Gaurikara – a love story (an ff by rasika) Episode 8

Hey guys I’m back with another episode. Here goes the link Episode 7

Here goes the 8th epi
Scene 1 – Café
Om – I think I should leave now
Gauri – thanks for coming again
Om – it’s OK
Gauri – bye
Om – bye

They go out together there is a procession of God
Gauri – prays, har har mahadev,
(somebody pushes Gauri and she falls on Om, flowers fall on them, she looks at those doe like shaped eyes and he looked at her cute eyes, they have an eye lock, bg music o sathiya………. Plays)
Gauri –( realizes) sorry
Om – it’s OK
(he signals her that there are flowers on her hair she wipes it but one petal is left out on her hair, he takes it out)
Gauri – thanks bye
Om – bye

Guys sorry for the short update but the next part is based on your choice, Should gaurika s marriage be a forced one, or a loved one, do comment. Tomatoes and eggs are accepted

24 comments

  1. Verna

    Verna

    |Registered Member

    Hahaha Rasika.. so u need tomatoes and eggs 😂😂😂 ok then get this as u wish ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    I wish it should b love love love and only love story.. Because all r writing hate relationship.. even I’m writing same for both my FFs.. its just my wish dr.. its too short… sorry dwarf.. really gud

    • Rasika

      Rasika

      |Author

      😂😂thank u Dr for tomatoes and eggs, OK your wish my command, nxt update is going to be a Maha epi longgg epi and I have started working on it now so u will not get a chance to complain.

      • Verna

        Verna

        |Registered Member

        OMG! Command? Yepieee.. so I’m going to get my Omri’s love part.. waiting and waiting and waiting for ur episode.. just txt me when its done.. I don’t wanna miss it 🙂 🙂

  2. neha

    Plz plz make it a love marriage. I am a silent reader but i have followed ur ff ryt from start and most ffs consider forced marriage so a loved marriage would really be very intresting.

  3. Saku

    Sorry to say but it was too short…plz try n update lil longer episodes…

    Coming to ur question ….i wuld like any one of ur choice…whether it may b hate marriage or love marriage.😘😘😘.
    Update nxt part soon…😘😘

  4. Meera

    Nice story yaar….comment nahi kar paaya…..tum jo bhi type marriage choose karo no problem in that….Update soon plzzz

  5. Renimarenju

    Renimarenju

    |Registered Member

    Rasika i read all parts in one go and just loved it a lot…..Ok comparitively this episode was 2 short…..pls don’t show a forced marriage like what we witnessed for shivika in Ib…It will not suit with omie…..abt love marriage and all , I can’t say how could it be …..so can’t suggest you something……see in my ff am portraying their marriage as a situational only where circumstances made gaurika 2 unite with each other and from heart omie is feeling confused 2 accept gauri, but he has a kind of concern for her…..which i actually want 4 gaurika …don’t portray hate-love track because i think people will feel that as another shivika only….It should be deep,intense and how it can be portrayed, it depends on ur creativity and imagination only…..Okay…i told my view and take time and think abt it and then give a beautiful story which certainly u can do…..waiting 4 it and when u write next one kindly send me the link on pm or u can post link on wall….bye….lots of love dear…

    • Rasika

      Rasika

      |Author

      Thank you soooooooooo much for reading, I understand,hope I keep up to your expectations.. Sure will send you a message.. Keep reading

  6. Kiya

    Kiya

    |Registered Member

    Rasika I think it great to see Omri’s love marriage… But not soon… U created a different plot so keep it some time… After that u can do that… It will be great… Its just my suggestion.. Ur ff is awesome…. So post ASAP Dr….

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