A GROOM FOR ANNIKA (OS)

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“Annika puttar”- Dadi said smiling ,”What do you think about Omkara??”
“Bhaiyya bhaiyya!!..”- Annika muttered under her breath.
“I want you in our home permanently”- Pinky,the veteran actress with her loud mouth said ” I am happy at the way you helped our family and saved us from all the problem every time”.
“You are very caring and it will help Om to grow his hairs to some more inches”- Jhanvi said,”My Om will be very happy after his marriage with you”.
“Rakhi rakhi…”- Annika muttered once again.
“I will make both of you married soon”- Dadi tried very hard to control the bubble of laughter arising from deep inside her heart.
“Er..Dadi I was planning to tie a Rakhi to Both Om and Rudra in the upcoming Raksha Bandhan”- Annika said finally,”As Saahil don’t have an elder brother”.
” Oh..Then the next eligible bachlor is Billu”- Dadi looked sad,”but both of you always fight like Tom and Jerry”.
“If Shivaay ask you to marry him will you agree for that”- Tej said smiling,”Just answer my question”.
“No..never ..not at all”- Annika jumped from her seat ,”who will marry a Bhagad Billa who always kills his mobile brutally??”…
“I want you to marry Shivaay then”- Shakti broke his silent ,”Only you can tam the lion now”.
“Cat..I mean Billu”-Rudra uses his smart logically active brain,”Not lion”.
“Same to same “- Dadi replied back,”From the same family of Falidae”.
“Tia called and gave the good news that she is pregnant”- Shivaay entered the living hall loosening his tie and opening the first button of his grey shirt,”Now the way is clear”.
“Oh my maatha”- Shakti shouted,”How did this happened now”.
“I am happy for her Papa”-Shivaay smiled sarcastically,”she accepted that she tried to harm us and ran away with money right after marriage as planned by her mom and elder sister”.
“I knew it..I knew it”- Om Ru sang in unison,”that Lady baba is not good for our Shivaay bhaiyya”.
“I am happy that Lady Baba left my Billu in peace”- Dadi prayed God,”Who the hell brought her proposal to us”.
All remained silent . The answer is unknown still.
“Yay!!yay!!”- Rudra shouted,”The kawab ki skeleton is finally removed from the love story of my super hero bhaiyya”.
Tia cheated was not that blasting news. None of them were ever interested to make her their daughter-in-law ever.
” Will you marry Billu now”- Dadi again asked ,”Will you??”
“Why should I ??”- Annika returned the same question ,”Now that Tia left him behind after cheating and all of you are now traping me in the web of love!!”….
“Will you marry me Annika??”- Shivaay asked from his own mouth ..his husky voice more dangerous then his kanji blue eyes.
“Say say”-Prinku smiled slightly “now that Bhaiyya have proposed directly ..you have to agree for the promotion from my best friend to my bhabhi”.
“I will not..never”-Annika ran to poolside to collect her bag and key to leave Oberoi mansion. Shivaay followed.
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“Why are you denying the proposal Annika?”- He tugged her arm behind her back ,”this is a very good deal for you to sign with me”.
“Deal..deal deal…”- Annika felt immense anger to that Business addicted Bhagad Billa,”be in hell with your deal of marriage Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi”.
“I was in hell till today”- Shivaay tightened his hold on her arm to never let go of her ever ,”Now only I am in heaven “.
“Your Kanji green eyes are opened finally”- Annika accused,”Till yesterday it was closed. congratulation on your operation”.
“It is finally opened..thank you”-Shivaay hugged her close,”It was me who called Tia and gave a heart attack..not she who gave me heart break by disclosing about her husband and pregnancy news”.
“Heart break and heart attack !!”- Annika got confused,”what is the difference??”
“I denied her for marriage from my side..its of no reason to both the problems of heart”- Shivaay reasoned,”Her secret wish to destroy Oberoi family left unfulfilled”.
“I think you have gone mad after being heart broken by Tia”- Annika gave him the result of heart test.
“How can Tia break my heart when it was with you all these time?”- The dangerous Billu reasoned,”I said her last evening that I am canceling the wedding as I don’t want to marry her. She cried and then informed me about her husband,pregnancy and then the cheap trick of her mom”.
“Last night I talked with my family about their son falling in love with some one..”- Shivaay further revealed,”They must have told you about the same thing when I was not here as I heard very little last part of all your discussion down stair”.

“I am an orphan and you may found this deal have a limit of not having a naam,khoon,khandaan and hurt me again”- Annika laid her fear bare in front of him,”I am Annika only Annika”.
“Annika……”-Shivaay kept his hands as she respond,”I think you have a name to respond as you did now”.
“This lubb dubb sound of your heart…may be due to flow if blood there…”- He further cleared her doubt,”I think very large amount of blood is being pumped to your heart now..why Annika??”
“I don’t know Shivaay”- Annika is a self made scientist,”may be I am suffocated here in pool side and very less amount of oxygen is here to intake”.
“Is there any more thing to say !!”- Shivaay encouraged her,”I think about Khandaan”.
“Exactly the same”- she returned his word.
“What is the use of feeling proud about lineage when people does cheap work “- Shivaay broke his ideology,” no gene is defected in the body of a healthy person”…
“Thud!!”- Annika sat on the ground slipping from his little loosened by now arms ,”Who are you??you are not my Shivaay Singh Oberoi”.
“You are right yaar”- He joined her on floor,”Hi..I am Shivaay”.
“Your Shivaay!!”- her word registered his mind a little late,”only your Shivaay..Kanji ankhen wala Bhagad Billa..Billuji…”.
“This deal is very profitable for you it seems”- Annika threw her final dragger.
“I don’t know actually”- Shivaay brought her to his territory of arms again,”I am signing a deal first time from my Dil. I don’t think it is a deal..it is my love”….
“What ever is the situation is Shivaay”- Annika the judge concluded,” I will not marry you “.
“What the wuck!!”- He wanted to shout “Why Annika ??”- he maintained some peace by no murdering the new mobile he brought yesterday.
“Here by sitting beside you.”- Annika described,”I am feeling like a very Irritating Ghanti is ringing on my mind,some raita is being spread on my heart and a very sensual mich michi feeling is running on my whole body. How will I be able to live my whole seven life with the symptoms of the disease you have caused me”.
“Er…We will manage it together”- Shivaay couldn’t decide to feel pity,happy or to laugh out loud at her talk..

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65 Comments
  1. Fenil

    Fantabulous work sissy
    i have no words

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Fenil dear…

  2. My dear Astha….u r justt amazing…..when I saw ur name at the end then I realized thats why it is so amazing as Astha have written this…u r fabulous….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Zaveesha dear…You my have got confused first at the name of the story as it was quite unlike Astha Reddy type..I was in a hurry so typed the words that came to my mind first as its title… But later after finishing the story you realised about my name and work…

  3. Dhar

    A very very cute update, loved the direct confession

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Dhar…

  4. Awesome

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Debdutta…

  5. AMkideewani

    Superb, fantabulous, awesome, amazing di, I love it❤

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Sana dear…
      Love you

      1. AMkideewani

        Your crazy sis Samis always there for you di?

  6. Surbhi Sharma

    This was so cute di ??? . I really don’t have words . Seriously, Muahhh ????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi… powerful it is.. the kiss yaar.
      Thank you

  7. Alekhika20

    Lovely os

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Alekhika…

  8. Thedreamsoul

    This was so funny , loved it Astha di . I don’t know how you comeup with awesome stories like this .

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you yaar…
      Crazy mind crazy thoughts and love for Shivika…nothing else.

  9. Sairan

    Awww..wat a confession and deal..??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Sairan…
      yes deal of Dil…

  10. Navz

    At first..i thought..what the wuck!!om and anikas marriage proposal…what had happened to aastha??then after continued reading then i laughed at my own thoughts..
    Super cool os and here also u made ur bhaiyaa soo sweet and dil se sochne wala billujii is always loved.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya…Thank you..I hope you thought that Astha had hit her head with at least a thousand Kobaari…. Kumarswamy plz. save that crazy friend Astha of mine..ha ha….

  11. Astha diii!! As always you amazed me!!
    Loved the sudden change of phase from
    ‘Shivaay singh oberoi’ to just ‘shivaay’…
    Astha dii!! I know that ‘alien feelings’ is being delayed but plzz try to post it asap!
    I cant stop thinking about it..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana your wait is over finally as I have no other stories on line now except from Alien feelings U don’t have an way to delay it any more..I will update it on Saturday…
      Thank you ….

  12. I’m speechless

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nikita… Silent is the best way to show love sometimes…no need of words…thank you.

  13. Totally speechless. Loved it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Fffan…
      Love you too…

  14. Kavya347

    Hey Astha!!!! Firstly, i just loves this concept ???…..THE Shivaay Singh Oberoi jealous of his Own Brother and that too Om?…. Haha…. that’s a superb mind-blowing idea dear…And the way you presented it???…. It’s so sweet and interesting. Felt like watching a ‘specials’ episode!!!!And Om and Ani bonding… Wow… So adorable. And this is the best jealous-despo version of Shivaay..bechara Shivaay baby ..so helpless ??? you are really amazing girl…Loved it!!!!!!! And please please​ pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee please tell me that the one Om was talking to is none other than Ishana….(plz make only Ishana as Om’s pair….not anyone else!!!!?) And thanks for ths wonderful Shot…. It’s ROCKING!!!?????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kavya..It was only about my favourite Shivika..there was not Om ..how can I pair some one with him then,let it be Ishana ,Riddhima or Gouri???
      And Shivaay bhaiyya was not jealous ..in stead whole Oberoi family helped him here to set his love story..I think you typed this comment here by mistake coz it does not seems related to this particular OS ..
      Thank you dear..

      1. Kavya347

        Yeah, actually it was a mistake!!!! Sorry for the inconvenience and thanks for understanding?

  15. Kavya347

    ?????? it’s sooooooooooooooooo good!!!!!! No words to tell how much i loves it. The starting with Omkara’ proposal and end with Shivika’s love ki ghanti!!!!??? It’s just AMAZING!!!! That billa-billuji dialogues and Anika’s cuteness, Shivaay’s oh-so-admant but still sweet proposal​. That was like a perfectly​ perfect thing…. great work!!!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kavya…
      They all knew about the hidden feeling between Shivika hence were teasing Annika with Om’s proposal so that she would directly confess in front of all that she loves her Billuji and only Billuji. She did by saying “Bhaiyya bhaiyya” and “Rakhi Rakhi” for Omkara’s name…. This is the concept here..
      Thank you once again.

  16. Awwwwww!!!!! Sooo cute confession….. Luv it…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Hey Bunny..thank you yaar…

  17. Awesome….fantastic…. loved it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Lilly.. thank you yaar…

  18. Awesome….
    The confession was so cute…
    Loved it… 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Shivika…
      love it only not me!!! ?????

  19. Ha ha ha first line dekhte hi mere ko pata chalgayithi..asie atrangi and funny ideas asthababy ko hi aa sakte he. ..sooo swwet…
    ???????????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita.. thank you darling…
      True itne dimaagi Dahi sirf Astha baby ke paas hosakta hai…. lol..
      mere liye ek bed book karwao Agra or Ranchi mein…

  20. Loved it aastha dii . Last part was superb. Plz continue writing..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Parvathi…
      I love your name coz it is the name of Annika, Ishana, Soumya and Gouri,all my favourite …

  21. Niriha

    Always u make me speechless with ur work dear..asusual ur this work also awesome fantastic fabulous ?????loved it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Niriha..
      Good evening…

  22. Shaani

    This is truly awesome episode… Fabulous work… U should get an award for this.. U have written this beautifully.. I really enjoyed each n every part of ur os… Nice…
    Actually I don’t have enough words to praise ur work… U r an amazing writer… Keep writing ???????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Shaani..
      The love you all are showering on me is more valuable then award… Happiness of reader is the best award for an author.

  23. Alvia

    This is so amazing just loved it ???? and sso can always has his own spark whatever his says the dialogs ❤❤❤❤

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Alvia dear..
      My love for Shivaay Singh Oberoi(my brother) will make me always give him this type of dialogue only..

  24. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dii… Anika reactions and family members togetherness to make Anika say yes is superbbbbbb…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Nikku..
      ha ha..couldn’t control to stay away from my story..lol

  25. Gayathri.visu

    AniOm’s marriage!!! You gives me literaly heart attack didi….! Then I saw ‘bhaiya bhaiya’ and ‘Rakhi rakhi’….uff! Now I breathe normally. Wonderful os didi!!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Gayathri…”Bhaiyya bhaiyya” and “Rakhi rakhi” gave life to your life..
      ha ha..a mini heart attack to brain lolz…

  26. Mehakchalag

    Awesome..Di(can i call u di?) apki story hamesha dil jeet leti h.Aap toh no.1 WRITERBAAZ ho.And di plz call me mehak only.Ok.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Mehak…of course you can call me Di..You must call now.
      Thank you…
      Feel the essence(Mehak) of love and happiness always in your life…

  27. Nila

    sema?( superb)astha di when I see the title i have no idea this is ur Os and just I saw the recent comments then find it’s urs. wow di i love it?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nila.. the inconvenient is for the so unlike Astha type of title to this OS. I am happy that you find it finally…
      Thank you ….

  28. Tanz

    Loved it ……Actually this is no new thing. I always love your work because there’s not even one of your works that hasn’t brought a smile on my face??
    My dictionary is coming to an end now.?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz…Always keep smiling like this..
      Here I am sending you a big wala large wala never ending words capacity wala dictionary…
      Happy weekend dear.

  29. fabulous marvellous ff di
    i love this ff this is my most fav one
    story is awesome?????
    cheers for u astha di ?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Maggi…

  30. Piyuu

    my pyaari aastha ekdum khidkithod os…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Piyuu dear..

  31. Kanfi

    Amaxingggggg dear…sweet n lovelyyy

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kanfi kept her pinky promise to me and my story..Thank you yaar.

  32. Haridhra

    That was super crazy OS di…

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