The great wall of Shivaay – episode 1

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Lets being the new ride of Oberoi’s with them!

The second fanfic of Ishqbaaz is here… Enjoy reading!
ep 1:
Dhushyant entered Oberoi mansion with Anika and stopped the wedding…
Shivaay told the truth of the wedding being the drama and Anika’s memory loss was his plan…
The whole Oberoi family was happy with this and Pinky Apologized to Anika…
Mrs. Kapoor was arrested for the blackmail and attempt murder case given by Tia and Dhushayant…
All seemed to be happy and a bliss…
When the moment of happiness filled Oberoi Mansion… Svetlana decided to spoil it…
The happy banter stopped when everyone listened to Daima’s voice playing in the background…

Everyone turned towards the television…
Shivaay panicked…
He wanted to stop the video before it goes out of the hands…
But not all the time the fate works in ones favour…
“The elder son of the Oberoi is illegitimate… Mr. Oberoi changed the son without the knowledge of the mother…”
Shivaay: TURN THE DAMN THING OFF KHANNA!
Khanna paused the video…
Dadi: Let it play Shivaay! I want to know… I know it is a lie… none of my sons can do it…
She looked at both her son…
Om: Tell us the truth Shivaay… for how long you know about the video…
Shivaay: Mrs. Kapoor had this video and blackmailed me with it…
Rudra: Who is the illegitimate child?
Shivaay: It doesn’t matter as there is lack of evidence…
Om: What if it is truth Shivaay?

Shivaay: NOTHING CHANGES BETWEEN US! WE ARE BROTHERS! WE WILL ALWAYS STAY TOGETHER…
Pinky: Then what Shivaay! Lets see who did this sin of separating the child from the mother for the property…
She said eyeing Tej…
Tej was busy looking at… more like glaring at Svetlana who was standing beside Om as if that was the original place for her…
Om: Who else it could be apart from Tej Singh Oberoi! He would stoop any low level for the property… the illegitimate son is me and that is why Shivaay wants to protect me…
Jaanvy: OMKARA!
With that she slapped him…
Om: Maa… that is the truth…
Jaanvy: tell him it is a lie Shivaay…
Shivaay: OM IS RIGHT BADIMAA…

Pinky: see… how much…
Jaanvy: SHUT UP PINKY! NOT A WORD AGAINST MY SON!We were in Spain when you were born, Om. I remember going through the labour and I was conscious when you were born… I held my son when the umbilical cord was cut… I KNOW MY SON!
Tej: I would do anything for the property but I never wanted it for me…
With that Tej stopped… but his mind wanted to say more… plead for more…
“Even though I had three children, it was always OM who was special to me… the one who called me papa for the first time… For him to call me PAPA again I would love to sacrifice anything. I am sorry OM! Please don’t do the madness of marrying that cheap Svetlana… you deserve much better…” was Tej’s thoughts.
Dadi: matlab…
Pinky: nahi! Mera kheera beta nahi… Shivaay can’t be…
Everything went into Shivaay’s head clearly…
How Mrs. Kapoor didn’t let him to have proper conversation with Daima as well as she didn’t let him see the video…
If he saw the video means none of Mrs. Kapoor’s plan would have been successful… All made sense to him now…
OmRu looked on… Shivaay walked slowly towards the Television and with the trembling hands he took the remote…
The great wall of Shivaay hesitated for a minute… he had the fear for a minute…
But he wanted to know the truth now…
He played the video…

Daima’s voice filled the room again. “Mr. Oberoi was in love with a women named Archana who didn’t knew he was married. When she found it she left him and went hiding. But Mr. Oberoi found her and at that time more than love he was raged to know that she hid the fact she was pregnant. *Daima started to cough in the video…* Pinky beta was also pregnant then. Both of them were accidently admitted in the same hospital and the delivery happened… First Shivaay was born to Archana and a day later Lavitra was born to Pinky. As per the Oberoi tradition, the elder Oberoi son gets the property… SO Sakti changed the child. Pinky never knew about it but Archana did… but she was forced to accept it or else Lavitra would be killed… She was a mother who lost her son but not willing to lose the angel she got as well… to save the life of the daughter she agreed to the fate…” *Daima started to cough in the video…*
Dadi slapped Sakti…

Shivaay was shaken and he felt as if the land slips beneath him… Khoon, Khandhan, parivaar were something he held so values of… now he believed that his birth was the disgrace to the Oberoi family…
He fell down as he was not able to feel any strength in him…
Someone held him safely and prevented his fall…
HIS WIFE ANIKA…
Whom he forcefully married and never gave the status of wife…
How many times he insulted her for not knowing her family name…
OmRu rushed to help their brother…
Rudra: Bhaiya…

Om: Shivaay… Trust us! Nothing will change between us…
Diama’s video continued… “Archana died of cancer when Lavitra was just about to complete her school… I know Archana personally and she was always fond of you… she always enquired about you to me… A mothers heart always loves her child… *Daima started to cough in the video…* Lavitra… I don’t know where she is right now… I didn’t tell the truth to anyone till now because Sakti threatened to kill Lavitra…This truth was killing me for the long time… Please Shivaay! Lavitra knows the truth and your father is a threat to her… Please Shivaay! Save your sister!” Daima joined her hands and begged… this moved everyone…
Dadi: I never imagined you could go this low… chi… never ever come in front of me…
Pinky: Shivaay! Mera beta… No matter what anyone says… you are my son! You will be my son and I am your mother. No one can changes it…
With that she took her son from the arms of OmRu and Anika and hugged him close to her…
Shivaay broke down for the first time that too in front of the entire family…

In the dark mid-night… a girl was sitting near the grave of Archana Jha… the beloved mother and the amazing teacher…
The girl already finish a full bottle of vodka and have another full in her hand… she was standing near the grave with lots of difficulty…
With the bottle in the hand she yelled… “Happy birthday amma… you left me in this world… you betrayed me… you said we will fight this world together… but you left me alone… to fight against many… but I will never forgive the betrayal your lover gave us… I will make them miserable…”
The bottle fell from her hand and she fell on the grave…

“See maa… I need you… whenever I fall and fail, I want you to say that I can be successful… then why did you leave me maa… why did you? You love Shivaay more than me amma… that is why you left me… you also betrayed me like everyone in the world…” She yelled in the anger and frustration…
Tears fell from her eyes as if there was no stop…
Two men entered the place and saw her wasted…
They went near her and saw the emptied bottle and then at the unconscious girl…
One man took both the bottle whereas the other man carried her somewhere…

Precap:
Anika slaps Shivaay!
Shivaay decides to leave Oberoi mansion!
OmRu tried to convinces him… but he was being stubborn!

Author notes:
What do you guys think about the story!

Please comment your opinion and whether I should continue or not

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20 Comments
  1. Swetha kannan

    Why did Anika slap shivaay and why did shivay leave oberoi mansion

  2. Why did Anika slap him??

    1. Maybe he feeling low and disgusted so he gave him a slap to make him normal.

  3. Awesome

  4. Shrutika

    Superb. Why would Anika slap Shivaay?

  5. Yvonne Codner

    Please continue…I like it..very interesting..I like the fact that the tables have turned on Shivaay to teach him about humility considering how he used to treat Anika because her blood was not blue. Thanks Vjey!

  6. Sairan

    Awsomeeee great continue

  7. Awesome…

  8. Superbbbbbb dear… Can’t hold suspense any more…. Plz update soon…

  9. hey plz yaar don’t let shivaay to move out of oberoi mansion stop him …awesome episode and I want Lavithra to have positive character…I don’t want any revenge or avenge btw the siblings …keep going dude…you are rocking. …

    1. Phanikiran

      Anshika I am also want d same which u want in d story from VJey. Hope she will understand it.

  10. Shivika

    Amazing

  11. It’s just amazing…superb….plzz continue…..

  12. Phanikiran

    VJey , with first episode u make tears ? to me for my Shivaay. It’s very paining yaar .but okay carry on but don’t bring more pain to him as well as us.all d best.

  13. Shanaya1526

    I m crying….. It’s just…. Speechless

  14. I really appreciate ur writing skills !!! The twist was awesome !!
    Pls continue and dont stop !!

  15. I think this is what will happen in the serial

  16. Gayathri.visu

    VJey its very interesting yaar…. Emotional part!!! But why Anika slapped Shivaay??? Please post next part soon dear…

  17. Vincy

    OMG… Waiting for next part

  18. Mrunal

    amazing update….

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