Gohem’s sweet love (OS on Radha’s track)

Hi Guys! Shakaib here. Its OS on Radha’s track,where gopi comes out of water taking trishul to kill radha. Hope, all you guys will like it. So,let’s start.

Gopi comes out of water taking trishul. Gopi shouts Radha. Ahem whilw in water sees Gopi and comes out of water. Radha sees Gopi and shakes in fear. Kokila says Gopi vahu, please not do this. We dont want to lost you. Pari says Gopi behn, please for us,please…. Jigar says Gopi bhabi! I plead you to not do that sin….not kill your own sister by your own hands. Ahem comes to Gopi and says atleast, for me gopi, please not do this…. Have you ever think that How will i live after you leave me? Gopi stares at Radha.Radha says Go….Gopi! Will you kill your own sister?

Gopi looks at trishul and then Radha. Gopi moves trishul towards Radha.Radha moves back.
kokila manages to take Rashi(Jr) out of basket. Gopi says Radha! You want to kill me na! Take this trishul and kill me but please i’ve a request, please to change after you kill me and take care of my kids. Radha looks on Gopi and says Gopi…. Gopi says yes,im saying this,kill me but change after my death. Ahem shouts Gopi. Gopi says end this story here. Radha moves trishul towards Gopi. Gopi nods her eyes.
Koki shouts Gopi vahu. All shouts in their usual ways. Radha face becomes dull. Saath Nibhana Saathiya Dita Tata tune plays

Radha throws trishul away. Radha hugs Gopi saying Gopi behn. Gopi says Radha. Koki says hey krishna bhagwan! Aap ka koti koti dhane waad. Radha falls on Gopi’s feet and cries saying that im sorry gopi behn, please forgave me! Ive realized that you was never wrong, wrong was me! Because of Tripti and Omung, i turn against you! A sister who is ready for sacrificing her life for me, how can be she wrong then? Im sorry gopi behn. Koki comes and makes radha stand. Koki hug radha. Radha says ive done much bad and you forgave me. I must have done some good deeds in my previous birth,that’s why i’ve got such family. Gopi turns radha and says we’ve not forgave ,infect we have also accept you as our family member. Both hug. Ahem comes to Gopi and says im proud of you gopi. Gohem’s love tune plays. Both hug.

Gopi feels dizzy and vomits on side. Kokila says hey krishna bhagwan! Are you alright gopi vahu? Gopi says yes maa ji! Im fine. Radha comes to Jidhi and also ask them for forgiveness. Jigar says its ok! You have already apologized. Pari’s tune plays. Pari stares at radha and says No Jigs! Radha try to says but pari interupts and says Radha has not hug me even. Radha says just a small point and tightly hug pari. Pari says ok baba! Now leave me. Gopi says let’s go. Koki says yes. They are to leave. Gopi falls unconscious. Ahem holds her in his arms.Jigar says we’ve to take gopi bhabi hospital. Ahem nods.

Screen shifts to hospital. Kokila is seen praying god for gopi.ahem and jidhi are too worried. radha is seen in Dr’s cabin. Dr comes. radha asks him for gopi. Dr tells her.
Radha runs and comes to modi family. Radha SAYS ahem jeejoo….. kokila comes and says what Dr says? radha says Go pi behn is pregnant. Ahem blushes in happiness. Jigar says I’m to be kaka once again. Pari says I’m to be a kaki, I’m so happy. Ahem SAYS Mom! Our Gopi is to be a mother. Kokila says OK! no will tell gopi vahu, we will tell her with Whole parivaar in Modi Mansion.

kokila calls hetal. Hetal picks. Koki says Mota Bhabi! we’re reaching Modi Mansion, you reach with family there and decorate home and call madhu Ben and urmila behn too. Hetal says OK! call ends.
Hetal thinks what’a like that! She calls all and tells them that they are going Modi Mansion.
Madhu comes to Urmila and says So, Urmila behn! why are you doing this? Saath Nibhana Saathiya Fast Tune plays{To check out this tune,go to this website;
Urmila says what I’ve done? Madhu says If rashi would be in Kinjal’s place, do you do this? would you create miss understandings between rashi and jigar? Urmila says not so! Madhu says then why you are separating two lovers’ life. they’ve a child. have you ever think about him. If rashI would be…. Urmila says Baasss….. Madhu Ben, You’ve make me realise my mistake.

Hetal calls Madhu. Madhu picks and says hello. Hetal says you’ve to come to Modi Mansion. there’s a good news but kokila has not tell us. Madhu says today is gopi’s birthday na! maybe… Hetal says yes, how can i forget today is gopi’s birthday? OK! come home. Call ends.
Urmila sees Dhawal. Dhawal says Fai! Urmila says I’m sorry dhawal dikra. you’ve now to get your kinjal. Madhu says yes, she is right.

Screen shifts to Modi Mansion. Lights are seen off. Gohem,Jidhi,Radha and Kokila comes. Gopi says where are all others? and why lights are OFF? They enter in Home. Lights on. All comes in hall and sings Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday to Dear Gopi! Happy Birthday to you.
Gopi says Thanks you all. Hetal says Because of Kokila, Madhu Bhen Reminded me. Dhawal sees Kinjal coming. Kinjal comes. Dhawal falls on her feet.
Dhawal: I’m sorry Kinjal Jim! Because of Fai’s Kalakaris, I miss understand you. Kinjal makes Dhawal stand and hugs her saying Dhawal Ji! Kokila says Mora Bhabi! let’s cut cake now! Gopi cuts cake and feeds to ahem. Ahem too feeds Gopi cake. Song plays, In lamhoan kai daaman mai…….. They share a romantic eye lock.

Madhu sees Radha and Gopi feeding cake each other and thinks my last wish was this and it fulfils.
All are happy. Kokila says Well, there’s some other good news too, Gopi is pregnant. All gives their happy expressions. Gopi say Maa ji! Kokila says It was a surprise for you and others.
Children are seen playing. Gopi calls them. Radha says Have a dance guys. Pari joins radha saying yes,of course. Jigar says we will do pair dance. Ahem says just chill guys. Radha starts music.
Song plays. Ahem, Jigar and Dhawal dances first.

Roop Salona tera dekh ke hi
dil mera na raje

Roop Salona tera dekh ke hi
dil mera na raje

Kahan chale aou kuriye
Kal mile gai kitne baje

Ahem looks at gopi.

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Gopi,Paridhi and Kinjal dances then.

Roop salona mera dekh ke hi
dil tera na raje

Roop salona mera dekh ke hi
dil tera na raje

Tere jaise larkai phirtai hai mere pheecai pheecai

Gopi looks at Ahem.

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

kuriye deewana mai ho gaya tera
zulfoan mai tere dil kho gaya mera

Ahem taunts gopi seeing her. Gopi sees it and nods head.

are garboon mai tujhe nahi deti
chal bhag yahan se phut ja cheti

Gopi also taunts ahem.

Itna das de kab loote gi
val ye pyar de mazai; yes

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Oh Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Mujhe ghayil kar gaye hi
tere chal sharabe

mera dil tarsai
tere gaal gulabi

Urti hui mai hoo mai aik badle
tere hath na aao mai chalte

kab barse gi dil pe mere
itne zor se gahce; yes

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

aab dair na kar tu
chal nain lara le

kuch papiyaan vaapiyaan
kuch jhapiyaan pa le

wa oa mundia tera kya kehna
zara door door mujh se rehna

mujhe pata ha
jaan tu le ge
lekin kine vaje; yes

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

aaja re soniya
chal moj kara ge

tere roop de sajde
har roz kara ge

arai dekh mere ye main nasheelai
kar doo ge tere poorze dheelai

rab hi jane soniye kab
zid apne tu chore; yes

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

hi taras rahai hai
bahoan ke ghaire

kab ho gai mujh ko
darshan tere

aaja soniye cham cham kardi
aaye gi kine vaje; yes

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

o aaja dil bar
Zara pyar nibha dai

khud ranjha banja
mujhe heer bans dai

cain churane wale raja
dil mera na raje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara vaje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Roop Salona tera dekh ke hi
dil mera na raje

Roop Salona tera dekh ke hi
dil mera na raje

Kahan chale aou kuriye
Kal mile gai kitne baje

Yara
kai
bara

Yara baje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara baje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara baje ya bara vaje
Yara baje ya Bara baje

Yara baje ya bara vaje
[Jaani Dushman]

9 months later….
Dr comes out of room. Dr comes to ahem and says congratulates, you’re father of two boys. Ahem blushes in happiness. All are happy. Ahem says can I meet Gopi? Dr says yes.
Ahem comes to Gopi. Gopi says Ahem Ji.

Satrangi Mausam ho ya Badal hau
phooloun ki sej ho ya kantoun ki rahain ho

Mere Ham kadam
mere ham safar

rah hamai chod na Jana ham kasam
chod na Jana

Saath Nibhana Saathiya
Saath Nibhana Saathiya

Saath Nibhana Saathiya
Saath Nibhana Saathiya

Sooraj ke sung kiran
deepak sung lati hai

sawar ke sung yahin
kaise hansatin hai

O’ mere sanam
Ho khusi ya gham

na curana ham se nazar
sung rahna umer bhar

Ahem: Have a selfie.
Gopi: Why not, ahem ji?
They click a selfie.

Saath Nibhana Saathiya

*The End*

36 comments

  1. Amalina

    |Registered Member

    Aaaawwww thanks Shakaib bhaiya for this beautiful ff! I wish sns would have had the same thing, sns rocks only with radha, gaura is not that interesting!

    The ff is amazing plz write a ff on it and plz continue!

    BTW CAN ANYONE PLZ TELL ME WHAT OS MEANS??!!
    i used caps not as in anger modeπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ just so that u will notice!

  2. Jasminerahul

    |Registered Member

    I always expected radha to turn positive when she comes to know the truth of umang tripti.but shocking that even after that once upon a time innocent radiation turned worse than before ….Happy that here you made rascal repent n apologize seeing Gopi even willing to sacrifice her life for her.good that you didn’t make gopi kill radha which I hated on the show. Gopi is pregnant. Wow.on d show she has only girls.but happy that you gave gohem boys too.on d show dhawal kept blaming Kinjal because of the misunderstanding created by Urmila. Those misunderstanding never got over.that’s why Kinjal didn’t return to dhawal.but they all kept blaming only her.but here you made dhawal apologize to her.sweet scene.urmila too changed. Nice birthday party with dance.I like how you turn vamps good in ur ff like radha n aliya

    • Shakaib

      |Author

      Thanks jasmine 4 such a big and amazing detailed comment. I too expect jasmine when radha come to know about Umang and tripti’s truth she will be changed positive. But if gopi have kept radha with her when radha apologized to gopi when tripti try to kill her with poison and police arrest radha-tripti then radha too become positive. Now coming to real SNS, gohem’s son is now to be introduce. And where is kinjal,dhawal and their son,parteek (papu)? Kinjal isn’t seen from 5 years leap, parteek and dhawal are not seen from might august or September 2015. Right.yes, vamps too appear good, but CVS spoil their image in front of Audience. Lol. You said in my kkb ff’s second last part:” I never thought that I’ll take interest in Aaliya’s love story”, this was because on show, aaliya is causing differences among abhigya but I’m ff she is just simple. Tanu, she is too doimg same on show. But in my ff, she give sacrifice for saving pragya. That’s why. See, how I too changed a evil spirit into a simple human(Swalika{Roshni}) in Naagin and Kawach ff, well have you watched kawach’s last episode. Thanks for liking how I change vamps into good. I’m really grateful to you. Do you like Gohem’s last selfie scene. Do you think it was full of of Gohem’s romance. Please tell me.

  3. Jasminerahul

    |Registered Member

    Thanks for such a long reply.I didn’t know that kawach ended.yes I loved gohem scenes including selfle.I have a request for you.can you write a ff based on the movie zameer which had ajay mahima n amisha.If you have not watched it plz read its story on Wikipedia and write in your own way either on sns,kkb or naagin

  4. Riana

    |Registered Member

    Shakaib its awsome…radha n gopi turns from foes to darling sisters…Amazing…jidhi means paridhi right!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚…i wish u too write some more os on other serials too like yhm…pardes…etc..😁😁😁

  5. Mansi

    |Registered Member

    It’s amazing gopi rashi cleaned der misunderstng of each othr n again became sisters it was so cutely done n der hug was vry cute n emotionalπŸ˜₯☺sad it ended soo soon plzz wrte an ff on dis it would be really gd gohem bleesd wth 2 boys ws gr8😍

  6. Varshini

    |Registered Member

    oh , it was awesome , radha turning positive was very nice .such an awesome os , gopi also gave birth to twins and the os ended on a happy note .wow dhawala nd kinjal also united , thats great . it was so nice to read , i liked all the scenes . do write more one shots

  7. SARA

    Its awesome! Happy to see go hem romantic moments. And sisters’ relationship, not like show where they have spoiled this relationship,

  8. Nandhini

    |Registered Member

    Very beautiful story shakaib! But it was surprising to see gopi gets pregnant again…before gopi comes with trishul and about to kill radha,, radha has beaten her so badly until she almost bled to death in the river…wont dat incident affected or killed her babies inside her womb??πŸ™‰πŸ™‰
    Anyways i am thinking too much scientifically lol…it will be great to see if this same story happened in real serial then gopi wouldnt have gone to jail and meera wouldnt have hate her when she was grown up…radha will herself show motherly love to meera,, vidya and the twin boys and they might have shown some happy moments in modi mansion.😊😊

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