I Too Had A Girlfriend (Chapter-14)

Hello Hello Hello!
TU testing TU testing!
Ahahahah nhi nhi aap kisi finction pe nhi aaye!
Mein to bas TU ko test kar rahi thi ache se chal raha hai ki nhi!
Now before the start of my next chapter that have a surprise awaiting for you guys!
Thanku so much for your long and lovely comments! They mean a lot to me!
Your 1 long comment makes my whole day!
So lets get on to the journey of surprise!



(Note: the entire ff will be in kunj’s pov, if need be i’ll introduce twinkle’s pov later)


After A very hulla-bulla and a bizaro night! We decided to move back to the Hotel as we decided to roam the city the next day!

We were seated in the car and I was driving it, while twinkle was looking out at the stars and the surroundings!
It was as she was enjoying this for the first time!
A foregone look on her face as if she was thinking about something!
I decided to ask her out and so I did!

Me: What happened Twinkle? Why do it looks like you are confused?

Twinkle: I’m not confused! It’s just that I never felt so lucky!

Me: So lucky!? Why is it?

Twinkle: It’s that I never thought I will get someone who would fight his life just to save me and that too in the first meet! I am so lucky to have you in my life! Nobody else would have fought them and would have left me alone there besides if it was not you!

And she had slight tears in her eyes, I can make it that they were due to happiness but it pierced my heart into pieces to see her in tears!

I very lighlty held her chin and wiped the tear that tried escaping her eyes! I started rubbing my thumb on her cheeks to make her comfortable! I just suddenly started liking our proximity!
I held her hands in mine and assured her that no matter what, till she is with me she is my responsibility and I would even fight death to save her and i very lightly pecked her hand as a gesture of love from my side!

Yes I admit it I LOVE HER!
I had fallen for her hard on the very first site!
It was Love for me at first site!
And I didn’t wanted to be late!
I confessed this to her!

Me: Twinkle, I wanna say something!

Twinkle: Yes kunj say it!

Me: Twinkle I had fallen for you at your very first site! Remember Aman and Sanaya’s marriage! I had fallen for you hard that day, It’s just that I realised it just today! Yes I LOVE YOU TWINKLE! MEIN TUMSE BEINTEHA MOHOBBAT KARTA HUN TWINKLE! PATA NAHI KAB AUR KAISE! BUT I JUST FELL FOR YOU!

Twinkle: Umm I don’t know what to say! But Umm

Me: I know that it was all sudden for you! But trust me I won’t force you for your decision! I will accept whatever it is!

Twinkle: That is so sweet of you Kunj! But I don’t know if I love you or not! I do have some feelings for you maybe it is Love but I need some time to realise it!

Me: You can take as much as you want! I just wish that my feelings are reciprocated!

And i smiled slightly while twinkle does the same!

Lets change the mood and the topic! Would you like listening songs!

Twinkle: Offcourse I love songs!

I turned on the radio and the song ISHQ MUBARAK from Tum Bin 2 started playing!

Teri baarishein bhigaaye mujhe
Teri hawayein bahaye mujhe
Paaon tale mere
Zameene chal padi
Aisa toh kabhi hua hi nahi
( I suddenly saw Twinkle didn’t had her seat belt on, I stopped the car on the roadside and moved towards twinkle to fasten her seat belt)

Ae mere dil mubarak ho
Yahi toh pyar hai (x2)
(She had her eyes closed and she started biting her lips in nervousness, I smiled at her gesture)

Ishq mubarak, dard mubarak
Ishq mubarak, dard mubarak (x2)

Aisa lagta hai kyun
Teri aankhein jaise
Aankhon mein meri reh gayi
(I fastened her seat belt and placed my hands on both her cheeks! She opened her eyes and my eyes asked her permission to proceed)

Kabhi pehle maine na suni
Aisi baatein keh gayi
Tu hi tu hai jo har taraf mere
Toh tujhse pare main jaun kahaan
(She fluttered her eyelids giving me the permission and closed her eyes! I very slowly proceded towards her lips! They looked tempting, plumpy and s*xy at the same time)

Mere dil mubarak ho
Yahi toh pyar hai
Ae mere dil mubarak ho
Yahi toh pyar hai
( No soon did I claimed her lips and it felt like heaven! They tasted Amazingly good,they were soft, tempting,Β  and deliciously sweet! I felt like kissing her forever! I started chewing her lips)

Jahan pehle pehal tu aa mila tha
Tehra hoon wahi main bhi
Tera dil woh shehar hai
Jis shehar se jaake laute na main kabhi
Lapata sa mil jaun kahi toh
Mujhse bhi mujhe mila de zara
(I bited her lips and she moaned so that my tongue finds an entry to her mouth, to taste her mouth and oh my she tasted even more sweet and sugary)

Ae mere dil mubarak ho
Yahi toh pyar hai (x2)

Ishq mubarak dard mubarak
Ishq mubarak dard mubarak (x2)

Ishq mubarak!
(We were having our moment till the uncle in the car behing us decided to break it,Β  I left her lips our eyes still locked)

I was smiling at my handiwork and was proud of it!
Her lips smudged and swollen, hairs messy, cheeks turned red due to blushing and I felt like the most happiest person alive on earth!
She was smiling endlessly and was trying to hide her gaze while I had my eyes stuck on her
The words couldn’t stop but escape my mouth

Me: You look even more cute and beautiful while blushing and with the chaos I’ve created on you!

Twinkle in respond blushed harder while I replied

Me: Haye this blush drives me more crazy over you, do you want to try a second session of our kiss?

Twinkle smacked my arm and replied: I didn’t knew you were naughty but I like it!

Phew thats all for today!

Precap: Kiss abhi baki hai mere dosto! πŸ˜‰


  1. Anam_sidhant


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    Abey tujhe itne acche se kiss describe krna bhi aata!😱
    BTW it was so cute😍
    Everytime u make me shock as well as impress❀, we have been talking with eachother for almost 1 year and from past few days I got to know abt ur amazing writing skills❀❀ (zyada hawa mein mat udio😈)
    I ll try to read ur previous ff tooπŸ’š
    Do post next one asap❀

    Love u bhootni oops (vidwa)πŸ’•

  2. Kritika14


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    Heya Komal,
    Yaar had hoti hai. I always jump in happiness when I see your ff ki abh the suspense will unravel but nahi! You’ll always hang me like this. How many more kisses to go man?? πŸ˜‚ Moreover, the way you described the kiss, haayyyee 😍 I don’t know why people praised me so much about the kiss I wrote, they should’ve read yours! Anyway, now if you don’t post next chapter soon, I won’t post mine πŸ˜‚ and that, is my order for you! πŸ˜‚

    Love you! πŸ’“

      • Kritika14


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        If you’ll wait for me, then I am afraid .. many of your writers may not read your ff cause you know I am not so regular these days πŸ˜‚ But it’s still your choice! Moreover, just post it man! Yours is really very exciting when comparing to mine. Don’t you forget, I ordered you, it’s not a request so you have to post okay πŸ˜‚ No more arguments, thanks πŸ˜‚

      • Kritika14


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        How much I remember, I ordered you! So I don’t really think you have an option to think about it πŸ˜‚ Btw, why are we even arguing on this? πŸ˜‚

      • Kritika14


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        Oh god! Honestly, I don’t even know what’s going to happen on my next part so I really need time to think as many of the readers are expecting something good! Also, yours must be planned in your head? So it’s much easier to write. So please don’t argue and you post soon πŸ˜‚ Okay? Thanks! x πŸ˜‚

  3. Twinjfan.tamanna


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    wowww…. so cute and romantic epi yaar…. I seriously loved it to the infinity square…. I can’t wait for next epi… plz post asap….plzz plz

    love you

  4. Ayu


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    Hey komal! U know me? Dont think so…but i am Ayu…i have read all of ur epis and i loved them…..awesome! Cont soon. N it was damn romantic! Loved it

  5. Chiku


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    Holla komu,
    Hayeeeee tu itna maast episode degi toh dil garden garden ho jaayegaπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ™ˆπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Ok i am ur mature kid 😜😜😜😜 so this lame joke se aadaat kar lo
    Woahhh seriously its amazing. U know wat i didnt read this novel but now ill mot read bcz its bliss to read it in twinj version.
    Thank u for writing it. U r awesome. Remember i used to ask u continue ur and u came back with a bang with an amazing ffπŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œ. I am ur fan sweetheart. U r mind blowing
    Plz post next soon
    Love uπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’•

  6. Adya


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    Komal di !!!!!!!
    Are u crazy ???? Hope so….
    Well the episode was damn romantic…each nd every part was just awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome…..nd I just loved it..

    I just love it ??? Even I didn’t know that u write soo gud..πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ well came to know today itself…

    It was fabulous just soo cute nd plzz post soon…sry soonest…..hee..

    Love u

  7. Ria


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    Hi di,
    Mere ffs amazing hain?!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Joking, na. I know you are. Chalo, ab bol bhi do ki Mera ff ghatiya hai. Acha toh aap ka ff hai. The way you described the kiss and the consequent scenes were fantastic. I legit loved it. Please, try posting it soon.

    Vaise aap Mera ff padhte ho toh comment apne ff mein karte ho kya?πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Jokes apart, please post soon.

    Loads of love.❀

    • Komal123



      Lolz yes your ff is totally amazing and as I told I only het the time to read ur guys ff’s and write mines’ so yes i comment on mine πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  8. TwinjSidMin


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    Hey komal this episode is amazingly amazing…I loved the way Kunj proposed twinkle…the way u portrayed TwiNj first kiss is just beyond words…loved it to the core 😍😍😍😍I’m still drooling over their first kiss…I tho read kiss part alone 4 to 5 times…sorry mai thodi ni ni bahut hi ziyada besharam hun πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ kiss abhi baaki hai woowwwww…plzzzz next epi post as soon as possible…I can’t wait more for baaki kiss πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

  9. Zuha Fatima

    Zuha Fatima

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    Hey Komal (Api/Di)
    I guess we are interacting for the first time? Anyways this was a masterpiece I seriously loved it! The way you described the kiss was so damn amazing β™‘β™‘ Simply loved it πŸ™‚ Well I guess I seriously need some tips from you to enhance my writing skills:L

    Anyways Loads of Love and Support β™‘β™‘β™‘

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always

    • Komal123



      Thanku zuha!
      You are better then me at writing! Ineed tips from you!
      Thanku for the love
      Loads f love to you too 😘
      Keep smiling always you too ☺

  10. Baby


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    ohhoo komal di schi mein d episode uff…loved it 2 core of kiss……β™₯
    srsly nailed it loved it 2 evry word n sentence osm fablous ….. πŸ˜‰
    n dere first kiss was srsly very cute n romantic…. πŸ˜€
    the proposal evrything osm wwooww….β™₯
    post nxt asap di cant w8… πŸ˜€
    love u lods…β™₯β™₯

  11. SidMin


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    Loved it loved it loved it Twinj kiss was too good the way you described it everything was so perfect πŸ™‚ More kisses can’t wait Post soon πŸ™‚
    Love you πŸ™‚

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