HAMARI KAHANI – Twinj (Five shots) Tiktik 7

HAMARI KAHANI-Twinj Tiktik 7

Hey Lovely people! I could not post this one as promised in the week end…sorry i am posting it soo late…my epi got deleted so i had to re write it….

I am on cloud 9 right now! U r giving me soo much of love n warmth! I am really grateful!!Thank u for all your beautiful comments❤️❤️

N i am reallly verrryyy sorry for not commenting on ur ffs!!! I do not have time these days but i read them all!! Fabulous guys!

So this one will be little bit serious…n longggggg so pls bear with me…

So lets get to the epi…

❤️________ready set go_________❤️

Time was flying by…
Kehte hai ki har zakhm waqt ke saath bhar jaata hai par jo chot dil mein lagi thi…vo har din aur gehra ho raha tha…ek doosre ko dekh..aankhein num hoti thi…saasein theher jaati thi…dil mein jo baat thi labon tak aa to jaati thi, par majbooriyan dil ki baaton par bhaari par jaati thi….
(We say that time is the greatest healer, but the pain that had been inflicted to the heart was deepening with each passing moment…their eyes would tear up on seeing each other….time would stand still….their feelings would try to come up but misunderstandings would overpower those little words…)

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Kunj’s POV
Ek hafta ho gaya hai…na siyappa queen ke nakhre, naa uske vaar, uski adaaein…uski muskaan…babaji pls ab mein aur sehen nahin kar sakta….Twinkle ki yaad mein main devdas ban jaaounga…pehle se hi itni moti daari ugaayi hai…jab dekho mere shakal pe baara baje rehte hai….aajkal main Karan aur Rahul ko nukkar wala bhikari nazar aata hun….kaminey dost mere! Kahin na kahin apni mainaon ke saath chonch maar rahe honge…
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Mujhe akele iss bedard duniya se ladne ko chod diya….
(It has been a week since i’ve born her tantrums, her smile, her blows…babji i cannot bear it anymore…i will become devdas if i stay like this…i have already grown such a big beard…i am always sad…karan and Rahul find that i resemble the beggar down the street…my idiot friends…they must be kissing their gfs somewhere…
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They’ve left me to face this cruel world alone)

N he wiped his invisible tears…

❤️on the other side❤️

TWinkle was seated below the same tree n was in deep reflection…

Twinkle’s POV
Babaji mujhe raasta dikhaiye! Mera bandar bhi naa! Kitna bhaao khata hai! Akad ke aisa chalta hai jaise kahin ka Raja ho…maine kya kuch try nahin kiya…msg…phone…yahan tak Punjabi Pataka ne sirf uske liye letters bhi likhe…pure saat din tak guilty wala face lekar ghoomi hoon…but usspar koi farak nahin pad raha hai….dekho! Laad saab aise ghoom rahe hai jaise chaand par jhanda gaad kar aaya ho! Gussa to uske nak par tandav karta rehta hai! Kabhi kabar mann karta hai ki usse zor se gale lagaaoun aur uska gussa pee jaaoun! Par vo to magnet ka same wala pole ban gaya hai…jitna kareeb jaaoun…utna door bhaagta hai….
(Babaji please show me the way! This monkey! He is so difficult! He is always arrogantly walkinh like a king…i have tried everything…msg…phone…I have even written letters for him…i have roamed around the school with a guilty face for seven days only for him…but he is not affected at all…look at him! He is roaming around as if he has achieved some great thing! Anger is always on his nose! Sometimes i feel like hugging his anger away! But he is always like a side of a magnet..no matter how close i go to him he goes twice as far as before…)

She made a pout.

T-par main bhi Twinkle Taneja hun! Ab iske hosh thikane lagane hi padenge!
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Kunj tumhein andaaza bhi nahin hai ki ye saat din kaise beete hai…jo tum mujhe samjhana chahte the vo mere palle pad gayi hai…itna aasaan tha to mere saath rehkar mujhe ehsaas dilaana chahiye tha! Khaamakha mujhse bhir gaye! Ab galti ki hai to sazaa to milegi hi….
Ab Miss Amritsar pyaar ka izhaar karegi! Par apne andaaz mein…
(But even i am Twinkle Taneja! I have to set his mind in place!
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Kunj u have no idea how i’ve spent these seven days…i have understood what u wanted me to…if that was this easy u could have made me realise it by staying with me…u’ve messed with me for no reason..now that u’ve done a mistake, u’ll have to pay for it…now Miss Amritsar will confess her love….but in her style..)

She gave a bright smile..

Kunj’s POV
Ye siyappa queen kiss baat par itna phool rahi hai? Daant to aise dikha rahi hai jaise jung jeetkar aa gayi ho….beta ye Siyappon ki maharani hai…iska smile khatron ka aagaaz laata hai! Tu apna bandobas kar beta…tera bura waqt jaise shuru hone wala hai….
(Why is this Siyappa Queen smiling like this? She is happy as if she has won a fight…kunj she is the queen of siyappas…her smile is dangerous! Make arrangements for urself…seems like ur bad phase is going to start….)

❤️Next Scene❤️

T(to herself)-sorry Kunj…tumko paane ke liye agar mujhe khud ki hi baali dena pade to mujhe manzoor hai…Twinkle Taneja ne pure tashan se dosti ki hai…aur pyaar…pyaar pure junoon ke saath karegi!!
(Sorry Kunj! If to get u i have to sacrifice myself then so be it…Twinkle taneja has fulfilled her friendship with full tashan…n love…she will love with full passion)

‘Knock knock’

Y-ohhh to Miss Taneja ne entry maar hi di? Kuch zyada jaldi nahin aa gayi aap? Class shuru bhi nahin hui hai aur…
(Ohh Miss Taneja has finally entered my class? Aren’t u toi early? The class has not even started n ….)

Yuvi said with a smirk….while eyeing her from top to bottom…

She just handed him a letter n went away from there…
Yuvi hastily opened the letter…

‘I am really sorry sir…i know mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha. Teacher bhagwaan ka roop hota hai…pls mujhe maaf kar dijiye…aayinda aisi galti nahin hogi…n if you dont mind…may i join the class again? Uss duffer Kunj ke vajeh se mein apna semester barbaad nahin karna chati hun…pls…’
(I am sorry sir…i know i shouldn’t have done that. A Teacher is a form of god himself…pls forgive me…such a mistake will not be repeated…n if u dont mind…may i join the class again? I can’t afford to spoil my whole semester for that duffer Kunj….pls…’

Yuvi smiled at the letter and held it near his chest…

Yuvi’s POV
Meri Twinkle ko mujhmein rab dikhne laga? Use meri kadar hone lagi hai…chalo letters chupane ka kuch to faayda hua…
(My Twinkle sees god in me? She has started to realise my worth…at least hiding the letters has been of some use…)

❤️flashback❤️

Twinkle used to deliver letters in front of Kunj’s house everyday after college. After she went away, yuvi used to take those letters….

‘sorry Kunj…tumhein pata hai…jabse tumne vo 440 volt ka jhatka diya hai…meri neend haraam ho gayi hai…jo tum mujhe samjhaana chahte the..vo mein samajh gayi hun….par ek problem hai…mera dil jiske liye dhadakta hai na…vo mujhse root gaya hai…dil murjhaya sa lagta hai…please mujhe gale lagakar meri dil ko tootne se bachaa lo…missing u my bandar….

YOUR Siyappa Queen’

(‘Sorry Kunj…u know? I am not able to sleep since u’ve given me that 440 volt shock….i have understood what u wanted me to…but there’s a problem…the person who has my love is angry with me…pls hug me and save my heart from being broken….missing u my monkey…

YOUR Siyappa Queen’)

Yuvi looked at the letters with red and angry eyes….He threw all the letters away hysterically. He broke the glass on the table, took one piece and wrote a ‘T’ on his arms…

‘AHHHHH’

Y-sorry jaan! Par tum sirf meri ho! Filhaal bhatak gayi ho par jald hi tum apni asli manzil tak pahunch jaaogi…galti meri hi hai…main pehle aaya hi nahin..par der aaye durust aaye…ab main tumhein kisi aur ka hone nahin dunga!
(Sorry jaan! But ur only mine! As of now you’ve gone astray…it is my mistake only…i was not here before…but better late than never…now i will not let u be somebody else’s!)
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(Looking at the injury)
Aur jahan tak iss dard ka sawaal hai…tumhi isspar marham lagaogi…ye vaada hai mera..
(N as far as this injury is concerned…u only will make it alright…thats my promise…)

N he smirked…

❤️end of flashback❤️

Y-uski hasi se phool khil jaye, uski khushboo se hawa mehek jaaye, uski aakhon ki tez dhar se dil paar ho jaaye….

❤️in the corridor❤️

P-Are u sure Twinkle? Tune sher ke munh mein haath daala hai…mujhe vo cartoon bilkul theek nahin lagta hai….
(Are u sure Twinkle? U’ve entered the lion’s cage…..i do not find that cartoon right…)

Twinkle assured her with her eyes…n managed to convince her…

‘Kunj ke liye kuch bhi…’
(‘Anything for Kunj…’)

❤️Next Scene❤️

All entered in Yuvi’s class. Karan and Rahul were stunned to see Twinkle sitting on the front seat…

(Kunj did not attend his class after that incident…he took the notes fron KaHul)

Ka-bhabhi yahan?
(Bhabhi is here?)

R-haan yaar! Tujhe bhi dikh rahi hai?
(Yes buddy! Even u can see her?)

Ka-haan yaar par vo Yuvi ke class mein? Kunj ko pata hai?
(Yes but what is she doing in Yuvi’s class? Does kunj know?)

R-Kunj ko batana padega!
(We have to tell kunj!)

Karan started messaging Kunj.

Anju(karan’s gf)- Karan! Uss ladki ko kyun ghoor rahe ho? Dont u dare think about anybody else!!
But i know my laddoo is too sweet! He will not do that to me…u know i was thinking at night we could go on a long drive….but i dont have any dress…IDEA! We’ll go shopping then we will go to the cine…

She went on blabbering random stuff…

Ka(looking at his phone)-areee shut up yaar! Kisne apni gf ko khula chod rakha hai? Usse kaho Dimaag mat chaate! Meri maa! Jo karna hai karo par abhi mujhe baksh do! Mein bahut important kaam kar raha hoon…abhi vaat mat lagao!!!
(Ohh god! Shut up! Who has left his gf open? Tell her to stop irritating me! Do whatever u want but spare me! I am doind something very important!!!)

Anju-How dare u! Idiot! What the hell are u thinking ur doing???
Mein tumhein padosi ki gf lagti hun???
(How dare u idiot! What the hell are u thinking ur doing??? Do i seem to be the neighbour’s gf???)

Ka(still looking in his phone, unaware of who’s talking)-yaar koi iske munh par tape lagao!!!
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Finally msg gaya!
(Oh god! Somebody put a tape on her mouth!!!!
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Finally the msg is gone!)

R(whispering)-yaar msg nahin…tu gaya!
(Not the msg…but u’re gone!)

Ka-kya keh….
(What r u sayi….)

N he realised that it was Anju there..

Ka(stammering)- bbbbbb…bby tum kab aayi? Mmmmei…n vooh…..
(Bbbbbb…bby when did uu comeee? Iii waaas….)

N she slapped him hard across the face. Karan just touched his cheek while all the class burst out laughing…

R-haha…ho gaya…haha…na….
(Haha…it finally…haha…happened..)

He said in between the laugh..

Ka-shut up! Bas inn donnon ke beech mein sab settle ho jaaye…phir soot samet sab vapas loounga…
(Shut up! Let these two settle their matters first…then i will take everything back with interest…)

R-kya lega? Thappad??
(What will u take? A slap??)

N he burst out laughing.

By that time kunj arrived in class n he saw Twinkle sitting on the front seat…

❤️flashback❤️

Kunj was sitting on a bench…looking at the sky and the birds when his phone beeped.

‘Bhai bhabhi to class mein hai…tu kahan hai? Tune use phir se class mein aane kyun diya? Kameena gandi nazar se dekh raha hai…tu kahan murda bana baitha hai? Get ur a*s here!!’
(‘Brother! Bhabhi is in class…where r u? Why did u let her come in class again? That idiot is staring at her with lustful eyes…where r u dead? Get ur a*s here!!’)

K-Siyappa Queen!!! Arghh!!

❤️End of flashback❤️

He looked at KaHul n made a weird face…Karan still had his hands on his cheek n Rahul was all smiling….

K(to himself)-mujhse zyada inke hosh ude hue lag rahe hai..lagta hai sathiya gaye hai….anyways…
(They seem more shocked than me…seems like they’ve gone mad…anyways…)

He went towards Twinkle n lifted her up…

Yuvi started to boil with anger…

Y-ehhh! Ye kya kar raha hai? Maine doosra demo maanga hai kya? Neeche utaar isse!
(Ehhh! What r u doing? Have i asked for another demo? Put her down!)

K-TU APNE KAAM SE KAAM RAKH! Zyada bakbak kiya to mujhse bura koi nahin hoga! Agar tujhe apni izzat pyaari hai to bas apna munh band rakh! Aur vaise bhi…tujhe hi demos dekhne ka shauk hai…jaise teri harkatein hai…aise demos roz dekhne ko milenge! Stay away from my Twinkle varna tu nahin dikhega!
(MIND UR BUSINESS! If u talk too much, u’ll see the worst side of me! If u want ur respect to be unscathed then keep ur mouth shut! Anyways…u only like to watch demos…seeing ur doings…these will happen everyday! Stay away from my Twinkle otherwise u will no longer be seen…)

Meanwhile Twinkle was silently smiling n was overwhelmed at kunj’s move.

Twinkle’s POV
Kitne dinnon baad hum itne kareeb hai Kunj…mein ab kuch galat nahin hone dungi….I LOVE YOU my bandar…
(It has been so long ever since we’ve been so close…i will not let anything wrong happen now…I LOVE YOU my monkey…)

The next things she saw were his red eyes…she felt very hurt…as she had inflicted that pain to him…her heart cried. She caressed his chest where she felt his heartbeat…
Kunj was still sternly standing with Twinkle in his arms..

T-sorry Kunj…maine tumko nahin…khud ko chot pahunchayi hai…Mr Heart ab aap hi bataye..main sahi kar rahi hun na? Mera bandar mujhse rootha hai..jaanti hun ki ye sahi tarika nahin hai…par apne pagal aashik ko line par laana bhi zaroori hai…jiska haath thaamte hai uski ek galti par usse choda nahin karte hai…hai na?
(Sorry Kunj…i have not hurt u…but myself…Mr Heart u only tell me…i am right, arent i? My monkey is angry with me…i know this is not the right way out…but it is also necessary to bring my crazy lover on track….we do not leave the hands of the one we’ve held for his 1 mistake…do we?)

‘Dhak…dhak….’

T-yess aapko bhi aisa lagta hai! Aap na mere sachchi partner ho…phir aap iss khadoos ke saath kaise phas gaye??
(Yesss even u feel so! Ur my true partner….then how did u get stuck with this Mr Rude??)

(Note:Twinkle had her hands on his chest…n she was having a subconscious wala talk with Mr Heart…)

Kunj stormed out of the class with Twinkle in his arms.

Twinkle’s POV
Ab dekhte hain Mr Sadu! Tumhara zid jeetta hai ya tumhara gussa…
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GUSSA! Siyappa! Babaji maine iss baare mein socha hi nahin…kunj ka paara bahut chada hai…ab phir se daant padegi! Koi nahin…kam se kam mujhse baat to karega!

(Now lets see Mr Sadu! Does ur stubbornness win or ur anger…
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ANGER! Siyappa! Babaji i did not think about this…kunj is very much angered…now i will get scolded again! Never mind…at least he’ll talk to me!)

She smiled…

Kunj’s POV
Mein isse nahin chodunga! Itna sab ho gaya…vo phir bhi uss idiot ke class mein chali gayi!! Wait…ohhh to ab samjha! Ye sab uski chaal hai…taaki mein isse baat karoon…isiliye class se le jaate samay ye parcel hili bhi nahin…sorry jaan…hard luck…mein itni jaldi haath nahin aane wala hoon….
(I wont leave her! All this has happened…she still went in the class of that idiot!! Wait…now i get it! This is all her plan…so that i talk to her…thats why she did not budge when i took her from the class…sorry jaan…i wont come to u soo easily..)

He went towards the tree n looked at Twinkle. She was expecting him to say something to him but Kunj was too ahead of her..He just left her and
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BAAAMMM!

Twinkle was on the ground, rubbing her butt….

K(looking at the sky with folded hands)-sorry dharti maa! Aap pe itna bada weight daal diya! Par kya karta? Haath dukhne lage the!
(Sorry mother earth ! I’ve put such a heavy weight on u! But what could i do? My hands had started to pain!)

Twinkle made a ‘hawww’ wala shocked face while Kunj walked away with a smile….

Twinkle’s POV
bl**dy hell!! Itna kya hawa mein udna?? Khoobsurat ladki bhaao de rahi hai…par iss Mr Sadu ko koyi padi nahin hai! Ab vo aur uska gussa! Donnon bhar mein jaaye! I DON’T CARE! Huh!
(bl**dy hell!! Whi is he flying so high?? A beautiful girl is giving him some attention…but this Mr Sadu does not care! Now his anger and him can go to hell! I DONT CARE! Huh!)

She made a pout and rubbed her bum…

T-ouch!!!

PRECAP: Freshers party…twinkle drunk…..yuvi drunk…and kunj drunk…jaane konsa siyappa hoga….😌😊

❤️_______to be continued_______❤️

Shooo shorry once again! Par my phone is going crazy these days!
I hooe u guys will enjoy this one…the next in maybe 3 weeks…cuz i have a lap of 1 week in between my exams…

N i promise that the next will end some of ur ques😉😉

N sorry for the lame translations….
I will now get going…

Till then u can shoot in the dark n enjoy life while mine will suck with papers😅

N i hope TU has changed the name…if not sorry…

Love u all❤️

49 comments

  1. Ritzi

    |Registered Member

    Ayu..the dialogues…..phaaad dala….sach mei ….oh god…..mujhe tujhse milna…hai….accha pls can u tell me if u hv a what’s app account… Or fb…or insta…orrr twitter….accha thik hai kuch nhi hai thennn…CAN I HV YR AUTOGRAPH PLSS!

  2. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Awesome sweetheart ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Lovely episode
    Hilarious too😂😂😂😂😂
    Mazaa agaya
    Love u❤️
    All the best for ur exams👍🏻👍🏻

  3. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ayu,
    The episode was just superb. I loved it so much. TwiNj POVs💗💗 Gosh! But, Yuvraj?😤😤 What is he upto? Psycho kahin ka.. Zain is so good and this Yuvraj😏😏 Anyways, hope you get to post the next one soon as the precap is hell exciting.

    Well, one question. Do you read my ff – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? anymore? Cuz I don’t find you commenting for a long time. Just asking..

    Loads of love.💞

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Thank u Ria!!❤️

      N i am going to be honest…i do read it n i find it going😻😻
      But i started reading it late like after u had posted 9 epis i guess n mujhe itni sharam aayi to comment…bcuz i felt ashamed of myself kyunki i had not started reading it from the start of it….

      But i read them all n the plot is awesome n i lovee the despo kunj😂😂

      Sorry dear😅
      Hope u still love me❤️

      • Ria

        |Registered Member

        Why were you ashamed? It’s alright if you started reading late. Don’t worry.

        N I still love you sweetheart..Don’t worry.

  4. Twinjfan.tamanna

    |Registered Member

    awesome…sorry fr not cmmnting on previous epi yaar…really sorry…but this epi was so so cute…loved it..aur haan ek aur question Mauritius ke baare me…do Mauritius face cyclone every year n also a king cyclone once in fifteen years…plz do tell…aur haan epi jaldi post karna…ur ff is so cute…

    love u..

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Hey Tamanna!!
      Its perfectly fine dear!! I dont mind.

      N haan mauritius mein har saaal cyclones aate hain…mainly in jan n feb due to which humein chuttiyan milti hain which is awesome❤️

      King cyclone har 15 saal..not too sure…i guess the last major one was in 2002….but i was still a chotu baby..so dont remember…but haan cyclones r frequent in summer

      ❤️

    • SidVee

      Amazing epi as always.. n killer dialogues n povs😍😍😍.. I loved all the scenes.. that uv😬😬.. he hid twinkle’s letters for kunj.. ughh just hate him.. n aww , twinkle sher so kunj is sawa sher 😂😂.. you rock in each n every epi of yours.. best of luck for your exams 🙂

  5. Maggi

    |Registered Member

    This is what u col a perfect epi!!!!
    Mind blowing dialogues yaaar, luvd them❤
    I don’t know hw can anyone write soo good
    I’m gng gaga over ur ff!!!
    U rocked it dear….
    And lonnng epis😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Keep gng….
    CNT soon…
    I vl be waiting on my toes for ur ff…
    And AL the best for ur xms..
    U gonna rock it dear,so don’t worry
    Luv u💝💝💝

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Awww! Thank u soo much noodles❤️
      N haan my eng paper is tom…i am not stressed out cuz i read ur ff😌
      Puri dictionary jeb mein hai😂😂
      Thank u for ur wishes dear😘
      Love u too❤️

  6. Sushmitha

    Hey my sweetie u are making me mad how do you manage to write so well yar love you ayu and post asap if you can and all the best for ur exams dear and I’ll miss you very badly….. Love you 😘😘😘

  7. Kiran

    Totally in love with your ff 😍😍😍I’m a silent reader but this episode was so good that I had to comment. Pls post the next one soon as I can’t wait any longer I’m dying to know what happens next 🤔🤔🙄🙄btw you should probably become a writer b’coz u nailed it 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

  8. SidVee

    Amazing epi as always.. n killer dialogues n povs 😍😍😍.. I loved all the scenes.. that uv 😡😡.. he hid twinkle’s letters for kunj.. ughh just hate him.. n aww, twinkle sher so kunj is sawa sher 😂😂😂.. you rock in each n every epi of yours.. best of luck for your exams 🙂

  9. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Au sorry for commenting late Voh I was busy yesterday so sorry 🙂
    Loved the episode especially the part where Kunj’s friend called Twinkle bhabhi 🙂 (So sweet)
    And Kunj picking up Twinkle is so sweet and that Dumping her on the ground was ouch so painful for Twinkle but the dialogues were so sweet and Twinkle’s letter to Kunj was so sweet but that UV I wish I could kill him But not Zain ha I love him too 🙂
    Post soon 🙂

  10. Aamu

    |Registered Member

    first thing so sor sorrryyyyy……
    i had not cmnt on previous even not read…so sorry..
    lil bit busy wid exams…
    dis was amazing…
    ek baat bolti thi…bolti hu..or bolti rahungi..
    yaar tere har dialog muje jabardast lagte hai…
    mtlb…tu kese karleti hai ye sab…
    just outstanding..
    chalte raho…..
    hamara aashirvaad hamesha tumhaare saath hai baalak……hehe
    i think u r elder dan me…!
    den also baalak chalta hai…
    ok sorry for dis much bakbak..
    bahbye….
    jldi post kardena…..
    ab wait nahi karpaaongi..
    plsh
    is garib ki baat sunlena….badi behen samajh kr pls

    • Ayu

      |Author

      Aamu!!! Tu na mast hai! Thank u ssoooo much putri! Tera kalyaan ho👌
      zyada ho gaya na??? Par tu hai hi itni mazedaar! Baat karte thakti nahin hun! Thank u sooo much for such sweet comments❤️ Dil khush kar diya!!! Aur kisne kaha tu gareeb hai? Tera dil itna bada hai ki pura jahan sama jaaye❤️❤️❤️
      Love u😘 will try to post soon…waqt kahan milta hai yaar😓

      • Aamu

        |Registered Member

        Hmmmm…itni bhi taarif mat kar…kahin muje diabetes naa hojaye….
        Jldi post karde….
        Waiting…..
        Abhi read karpaaongi…I have holiday in school till 15…..

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