HAMARI KAHANI -Twinj Tiktik 14

HAMARI KAHANI-Twinj Tiktik 14

Hey guys! I am so sorry. I know i am very very very lateπŸ˜…
2 weeks…long right? I try to be punctual but i am just a mess…

I am already very late…so i guess we’ll get on with the epi…

❀️_________ready set go_________❀️

Golden rays of light announced a radiant morning. The scene shifted to a room. It was a little messed up with clothes and shoes all over the place. Then a bed was shown. Its blanket was haggardly placed and two bodily figures could be seen. The air was filled with the fragrance of young love…of a feeling of togetherness…a feeling of completion….

After sometime the blanket seemed to move a bit. The person stretched his arm. He had no clothes on his upper body and was yawning. He looked around the room and grawled:

‘Ye mein kahan aa gya hun? Koi bhukamp paya hai kya? Vaise kal raat siyappa queen se aankh micholi kheli…jwalamukhi na sahi…yehi sahi….’
(Where have i come? Has there been an earthquake here? I was with Siyappa Queen yesterday…this had to happen..)

He was busy with his own self when he heard a voice.

V-good morning baby!

Kunj’s eyes popped open and he looked around the room. Then he closed his eyes.

Kunj’s POV
Babaji! Please please please…mere bagal mein bhoot ho, bimari ho, kutta ho, karan ho par vo chipku chudail na ho! Agar ye hui na to Siyappa Queen to vaat lagayegi hi…saath mein iss fevicol ki bottle ko puri zindagi jhelna padega!

(Babaji! Please please please…may there be a ghost, a disease, a dog or even Karan beside me but please may it not be that sticky witch! If she comes to be here Twinkle will kill me …but i will also have to bear that sticky witch during my whole lifetime!)

He moved his eyes to the other side and saw Twinkle. He was relieved. He immediately hugged her.

K-siyappa queen! Thank god tum ho! Warna mein shaheed ho jaata!

Twinkle opened her drowsy eyes and noticed Kunj.

T-aaahhhhhhh!!!
She screamed so loudly that Kunj got startled and he fell off the bed with a thud. He started rubbing his butt.

K-oye siyappa queen! Itni zor se kyu chilla rhi hai? Bhoot dekh liya kya?
(Oye siyappa queen! Why are you screaming so loudly? Have you seen a ghost or wha?)

Twinkle stared at him and said
T-t…tum yahan kya kr rhe ho?! Tum ek hi bed pe mere saath k..kaise??? Tumne kahin mera faayda to ni…

(W…what are you doing here?! How come we are on the same bed together??? Have you taken my advantage…)

K-chi chi chi! Mein thehra shareef aadmi aur tum thehri bhooki sherni!
Ab bta kaun kiska fayda utha sakta hai…
(Shame on you! I am a respectable man and you are a hungry lioness! Now tell mw who can use the other…)

He said covering himself with the blanket.

Twinkle threw a pillow at him and both burst out laughing. They were looking at each others face and just smiling broadly. Kunj came up on the bed and they shared an intense eyelock. Kunj started kissing her jawline and moved to her lips. They shared a passionate lip lock which was growing more intense with each passing second. Without breaking the kiss, kunj came on top of Twinkle and made her lie on the bed. His hands started exploring her back. After a while he got up with a jerk, leaving Twinkle boggled.

T-kya hua? Ek kiss hi to hai…
(What happened? It is just a kiss…)

K-k..kiss k…ki baat ni hai…t..tumhare kapde…kkapde kahan hai?
(It is not about the k..kiss…w..where are your clothes?)

He stammered.

Twinkle looked at him with a confused look.

She peeped in the blanket..
T-kya keh rhe….AAAAHHHH!
(What are you saying….AAAHHH!)

She covered herself completely with the blanket.

Kunj kept his hand on her mouth.
K-siyappa queen! Siyappe karne se baaz kab aayegi? Itni zorr se chilla rhi hai! Koi aa gya to?
(Siyappa queen! When will you stop doing mistakes? You are screaming so loudly! What if somebody comes?)

He left her.
T-k…kunj t…tumhare k…kapde…m..matlab…kya tumbhi nange h..ho?
(K…kunj y..your clothes…i m..mean…are you also n..naked?)

She stammered.

Kunj’s eyes widened. He checked inside the blanket and gave Twinkle a ‘oh no!’ Look.

T(to herself)-babaji! Ye humse kya hogaya? Nikli thi iss sadu ka gussa bhagane mein…par vo karte karte ye baat kaise choot gyi ki hum donnon sirf boyfriend-girlfriend hai…kuch paane ke chakkar mein ye main kya kho baithi???

(Babaji! What have we done? I was supposed to calm his anger but in that process, how could i forget that Kunj and i are just boyfriend-girlfriend…in the want of gaining something what have i lost?)

Kunj’s POV
Oh no! Ye humne kya kiya? Damn! Mujhe kal raat ka kuch bhi yaad ni hai! Ab mein Twinkle se kya kahunga? Agar aisa vaisa kuch hua hai to ye mujhe zinda ni chodegi…par usse zyada agar usse ye baat gawara ni hui ki hum donnon ke beech mein kuch hua to vo kuch kar na baithe…vo to hai hi sarphiri par vo vaisi ladki hai jisse apni izzat aur self respect bahut pyaari hai…mein usse face kaise karun?

(Oh no! What have we done? Damn! I can’t even recall what happened last night! What will i say to Twinkle now? If something went haywire then she will not spare me…most importantly if she does not approve of what may have happened between us then she might take a wrong step..she is crazy enough to do that…but she is the type of girl to whom her self respect and chastity is of utmost importance to her…how do i face her?)

Kunj decided to break the awkwardness and initiate a conversation with Twinkle but she took the blanket and went to the bathroom. She sat under the shower and tried to recall what had happened the previous night but only snippets of memories were coming to her mind. She recalled the party incidents and their confession.

T-ye pallu! Bas mere haath lag jaaye to iski tedhi poonch ko seedha kar dungi! Saare phasaad ki jad na vahi hai! Tharki kahiki! Upar se karan ko line maar rhi thi…par yaar mujhe pilane ki kya zaroorat thi? Ab itna raita phel gya hai…isse sametega kaun? Mein kunj ko kaise face karun? Par huh! Vo to khushi se pagal ho rha hoga…usse vo teen jaadoui shabt bhi sunne ko mile aur saath hi saath itni haseen raat…babaji mujhe Kunj par bharosa hai…aur mujhe usse pagalon wala pyaar hai..jo hua mujhe uska afsos ni hai…vo bhi to pyaar ka ehsaas hi hai…par kya jo hua..kya vo kunj ko bhi manzoor hai?

(This Pallu! Let me get my hands on her then she’ll regret it! She is the root of all these problems! blo*dy flirt! On top of that she was romancing Karan…but what was the need to make me drink? Now that such a mess has happened..how am i supposed to clear that out? How do i face Kunj now? Huh! That lad must be enjoying himself! After all he got to hear my confession and spent a beautiful night with me…the fact is that i trust him and i do not mind whatever happened yesterday but i am yet to know whether he approves of it or not??)

She smiled and blushed.

❀️On The Other Side❀️

Kunj’s POV
Jo bhi ho…finally meri Twinkle meri ho gyi…kal raat jo bhi tha sirf pyaar tha…aaj mein duniya ka sabse lucky banda hun…mein hamesha kuch na kuch kaand karta rehta hun…iss baar bhi ki hai…Siyappa Queen se pyaar kiya hai…matlab khatre ko nyauta diya hai maine…waah beta…sherni se pyaar karne ka jigda paaya hai tune! Ab saari zindagi uske siyappe uske nakhre bardash karne padenge…agar iske saath rehne ki yahin kimat hai to meri Twinkle ke barabar vo sab kuch ni hai! Thank u babaji! Ab isse paya hai…to kabhi ni khounga! Isne mujhe apni zindagi ka ek ahem hissa diya hai…iske vishwaas ke badle mein usse beintehaa pyaar dunga…

(Anyway…finally my Twinkle is mine…it was only love yester night…i am the most lucky person on earth! Normally i am upto some weird stuffs and this time also i was in 1…i fell in love with the queen of mistakes…now, i will have to bear her for my whole life…her tantrums, her mistakes…but i can’t complain…as i’ve loved her…and i promise to give her all the love of the world in exchange of her own self…)

He smiled and brushed his fingers through his hairs.

❀️After some time❀️

Twinkle got out of the bathroom, in a baby pink bathrobe, smilingly. She saw Kunj having his back to her. She ran to him and back-hugged him.

T-mujhe itna khaas feel karane ke liye thank u soooo much! Mujhe laga tha ki maine ek sadiyal insaan se pyaar kiya tha…par vo to itna romantic aur unique nikla…tumne iss siyappa queen ko apni zindagi ka itna zaroori hissa banaya…itni himmat tum mein kaise paida hui?
Lagta hai tumhara screw dheela ho gya hai…le…ye toh tabse dheela hoga jabse tumne mujhse pyaar kiya hoga…i might be such a pain at times ni?

(Thank u for having made me feel so special! I thought that i had loved a rude and boring person but i did not imagine that my love would be such a romantic and unique person…you have given this siyappa queen such a crucial part in your life..from where did you get the guts to do that? I think you’ve gone mad in my love…)

She let go of him and started to dry her hairs. She went on talking though.

T-bevde kahike! Agar meri jagah uss chipku chudail ke saath uthe hote to koi aur na sahi…par mein tumhari arthi uthwa deti…itni kyun pi ki hosh hi ni raha tumhein? Thank god mein tumhare saath thi…varna uss Alisha ke haathon tumhara balaatkaar ho jaata.

(You are such a drunkard! What would have happened had u woke up with that sticky witch? One thing is for sure! I would have killed u! Why did u drink so much that u lost control over your senses? Thank god i was with you…otherwise that Alisha would have literally raped u!)

She giggled.

Kunj turned round, took her by the arms and pinned her to the wall.
His eyes were red with anger and he was struggling to stop his tears from flowing.

K-CHUP! YE KYA BAKTI JAA RHI HO?! MEIN TO PHIR BHI NASHE MEIN THA! TUM TO HOSH MEIN HI…TUM JAISI LADKI MAINE AAJ TAK NI DEKHI…MUJHE YAKEEN HI NI HO RHA HAI KI VO TUMHI HO JISSE MAINE ITNA PYAAR KIYA THA! PAR TUM!

(SHUT UP! WHAT ARE U TALKING ABOUT? I WAS NOT IN MY SENSES…BUT U WERE RIGHT?
I HAVE NEVER SEEN SOMEBODY LIKE YOU BEFORE! I CANNOT BELIEVE THAT YOU ARE THE SAME PERSON FOR WHON I FELL! BUT YOU!)

He looked away, trying to control his emotions.

Twinkle had teared up and was just looking at him.
T-k..kunj…

K-MERA NAAM MAT LENA! MAINE TUMHEIN ITNA PYAAR DIYA…ISKE BADLE TUMNE MUJHE YE SILAH DIYA! U KNOW WHAT? TUMSE ACHCHI TO VO ALISHA HI THI! KAM SE KAM VO JO KARTI THI MERE AAKHON KE SAAMNE KARTI THI…TUMHARI TARAH MUJHE PEET PEECHE DHOKHA NI DETI THI…

(DO NOT UTTER MY NAME…I HAVE LOVED YOU SO MUCH! IS THIS THE WAY YOU HAVE REWARDED ME? U KNOW WHAT? THAT ALISHA WAS BETTER THAN YOU! ATLEAST SHE WAS HONEST ABOUT HER DOINGS…SHE DID NOT BACKSTAB ME LIKE YOU…)

Twinkle cried.
T-Kunj…maine kya kiya? Tum aise please mat kaho…tumhein kuch misun…
(Kunj…what have i done? Please do not react as such…you have misu…)

She tried to clarify when she was cut off by Kunj.

K-WE ARE OVER! GOT THAT?! U AND ME ARE HISTORY!

He left her on the floor and stormed out of the room while Twinkle wept, in a state of shock, trying to figure out what had actually happened.

Precap: behaviour change…

❀️_______to be continued_______❀️

So this was it for this epi…i hope you enjoyed it….please do comment…whenever i have a silent reader or any reader commenting, it gives me immense support!

I am really sorry if this epi was not upto the mark…disappoint karne ke liye…i am really sorry…

I will try to upload earlier this time…maybe before the end of this week…so do check it out.

Love you all😘

20 comments

  1. SidMin

    SidMin

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    OMG what happened Kunj ko khya hogaya ??????????????????????????????????????????????
    The first part was so funny the ending made me shock Bechare Twinkle feeling bad for her ….
    Precap is entrusting as well as shocking
    Post soon πŸ™‚ Love you πŸ™‚

  2. Priya23

    Omg……what is this….yeh kyaa hogaya m totally blank…..first to epi dekhke bht happy hui…then m smiling from the beginning to read the epi but my smile were vanished…..keuuu……yeh kya baat hui ekto itne din baad mera fav ff post kia upar se itna bada jhatka…m totally shocked……suspense may chod diya…..but
    *What happened to Kunj?
    *Why he is behaving like to this with
    twinkle?
    *What is happening between them? Oh god….m going to mad with this sudden twist….. And what i told about this epi…may abhvi jhatke may hu….plssss clear the suspense soon….
    PLZZZ…POST NEXT EPI SOON….M WAITINGGG 4 TO READ FURTHER…… I CAN’T WAITING 4 LONG TIME TO WHAT’S GOING ON ??…………..luv u……….

  3. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Ayu just loved it
    Per kunj ko kya ho gaya
    Aise kyu behave kar raha hai usse tik karde
    N plssssss plsssss next one post soon I’m eager
    N ha dialogue r superb amazing

    Loved it
    Love

  4. Aamna_2690

    Aamna_2690

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    Oye!!! Ayu kunj ko kya hogaya…… now u surprised n shocked me by this😲😲😲
    It was awsum…. luved it…..
    Hai ayu the precap…. it has hooked me to wait when will u post next episode….. plz plz plz post soon…… waitingggg

  5. Chiku

    Chiku

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    Hey orange 🍊
    WoaaahπŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€oyeeeee hoyeeeeeeeeree tune woh toh dala hei nahi jo maine likha tahinπŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ™€
    Koi baaat nahi paat episode toh oh lalalaaalalalalalaa hayeeeeeee itna pyaaraaaaaa kaise likhti hai. I loved it girl.
    Soooo cuteπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ
    Tu bolti hai tujhe romance nahi likhna aataaa toh yeh kya likhaa aajπŸ™€πŸ™€πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”itna toh acha hai. Bohoot pyAaaaraa episode
    Yeh late nahi bohoooooooottt late hogaya. Ab jaldi poat karna
    But precap is white shocking. Hope twinj dont get separated πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„post sooon bf
    Love uuuuuuuuuuuπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

  6. Zuha Fatima

    Zuha Fatima

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    Hey Ayu,
    This was amazingly described…Beautifully written…Stupendously pen down…In short I loved it to the core but Kunj’s behavior πŸ™ Seems interesting…Eagerly waiting for thr next update!

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚

  7. Meeta

    Meeta

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    Ayu
    Man.
    You’re just 2 weeks late.
    I’m late for a month.
    I posted my shots and I’ve to upload my Ff, it’s been a month and half.
    Well, coming back I read 3 episodes Togetha.
    Bliss.πŸ’•, they were.
    Man, Is Kunj out of his Mind?
    Whatever!
    Next one very soon.
    Loves.

  8. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Twinjfan.tamanna

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    wowww… the epi was beautifully written… I loved every bit of it… I m shocked by kunj’s behavior… yaar… kya dialogues hai yaar… I m in love with it… i want to give u a title… that is ‘DIALOGUE QUEEN’… hw is it??

  9. Adya

    Adya

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    That was indeed very shocking… This rude behavior of kunj is unbelievable…
    But the episode was damn…. Hayeeeee super .. I love it… I love it… I love it….
    Now to the point….like seriously I hate u… Well I just commented coz I didn’t mean to show attitude to u….. And I couldn’t stop myself for commenting….. But even then … Yes I hate u…..
    U have really stopped commenting on my ff…. Do u really know how much it hurts when someone close doesn’t comment on ur ff…. Well just leave it….

    Yeah I’m super excited for the next one…….. Post asap…
    Love u.. ( but still hate u)

  10. Paavu

    Paavu

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    Hehehehe blanket ke neevhe dekho hahahaha….aur han baad mein sad kia behaviour change pata tha ki kunj change hoga I knew wo aisa hw he left her brking her virginity urgghhhhhhhhh nw twi pls shw ur girl empowerment ……. iss kunj ko toh maaf hi na kare bt karna roh padega nd ya ayu will u make me ur frnd????

  11. Ria

    Ria

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    Hey Ayu,
    Twinj’s POVs were two cute. The way the two of them thoight that their wasn’t any mistake in making love before the marriage was just marvellous. Well, the ending, is it related to that Yuvi? He tried to harass her nah the previous night? I guess so. Let’s see what you’ve planned for us. I’d be waiting for the next update.

    Loads of love,
    Ria.

  12. Vipul

    Vipul

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    Omg Ayu, what was that haan? firstly twinjs cute n funny romance n pov n then jor ka jhatka? kunj ko ho kya gaya hai… bechari twinkle feeling bad for her… I think its all that uv’s drama… well lets see what is in your mind…

    By the way I’m really very sorry for not commenting on your previous few epi…actually busy schedule n now bimaari but today can’t help but comment… waise I know u don’t know me n main itni special bhi nahi hun ki tum mere cmnt ka wait karogi but u r special for me so cmnting…love you…. post next asap….

    N all the best for your exams…

    “Shalini/Neha”

  13. Aksa_Nikoria

    Hey bandariyan..
    kitni bhuakkad he tu..
    mujhe chen se lhaane bhi nahi diya..

    haan to first time comment kar rhi hu iss ff pe..

    soo kahan se start karu
    Haan…toh ur story is way tooo different from others…its veryyy amazingg..
    writer to tu kamal ki he..

    aur previois epi me to kamal kardiya tu ne..hayeeπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

    and in todays epi also that kiss urfff..aisa kuch read karti hun to kuch kuch hota he…πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

    and then the POVs were so damn cute..lovely,Mindblowing,awesome, aur kya nahi…it was really Outstanding epi..

    But last me jo tune twist laya he😠😠😠😠

    bechari my twinki..kitna roti he woh…
    but i think yuvi ya alisha ne kkoi kaand kiya hoga..i think…
    i know i know i know
    Woh jaanne ke liye i have to read ur ff.

    overall Fantastic epi and ff it is..
    Love ya..jindi reh puttar
    Meri dua he ke tujhe 17+ comments mile..Amen…

    okay bye..β™‘β™‘β™‘love you and cont soon..jaldi dusra epi post kar warna😠😠😠😠

  14. TwinjSidMin

    TwinjSidMin

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    Hey ayu this episode is damn amazing… Tu ne kaha ki u suck in writing romance toh what is this which u wrote in this epi haan? TwiNj kiss thoπŸ˜πŸ˜β€β€πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ both twinkle and Kunj’s POV are amazingly amazing… U wrote it very well…

    Dekh meri aur aks ki dua se tuje 17+ comments mil gai toh common ab jaldi next epi post karde… Can’t wait more to know why Kunj behaved rudely…

    Love you re😘😘

  15. Baby

    Baby

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    h…h…hiiiiii………..yaar………..
    ayu ae ki kardita……….kunj ko suddenly kya hogya?
    i mean everything was going perfect sdnly u wont believe bt m crying
    i m still in dilemma n shock………
    my dear dont tell something really bad have hpnd dat uv noooo……….
    ohhhhhh goodness…..ab mein rone ko rok hi nhi paa rhi hun…..
    bt i trust u u will make evrything perfect
    yr bt twinj r shit how can he leave her in dis position
    wat has hpnd need to know dear
    plssss post asap
    aaj yeh baby bindass hoke nhi aayi hai
    phele thi
    loved d episode at strt it was cute funny romantic
    bt last mein shock ki kya hua hai
    wanna know ayu dear
    n dekh dhundliya mene tera ff kaiseee bhi krke πŸ˜€
    lovve u lodsβ™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯β™₯
    plsss naa dear post soon
    or sry late cmnt ke liye sch mein pta hi ni chla mujhe wen u posted πŸ˜€

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