GAURI BHADRAKALI CHAPTER 1

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BEFORE YOU BEGIN READING THIS , THIS PASSAGE CONTAINS ABUSIVE LANGUAGE , SO KIDS , YOU SHOULD STOP RIGHT THERE . (UNLESS YOU THINK YOU CAN HANDLE IT OF COURSE , WHO AM I TO STOP YOU) AND PEOPLE WHO HAVE A TINY TOLERANCE LEVEL , THIS IS NOT THE PLACE FOR YOU . I DO NOT MEAN TO OFFEND ANYBODY BUT THIS IS JUST MY OPINIONS THAT I’M STATING , BUT I’M SORRY IF IT DOES OFFEND YOU.

FIRST OF ALL , THANK YOU BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE FOR ALL THOSE COMMENTS , THEY HAVE REALLY INSPIRED ME TO WRITE <3

GAURI BHADRAKALI CHARACTER INTRODUCTION AND CHAPTER 1 :

so lets get to our characters ;

OMKARA SINGH OBEROI : A person who has gone through a lot starting from betrayal in his family i.e.; his dad, to trust issues with his girlfriend , does not believe in love , loves and is loved by his brothers and family , basically everything he is in the series .

GAURI KUMARI “SARMA” : A sweet simple girl , from a small town , who used to lead a very happy life until THE VILLAIN OF HER LIFE KAALI THAKUR ENTERED AND EVERYTHING WENT BONKERS FROM THEN ( guys i really like kaali thakur he has done his job so well , rahul dev was perfect for that role , comment down below if you guys agree )

JHANVI SINGH OBEROI : Our sweetheart , jhanvi who doesn’t judge anyone and is treated real bad by her husband but doesn’t give a flying f**k because she is the badass , someone who stands up for herself , a strong independent woman who has become who she is today because of what life has taught her . she runs the oberoi industries now since her so called “husband” has fled the scene .

TEJ SINGH OBEROI: Jhanvi’s husband , the elder son of late MR. Prithviraj singh oberoi. More or less the same as he in in the show

BUA MA : ( does anybody know her real name ? ) ( also i feel like she is going to turn out to be negative , but here , she is not , and she is in team Gauri . She loves omkara and jhanvi , and she has begun to love gauri too.

SHIVAAY AND RUDRA SINGH OBEROI : omkara’s brothers , his best friends , his soulmates .

ANIKA SHIVERY SINGH OBEROI : shivaay’s wife . everything that she is in the show .

SAUMYA RUDRA SINGH OBEROI : Rudra’s wife , but its the same as she is in the show , she has left for australia .

PINKY SHAKTI SINGH OBEROI : A bit*h of a mother who’s psychologically obsessed with her son . ( i hate her so much )

SHAKTHI SINGH OBEROI : Pinky’s husband and the second son of the oberoi industries , also he is Pinky’s jour ka gulam . ( lol )

KALYANA PRITVIRAJ SINGH OBEROI : DEAR DEARER DEAREST DADI <3

PRINYANKA SINGH OBEROI : The sweet girl child among all the four oberoi siblings .

DHAAKSHA PRAJAPATI SINGH : (NOT DAKSH ) THIS IS A NEW CHARACTER IN THIS FAN FICTION , YOU WILL GET TO KNOW HIM .

ps. i’m going to miss rumya so much and i’m not even looking forward to rudra’s love story anymore , saumya was perfect for rudra , yet another turn off from the writers .
i won’t be focussing much on rudra or shivaay’s life here since i’ll be focussing more on gaurika , but they will be part of the ff , but more like cameo’s . ranveer does not make a come back on my fan fiction , i really used to like him , but they kind of ruined his character too .

so basically , every character is more or less the same as the series , but in my fan fiction , JHANVI , GAURI AND ANIKA don’t tolerate the nonsense and don’t think twice before giving their nemesis a piece of their minds .

( JHANVI – J
GAURI – G
ANIKA – A
SHIVAAY – S
OMKARA – O
RUDRA – R
PRIYANKA – P
PINKY – PM (PSYCHO MOTHER)
BUA MA – B
DADI – DADI the
TEJ – T
SHAKTI – SH
DHAAKSHA – D)

CHAPTER 1 :

POST TWO YEARS …

J- gauri !! you are already so late , when are you going to finish getting ready ? the breakfast is getting cold , i’ve prepared your favourite white sauce chicken pasta with alfredo sauce , and if your going to get late then the sauce is going to dry up ,so you better get here fast .

a staircase thats wooden panelled that matches with the rest of the wooden panelled house without a handstand of under which there was a room ( here is a link to it , for all my imaginative little lovelies Check Here )

the room had a beautiful white door , which was left half ajar , looking into the room , it had a very modern look to it , while there was still a pinch of tradition . (Check Here)
the room gave out vibes of friendliness and acceptance , the room had two twin beds , which obviously suggested that there were two people who stayed in that room , in the left corner of the room was a curtain of red and yellow which led to another room , it appeared as though it was a dressing room , a small sweet room where clothes shoes and accessories were neatly arranged . looking at the closet , it was pretty obvious that it belonged to a girl .

right then a door opposite to the clothes opened and out came a girl in a white bath robe , her short straight hair covered her face and she was drying it , moving her face as she was drying her hair , glimpses of her face could be caught , light skinned , petite , and a hue of rose to her face which proved that she was inside a room of steam suggesting that she had just finished bath.(Check Here)

she turns her face towards the curtain and yells “ yes mom ! 5 minutes !” this time , her face is revealed leaving an awestruck audience , ( us of course XD) the first thing that we notice in this beauty of a woman is her , large beautiful , fish shaped eye , something considered to be the standard of beauty from where they come from . no hint of makeup on her face , even then she was as beautiful as any woman would get .

after scanning through her collection she changes into a beautiful summer dress suitable for a job that involves running around (Check Here) she then checks herself out in the mirror for a minute mentally thanking nobody but herself for this beautiful change that she has gotten . her eyes show confident and self respect , for a minute , she begins thinking , what if he was here , what if he had seen me like this , she then banishes all these unwanted thoughts from her head . for a minute there she was vulnerable and the pain was clearly visible in her eyes , but she had taught herself to pick herself up , dust up and run again . she applies some kajal to her eyes , blushes up her cheeks a little , puts on a bright red matte lipstick which screams “ don’t mess with me” and she was good to go .

she gets out of the closet , swiftly moving she collects her gucci handbag not before she sprays a little perfume on herself which added to her good looks and confidence , then then unplugged her iPhone 7plus rose gold and put it in her handbag and rushes to the kitchen opposite.

( Check Here ) the kitchen was well furnished , and had a very laid back look , on the cabinet sat a woman who seemed to have aged very gracefully , someone with whom we would feel a sense of respect the minute she walks into the room , but she behaved nothing of that manner , she was very “chill” she sat there watching game of thrones on her macbook air .

G- hello jhanvi , which episode have you finally reached ?
j- gauri , i’ve told you so many times , call me mom , please .
G- but you know jhanvi , since the time my mom passed away last year , i get all emo whenever i call someone mom .
J- gauri , bachu , you know I’m here for you , you know i will help you get over it , of course its not easy , of course you will always feel empty without her , but this cannot mean you cannot give yourself a chance , we have gone through so much together , why not this ?
G- mom , i love you , thank you for being here for me , thank you for being my home , because whoever and wherever i go , i will always come back to you , thats why you are my home

before the both of them began becoming all emotional , jhanvi noticed a man standing at the entrance of the kitchen , an extremely handsome man , everytime jhanvi looked at the man , she mentally made a note to thank the mans parents for bringing such a handsome man to life .

j- areh , Daaksha , why are you standing there , come in please .
d- hello babes , i was just looking at how well this mother daughter duo was getting a lot after yesterdays argument
g- oh please shu ( she calls him shu ) we fight everyday , and make up for it everyday , but how would you know , you ran away from home after school .
d- shut the f**k up gauri , i am so offended .
he fake pouted and gauri went and hugged him
g- ok enough shu , stop with the melodrama.
and she pulled his cheek and gave him a kiss on him cheek, looking at this jhanvi thanked her lucky stars for letting daaksha come into their lives which were almost falling apart . She had already began rooting for daaksha and gauri , and this had been in her mind for a long time .

j- will you come here both of you , if theres any pasta left in this bowl , i swear to god , i will murder both of you .
gauri and daaksha made faces and finished their meals , and before heading out , they gave a kiss on either of jhanvi’s cheeks .

daaksha had parked his car outside the gate .Check Here ( THIS IS GAURI’S AND JHANVI’S HOUSE AND THEY HAVE NAMED IT “GHAR” )
g- why can’t we take my car today ? i’ve just bought it and i can’t wait to get my hands on it , pleeeeaaaase !! pretty please !
d- but this is not fair , that would be breaking our golden law , remember , alternating chances on alternating days ?
gauri made a puppy face and there was no way shu wouldn’t melt looking at that , after all she was like his little sister , though not related by blood , these two years had brought them very close .

gauri then looked at her audi and winked at it , and said , see it worked 😉 , unfortunately for guari , daaksha had heard her .
d- oho , so that was your little plan ? wait you mischievous lil piece of turd .
he then picked her up and began tickling her , gauri had “one “funny bone and shu was the only person who knew it , he was the reason she was able to pick herself up , if jhanvi was the reason she survived , daaksha was the reason she lived , but deep down in her mind , there was only one person who had the ability to rule her heart and there would never be anyone else .

in these two years , its not like gauri hadn’t tried , she had dated a man and had even broken up , he was a very nice person , he really liked her , but she knew she couldn’t put herself out there again to completely surrender to anybody . initially it was very hard , harder for jhanvi , because she left the only thing that she could call own back then, she had seen a lot in life , gauri at least had her own mother when they moved , but jhanvi had nobody . but slowly , jhanvi and gauri learnt to genuinely find solace and comfort in each other , their bond grew even stronger after gaurs’s mother died . even though they had gotten really rich , they were still the same old people at heart , just that this time , they wouldn’t tolerate any of the nonsense , and they knew it .

THE END OF CHAPTER ONE .

SO GUYS , THE NAME “DAAKSHA PRAJAPATI SINGH”
in indian mythology , daaksha was shiva’s greatest enemy , it wasn’t really hatred , but daaksha was against shiva’s lifestyle and here also , omakara’s lifestyle or the way he treats things or people is not appreciated , and hence daaksha .
for anybody having wild imaginations XP here is what daaksha looks like in my fan fiction
Check Here
(this is omar borkan who got kicked out of saudi arabia for being too hot , guys this is not even funny , just google it )

so if you guys liked this and want me to continue please comment down below and if ya’ll have any ideas , I’m up for suggestions you can’t me down below , appreciation is loved , criticism is more loved .

PEACE GUYS
MUCH LOVE .
APARNA .

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23 Comments
  1. Sreenandana.suresh

    yaa…me too feel buama z turning -ve…

    1. _APARNA_

      Yeah , I really hope there’s some twist and she doesn’t turn negative , let’s keep our fingers crossed

      1. Sreenandana.suresh

        and ur ff z awesome…

      2. _APARNA_

        thank you so much sreenandana

  2. Rasika

    An amazing update, can I call you apu,if you don’t mind , Post asap ??☺️?

    1. _APARNA_

      Of course you can call me apu , and everyone in my family calls me , i feel at home , what can I call you ?

  3. WOW @aparna…. Seriously I didn’t liked it ….
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    I just LOVED IT dear… Really wanted Gauri to be strong…. Loved jhanvi – Gauri bond…. Now waiting for Omkara to know about her….
    And also I must say the Links about Gauri’s house , her closet and her dress is just awesome… Can imagine Gauri being so midterm and strong….. keep writing like this…..

    1. _APARNA_

      Thank you so much maahi ???? this made me smile and my moms looking at me because she thinks I have a boyfriend now ? Hahaha , I wanted people to imagine and feel the story hence the pictures

  4. This is really amazing , I have to say that the way you have written and the tiny details that hint that she has become rich , I love that you have linked the images and it gives a more wild imagination and daaksha is so hot omg

    1. _APARNA_

      Thank you so much Usha , keep the love flowing ❤️

  5. Hi Alana I really liked Ur ff and also Ur opinion on the Indian telly show that u posted yesterday..( actually I read it today)was just amazing…every point was true….I need to admit u have a great observation dude…Nd I totally support u…Nd I think gauri should become
    strong…in the serial too and fight for her rights and I just hate pinky and priyanka I just want these two people out of the show right now…Nd really this priyanka she’s just hopeless(only in my view and prinku fans pls forgive me)and Her overacting..OMG,OMM…I just hope u post the next part ASAP and I want Ur POV which u posted on may 26 GAURI BHADRAKALI to reach every one especially HARNEET SINGH just tweet her..

    1. _APARNA_

      aw sam , i’m glad your liking it , because the fact that w persons feelings are handled so carelessly be it man or woman , is just sad , the least i can do is to make my version so that i can be at content <3 thank you so much , and keep the love coming

  6. Verna

    Wow Aparna.. at last I myself found ur FF and I’m really really feeling amazed.. how can u give links to ur imagination too.. this is so different and CUTE. Keep doing this dr.. and this is really different and able to.see new Gauri and Janvi relationship. And I too like Omar.. nice choice for Daaksha..
    I have a doubt.. is daaksha negative character? And I didn’t understand Gauri and his relationship.. like bro and sis or frnds? Pls reply my doubt

    1. _APARNA_

      hi verna , i’m totally fangirling right now , so , about daaksha , in indian mythology , daaksha was actually a good person , only shiva thought he was a bad person because he was against shiva’s idea’s , and it is going to have a similar toll in my fan fiction , because daaksha is actually a good person , but om won’t like him , because obviously two alpha males won’t get along , it all comes down to perspective really , and its our wish of how to judge either of the characters , and daaksha’s and gauri’s relationship , you know , there are people who come into our lives who get closer than the people we are related by blood , for example , daaksha found a best friend , a younger sister , and a reason to smile in gauri , they don’t like each other in any other manner as of now , but i’m still thinking about how i should develop the plot , but honestly thank you so so so much , this means a lot baby <3

      1. Verna

        Wow.. Thanks a lot for ur reply dr.. and I’m eagerly waiting for next part and pls do read my Weekend Shot too.. if ur time permits 😉 😉 😛

  7. Shraddha-DBO

    Hey I’m gonna call you appz, (any problem)
    Damn exciting story man…
    I’m a person who always imagine the scenes, places and all and this ff was just the right one for me….thanks a lot for all those imaginary stuff?
    And dhaaksha is a cool idea…
    Janri interaction was nice and I get to see a different gouri here, I’m imagining this with shrenu…
    Really waiting for rikara meeting and I’m sure it will be stylish one.

    Have become ur fan yaar…
    And are you from Kerala??
    Just mention ur details too….

    1. _APARNA_

      of course , all my friends call me apz/aps , thank you so much i’m glad that your loving it and yes i know exactly how it feels to find those few fan fictions you really want to keep reading , i am so happy that you think mine is one of them , yep , rikara’s clash is going to be very thodu fodu , and yes , i’m from cochin , where are you from ?

      1. Shraddha-DBO

        From Trivandrum dear, what are you doing??

      2. _APARNA_

        i just completed my 12th , going for law , off to bangalore in two months , what about you ?

  8. Sumitha

    What to tell u it is speechless. ….I love it drrr keep writing. ….

    1. _APARNA_

      thank you so much sumitha , glad you checked it out , tysm <3

  9. Loved it aparna
    Just awesome

    1. _APARNA_

      thank you so much love

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