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FROZEN HEART -OS- (RAGSAN)

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Hello guys…back with one short story…about our heavenly couple Ragsan…

Typo errors pls ignore…

This is dedicated to all tejaswian and RAGSANIAN …

Love really it’s a beautiful emotion/feeling…

Back to story….hope I don’t make u bored by this…

#some isolated place
Ragini – I hate u sanskar why can’t u understand…

Sanky – I said I love u…but I never asked u to love me na…

Ragini – I hate Ur presence near me..

Sanky – I know u wantedly saying this na…

Ragini – no, it true…I love someone…pls leave me..

She left the place…

Sanky – I know I can’t get Ur love …but iam happy that u love someone…

#next day
Sanky – hey ragini , I love u….he handed over a bouquet…

Ragini – slapped him …how many times I have to say…I hate u …I hate u…

Sanky hurted deeply …but smiles and said…” I know u hate me…but don’t know y it sounds like I love u”…

Ragini – no sanskar pls try to understand…I love laksh…u better stop irritating me with Ur presence…

Sanky – u really love laksh ???

Ragini – ha…I love laksh…

Sanky – but he loves ….

Ragini – swara ….I know…..the same way u love me…it’s not gonna happen…I can’t give his place to anyone in my heart…

Sanky – pls Ragini listen to me..iam not asking u to love me…iam just saying..I …..intrupted by ragini

Ragini – u love me…god damnit how many times u say this Yaar…

Sanky – I don’t want u to love me…just feel my love …

Ragini – if u really love me pls leave me…

Sanky – from 2 months u r saying this …y ragini……

Ragini – she stood silent

Sanky – pls batona…

She left without saying anything…

Flashback #3months back
Ragini pov –
Iam totally in love with him , how to express my feelings …but what if he doesn’t…he met me 2weeks back…but in these two weeks …I have seen the future with him…god I don’t know how to express my feelings…as iam orphan …iam craved for the love…but now iam sure I will get the love from him…he is the one for me…I will confess my feelings tomorrow
Pov ends

Sanskar pov –

I left my house , my family…they mean a lot me…I can’t able to live without them…but I have to do that…I have to live far away from them..I want to make them hate me…yes I did…now they hate me …I left my place and came here…I thought iam alone …but my friend best friend laksh came to me…I felt like iam back from dead…he asked me…u have to be with them sanky…no lucky…I can’t hurt them by truth…ok sanky Ur wish.he asked me to stay with him…I nodded……he introduced his friends…one is swara his love …and one is ragini, swara frnd…she is very friendly…and by seeing her I fell in love with her…I wanted to feel the feeling/emotion love…but wait no…I can’t do that…I don’t want to hurt her…..but with in 2weeks i totally fell for her…..but I don’t want to confess my feelings…
Next day morning I went to her house but it’s locked…I tried calling her…it’s getting switched off…I dono where she went…as I know she is orphan…
Three days passed …she still didn’t face him..he is being restless as his princess , his angel still did not met..
Atlast she came…I saw her…I don’t know what I have done…I hugged her tightly…I kissed her cheeks forehead every place in her face except lips…I missed u…I missed u so much…I spokeup
She pushed me away…and said behave urself sanskar..
My heart felt pain…she told she went on for some office work..
From then she ignored me…I don’t know the reason…i didn’t mind about my situation or my problem..iam thinking about her ignorance…at fine day I proposed her…but she rejected me…but I tried many ways to show my love towards her…but she hurted me everytime that she hates me and she hates my presence around her…..Wen I listened to that words…I felt like some one hardly trying to drag my heart from lungs…
I have discussed with laksh about it…he said she doesn’t believe in love bcz her mother got betrayed in the name of love…
I just want to show my love..I don’t need her love …it’s better for her not to love me…but her ignorance I cant able to digest…
Pov ends

#present
Ragini – I love u sanskar , I love u so much…I don’t want to see u in pain by loving me….u have to hate me…then u will get someone who deserve U…and Ur love…iam unlucky that iam not getting Ur love….
She cried and remembered the past..

Flashback

I have to confess my feelings…I don’t know love is written in my fate…but im madly in love with him..
By then I noticed something like wet is flowing from my nose…then i realized it’s blood…omg it’s blood…I cleaned my nose and tried to sleep…but sleep is not in my way…I tried to walk in balcony…by then I feel dizzy feeling and I fainted..
I wokeup and saw its early morning….and I tried to getup but no I can’t…then after so much try …I freshup and went to hospital …may be due to weakness I thought… but after checking reports doctor said sorry ms.ragini u are suffering from blood cancer…it’s too late…Ur counting, may be 1/2months…she collapsed there…her dreams…her future….all are flashed…she dreamed a life with sanky…but all just got collapsed with one file which doctor held…
She fainted again…doctor admitted and treated her…she took two days for rest as she is too weak..
After discharge she came to meet sanky…but for her shock or happiness or surprise ….he hugged her tightly…as he don’t want to leave…she too wanted that…but what to do…fate…it’s playing with her..
I don’t want to see him in pain after loving me…if he gets to know iam dying noooooo…I don’t let him …I want him to hate me…yes…by then I pushed him …her thoughts were disturbed by phone call…

#present

Caller id doctor
Yeah tell me doctor…now…yeah coming…she disconnected the call…

Went to hospital…
Doctor – new reports came…sorry ragini to say this ..
Ragini – it’s ok doctor how many days…
Doctor – any moment ragini…we can’t say anything…
Ragini – weakly smiled and left…

At last she wanted to meet sanky …she went to sanlak house..

She goes to sanky room…he just then came from wash room …he is shocked as she is in his room…

Ragini…u here???

Ha , iam going to America(lied) , may be i will not return…
So thought to meet u…

His eyes get moist…yes he is crying…she came near him and cupped his face…sorry sanskar I hurted u…but pls try to understand…ok..

He hugged her tightly and kissed her…he captured her lips with his…she didn’t resist…she crying too…..
He wiped his tears and kissed her forehead…and asked can u come to terrace…

Yeah…

Wait here I will come…

He came to lucky…lucky I think it’s the last moment for me to say…
Lucky hugged him tightly and cried….I can’t ….I can’t sanky…
Sankar patted his back and said I said na…do as I say..ok…he left to terrace

She is waiting there…

Ha sanskar bolo…
Vo…vo…
Her nose is started bleeding…she wiping it unnoticed by sanky…

He came to her and knelt down and controlling his sobbing he asked her..

Ra….. ragini….u ….never…..loved….me….????iam….I..that…bad???
She started to talk(she is dying to say I love u) …but he intrupted…

Pls let me speak..

U know (pointing towards his heart)…here….here…don’t know y ….it’s paining here…re….re…really….

She is controlling her tears…

I know u love laksh…but I love u till my last breath…

Both feeling dizzyyyy

Sanky -at one last time….. can …..I……i……h…..hug…u once…???

Ragini – hugged him tightly as both fell on ground…

I love u sanskar….I love u so much…..she shouted and cried😭😭😭😭😭…

But fate never let them together…

He didn’t listened to her words.. ….while both landing on ground his all memories are flashed with her in span of seconds…his heart beat stopped💔

She tried to wake him…by then laksh came and said he is suffering from brain tumour..ragini…I thought to say u…but …he cried…but for his sense….she didn’t listened anything….

She only listened his words “suffering from brain tumour”…all went blank….and she closed her eyes permanently….😭😭😭😭😭

Both Ragsan are in hugging position…

By then swara ran to lucky and showed the report of ragini…

Both collapsed….

His words are echoing in Lucky’s ear ” take care of my parents &my ragini after my death ”

Both their hearts love eo….but never can be together…

The end…

Sorry guys if u feel bored….

Pls guys mention Ur views about this…

Any feedback accepted….

I cried while writing this ff…😭😭😭

Don’t know I felt very connected to this…so thought to share with u….

Thank u guys …

Keep smiling….

Love u…

Signing off.

URS
Suma
💟Ragsan

40 Comments
  1. Fabulous

    1. Suma123

      thanks dear

  2. Mrng itself u made me cry through ur os. Mindblowing

    1. Suma123

      one big sorry and thanks to u

  3. Awesomeee

    1. Suma123

      thanks keerthi

  4. Awesome

    1. Suma123

      thanks shalini

  5. Superb suma plsssss write one more os on our couple with happy ending

    1. Suma123

      thanks maha.. sure dear

  6. Vinu

    It’s really heart touching story. ..loved it.. .but I hate u, u made me to 😢 cry

    1. Suma123

      thanks vinu…oops sorry baby..

  7. Speechless after reading this OS

    1. Suma123

      thanks a lot it means a lot tome

  8. AMkideewani

    I’m speachless, I cried reading your ff😭😭😭😭😭

    1. Suma123

      thanks baby ….

  9. Sissy mindblowing sissy

    1. Suma123

      thanks nivi

    1. Suma123

      thanks priya

  10. Superb dear u made me cry

    1. Suma123

      opps…. but thanks dear

  11. Mindblowing

    1. Suma123

      thanks manu

    1. Suma123

      Thanks aditi

  12. Harneet

    amazing………………. sometimes sad and satisfied endings are far better than happy ending ,,,, keep writing ,,,

    1. Suma123

      Thanks dear💟💟💟

  13. Asw

    Nice

    1. Suma123

      Thanks dear

    1. Suma123

      Thanks vini

  14. plz dear don’t give sad ending i can’t sleep today thinking it anyways nice os <3 <3

    1. Suma123

      Sorry Yaar…thanks

  15. Outstanding

    1. Suma123

      Thanks sug

  16. Wow

    1. Suma123

      Thanks dear

    1. Suma123

      Thanks ammy

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