GUILTY IS THE BEST PUNISHMENT

Im here with a crime thriller one shot….

There were couples named ragini and laksh…they find it difficult to meet each ends…during that time they got a golden opportunity to participate in a quiz competition which lead them to a trip to mumbai….

At hotel

Laksh:wow….rago…im very much happy…see we have our honeymoon…

Ragini:bt for that we need to win the game naa

At that time a middle aged man comes to them

Man:hii guyz…im shekar, im the organizer of this quiz….so u can get ur keys and can mingle with other participants

Raglak nodes and goes to their room…

At stage

Shekar:before conducting this game, I need ur signature, that whatever happens in this game, we are not responsible

All sighs the bound..

Like this way all contestants were eliminated at last it reaches raglak

Shekar:okk…now our question is..laksh, what do like or love in ragini

Laksh:I liked her long hair…it looks stunting when she left it open

Shekar:nice…so u r awarded 10crore rupee to ur account

Raglak:wow…thanku

Shekar:does u wish to go towards next level..

(Its a live show)

Raglak:yes…

Shekar:thats good..

Like this way many rounds were passed…all were quite easy…by their truthfull answer, they passed each level

Shekar:laksh….what happened

Laksh:ragini

Shekar:she is hear only

By saying shekar open a door..

Laksh she shocked to find ragini stuggling to breadth due to lack of oxygen

Laksh:raginiiii

Laksh was about to go

Shekar:its not easy laksh…..

Laksh holds his collar

Shekar:u r a part of game…if u want to rescue her, add a drop of blood to key hole

Laksh was shocked

Shekar:its simple laksh…go and save ur ragini

Laksh stood there

Shekar:ohh I forgot, u r scared of blood naa

Laksh in mind:how can he knw that

Shekar:ur time is very less laksh….save her or

Laksh; I will

Laksh goes towards the door and with much try, he was able to pick his hand..blood drops and he somehow managed to keep calm…

Like was saved….

At that time they heard a sound of laughing

Shekar:wow….now if u want to go out of this room….u need to do as I say

Ragini was suffocating..

Laksh:what the hell it is…is this a game

Shekar:we have alredy warned u..bt u guys are busy and greedy with money…so its ur duty to save each other

Ragini:what we should do

Shekar:simple, there is a scissor and a trimmer. .just shave ragini hair

Raglak are dazed

Laksh:u bastard…what are u sayinh

Shekar:(again laughs)

Ragini:do it laksh…else

Laksh with closed eyes, shaves away all her hair in head…

Ragini breaks down and cries

Ragini:my hair…

Laksh:im sorry ragini…bt we need to do it

Shekar:wow…see ur doors are opened..now move…

Raglak moves and tbey reaches next door

Shekar:now laksh…what u should do is…walk through the glass pieces

Ragini:what are u saying

Laksh:sir…plz leave us…we didnt do anything

Shekar:just do it…every time it was ragini who suffered now its time for u laksh…

Laksh walks through that with much pain..

At last they reached a room

A gun was kept infrnt of them

Shekar:take that

Laksh takes it

Shekar:now shoot the individual seen ryt infrnt of u

Laksh looks and finds a girl laying on the coat…

Laksh:I cant kill anyone

Shekar:then we will kill ragini….so choose

Laksh pulls the trigger and aims the girl…bt

Laksh:I cant..plz….ivant kill her..I cant kill her

Raglak comes near that girl..

They are shocked to find the girl

Raglak:SWARAAA

FLASHBACK

RAGINI WAS THE HEART THROBE OF THE WHOLE COLLEGE..THERE WAS NO ONE TO BEAT HER IN STUDY BEAUTY AND SPORTS..LAKSH WAS HER BOYFRIEND…THEY USED TO DATE EACH OTHER…BT ONE DAY

IT WAS FRESHERS DAY AND AS USUAL RAGLAK WERE BUSY IN RAGGING…AT THAT TIME THERE ENTERS OUR BEAUTY…WITH BLUE SALWAR SUIT LIKE A PRINCESS, WHOLE COLLEGE WERE AMUSED TO SEE SUCH A BEAUTY..EVEN LAKSH EYES WERE WIDE OPENED…BT GOR RAGINI, IT WAS A DEFEAT….

RAGINI WAS FUMING IN JEALOUS

RAGINI CALLS HER

RAGINI:HEY..U..WHATS UR NAME

GIRL:SWARA….SWARA GADODIA

RAGINI:I JUST ASKED UR NAME..NOT UR SURNAME

SWARA:SORRY MAM..

RAGINI GIVES HER A BOOK

RAGINI:COMPLETE THIS ASSIGNMENT AND GIVE IT BACK BY NOON…

SWARA WAS SCARED

SWARA JUST NODES AND MOVES…

AT NOON..

RAGINI NOTICES SWARA PLAYING BADMINTON AND GOES TO HER

RAGINI:DID U FINISHED ASSIGNMENT

SWARA:YES

RAGINI:SO U PLAY SHUTTLE

SWARA:YES..ITS MY PASSION

RAGINI:THEN PLAY WITH ME…U KNW IM THE CHAMBION OF THIS COLLEGE…LETS SEE WHO WINS…

ALL STUDENTS GATHER THERE

IT WAS A TOUGH GAME..BT OUR SWARA WINS..ALL CHEERS HER UP, SOMEONE INSULTS RAGINI L..WHICH CAUSE HER TO DESTROY SWARA…..SAME HAPPENS WITH EXAM….SWARA TOPPED IN THE UNIVERSITY…NOW ALL TOPIC WERE SWARA SWARA….ALL IGNORED RAGINI……

ONE DAY

RAGINI CALLS LAKSH

RAGINI:WERE ARE U

LAKSH:IM WITH SWARA….

RAGINI CUTS THE CALL IN ANGER

LATER

RAGINI:U FORGOT ME NA….

LAKSH:NO BABY…SHE IS JUST A TIME PASS

RAGINI:BECAUSE OF HER IM NOT ABLE TO RAISE MY HEADS…HELP ME LAKSH..

RAGINI STARTS TO CRY….AT LAST TBEY DECIDED TO DESTROY HER BEAUTY…

RAGINI CALLS SWARA AND ASK HER TO COME TO AUDITORIUM

AS SOON AS SWARA COMES THERE, RAGINI DRAGS HER HAIR AND MAKE HER FALL ON STAGE

SWARA:MAM…PLZ…LET ME GO

RAGINI:HOW CAN I…BECAUSR OF U ALL IGNORED ME…

SAYINF RAGINI TAKES OUT SCISSOR AND CUTS SWARA LONG BEAUTIFUL HAIR…

SWARA WAS CRYING LOUDLY BT NO ONE COMES TO HER AID

SWARA:RAGINI….UR HEART IS VERY BAD..THATS Y NO ONE LIKES U….

RAGINI WAS NOW OUT OF CONTROL

RAGINI:THEN LET ME SEE UR HEART

SAYING RAGINI TORN SWARA DRESS AND STABS HER HEART WITH KNIFE….

LAKSH WAS CLOSING THE MOUTH OF SWARA SO THAT NO SOUND COMES OUT….

TJEN RAGINI TAKES OUT ACID AND POURS ON HER FACE….AND THEN BODY…

RAGLAK LEFT

FLASHBACK ENDS

Raglak were terrified..at that time shelar comes there

Shekar:wondering how she got saved naa….

FLASHBACK

AT ALL TIME THIS WAS WITNESSED BY SANSKAR, WHO HAD A CRUSH ON SWARA..BT HE WAS NOT ABLE TO DO ANYTHING…INCE THEY LEFT HE GOES AND TAKES HER TO HOSPITAL

FLASHBACK ENDS

Raglak were crying in guilty

Shekar:what sin my shona did to u..y u did this to her

Ragini:shona

Shekar:she is my daughter swara…swara shekar gadodia

Raglak falls down

Shekar:just because of ur jealously…u destroyed my daughter naa…..y ragini y…..(shekar breaks down)

Soneone put hand on his shoulder

Shekar:sanskar…ask them beta…

Sanskar:baba..olz….we dont want to do anything…see tbey are in guilt..tbey will never be able to sleep peacefully…

Raglak:sanskar…we are very sorry

sanskar:does ur sirry bring bavk my shona…my wife

Raglak:wife

Sanskar:she is my wife…..now look at her..she is in come for past 5 years..will u be able to return her to me..as my old swara…no naa…

Shekar:I wish to kill bt I cant because, whenever I see u all, I feel like my shona is standing infrnt of u….else I would have killed u all……now get away…..

Raglak leaves frm there, with guilt in their heart…..

Sanskar comes to swara and hold her hands

Sanskar:whatever situation…I will nevrr leave u shona…u r my life…I have full faith in god….one day he will understand my love and return u back as my old cripy swara….

Suddenly swara hand starts to move…..sanskar notices this

Sanskar:thanku god…with my love , I will get her back….

Shekar too joins and hugs them….

The end……

Jealous can lead to worse circumstances…so be hapoy with what u have
How was this guys….enjoyed….anyways give ur feed back……

Urs salluzz

Credit to: salluzz

12 comments

  1. Naina

    Great OS dear…But 1 request write one where Swara is a villain na…actually all characters have turned villain in the show except my Swara but I would love to see her in negative shade…Don’t know why but negative characters are really cool?

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