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Home»Fan Fiction»Gusthak Dil -SWASAN (part 4)
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Gusthak Dil -SWASAN (part 4)

shruthisBy shruthisJune 22, 201652 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hello guys …how are you all and I hope all are doing fine 🙂

Previous part link :

http://www.tellyupdates.com/gusthak-dil-swasan-part-3/

Soo here is the next part ..

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The one who was giggling was nisha their little princess….
nisha’s pov:
I will nlow sthoww that rithu mly pappa is althsoo thelre..
(I will now show that rithu my pappa is also there)
End pov
All were amazed to see their princess giggling and a small smile appeared in all the faces…all were seated discussing out about the engagement …the maheshwari’s told them that they would share the marriage work equally and will talk to panditji(priest) about engagement date and let you know…
While they were leaving nisha poked sanskar said
N: whele ale yolu thoging…pappa yolu wiill nolt sthay wilth uls?
( where are you going ..pappa you will not stay with us?) and she pouted
S: I have to go princess I have work ,I promise I will meet you daily and after mine and your mumma marriage you will come and stay with us..
N: othkay(okay) …she smiled sheepishly …..
And they left to maheshwari’s mansion..
Later on in the night ..
In laksh and ragini’s room
Laksh pulled ragini by her waist and they were lost in that moment…their trance broke when they heard a knock ..they parted away..
Laksh opened the door and saw sanskar was eagerly waiting for him..
L: heyp bro ..what’s wrong you here at this time ??
S: actually I’m he..re to ta.k..e sw..a..r..a’s numbers(fumbled with word)
L: wohh …someone is eager to talk with his would be fiancé..he grinned..
Sanskar hit his shoulder
S: lasksh …give the number
And then laksh gave swara’s number wishing eachother they went to their respective rooms.
Sanskar’s room
His pov
Should I call her..noo noo…bad idea sanky..no I think I should call her after all she is my would be wife….But if misunderstand why I am I calling her…if she thinks I am desperate ..no I can’t let it happen..BUT…
Finally giving up he dialed her number…next when he hear a cutie voice and smiled widely..
S: hello princess this is pappa…
On the other side..

Swara pov
I was trying hard to make he lil baby sleep…she is cribbing and nagging around not going to bed …she was ranting continuously that she wanted to talk with her pappa…and I doesn’t have his number..
Sw: princess listen to me …I don’t have your pappa number ..
N: I wlant to talk wilth pappa..( I want to talk with pappa)
Suddenly my phone started ringing and my princess went to the phone and picked it up
N:yheloo(hello)..
N: pappa..She squealed in happiness..
I wondered how did he get my number…dumbass how could you forget ragini gave him my number..huhh..tch…my trance broke when my princess called me and gave me the phone..my princess was seeing me dreamily ..
I: hello
S: hello swara..Sorry to disturb you ..i hope you’re not sleeping
It’s night time everyone will sleep only..Unlike you she thought and said
I: no..Not like that..
S: did I disturb you..
You disturb me and ask me did I disturb you she thought..and said
I: it’s not like that I was just making nisha sleep …
S: ohh…
He then asked me do you have skype account and I just gave it to him ,he asked me to come on skype …
Whatis going on in my life we just met today and he wants to skype..god help me she thought…
I went online to the skype and made nisha sit near her..
He started vedio chat …I did the same..nishaa seeing screen suealed and started touching the screen..
S: hello princess
N: yeloo papa..
Sanskar totally ignored me while vedio call..he and nisha talked a lot..later he started telling the story to nisha and eventually she slept but the thing is I also slept while he was telling the story I felt soothed and I opened my eyes when some was calling me …I opened my eyelids..
S: sorry to disturb you..I think you are tired and I should have called..
Wahh realization soo soon I thought…
We wished eachother and dozed off
End of pov..

Next morning…
Sanskar’s pov..
I was sleeping peace fully and sunrays were disturbing my sleep ..I tossed to another side of the bed..
Then I felt someone is caressing my hairs slowly and I groaned…then I heard a voice …It was some girl’s voice..
G: sanskar get up naa
S: please let me sleep…he heard this voice somewhere …then again the girl said
G: sanskar listen get up naa..
This voice is swara’s..
G: she suddenly tilted her head little down …brushed her wet hairs on him…
Before sanskar could catch hold of her she left…and said
I woke up with jerk and said swara…
I looked here and there and came to conclusion that it was a dream..
I ran my hand through my hair and smiled widely …
End of pov

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soo here I end this part
Hoping you you all will like it 🙂
Thank you every one for sparing your valuable time to read my ff..
I am soo overwhelmed seeing your comments …please keep commeting
Thank you silent readers and I request you people to please comment.. 🙂 : )  
Do tell me how is this part..
Enough of my bak bak ..
byee all
love you a loads : *

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    52 Comments

    1. Hope on June 22, 2016 10:15 pm

      Yaar..plz gimme a bigggy chappy.. Plz
      (pouting n puppy eyes)…awesome waala epi n my sweethearts…swasan..

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:02 pm

        I’m sorry …i will pucca try to update long cahppy dear..
        thank you soo much for commenting hope 🙂

    2. SHAN on June 22, 2016 10:18 pm

      Awesome

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:03 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting shan 🙂

    3. Akshaya on June 22, 2016 10:19 pm

      so nice . loved that nisha baby

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:04 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting akshaya 🙂
        i’m glad you liked nisha’s character 🙂

      • Akshaya on June 23, 2016 3:07 pm

        🙂

    4. Purvi on June 22, 2016 10:24 pm

      Awesome…….. Continue soon……

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:05 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting purvi 🙂 will try to update soon..

    5. Rosey on June 22, 2016 10:33 pm

      Wow amazing dteam

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:06 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting rosey 🙂

    6. Radhika on June 22, 2016 10:40 pm

      Wow….

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:07 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting rhadika 🙂

    7. Anu Ann on June 22, 2016 10:54 pm

      Awesome episode dear … Loved sanskar and nisha’s bond

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:08 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting anu ann 🙂

    8. Sree_deeksha on June 22, 2016 11:10 pm

      Awsome one…

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:08 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting sree-deeksha 🙂

    9. sweety on June 22, 2016 11:22 pm

      Hey shruthi…. How are u dear….well today’s episode was awesome…… So sweet of nishu yaar….and the way ur writing her dialogues is so cute yaar……..loved it……hmm and sanky’s thinking while calling swara that she may consider him as desperate was giving a touch of reality to ur ff…….
      And once again I’m saying NICE CONCEPT 🙂

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:11 pm

        heyp sweety i’m good .how about you?…
        thank you soo much dear for liking the concept …it means a lot to me…
        you made my day dear by your comment 🙂 🙂 <3 : *
        love you a loads dear 🙂

    10. Priya on June 23, 2016 12:12 am

      Super

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:11 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting priya 🙂

    11. meena on June 23, 2016 12:24 am

      Nice

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:12 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting meena 🙂

    12. im_Sana on June 23, 2016 12:41 am

      great awsome but please update soon 🙂

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:12 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting Im-sana 🙂 will try too update soon ..

    13. cutiie on June 23, 2016 12:44 am

      Wow..nice part

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:13 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting cutiee 🙂

    14. s on June 23, 2016 1:08 am

      nyc

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:14 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting s 🙂

    15. Aahna on June 23, 2016 1:16 am

      Awsm yr

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:17 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting ahana 🙂

    16. shiksha on June 23, 2016 1:29 am

      It’s marvellous.

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:17 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting shiksha 🙂

    17. vyshu on June 23, 2016 9:03 am

      awesome

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:18 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting vyshu 🙂

    18. Soujanya on June 23, 2016 10:13 am

      Amazing

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:19 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting soujanya 🙂

    19. deeksha on June 23, 2016 1:10 pm

      nice one…………

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:19 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting deeksha 🙂

    20. anu on June 23, 2016 2:57 pm

      awesome.. update soon please…

      • shruthis on June 23, 2016 3:19 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting anu 🙂

    21. A.Kavya on June 24, 2016 9:53 am

      Hi dear..!! Wonderful story?? waiting for the next one

      • shruthis on June 24, 2016 12:42 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting kavya:) it means a lot to me 😀

    22. harshitha on June 24, 2016 1:12 pm

      Sooo sorryyyy for late comment I didn’t see this part until u mentioned in the comment I loved the chapter Nisha and sanskar bond is so cute loved ur ff ❤❤❤

      • shruthis on June 24, 2016 1:17 pm

        thank you soo much for commenting harshitha 🙂 it means a lot to me 😀

    23. Tulina on June 24, 2016 11:39 pm

      Post the next part ASAP……….

      • shruthis on June 25, 2016 1:28 pm

        ill try to upadte dear 🙂
        thank you for commenting tulina 🙂

      • Tulina on June 26, 2016 12:39 am

        Ur welcome and I have a little request please don’t bring kavita and all I mean in every ff there’s a love triangle please try to avoid it otherwise your ff has awesome concept

      • shruthis on June 26, 2016 9:50 pm

        dear my ff has no villan’s in it …i personally hate it 🙂 soo i hope i will be short and sweet 🙂

    24. lover on June 25, 2016 8:36 am

      Nice episode di specially trio chat on phone and skype;sanskar dream and sorry for late comment but I told you naa I was busy.

      • shruthis on June 25, 2016 1:29 pm

        thank you sooo much little sistaa i’m glad you liked it 🙂

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