Agar ye last epi hota to tu to gayi hoti mere haatho se…don’t u dare end it

    Coming to the epi
    Hats off to u..abb bas koi or problem na ho sochke tune jhatka de diya RISHTA
    Aur bhai tu itni hindi kahan se sikthi the he
    Mujhe bhi bata..me bhi sikhlungi..aakhir me kitni insult sehti hu me *sobb*

    Wese the epi was Mindblowing loved it
    Cont soon
    Love ye

  8. SidMinTwiNj

    |Registered Member

    Hey ayu
    Tune toh muje mini heart attack de diya… The moment I read last epi my heart beat skipped for a second and I was like abhi is ladki ku WhatsApp pe message kar k class leti hun… Ayu don’t you dare next time play like this prank…

    Now coming to epi… As usual its amazing… Loved it… And precap I will marry him I hope wo him Kunj hi ho… Fingers crossed… Next epi jaldi post karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz….

    Love you๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. SidVee_Yashvee

    |Registered Member

    Ayu, u almost gave me a heart attack when I saw the last update ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ but thank god it isn’t. Really love ur ff.. Plz don’t do this again๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.. and coming to the epi ,it was amazing as always.. the convo btn pallavi n twinkle n karan was ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ .. and they dialogues which twinkle was giving to the pandit๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.. and who is the guyy๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ eagerly waiting for the nextโค

  10. Ramya

    |Registered Member

    Hey ayu awesome amazing
    U know u gave me heart attack at start but later I was relieved pagal ladki
    N awesome superb n I love ur dialogue
    Superb episode lovely
    Amazing Loads of love keep smiling

  11. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Awwwieee…. ayu di… jhakkas…
    Fantastic…. dhasu… phadu..omg your dialogue… I’ll go crazy with them di… I love it.. extremely love it…
    And that pallavi wala part !!! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
    I loved the way twinkle figured out everything…
    Post soon
    Love you

  12. Baby

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    ohhhhhhhhhh babaji……….
    tu naa mujhe maar hi daal
    matlab ek hote nhi dono ki tu alag krne ka intezaam phele kar leti hai
    i swear to god agr ye alag hue naa agar……t…to..h….mein kuch nhi karpaungi
    yr miss.gorgeous ab or nhi sehan hota…………….
    welll rishta panditji hhahahaaa hassi bhi aayi bt tension jyada hai
    love u lodsโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

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