GIRLS: the bright stars on earth..os…”ek duje ke vaste”

Hello lovely peoples how is everyone hope all r fyn shyn πŸ˜‰ first i thought not to post any thing for 2 3 months due to hectic schedule but my cute lil sissy ask me for os as eidi so ufaq this one is on ur order πŸ˜‰ my bak bak will continue but first lets hv a look on story
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intro of characters..
A big auditorium is shown and a large number of students are there…waiting for their results and teacher announces
1st position goes to our topper of every year SUMAN TIWARI
a beautiful girl stands and walks towards stage there was a big round of applause for her
she takes a result with sweet smile…(INTRODUCING SUMAN TIWARI A SIMPLE SWEET AND AMBITIOUS GIRL AN MBBS STUDENT BESIDES BEING GOOD AT STUDIES SHE WANTS TO TRY NEW THINGS IN LIFE EVERYDAY LIKE MUSIC PAINTING COOKING ETC AND SHE IS FULLY SUPPORTED BY FAMILY)

other side
a big house is shown and @dining table a big family was having dinner everyone was quitely hving dinner there was a pin drop silence when an old man speaks to her granddaughter ”so this is ur last year of college”
girl”yes” her head was down
old man”so we should now look for a nyc guy for u”
girl raises her head and looks in a disappointed…(INTRODUCING ALIYA MEHRA A CUTE BUBBLY GIRL BELONGS TO A BIT CONSERVATIVE FAMILY SHE WANTS TO BE A WRITER BUT FOR HER FAMILY SHE IS DOING MBA AND SHE KNOW THAT THEIR IS NO USE OF IT AS HER FAMILY WONT LET HER TO DO JOB AND SHE WILL GET MARRIED AFTER COLLEGE BUT YET SHE GIVES HER BEST AND IS TOPPER OF COLLEGE)

another side
a girl as shown in a jeans and top hving dark eyes and messy hairs in resturant hving a dat with a guy
(INTRODUCING ANANYA…ANANYA KAPPOR TOTAL SPOIL BRAT VERY IRRESPONSIBLE GIRL EVERYDAY SHE IS DATING A NEW BOY THATS WHAT SHE THINKS ENJOYMENT IS, NOT AT ALL INTRESTED IN STUDY BUT SHE IS STUDYING LAW SHE IS DAMN GOOD PAINTER BUT NOT SERIOUS IN THAT ALSO )

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THESE THREE TEENAGE GIRLS ARE CHILDHOOD FRIENDS AND STORY WILL REVOLVE AROUND THEIR FRIENDSHIP AND DREAMS
“”””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””””

1ST PART
it was a fyn bright morning when sun rays falls on our beautiful suman she rubs her eyes which were filled with so many dreams and she welcomes a day with cute smile as she knew that she is gng to complete her some dreams and her phone rings
she picks the call ”hey whats up” caller says smthng and suman laughs ”really?? Not again ok i,m coming
she reaches a big house and a lady greets her
suman:hello aunty where is ananya
lady: she is in her room beta with aaliya should i call her
suman:ahhh no i,ll meet her there
suman goes to her room where ananya was crying hugging her teddy and aaliya was consolling her
suman:awwww my baby is crying again breakup??
Suman burst out in laugh
aaliya looks in anger at suman
suman: y r looking at me like this hv i killed ur cat? πŸ˜›
aaliya throws pillow at her
aaliya:i,m consolling her from an hours and u r again teasing her
suman hugs ananya by side
suman:come on yar what a big deal if one goes other will come
just then ananya got a notification on a mobile that a boy likes her pic on fb ananya smiles
ananya:look yar he is so handsome
aaliya:(in shock) seriously????
Suman:GOD this is limit yar i mean seriously hv u gone out of ur mind i just say that in a fun y u always waste ur time in that stupid things
ananya:ohh comon girls chill we r free now in this age and we r not gng to get such freedom again so just enjoy i,m not like u both bookworms!!
Aaliya:ahhh this girl will never change(she takes a book and lay down on bed and start reading it)
suman:stupid if u hv got a freedom than utilize it in a way that world can remember u do something unique not waste ur time in these baby baby games
aaliya:(takes a book aside and looks at suman) wahhh what a dialogue
suman winks at her
then they both saw ananya who was busy in mobile and was not listening them start beating her with pillow and all three hv a pillow fight
after a while when all three get tired they stop
aaliya:but one announcement dadu is looking a guy for me
ananya:ohoooo congrats
aaliya:shut up
Suman:so u hv one year only what u hv thought
aaliya:what?? Nothing!
Suman:i hv a idea y u dont publish ur story which u hv written
ananya:hahaha r u mad if her family came to know abt this then she is gone
suman:aryyy i,m not saying to publish it by ur name let another writer publish it
aaliya:ahhhh really so he will be praised on my work
suman: ohhh stupid aapearently may b he got praised but in actuall it will be ur work which will get appreciation
ananya and aliya were in thoughts
suman:ohhh shit i forgot i hv to go to take my cooking certificate
To ananya:u stay away from boys
to aaliya: and u think abt my idea
ananya: wohoooo so u hv complete ur cooking course as well tell me something is their any thing remaining for u to do i mean u r gng to be doc u knw to cook u r trying in music etc etc when will u stop??
Suman: i,m waiting for a day when my signature will become a autograph when that day will come i,ll surely stop
aaliya:uhhhh(she holds her hands before suman) i cant take ur these dialogues any more get lost now…..

2ND PART
@night
aaliya was writing when suman,s words hits her mind again and again and she makes a conference call to suman and ananya
aaliya: i think u were rite
ananya:abt what(while yawning)
aliya:i think i should publish my book
suman was making some design while she stops nd utters in exciment”really r u sure so tom we can go to some writer???”
aliya: hope soo
suman:thats perfect but where ananya went
ananya???
Aaliya:hahahaha she must fell into sleep u also sleep now gud nyt
they cuts call
and suman gets busy into making designs and she does not even notice when it turns into morning she gets ready and goes downstairs her parents were having breakfast she gulps the juice in hurry nd leaves
mom: i dont hv any idea when this girl enters nd exits
dad:she wana fly so let her fly na
other side suman meets one of the famous fashion designer ”i must say miss suman ur designs are amazing though u hv took so much time to make them but they r superb”
”so we can held fashion show next week”
suman agrees happily
and after that show she is lil bit known for her desigining skills…
And after some days aaliya,s story got published and it got unexpected appreciation aliya was very happy and so were suman and ananya

3RD PART
one day suman ananya and aliya were at aliya,s place
when aliya,s dad came and handover aliya a book
Dad:hv a look at this what a wonderful writer is he u also want to be a writer na can u write that much good?
Aaliya just smiles
but her happiness was out of the world as it was her book only..
And aliya publish some more books which were also liked by everyone
Days passes like this suman and aliya were taking small small steps towards their dreams
meanwhile ananya got bor of her baby baby games and has got some what jealousy with her friends….
And one day all 3 were in cafe
suman was playing some tune with guitar
suman:how was this girls
aaliya:amazing but whats new
ananya:music competition btwn different colleges and we both are participating
suman: (in shock) u also
ananya: yeah u dont want me to take part( bit rudely)
aaliya:why will she? Okk leave u knw what i hv decided that the story i,m publishing this time i,ll publish it with my name so my family can knew now i hv full confidence that they will support me
suman:wowww!!! I,m so happy to know abt it so lets hv a cheers on such a great news all trio takes their juices
but ananya not seems to be happy at all
and then a music competion day
ananya: uhhhh i,m super nerous yar
aliya:off course u r trying smthng serious for first time
suman:relax its just a competition dont take tension now go ur name has been announce
aliya and suman were sitting backstage when they heard a tune which was made by suman they both look at each other in shock
suman:what the hell
aaliya:how can ananya stole ur tune
suman thinks for while and goes out
and from other side ananya comes to aaliya after performance
ananya:so how was it (with a victorious smile)
aliya:hv u gone mad i had never expected that u can go that low
ananya: listen i,m not intrested in that all so plz
both hv a great arguee but suddenly they become quite by announcement
announcement:after everyones performance and one participatant has withdraw her name that is suman tiwari we r announcing winner that is ananya kappor
aliya shakes her head in disappointment
ananya aheads to leave for stage and met with suman in her way suman hugs her happily”congrats yar”
ananya leaves with a guilt without saying anything
and aliya comes from back to suman
aliya:yeah madam what was the need of that u should slap harder on ananya,s face
suman: and what would happen with that
aliya:ok ok i got now u r gng to throw ur great dialogues let me take pen and copy i,ll note them today
suman:laughs mad girl no i,m serious if i hv done somethng against her than whose loss will be offcourse mine i,ll lose my best friend
aliya:correction u will not lose a best friend u will lose a selfish friend and i,m sure it doesnt make any difference
suman:selfish????(she gives an apple to aliya) can u plz
cut that for me i,m really hungry
aliya in confused way cuts the apple their was a spot on apple aliya throws that spot part and give remaining part to suman
suman takes an apple and hv a bite
suman:ok tell me one thing y u dont throw whole apple y u hv thrown an spot part only?
Aaliaya:whats ur point
suman:peoples are also like this my dear friend no one is perfect everyone has some flaws so we better avoid those flaws rather than throwing whole person out from our lives
aliya:serioulsy u should become a philospher than a doctor
suman:yeah i,m thinking on that naughtily
ananya was listening that whole convo from bit distance she runs toward suman and hugs her
ananya:sorry yar plzzz forgive
suman:on one condition touch my feets πŸ˜›
aaliya: mine also plz
ananya: yeah yeah y not (saying this she hits their feets harder with her heels)
suman:ahhhh wild cat
all trio share a group hug
and at night aaliya and suman were at ananya,s place for night out
in ananya,s room
aaliya was writing story suman was sleeping and ananya was listening music and suddenly goes to suman
ananya:listen na sumo i,m thinking something
suman: yeah think for tonight i,ll listen tomorrow(in sleep)
ananya shakes her like a hell
”listen na” suman gets up”what yar tell that to aliya let me sleep” both hv light fight (dhshm dhshm) and at last suman kicks ananya from bed and she fell down
ananya throws pillow at suman and goes to aliya
who was writing
ananya:i also want to get busy like u both i also wana do something
aliya:yeah then do whatever u want and more over ur family is not like mine they will allow u for everything
ananya:thats is the problem i dont know what i want
aliya:means???
Ananya: means i dont want to do job i hv enough money i got pocket money greater than any job can give me salary…
And abt success that is also temprory if i,ll raise higher than at some day i,ll surely replace by someone like after the rise of everything their is its fall
aliya:(thinks for long time) i hv something for u but we will do that tom now lets go and sleep….

Next part
trio were on a road and they were displaying the paintaings made by ananya(as she is great painter) all paintaings were sold in sometime and they hv collect good money
ananya: i told u guyzzz i dont need money
aliya:i know just keep it for while and come with me
they reach at house which was very small and broken and the peoples of that house seems to be very poor they dont hv money even for food
aliya: go and give that money to them
anaya hesitates but then goes and gives money to an old lady there
and the faces of those peoples glow up with happiness as they hv got some hope for life
they shower blessings on ananya and pray for her bright future
aliya and suman smiles and ananya was also very happy as she has got an aim now

so years passes like this and now suman has become one of the best doctor but she is also known for her small achievements in music dance and cooking etc
ananya has also become a lawyer and she do painting as well and the income which she gets she helps poor with that
and aliya is doing job but moreover she is known as the best writer her family is proud of her………………………………………………………………………..
And here story ends now plz give ur reviews on that good or bad anything
and sorry guyzzz if i bor u as this was not romantic os what to do i,m not getting any romantic ideas these days and i hv to post something for ufaq so i post whatever strikes in my mind and i knw that u all r waiting for ”a desire of star to get moon” but i,m not getting a sec to type yar i had type this os at around 4am i,ll surely post that one also ASAP for me..,
lots of love i really miss u all

LOVE U ALL
and ufaq sorry for late eidi πŸ˜‰
sorry if their are any typing mistakes…..

31 comments

  1. ufaq

    Annnnnnn thank uuuuuuuuuu sooooooooo much
    I love u I have not read till now but thanks anju u r sooooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet
    Love u my dear now let me read

  2. Marie

    |Registered Member

    OMG….!! πŸ˜€ wat to say abt this OS seriously mujhe Aj tak romantic OS itne pasand nai aai jitna ye aaya hai or waise Bhi it’s abt frndship thoda hatke di u nailed it seriously mere OS to is ek ke aage kuch Bhi nai hain!! πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ it’s awesome outstanding MiNdBlOwINg n etc etc etc…..!!
    Love u di….!!
    But u r busy r u having papers?? If yes dan all d best!! πŸ˜€

    • Angel_pari

      |Author

      Thankuuuu so much maira i,m so glad that u like it that much……

      Hahahaha blkul nh for me ur os r alwayz amazing

      and han kuch tests hn medical colleges ke lye… Plz pray thanks alot

  3. ufaq

    Now I read it anjooooo soooooo sweet of u thanks again
    Story was not romantic but had a great moral lesson I loved it very much and I liked suman advices I loved it I love u also
    This IRA the awesomeeeeeeeeee eidi my dear
    Thanks again
    Love u my jan

  4. Prettypreeti

    |Registered Member

    Hey my pari love ur os a lot yr itne samey bad ayi aur itne aache idea ke sath really yaar u r fab and what a true friendship u showed it stolen my heart and I loved it very very much and yaar can u tell me ur real name please and again a very well is applause for u and post ur ff I m waiting

    • Angel_pari

      |Author

      Awwwww thankuuuu preetu i,m so happy tht u like it that much love u……
      And my real name is…… Alisha
      and abt ff πŸ™ i,ll post as soon as i can sorry for making u all wait

  5. sona

    Oh…shit…
    Its..u pari…☺☺??
    I’m so shocked to see ur name as the credit person..really..☺????
    It was amazing..so..mature..story..of trio friends…
    I loved it…☺??☺☺
    Khushi..and I are talking about u only..
    That WHR u went..??
    That’s..OK..I enjoyed it..

  6. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Hey what a wonderful story yr ??? .. it was really awesome.. something different nd it gives great lesson … I luv it ??? … luv stories r not necessary.. sometimes one can write these kind of ffs … great work.. well-done?????

  7. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    It was way to good angel…I mean amazing…u always come up wid different ideas….!! It was all girls story but it rocked….u described that career thing abt life from diff perspectives….!! I just loved it…plz if possible post ur ff…a desire to get to d moon..as soon as possible….
    Luv-WS?

    • Angel_pari

      |Author

      Thanku so much ws i,m super happy by ur comment i,m glad u like it

      sure yar i,ll post tht very soon πŸ™‚ sorry for making u all wait

  8. Khushi

    It’s fantastic pari di….good to c u back …this OS was amazing how do u come up with such amazing ideas di…plz mujhe bhi batao…m ur fan di….pehle bhi thi but ab toh AC refrigerator sab ho gyi Hun…lots of love u came back with a bang….

    I always like bold and independent girls and u presented a trio of such girls I always feel that girls should have all the rights and they are independent and can do anything they want….bas they need the support of their loved ones…what say di??

    And di it’s ur khushi only just login nhi kiya…

    • Khushi

      P.S from sumo di also…she told me to write this…..she must have loved it pari di….so take this greetings from me and sumo di as well

    • Angel_pari

      |Author

      Hahahahaha thankuuuuu so much for liking it

      hahahaa a,c refrigrator kuch vi anvi hi yar πŸ˜‰

      and yeah i agree girls should b independent and they should be ambitious…… Same thoughts πŸ˜‰

  9. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Awsum ,amazing ,superb…
    i loved it to the core…
    girl power RoΒ’k…
    keep writing more os like this

  10. Nandu

    Loved it and keep posting such os.
    And yes waiting for your ‘a desire of.star to get moon;)’

  11. misha

    it was amazing awsome.seriosly you are realy a succsesfull writer.everybody writes about love story but you,seriosly i want you as a teacher.plz continue with more friendship stories.plz i cannot express my feeling right now.even if i filled up this full page,than even it would not be enough for this.accualy i was having my a type of break up with my besties but this made me contack them.i even send them the link and ask them for my sake plz read it.but plz plz pplz you keep on writing and never end friendship ffs plz
    love it

    • Angel_pari

      |Author

      Awwww misha!!! I,m speechless seriously becoz thanku would not be enough for such a sweet comment but thank soo much i,m glad u like it to that extent….
      I,ll surely write more.. And i,m glad that u patch up with ur besties…..

      Thanks again dear πŸ™‚

  12. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Fantastic! Mind blowing!Just loved it! Simple yet Amazing! Nice! You write so well! I am impressed! Aaliya writer..loved it! Keep writing! And pardon for being late!
    Regards,
    Zuha.

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