FULLFILLING A PROMISE (2 SHOTS, PART 1)

Hiii guys…its ur salluzz again:im palnning with another one shot story…its quite long….hope u can read and njoy….(here, swasan are muslims, then only I can add more scenes)

Scene1:

Here a girl is getting ready to go somewhere…she has wear a punjabi model salwar suit and wears its shawl around head (as covering their head)
Some hairs are falling down over her forhead, (angel cut)..she slowly desends the stairs…and peeps out…she opens out the door…as she steps out…

SWARAAA

(YES U R RYT, ITS OUR SWARA ONLY)

she closes her eyes…then with a small smile she turns back

Swara:hello..maa

Swara sees a lady around 40s standing there with both handd on either side of waist..(no doubt my dears, its of course our sumi)

Sumi:how many times I have said dont go out in this time

Swara:whats ur problem ma….y cant I go out this time…I need to finish some jobs

Sumi:I knw what job u need to do…and u look at the time, its just 5:00am only….

Swara keeps puppy face

Sumi:can u even see the road at this time..see its fully of mist..

Swara:maa..see I need to do it…warna..I will do hunger trap for 5 days…and in these 5 days, I will not even drink a drop of water…..

Sumi:wow….what an idea sab jii…..(with irritating face) everyday same drama….im fed up….(folding hands) a small request, at least today, get up in house before 11:00pm…

Swara:maa

Sumi:or else…I cant clean the terrace…all footprint are present on wall….I dont this girl, last birth u might be some spider…

Swara:today..I will come fast….its my promise..(she holds her throat)

Sumi:mmm kkk….carefully go

Swara nodes and leaves

Sumi:oh allah…I knw what she is doing..its her duty only…what fir that I cant afford to lose my daughter….plz help my daughter in everything….

Sumi buns her hair and go to do namaz (salah)

Swara is walking through a road…..enjoying the scenary..some are there come fir jogging, they wishes her

A car stops near her…the windows are pulling down….

A lady around 45 peeps outside….

Lady:beta…

Swara turns back

Lady:can u plz show us the way to our destination

Swara:haa aunty…

Another girl peeps out

Girl:bua jii….whats the need of asking this behengi….we can look at google map and find

Swara feels irritated..

Swara:aunty..if u want we me to help u in it…kindly say the place name

Lady gets down the car

Lady:beta…my name is annapurana..and this is my family…actually we came here to stay for 1 month….bt dont knw the place

Swara:at least u remember something related to that place

Ap:she is my frnd…her name is sharmista…sharmista gadodia

Swara widen her eyes:oh allah…

Ap:what happen beta…

Swara:nothing….so u need to go to gadodia mansion ryt

Ap:haa beta….

Swara:its not so far…u go straight and then second left…u can see a house with a big light in the centre of house..

Ap:haa beta…I have heard about it…in fact that light gives path for many colony people naa

Swara eyes turn red

Swara:who said they are colony people….They are also a part of gadodia family only

Girl:so u r frm that colony

Swara:yes…im frm that colony only..what so….

Girl:hey u colony girl…shut up kk

Swara:(rising finger) who are u to order me

Girl:im kavitha..kavitha malhotra

Swara:I dont care…haa aunty…a small request, atleast while cominh next time plz make sure that her mouth are closed else people will take her teeth

Ap:beta…Im sorry frm her behalf

Swara:aunty..here we people are living on our self respect and truthfullness…we havr many rules and regulations…so plz obey that…

Swara leaves…

Ap gets in the car and leaves

Ap reached gadodia mansion…

Kavitha:ohh god…such a beautiful palace…they are rich

Ap calls everyone

Sujatha comes out holding a small 5 year old baby (uthara)
Kavitha’ s parents

They ring the bell

Sumi:it can never be swara….

Sumi takes a shawl and draps around her head and opens the door

Ap:mishti

Sumi:anna

Both hugs each other..

Sumi:I thought u will come by evening….

Ap:mishti…meet my sister sujatha..our family frnd mr and mrs malhotra and their daughter kavitha

Sumi:namaste jii…where is ur son

Ap:he is busy with his meeting…and where is swara

Sumi:what to say anna..she has gone early in the morning….I cant control this girl

Ap:shekar

Sumi:he is in london…

They talk many thingd

Sumi shows them their room…..

Sumi:now go and take rest….

Kavitha:aunty..whose room is it

Sumi:its swaras….

Kavitha:can I open that

Sumi:u cant…even I cant open that…its swara working room and only she can open that..tbere are many locks and all

Kavitha:and this room

Sumi:thats her bedroom……itd also like that only…..

Kavitha:if she is locking this means, she is hiding something naa

Sumi just smiles

Scene 2

Another mansion

Munna:u fool…how can u be so careless…if something happens to that girl

Rajat:just chill dad…I cant resist seeing such a beautiful Girl…so I takes her….

Munna:u knw swara naa..she will take u behind bars

Rajat was scared

Rajat:dad plz help me…swara will never fall in our trap….she will never take money….help me dad

Munna:I have called him

Rajat:u mean sanskar…that don

YES U R RYT..IM SANSKAR..SANSKAR MAHESWARY

munna and rajat turns and finds a man with a hoster….

Munna takes him inside

Munna:sanskae sir…olz help my child..else he will be behind bars…he have did nothing…that girl is simply taking my son name

Sanskar:mmmm…so what help I should do

Rajat:the girl who tells that I have raped her have a frnd named swara….u should make her take back the case..

Sanskar:I wil do it…

Sanskar leaves

Munna and rajat smirks

Munna:now lets see how swara will be saved…

In a park…

Swara is seated on a bench

Sanskar comes there with his men

Sanskar:are u swara

Swara nodes and continue listening music

Sanskar gets angry seeing it

Sanskar forcefully removes her headset…

Swara:what the hell

Sanskar:look ms swara…I have not come for a fight…u should take back the case that u filed against rajat

Swara:ohh…so that was the reason…

Sanskar:u need money naa…..for that whats the need of making a wrong accusations…

Swara:I will never take back the case…and who are u to say it

Sanskar:im sanskar..a small don….look…I said with giving u much respect…so agree for that

Swara:do u think…money can buy me..no never…and I knw u r a don…and gor that I jist don’t care

Sanskar holds her hand angrily…

Swara slaps him

Swara:how dare u to touch me….

Sanskar finds all are insulting him

Swara:never come in my way….mr sanskar

Saying she leaves..

Sanskar:get the girl’s full details….

At night

All are having food exept swara

Sumi calls swara..

Swara:Im in my room only…dont worru..I have reached by evening..I saw u talkinh with ur frnds so decided not to disturb…so have ur food and sleeps…

Sumi smiles

Scene 3

Next morning….

All are in deep sleep

Suddenly the bell Rang continuly…(like seen in school ring)

All are disturbed hearing that…bt sumi was running down stairs

Ap and others looks confused

Sumi opens the door

Sumi:what happens

It was many ladies

Ladies:badii malkin…my daughter fell in the dam….plz help us..no one is daring to go due to over flow…

Sumi:(screams) SWARAAA

as soon as swara heats that she wears a black dress covering her head to toe…

Swara jumbs frm the terrace, shr was hanging the rope and jumbs…

Maheswary looks shocked

swara runs followed by rest…

She sees a small girl drowning in middle…swara jumbs

All are praying to god

It has been an hour bt mo response…

lady:badii malkin….our chotti malkin

Sumi:nothing will happn to swara….

Suddenly they see swara coming out with a girl in her hand…

She place it down and presses stomach…

Sumi:go and get her to hospital

Lady:chotte malkin…are u kk

Still her face is covered

Swara just waves her hand….

Ap comes to sumi

Ap:mishti…whats this

Sumi:nothing anna…come, u all go to house..

All left….

Lady:chotti malkin remove ur dress naa…its fully wet…

Swara removes it

Some ladies comes to her and put prasad on her head and others cover her with towel

Swara:now u all go….I should go to hospital…

lady:we can also come naa

Swara:kakisaa…I said naa..nothing to worry…I will take care

She leaves to mansion

Ap:mishti…whats this all

Sumi:anna olz..I will explain…give me some time…..

After sometime

Kavitha hears some noice and comes out…she finds swara and sumi talking…

She goes near them

Swara:plz give me 50 rupees

Sumi; what…are u out of sense

Swara:plz..plz.plz….it urgent…..today u knw naa….friday

Sumi; I forgot…

Sumi gives her money

Kavitha:wow…this colony girl is begging for 50 ruppess…

Kavitha leaves

Sumi:swara…..will stop ur doings….every friday u are askinh me money, even it is 1 ruppess or 1000….im not getting u

Swara:on every friday..I need to travel around with my maa money

Sumi caresd her face..

Swara leaves….

Like this way 1 month passed…..in these time Maheswary doesnt knw that swara is actually gadodia….bt tbey liked her character..tbey left to their place

At morning swara comes after jogginh….she finds her house in mess…she searched bt cannot find sumi nir any servants

she walks out and finds no one around badii

She gets a call

Caller:is me sanskar…u havnt seen me for a month..do u think that I have forgotten u

Swara:what the hell

Sanskar:ur life will be in hell….ur badi people ur maa all are under my custody….if u need them come to kaali temple ryt now

Swara witjout wasting time runs to there…

At kaali temple

All people are blindfolded and their hands are tied

Swara reaches there

Swara:maa

People:swara/chotti malkin

She was about to go there…bt sanskar hold her hand…..

Swara:what are u doing with them….leave them

Sanskar:I will leave…bt before that take back the case

Swara:I will never

Sanskar:then get ready to loss them….

Sanskar signs the men

They start to pour kerosene on badii people body

All shouts

Swara stands silent

Sanskar:now

Swara just smiles

Swara:still im saying I will never take back the case…..u knw im hating myself gor slapping u…making my hands dirt by that….u said to free him naa…u knw what he did…the bl**dy rascal rajat has raped my frnd….and also he didnt feel satisfied for that he even did the same thing with her sisters not even looking at their ages…the younger were just 5 years old…(a teae drp frm her eyes) and u are sayinh me to take back the case…I will never do it…because of him I lost them all…

Sanskar:making up stories

Swara:I dont care if u beleive this or not…

Sanskar:u should take back the case…

Swara:never……u said u will burn them naa…do that….

Sanskar stands there shocked

Swara:for me my promise is first priority…for that I will go to any extend…..

At that time munna and rajat comes there

Rajat:wow…swara baby..sanskar thanku so much…now everything is in my hands…..

Sanskar leaves bt turns back and finds police coming there

Swara:thanku sir…..else he would have killed us

Ins:its our duty mam..and thanks for finding them

They takes rajat and munna and leaves

People:chotti malkin

Sanskar gets confused hearing that

Swara rushes to them and removes their rope..they all hugs her

At night:

Milan:sanskar sir….
:ur maa have called and asked u to return

Sanskar nodes

Scene5

After 2 days

At a shopping complex

Swara comes to mall to buy some dress…there she notices that uthara (she dosnt knw that she is sanskar sister) being taken by some rowdies…uthara was crying…

She goes to them

As soon as uthara sees her, she hided behind swara… (Uthu is just 5 yr old)

Swara:are u trying to kidnap her

Goon:who are u to question us..give that child else

Swara:else what…she is my daughter

Goon:then where is its father

Swara slaps him

Sanskar sees this frm car

sanskar:cant u stop interfering in others matter…

Swara gives him a glare (sanskar didnt see uthu as she was hidinh behind swara)

Sanskar left, goons also leaves in a nick of time

Swara finds uthara burning in fever…

she lifts her and goes to hospitalat night

Swara brings uthu to her house

Sumi:what happens to uthara

Swara:u knw her

Sumi:she stayed here for 1 month and still u dont it

Swara:sorry maa (she describe how she saw uthu)Swara takes uthu to room and lay down there

At maheswary house

all are crying as they cant find uthara since evening..even sanskar is there…he tried to find with his influence bt in vain

Sumi calls

Ap:mishti…my uthu

Sumi:she is in my house

Hearing that all goes to their house…

Sanskar was driving very fastlyAt gadodia mansion

All are standing outside swara room…

Sumi:she will only open it ny morning

Sanskar:I need to see my uthu

Sumi knocks the door….

Swara:I will not open until5:00

At 5:00

The door gets opened automatically…

All enters inside and finds uthu and a girl(swara) sleeping by hugginh eavh other

Kavitha was shocked to see the beauti of room

Sumi:swara…

Swara:kya maa….

Sumi:see uthara”s parents cameSwara:bt she said that she is a orphan maa…we talked a lot yesterday…olz maa…we are sleepy…

Sanskar losses his patients and removes the blanket

Swara gets up

swara:what the hell maa
All are shocked seeing swara
Kavitha:colony girl

swara also sees them

Sanskar was about to take uthara bt swata stops him

Swara:yesterday u said naa dont peep in others matter…so dont come….

Sumi; what are u sayinh swara

Ap:frm where u got uthu

sumi explains

Sanskar feels guilt…

precap:last part

…happy ending

Credit to: salluzz

16 comments

  1. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    awesome loved it…..saluzz update next part asap…..update ur ffs too dr…..waiting badly….

  2. Rosey

    It was amazing plz upload next half I
    And a also upload ur ffs
    Swaragini a new way to hated
    And yes I m a don

  3. Fatima

    Awsome ff ?…..lved it so much…….? Plzzzz upload soon ??……don’t take too much tym to upload ?……..m eagerly waiting for nxt prt……………I want to ask that how many shade u have swara is ur ff na ?……………saluuzzzzz ur an amazing writer u always write well and I lyk ur ffs so much??……..bye bye and plzzzz upload asap………..don’t even dare to take so much tym for uploading dis ff ?…..lol just joking ……

  4. Kritika

    |Registered Member

    NYC but salluzz u plz post how many shades season 2.. Yr u can change the title a little bit n continue it! N I offence at that other girl posting it! U can keep the title as how many shades do u have s02 coz that pregnancy doesn’t suit swara n all! Only u can write it the best

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