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Hadh Se Bhi Zayada (sdch) One Shot

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RIYA , NIYAA , RUWANI , DHRUTI , SWETHA , ANU , DHRUVI , MITALI , ABHILASHA , VRUSHTI , PRIYANSHI , ANEE DIVYA, TUMPAMONI , ANONYMOUSAA, AAFIYA , KAJAL, ERICAA, RIVANYA, PRAKRUTI, SANU, SHINING , AMNAA AND SILENT READERS .

Yaadon Mein Aane Wale Tera Sukraiyaa.
Dil Ko Behlana Wale Tera Sukraiyaa
Kyun Karta Hai Aaj Ke Zamane wale Mera
Kaisi se Dosti Nhi
Hume Dost Kehne Wale Tera Sukraiyaa
Maana Ke Aap Sab Se Dooriyaan Kuch Zyada Badh Gayi. Haan Par Aap Sab Ke Hisse Ke Waqt Hum Aaj Bhi Tere Hi Yaad Mein Guzarte

Friends ki kami ko jante hai Hum.
Duniya ke Dard ko pechante hai Hum
Saath hai Aap Jese Friends Ka
Tabhi Toh Zindagi Has Ke Jeena Jante hai Hum.

Thanks for being there for me when I didn’t knw i needed it.

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Let’s start

A girl was continually calling someone. She gets tensed and messaged him. Rohan baby where r u. R u ok. Y r u not taking my call. Pliz reply. Some hr passed Rohan didn’t replied. She again calledhim and this time she got lucky he picked her call. Girl was happy to hear his voice. Girl asked same question wat she messaged him

Rohan – sanchi yaar y r u continually calling me.

Sanchi – Rohan wat happened u seems to be upset. Pliz share with me

Rohan – sanchi I’m just upset. I’m just fed up with u. I want to tell u something .Promise me u won’t cry

Sanchi -ok

Rohan -sanchi i want break from u. I just fed of lying. I have someone in my life.

Sanchi (crying) – Rohan pliz dnt say this baby I love you. I can’t leave without u. I’m sorry if I hurt u. Pliz dnt leave me. Pliz baby pliz . I’ll always called u and always apologised u even it was not my mistake. Pliz dnt leave me.

Rohan -sanchi pliz try to understand I dnt love u. I’m switching off my mobile dnt call me and dnt message me.

Sanchi – baby I love u very much dnt do this. I’m begging u. Pliz baby I love u.

Rohan -sanchi I’m disconnecting the call.

Sanchi -pliz dnt I love you I can’t leave without u.

Rohan -enough is enough sanchi. If you love me ,message and call me ill die. U knw I’m crazy. I can do it

Sanchi -ok baby if u happiness lies on someone I’ll do it. I love u baby.

Rohan – good girl and remember no phone call and message I’m disconnecting it and afterthat I’m going to switch off. Bye take care.

He disconnected the call .Sanchi sits crying. She remembers all her moments with him. She is shattered. She slept crying.

One year After. Sanchi was busy in laptop.She gets a call from unknown number. She recieved it.

Sanchi -hello

Unknown – hello baby how r u.

Sanchi -whose this

Unknown – baby have u forgotten I’m ur baby Rohan.

Sanchi gets teary eyed listening to him

Sanchi – It’s been One year Rohan. Anyways how’s ur girlfriend.

Rohan -she’s good we’re engaged

Sanchi -that’s gud u .I’m happy for u. Ur happiness is lies on her instead of me.

Rohan -baby I’m sorry pliz forgive me

Sanchi -ive forgotten everything u also forget that.

Rohan 😭😭 – I’m sorry baby. I knw wat u felt one year before. She left me. I knw wat it feels when I left u . I’m really sorry I couldn’t understand ur love. Pliz cum back to me. I’ll love you more than my life .Pliz cum back . I want to live again in ur eyes .In ur shoulder with u. I’ll wait for u. Atbaar kauruga. Hadh Se bhi Zayada tumse pyar karunga.

Sanchi 😭😭😭 – atbaar nhi karna, intezar nhi karna. Hadh Se bhi Zayada tum kisi pyar nhi karna.

Rohan 😭😭 – do you love someone.

Sanchi 😭😭- I’m engaged.

Rohan 😯 – pliz break ur engagement and cum back to me. Dnt disconnect my call

Sanchi – i can’t i loved u and he loves me truly despite knwing that I have a past. He’ll does everything to make me happy, make me smile. Im engaged to him and this week is my marriage. U r my past and he is present and future. He’s done lot of things, he was with me when no one stood for me. He fullfilled my all wishes. Now my turn to love him back. To stand with him in his ups and downs. Now my chance to fullfill his wish. He is my habit now. I can’t resist him. Bye

She disconnects the phone. She kneels down and cries. Someone was hiding behind he too gets teary eyed and went. Otherside rohan was crying. He could feel pain when sanchi felt pain when he left her.

Sanchi takes out some pics and looks at them and huggs them. She cries and thought now my turn to make u special when u made mine when I was sad. In fb it shows sanchi was sitting alone crying when she gets tapped on her shoulder. She turns back and saw a hot handsome tall boy giving her chocolate.Boy sits beside her. Sanchi was leaving when boy held her hands and make sanchi sit. He asked her to tell y she is crying. He took his phone and clicked selfie with her. Sanchi gets angry and tried to slap him for clicking pic forcefully. He holds her hands and said chipkali. Sanchi gets shocked to hear it. She tries to recall something. She looks at him and he nodded. Sanchi said golu and hugged him tightly. He responded too and after sometime they broke the hugg. Sanchi told him golu u r so handsome. Golu replied chipkali I knw I’m handsome and I m Kabir Kappor. Sanchi smiles. Kabir looks at her lovingly.

Kabir asked him y she is crying. Sanchi told him about everything. He gets teary eyed. He asked her to tell his name I’ll inject him.Sanchi asked him to relax. She asked him y did you cum here. Kabir replied becz my uncle called me to marry my best friend. Sanchi asked him wat he said. Kabir nodded. Sanchi appologized .Kabir said no I’m sorry sanchi. I thought u wait for me.

Sanchi looks at him. She told him that that time we were small. Kabir told her but he always waited for her. Kabir asked sanchi not to cry he will refuse to uncle but on one condition. Sanchi asked wat condition. Kabir smiled and told her not to cry infront of me or else I will say yes for marriage and u have to show this city to me. Sanchi wiped her tears and smiles. Kabir too smiled. Kabir asked her for selfie. They clicked Lots of selfies. End of flash backs.

Now let’s go to Kabir room. Kabir looks so disturped y because he heard everything.He looks at his engagement and kissed it. He remincing something
In fb many days passed to 5 months sanchi started to laugh; smile and watch movies with Kabir. When she gets teary eyed Kabir appears from no where and lights her mood. Sanchi enjoying kabir company .Everything seemed to be happy between friends but one day sunil threw a party. He announced kanchi engagement. Kanchi was shocked.They looks at eachother. In heart Kabir was happy becz he loves her since childhood. But he was sad seeing sanchi sad. Sanchi gets teary eyed and runs upstairs. Kabir followed her.

He went asked sanchi dnt worry I’ll do anything to stop this engagement . Sanchi runs and huggs him. Kabir was shocked. Sanchi asked him do u love me. Kabir asked wat type question u r asking. Sanchi asks him answer her question.Kabir replied Yes I love you. I’ll be happy if we get married but I’m not shelfish. My love is not important than ur happiness. Sanchi told him that she is ready for this engagement and to marry him.

Kabir asked him r u insane wat r u saying. Sanchi told him that She likes him. She’ll be happy if he will be her husband. Kabir asked her to think twice. She doesn’t love him. Sanchi holds his hands and takes him downstairs. Sanchi makes him wear ring. Just then sunil got a heart attack and died. They do his last rites. Many days passed kanchi cuming closer day by day. End of flash back

Kabir – it’s been One year sanchi. Our engagement is not done yet. I think this is God signalled that I’m not made for u. I still see love in ur eyes for him. I wanted to see this for me but it’s not in my destiny.

He sleeps. In the morning sanchi went to kabir room and saw him missing. She searches him everywhere. But didn’t get it. She again went to his room and her eyes went to some letter and ring .She picks it up and reads it. Sanchi I’m sorry I’m leaving u. Ur happiness is mine. I think u should go back to him. U deserve him not me. God gave ur love back. Make bye him wear this ring .take care your. …Kabir.

Sanchi cries she threw all the stuffs in kabir room. Something fell down. Sanchi saw it and gets happy. She picked it up and smiles.

Aftersome Kabir cums back. He stealty enters his room and saw all dark. He slowly slowly went to power point and switched all the lights .He gets shocked to all his room decorated with red balloons; hearts hanging and all kanchi pics hanging otherside. He gets tapped on his shoulder. He turned back and saw sanchi. Sanchi slapped him.

Sanchi – y u returned back . U Left me. Now go.

Kabir -i forgot something .I’ll find it and will go.

Sanchi -ok go and find it

Kabir went and searches something. He gets a letter. He reads it THE THINGS U NEVER KNEW IS U R MY SUNSHINE, MY GRAVITY, U R MY EVERYTHING.

He puts letter aside and searches something he again finds the letter. He reads it THERE IS FIRE IN MY HEART. THAT I NEVER WANNA GO APART. UR LOVE MUST BE DOING MAGIC THAT SORROWS SEEMS TO BE DEPART.

He again puts letter aside and went otherside to find something. He again found the letter.

He looks at sanchi and she turns otherside smiling. Kabir again searches something. He again found a letter with ring, and rose. He reads it EVERYDAY I WAIT FOR U TO CUM, CUM BACK AND HUG ME HARD. EVEYTIME I THINK ABOUT U, I WISH WE NEVER GO APART. THANKS FOR MAKING ALL THE WORRIES SO GONE. U R THE ONE WHO ALWAYS MAKE ME SMILE. THANKS FOR LOVING ME LIKE A LOVE SONG. I WANNA BE HIGH TO U LOW. I WANNA BE THE EYES TO UR BROWS. CAUSE BABY I WANT TO GROW OLD WITH U. MY HEART SKIPS A BEAT. WHEN EVER I SEE UR FACE. MY LOVE INCREASES .WHENEVER U CARE EACH PHASE. EVEN THE FOES SEEMS FRIENDS. WHEN U SMILE AT THEM.I RELY MYSELF ON U. FOR BEING THE ONE FOR ME. I HANDOVER MY HEART TO U FOR TAKING CARE OF ME. IN MY LIFE TIME U R MY MATE. THIS IS FIX FOREVER AND IT IS TRUE MY DEAR. BABY I’M ADDICTED LIKE A FOOL. BABY I JUST CONTROL IF I’M GOING CRAZY LIKE A HELL. THEN I DNT EVEN WANNA STOP. MY HEART TWINKELS WHEN UR EYES SPARKLESS. MY ANGEL U R MY GROOM. I LOVE U.

Kabir couldnt stop himself he hugged sanchi tightly. After sometime they broke hugg. They have a passionate kiss. Aftersome they move apart. Sanchi kneels down and makes Kabir wear ring. Kabir too kneels down and make her wear ring. Bg plays Mile ho tum humko.

Sanchi shows Kabir something. Kabir hits his forehead. Sanchi smiles and said u left this. How careless u r. Kabir holds his ears and looks at sanchi.

Sanchi -bhudu how can u forget ur passport.

Kabir -actually I rushly went to airport. I was searching my pasport there than I got to knw i left passport at home.

Sanchi -thank God I got ur passport. So I knew u will cum here to take ur passport. So I’ve arranged this.

They hugged eachother. After one week they got married.

After 25 yrs a old man is addimitted in hospital. He searches for someone when a old lady enters. Man asked sanchi look u r old. Sanchi told him Kabir u r old than me. Kabirs vision gets blurred and he lays on sanchi lap and breathes his last breath. Sanchi saw him and she puts her head on him and she also breathes her last breath and died with Kabir becz she got heart attack.

The End

Sorry for boring one. Just wrote it wat cums to my mind. It’s all blunder.

13 Comments
  1. Its not boring its so amazing…….. It made me cry…… Loved it very much

  2. Dhruti

    ashu ashu ashu love you core of my heart and i’m luckiest one who got friend like you and all my kanchi’s family’s friends i love you all………….
    and this os was superb, mind blowing, fabulous, i have not a single words to praise you dear l just love this os………………….post next story soon………………i’m waiting for it………………..love you ashu………….tc…………see you………………….

    1. Dhruti

      you told me na you never say that your story is boring and you said again hmm!!!!!

  3. Riyarocks

    Ashuuuuuuuu………how dare u call my Ashu’s writing, boring? thappad pad jayega……..dear, this was a full on entertainment package, with every emotions in it…….an out of the world plot from a khidkitod writer……sweety, u bought tears in my eyes at the end, don’t worry, happy waala………kanchi r meant to be together, chahe iss duniya mein ho, chahe, doosre duniya mein……kanchi, together, forever………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……….bye……tc………

  4. Anu88

    So so amazing story short…….iss story ko par kar ankh me asu Agae dost…….superb yaar……..I love it so so much……..

  5. Ashu agar faltoo baatein ki toh do maar khaogi mujhse……I am speechless ……You made me cry…..It’s emotional…..every part described beautifully……I have no words to praise u girl……U nailed it my suspence queen…lots of love 😍 😘 ….Sorry for not com mention on previous chapters because my exams going to start.

  6. Awesome… Superbbbbbbbbbb…..It was not at all boring…. Post soon… Take care…

  7. Thanku sooo much 4 writing…….i luvvv u n the os was blockbusterrr

  8. Niyaaa

    Ashi tera marne ka irada h kya yaa yamraj ko supari deke aayi h apne naam ki… haan… tabhi itni baar mana krne k baad bhi ye boring word teri zubaan i mean tere hathon me or tere post m aa jaata h… nd obviously phir hamsri anlhon m… chubne laga h mujhe ye word isse m dictionary se udha k FAQ dungi… samjhi.. okay… huhhh… relax niyaa relax itna gussa mat kar..πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯ btw os kamaal dhamaal bemisaal.. mixed emotion ka bhandaar… jo sabko hila daale.. Lovvv u sweety post nxy other😘😘😘😘😘tc gud ni8

  9. Priyanshipp

    Ashu ashu ashu u nailed it dear. ….. I was missing ur ffs yaar.super Happy to see u . This was a perfect os dear. Chik chik boom fireee. … but the end made me cry dear. It was really heartouching in the last. ….. sorry for not commenting on ur lasts posts. But I do read them all nd one more thing I may not be able to comment this week bcoz I have my tests but I promise I will like them all. Nd pls keep writing dear. Luv u loads my siso. πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

  10. Prakruti

    Great job Ashnita
    It was fantastic
    Loved it❀

  11. Anee

    Great Job Ashu. Love it

  12. Super fabulous fantastic mind blowing

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