I Too Had A Girlfriend (Chapter-15)

Hey my gorgeous peeps!
Bade hi besharam ho tum log
Kiss ke liye ruka hi nhi jata tum logo se!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
Just joking!
Thanku so much guys for those lovely lovely and more lovely comments!
I can’t tell you how greatful and thankful I’m to all you guys!
Your comments are so soothing and loving I just cant stop blushin’like hell!
So without further delay the next chapter is here!
And mind it Monica you have to post your ff soon! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‰ Dhamki hai ab!

CHAPTER-15

THE KISS CONTINUED

(Note: the entire ff will be in kunj’s pov, if need be I’ll introduce twinkle’s pov later)

KUNJ’S POV

YES I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU,
I HAVE FALLEN FOR YOU HARD
AND I DON’T REGRET IT!
YOUR SMILE WORKS AS A SOOTHING MEDICINE TO ALL THE ACHES AND PAINS I’D CARRIED TILL DATE
YOU ARE MY BAE, AND I LOVE YOU THE MORE I SEE YOU!

We smiled endlessly after our very first kiss!
Did i forget to mention it was my first ever kiss in life and it already felt like I’m there up in heaven!
My soul is at peace after our lips connected and it felt like the most beautiful night of my life!
We still smiled looking into each others eyes while they do their piece of work, the chit-chatting, the words that couldn’t be formed, the words that couldn’t come out of our mouths, now exchanged!

It was almost time and 10 in night!
We were driving back to the hotel without any further conversations or kisses exchanged, just that sly smile playing on our lips that held how happy we are!

In another 10 minutes we were in the hotel, I gave the car to the valet for parking and we were in the elevator! We have to went up 20 floors coz of the sudden shift in our rooms coz of some service issues! And till weΒ  have room adjacent to each other I was happy!

We were inΒ  elevator and it would take us another 10 to 15 minutes to reach our floor!
My gaze fell on twinkle, she have a habit of biting her lips! And Oh it looked so tempting, I just cant help but kiss her then and there!
I couldn’t control my anxiety and told her if she was gonna do the same with her lips I’m going to kiss her then and there itself!
In reply she just blushed and nooded in no and said: I’ve a very bad habit! I just cant stop doing it!

Me: You know how tempting it is! I feel like taking you here and kissing you to death! Try to understand I can’t control myself when you are around me!
And she blushed to scarlet red and bowed her head down blushin’ I Can’t stop but smile like a Total idiot!
Β 
To add more spice to the situation suddenly the song aaj jaane ki zid na karo started playing from the movie Ae dil Hai mushkil in the backgroud!
Why does people think to create circumstances this difficult for me!
The wheather inside the elevator suddenly truned hot!

Baat bass se nikal chali hai
Dil ki haalat sambhal chali hai
Ab junoon had se badh chala hai
Ab tabiyat behaal chali hai
(It was enough for me when I saw Twinkle again biting her lips I couldnt control anymore)

Yunhi pehlu mein baithe raho
Yunhi pehlu mein baithe raho
Aaj jaane ki…
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo
Aaj jaane ki zid na karo
(I quickly pushed her against the wall, her hands held above her hand so she dont get a chance to touch me, our lips met each others)

Laakh paigaam ho gaye hain
Jab saba ek pal chali hai
Jaao ab so raho sitaaron
Dard ki raat ab dhal chali hai
(No space between us, no space for the air to passby, our lips dancing to the rythm of the songs)

Yunhi pehlu mein baithe raho
Yunhi pehlu mein baithe raho
Aaj jaane ki…
Aaj jane ki zid na karo
Aaj jane ki zid na karo
Zid na karo…
Zid na, zid na karo
Zid na, zid na karo
Zid na karo
Zid na, zid na karo
( It was a kiss full of passion,love, care and all that we have for each other, soon my tongue found entrace to her mouth and she tasted the same she did few hours back)

Haaye mar jaayenge
Hum toh lutt jaayenge
Aisi baatein kiya na karo
Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo
Aaj jaane ki zidd na karo
(When we were out of breathe i left her lips and strated kissing her jawline, then down her neck and I gave her a love bite while she moaned)

Suddenly we heard the door of the lift opening and we groomed ourself and left each other!
While twinkle had her hairs messy and lips swollen from our kissing!

Some business delegates that look like foreigners entered the elevator! They started giggling looking at us!
I think they get to know that we were kissing!
Twinkle started blushing and smiling hardly while i rubbed my back hairs with a cheesy smile on my face!
The elevator stopped on floor 15 and the foreign delegates left the elevator!

When they left the elevator I asked Twinkle: Ready for round 3 of our kiss!

And the elevator closed so does the screens!
Thodi privacy to dedo ab unko! πŸ˜‚

Precap: Twinj’s day out in Delhi!

25 comments

  1. Vipul

    |Registered Member

    Hey Komal! Itnaaaaaaaaaaaa hottttt episode…OMG u know what meri heart beats super fast ho gayi hai….. sachhi yarrr I’m not liying…. haan haan mujhe pata hai ye super hot wala kiss twinj ka tha toh heartbeat bhi unki badhegi meri nahi…. par kya karu tumne itna hot hot hot kiss explain kiya hai ki meri heart beat out of control ho gayi hai… do u know… what I’m thinking after reading this epi…. chalo main hi bata deti hu…. I’m thinking that if their first itna hot hai toh baki ke romace kaise honge?? by god yar jab epi itna hot hai toh epi likhne wala kitna hot hoga.. haan?? dekha hotness ka aisa asar hua hai ki maine hot hot bolkar apna cmnt bhi hot kar diya hai only for u…. toh kaisa laga mera hot hot hot wala cmnt…haan??

    Well epi was really awesome superb n too romantic…. loved when twinj were blushing…. hayeeeee kash main unki ye halat dekh pati….. pls post next epi as soon as posible bcz I cant wait…. chalo chalo ab jyada haso mat meri is condtion par bcz meri iss condition ki responsible tum hi ho.. samjhi??

    N ya sorry for not cmnting on ur pre episode… wo actually I was busy n I’ve read that just now only that’s why…. waise ek saath saare epi padhne mein jyada maza aata hai…. hai na?? n ya thank u so much for accepting my friend request….
    Waise itna long cmnt chalga na ya phir bore ho gayi??

    Ok ba bye tc n keep smiling
    β™₯Lots of loveβ™₯

    “Shalin/Neha”

    • Kiara

      I agree with u! Such an amazing episode β€πŸ’œπŸ’œ so sorry for not commenting I was actually really busy with exams but now im on my holidays so now no excuses for me

  2. Anam_sidhant

    |Registered Member

    I m shocked😱how cum u posted so early😲 πŸ’«miracleπŸ’«
    Hahaaa elevator mein kissπŸ˜‚
    Btw it was so romantic Komli😍
    Loved the episode to the core❀
    Eagerly waiting for the next one!😁

  3. Sohi

    |Registered Member

    What should I tell you I had no words it was just out of my thinking only one word I can say that fabulous do continue

  4. SidMin23

    |Registered Member

    Komal this is fantastic episode full of twinj scene and The kissed was amazing and yes let give them some pravicy time for each other. Wating for their day out.

  5. Baby

    |Registered Member

    ohhhhhhh god komal di yeh kunj twinkle ko chodne wala hai ki nhi ufff yr srsly di
    u nailed it d romantic twinj uffffff osm loved it 2 infinity……β™₯β™₯β™₯
    beautiful epsidoe…………loved it romantic one hunn…… πŸ˜€
    loved it vry mch………….love u lods..β™₯β™₯

  6. Simiyy

    |Registered Member

    Komal Di!
    I loved it!
    You nailed it again!
    Thanks for posting soon.
    Please post the next one soon too.😘😍

  7. twinj

    Hey komal,
    Firstly so sorry for not commenting coz I was too busy.Ur epi ufff baat he maat karo.Yeh kiss…Yeh song…Elevator concep was too romantic. Pls do write this type of romantic epi. Pls post soon.

    Now let me intro myself.I am twinj aka aakriti aka aaku the new writer.16 yrs old.B-day on June 30.

    lots of luv,
    twinj

  8. Sushmitha

    Wow komal so romantic yar!!!!! And kiss ka third session bhi hai!!! Interesting and u posted so early and plz post the next asap I know I’m selfish So sorry

  9. Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Ciao komuuuu,,,
    Hayeeeee it was ohhh lalalaaaaaaaaaaa😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    I am in love with ur ff completely, madly and deeplyπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ
    Ohhhh god its soooo sweetπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰β€οΈπŸ’•πŸ’•lovely. I am in love with u and ur ff. woaaahhh u r amazing. Rockstar hai tu. Sweetheart jaldi post kar next. Its a request from ur mature kid
    Love uπŸ’•πŸ’•

  10. Anayaali

    Komal api u know i am really surprise and i luvd it to the core really i cant explain what i am feeling after reading ur ff plzZzzzzzz try to post nxt asap i want to give u soooo tight hug and kya ap mjy apni frnd list m add kr sakti ha plzzzzz its a request from ur fan plzzzzzz

  11. Anayaali

    Komal api u know i am really surprise and i luvd it to the core really i cant explain what i am feeling after reading ur ff plzZzzzzzz try to post nxt asap i want to give u soooo tight hug and kya ap mjy apni frnd list m add kr sakti ha plzzzzz its a request from ur fan plzzzzzz and plzzz ans to my question in nxt epi

  12. Adya

    |Registered Member

    Komal di !!!!!!!!!
    Wooowwww….it was damn romantic….n soo hot…U nailed it Yrr di…well too bzy sry for the short comment….nd hnn..pls post soon…hope u understand
    Love u

  13. TwinjSidMin

    |Registered Member

    Oh my gosh komal kiss in elevator πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒTwiNj kiss was so romantic loved it 😍😍😍😍 komal hum se ziyada tu desperate thi TwiNj ki baaki kiss likh ne tabhi toh itni jaldi post kar diya πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ komal plzzzzzzzz don’t end this ff on a tragic note…dont separate TwiNj…make it happy ending…

    Komal kya tu twitter wali komal_josun hai?? If yes follow me @zoya_zoyu if we wish to…

    Waiting for next…post soon…

  14. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it too good I can not explain how happy I am reading the episode the kiss in the elevator was too good πŸ™‚ I can’t wait for the next episode πŸ™‚ Post soon πŸ™‚ Love you πŸ™‚

  15. Monica

    |Registered Member

    KOMALLL,
    Ye kya tha? Girl, you described that elevator thing of fifty shades of grey! and don’t judge me or anything, I’ve read this book πŸ™ˆ Well, when I ordered it .. I had no idea it had so much romance. I just looked out for the best romance novel and this was at the top πŸ˜‚ However, though the book had a lot of intimate scenes, the plot is something so unique that keeps you engaged to it! But surely, your description to the kiss was no less! Now I am pakka sure you write better kissing scenes than I do πŸ˜‚ Also, when I saw the cover picture of your ff, I already had guessed this.

    Okay, coming to uploading my ff .. As mentioned earlier, I haven’t planned it in my head yet! I don’t have any clue on what the next part is going to be about πŸ˜‚ So you gotta wait πŸ˜‚ Waise bhi, sabar ka phal meetha hota hai πŸ˜‚

    Anyway, you try … no no! That’s an order, post the next one by tmr πŸ˜‚ okay okay, soon at least? πŸ˜‚

    Lovess! xx πŸ’•

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