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HAMARI KAHANI DevShi few shots #1

Around 5’o clock

A cold breeze was felt with warmth of sun by the lady she gently opens eyes with smile on her rosy lips she grabs the blanket to cover the parts of the body and tightens the grip on his hand which was on her……… after some time
………… The lady was standing near French bye window looking the sunrise around 6’o clock ………………..
A hand surrounds her waist her body felt the jerk for one second next second she felt the warmth in his embrace and with smile U WOKE UP DEAR

Hmmm he replied to her in sleeping mood (place his head on her shoulder)
Lady turns around to face him without disturbing his position and caresses him with love and he opens one eye and see her with sleeping mood he finally opens his mouth I am not done with sleep
Lady – then you go n sleep naa
He – I want to sleep in ur embrace

Lady smiled
they head towards the bed she sat placing a pillow in the gap between her and the wall and he just slept on her lap seeing beautiful curve on pretty face she twirled her fingers into his hair and continued caressing she eyes the charming face of him and lost in thoughts (by now you can understand right they are none other than our dev and sona)
(Now we enter into her mind to read her mind)
4 years back

Gang of four girls entered the mall and sona was given a task that she should go to scary house alone (as she was late and always late so they gave her punishment)
Sona says huh such an easy task I will finish it in minutes and gives a bravery speech and with lots of courage she enters into the scary house before going inside she waved them with smile as soon as the doors closed the smile turns into a frown closes her eyes and start moving inside she thought she walked half way but she was just few steps away from entrance then she opens her eyes just to find a mummy walking towards her by this she was frightened and begins to run with closed eyes

Lights were flickering scary background music (sounds of anklets, sounds of wolves) is heard
A handsome guy was laughing in this environment suddenly from back girl bumps on him and tightly holds his hand and side hug him
Guy stopped laughing tries to look who was she but he can’t see her due darkness and flickering lights
He decides to head out he tries to move but the lady doesn’t move and tightens her grip on him
He understood that she was frightened
By caressing her back
R u alone ?

She could just nod in yes
He pats her on shoulder
Look into my eyes he said by placing his mouth near to her ear
She looks into into his eyes
He also looks into her eyes (eye lock)
By holding her he moves towards the exit they were lost in each other eyes they are out everyone was staring them guy comes into senses and pats her with this she is back to senses
They Composes themselves tries to get a glimpse of each other

(Guy is non other than dev)
Girl was wearing Burqa dev could only see her eyes now they were bright and twinkling

He smiled and about to say it’s k but before he could say anything she disappeared from his sight

She runs into wash room she splashes water on face breath heavily and clamdown (after 5mins)
She comes out and search for him and find him near cafeteria quickly hides and spy on him
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I seriously don’t think I can write it’s strengths given by u all

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  1. Angel20

    The start was amazing!??
    And the fb is also nice…
    Post the next part soon!

    1. Dhira

      Thanks a lot ? I will try to post it soon but kind of busy

  2. Awesome one desperate for next episode.

    1. Dhira

      Thank you ?

  3. Rj12

    amazing post soon

    1. Dhira

      Hey Rithika thank you ?

  4. Manya

    Dhira it’s awesome ❤️❣????????❣
    I am also scared of haunted houses I went there many times but just returned after some time ??

    1. Dhira

      Hey Ayushi thank you very much glad you liked it
      ??? Dev jisa ko yi nahi miley

    1. Dhira

      Thank you

  5. Azzuu

    its mindblowing dhira
    plz post next one soon

    1. Dhira

      Thank you so much glad you liked it I will try to post soon but kind of busy ?

  6. this episode is very nice..plz keep posting daily as i can’t wait long for such an awesome ff

    1. Dhira

      Thank you so much I will try to post it soon

  7. Raya

    Nice.. continue.. You write pretty good.. Post next asap

    1. Dhira

      Thank you for the compliment ? I will try to post it soon

  8. Aaru

    Luvly start n interesting end..

    1. Dhira

      Thank you Aaru glad you liked it

  9. Yashfeen

    Yr..dhira u made my night I shud say…I imagine d morning in d same way as u imagined..it ws so beautiful wid a touch of peace n serenity…
    Whole epi ws osum bt d part before the flash back, ws mind boggling….
    Update soon..cnt wait..

    1. Dhira

      Thank you so much glad you loved it and ? great our thoughts meet ? I will try to post soon
      Thanks again for the compliments

  10. Shirakawa lovely ??????.awesome start ??plz post nxt epi soooooooon.?

    1. Dhira

      Thank you ? I will try to post it soon

  11. Sakthi

    Wow dhira dear..what a fresh start..it was superb,amazing..wil wait for next dr.

    1. Dhira

      Hey Sakthi thank you so much I will try to post it soon
      missing you and your ff badly post soon dear I know you would tried because of journey but plz post soon
      Lots of love ?????

    2. Sakthi

      Thanku so much dear.i have updated it..

  12. Erina

    Hey dear i have told u earlier na ki u r awesome vala writter nd u should continue….but that time i don’t know ki tm itne superb nikloge, i’m totally shocked….
    What to say now i think u understand what ur ff means to m phir v i’ll say its amazing, commendable, awesome ????????????????
    Post soon dear i’m dying to know what next happens
    Loads of love Erina

    1. Dhira

      Hey Erina u boosted so much that I could write this well thanks I was waiting for your comment and thanks for the shower of compliments i will try to post it soon
      Lots of love ???

  13. Dhira

    Hey Erina u boosted so much that I could write this well thanks I was waiting for your comment and thanks for the shower of compliments i will try to post it soon
    Lots of love

    1. Erina

      Its my pleasure dear that my comment means this much for u. I’m super happy after knowing this. Nd sorry dear for late comment….
      What i lastly want to say is its only u who wrote in such a interesting nd beautiful manner dear, maine kch nhi kiya. Maine to bas tmne jo hath badhaya tha usse thama hai (I only hold ur hand of ff which u have given to us in faith bcse d story nd way of representing attracted me)
      So thankque for giving me such a awesome vala epi nd compliment too dear

  14. Hey dhira!!!!
    First of all….sorry ? for commenting late
    Secondly…..episode was awesome, amazing ?????❤️???❤️????….loved it …. Nice and different concept and I’m eagerly waiting for the next…??

    1. Dhira

      Thanks a lot glad you loved it
      No worries
      Lots of love tc

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