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FRIGHTENING ENEMY (OS)

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Well…Friends this one shot is sequel of the story A shivika kiss by pkj.
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“Shivaay didn’t drop you back hey na”- Anu said glaring Ragini,” you stupid yukini coming in between our Shivaay and Annika”.
“You claimed to be friend of Shivaay from last three months right”- Pushpa said,” After his divorce with Annika”.
“I have doubt on you nagini”- Archiya carefully watched the ugly face with short dress girl, renamed as Nagini,” that you are straight and not fit for the nature of Shivaay”.
“I am hot-thin-s*xy”- Ragini replied in confident tone,” Shivaay will like me one day if I try hard for trapping him”.
“Do you know why no one believed you when you morphed your blue video with Shivaay in compromising position, not even Annika?”- Riddhima smirked,” well there is a secret my dear Stupid lady”.
“That the great Business man of Mumbai Mr. Shivaay Singh Oberoi is not straight”- Mouni said,” I didn’t medically confirmed it still his behaviors describes it well about his nature and interest”.
“I don’t belief you”-Ragini felt irked with the group of girls hovering over her, torturing her like hell”.
“Who sent you all here??”- She asked.
“Upar wale ne bheja poore bheje ke saath for your bheja fry”- Bela did logic sign,” We are your well wisher and are helping you in not losing your s*xy-ugly-fat body due to madness for Shivaay”.
“Really!!”- Ragini asked in little doubt inside her mind.
“You don’t trust us right!!”- Nivedita dragged Ragini brutally inside Oberoi Mansion,” let us give you proof then”.
Rest of the girl from pkj followed. Nagini stumbled on the stair case.
“Gouri didi…Bhavya didi”- Shabana asked,” what are you doing behind the closed door??”.
“Uu baat hai kaa hum batate hai…Teeno bhai andar important kaam kar rahe hain to hum unka intezaar kar rahe hai”- Gouri chirped.
“What important work they are doing that too behind a closed door is my suspect”- Bhavya flared her hair ,” I have to collect proof for this”.
Manya looked keenly at the reaction of Yukini,” The work that normally peoples do inside a closed door is they are doing Bhavya”.
“Important work behind closed door”- Ragini muttered,” Om Ru are also like this..Like Shivaay!!!”….”NO!!!”.
“Yes!!! Yes!!”- Nila jumped around,” lets ask from their wives”.
“How much Shivaay loves his brother Gouri??”- Lax know the answer already still asked,” say about their love to us”.
“You girls know all and still asking me”-Gouri feel shy the went on describing,” Three brothers love is unlimited, and rippable and these three are inseparable, eats from single plate, cooks together, sita together, sleeps together and …does almost every work together”.
“Hein Event work!!”- Ragini try to close her ear by hands but ,” what am I hearing here!!”.
“They even take bath together that day I caught Omkara Bhaiyya and Rudy inside my bath room”- Bhavya addes much to the displeasure of Yukini.
“I heard that Shivaay had a fantasy over pony tailed men”- Anu smirked at the effect on Psyconi and their success in a winning way,” better go home and save your Samar bhaiyya from him”.
“This is all so yuck!!”-Ragini whispeeed,” Now I know why even after friendship of three months, Shivaay is not attracted to a s*xy- thin girl like me!!”.
“He asked Omkara to tie his long open hair in to pony tail after quarrelling with his long time friend and buddy Daksh Khurana who have a pony tail and now his eyes are all attracted to your brother Samar”- Piyuu queried then,” since how long time are the three doing their important work inside??”.
“We don’t know but it seems their work will not end this soon”- Swathi sighed,” lets go amd talk in the living room. Bhavya ask Gopal to bring some snacks for all”.
“You can join us”- All the girls invited Ragini with them,” We can provide you more about Obro secret”.
“Rudra is more bend then Shivaay”-Maahi bit her cheeks to control her smile,” He always hugs his brother tight at every occasion”.
“Yeah…I saw him hugging the hell out of Shivaay one day”-Nagini fumbled.
“Khanna…You know him right”- Radhika ruffled her hair,” Shivaay is too much addicted to him that he coloured his hair in to golden only for Khanna and their love”.
“He had promises Rudra to built a Rudramahal in Mumbai as a silent witnessed of their love story”- Misha informed,” Like one Taj Mahal”.
“OMG!!! you saved me today by sending these girls here”- Ragini prayed her god father for protecting her from the mess”.
“Hein hen hein….Awin awin …”- A sound of crying baby is echoed in the whole Oberoi mansion,” Awin awain….”.
“Perhaps the three were trying to….”- Ranilya face palmed,” who among the Oberoi brother was pregnant to deliver a baby!!”.
“Hey bhagwan yehi sach hai…”- Arpita started her drama ,” lets go and congratulate them for birth of their baby then”.
“Arpu we will after some time”- Anu controlled her friend,” let them share the happinesses in their special way inside the closed door. Interrupting romantic moment is not good”. “Hey girls!!! where is that stupid girl shit of Ragini??”- Pushpa find that the target had flew away afraid.
Manish served juice to all with sweets. Pkj girls shared it happily at their victory . The stupid Nagini ran away from Oberoi mansion to never come back for Shivaay.
“Finally we removed her from the life of Shivaay and Annika”- Danced Shraddha,” Their ishqbaazi will be back to track with out this stupid thorn inbetween them”.
“Yahoo…yahoo!!!”- Pkj girls danced well and hugged each other.
“Arre tum sab kab aaye”-Annika was surprised ,” kitne dino baad tum sabse mil rahi hoon”.
“We are always with you Chandu didi”- Arpita hugged her sister,” waise we come today to throw that Ragini out from here forever”.
“Oh…Bhaga diya uss chippdi ko in a helicopter speed”- Annika show her manjan used tooth,” kya khidkitod kaam kiya tum sab milkar. Main tum sabko aalu poori treat dungi aaj”.
“Hurry up..then”- girls encouraged,” we are waiting to taste your hand made food”.
“Waise where is Astha, Amayaa and Anikaa today”- Annika asks about her favourite Nanand(S-I-L @Sister club of SSO).
“Its goos they didn’t come else we can’t imagine the further incidents when we accused their favourite bhaiyya Shivaay for so nonsense matter”- Archu muttered,” Thanks that Liji is also absent as we accused Khanna too”.
“Bach gaye aaj hum sab”- Anu breath,” don’t tell Astha and Amayaa about this and its our little secret now” .
“Pinky promise”- All shouted in unison leaving Annika in trance lane.
“We are going now”- all bid bye after relishing the taste of amazing alu poori,” we will keep coming here to solve small problems like this”.
“Bye Annika…bye Bhavya and Gouri”- Girls left with dhinchak smile plastered on their faces. “Say my love to Amayaa and Astha”- Annika shouted from back.

44 Comments
  1. VHM

    Ha ha ha …this is super awesome…and i knew only you can write such…way to go lady…was missing you in TU IB WU page

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Haarika… Kya kardiya maine Apni bhaiyyas ke saath!!!! Thank you yaar.

  2. Asthababy you……………………..
    ………………………………………

    Kuch bol sakti main….only one word full on khidkitod. ……πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arpita… Ho gaya na Bhaiyya ke tien tien fiss!!!!

  3. Surbhi Sharma

    Woww di . Loved it . U know yersterday night only I was think about os/ff of pkj by you and today u uploaded on pkj . Thankuww . 😘😘😘😘
    But is baar bhi aap mujhe bhul gye . Koi nhi . Waiting for next of ur os/ff/ss or anything …😘😘😘😘

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi…toh tum mujhe miss kar rahi thi(wink wink). Good..very good. Tum wahan nahi gaye the na kyun ki tum toh mere saath the with some other member of pkj anxiously waiting for departure if Yukini.

  4. Navz

    Ohhh…poor shivaay..kya bana diya tumne tumhari bhaiyaa koo…..πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ…very great plan and well excueted by pkj girls..well done .

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya…Bana diya bhaiyya ko maine “Bingo tedha medha”..from a straight guy!!!

  5. AnuluvsIB

    Wow Aasthu gaaru.. yet again!!
    Total rofl… itne ache se Ragini ki tain tain phis kar diya hum PKJ gals ne…
    Bahut Kush hui… kash sach mein aise kar sakthi!!

    It was such a feel good hilarious read!! Simply loved it!!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu…well thank you for that perfect work for my Bhaiyya.

  6. Zaveesha

    Awesome and amazing just like Astha di…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Zavesha…Dp is cute!!! By the way thank you.

      1. Zaveesha

        Thanks for the Compliment on my DP…

  7. Surbhi Sharma

    By the way di , asr dp ?? 😦😦

    1. Surbhi Sharma

      Di , I have a khidkitod idea . Aap Dono ki pic laga do . 😍😍😍😍coz both of them are 😍😍😍😘.

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        Surbhi dono ke ek saath ka aisa khidkitod photo hai hi nahi. Bhaiyya Vs ASR in my dp fight!!!

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi..Surprised kyun ho??? well main ASR ki deewani hoon(wink).

  8. Nita D

    Ha ha….just the first few lines n I knew it was u……3 bhaio ki izzat ki toh OMM kar di tum logo ne…..But it was fun reading it….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nita…Izzat ki raita phail gaya teen bhaiyyon ka. Keep enjoying.

  9. Pui

    Fantastic πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ πŸ’πŸ’

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thanks Pui dear.

  10. Pushpa

    wow astha..what a write up u had allo fu s inyaar..for tht thank you..so we finally throw nagini out of shivaye life out of OM…great work girls…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Yeah Pushpa it seems so. Dance on removing unwanted Yukini from your sautanbaaz @Shivaayan club.

  11. Tanz

    It was amazing Astha Di…..Mazaa hi aa Gaya and when you include the pkj family it’s just 😎😘…..Thank God NaginiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ is gone…..such a great exit…..and poor obros ….πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Well done Di
    Take care 😊

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz… OMM of Obro by pkj. You too take care. Kitne dino ke baad mili tumse yaar yahan. Hugs.

      1. Tanz

        Aaj kal padhai ne dabaa kar Rakha hai isiliye ghumne phirne me problem aa Rahi hai πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ baaki sab badhiya hai…..and I missed you 😊

  12. Piyuu

    astha superb dear…..maza aagaya …..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Piyuu… Keep enjoying like this always. Take care .

  13. Hi aastha di πŸ™‹…
    That’s was just khidkitod hillarious πŸ˜‚πŸ˜
    πŸ‘…

    Bichari Nagini ki toh tai tai phiss ho gayi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    I knew it when I started reading the os that this thing could be only written by you….

    Because only you could write such crazy out of the box stories….

    Hats off to you and your unique and crazy imagination 😘😜😊…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Hey Sofiya… thanks yaar. I had no other way to make fun of that stupid fat-ugly-yucky Ragini so..Hugs.

  14. Nikita_jai29

    Aww… Dii you are superb.. But you forget me… I am crying.. My ashu dii forgot me..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Excuse me!!! Who are you? Oh You are Nikku from Varanasi it seems. I never forget you. I just kept you with me thinking you will not be able to hear that type of things on Shivaay Bhaiyya.
      Love with hugs.

  15. Swathi..

    Hey ashtha superb. Par ye tumne Apne bhaiyya ke saath kya kar diya uss nagini ke peeche chudane keliye!!πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚. Unko Patha chalega toh vo kya kahenge?? Apni bahiyaa

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Swathi…lekin tum sabne to Pinky promise kiya hai iss one shot mein ki mujhe aur Amayaa ko nahi bataoge. Mujhe kya pata ki Shivaay bhaiyya ke baare mein tumsab ne Ragini ko kya kaha. Main toh tum sab ke saath thi hi nahi(wink wink)!!!

  16. Alekhika20

    Amazing update

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Alekhika dear.

  17. Nila

    Hi astha this is for u😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Pkj girls done OMM of Ragini πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š.
    Bechara tumari Shivaay bhaiya😊😊 kya plan yaar wah wahπŸ‘Œok ok pinky promise so maine tum se kuch nahi bathaungi😊
    (Adjust my Hindi )😊

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nila…I don’t know any thing . you kept it secret from me right!!! I know nothing about the plan and read nothing lol ha ha…

  18. Gayathri.visu

    Astha di, u forget me???? Do u remember me or not?? I won’t talk to u di.
    But I can say my comment……ok!
    Hilarious os…. Ugly naagini’s OMM!!! I m very happy!!

  19. Aastha_Reddy

    Gayathri….it happened yaar. Sorry for that. Hugs with love.
    Don’t talk to me but your action is speaking volumes then words!!!

  20. Kanfi

    Let me laugh frstπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚shivaay isnt straightπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚.
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    What a concept ….pooor yuckini..
    I was laughing throughout reading the ff….
    Hatss off to ur concepts yr….they are just fabulous…
    Really loved it….😍😍

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    N ur OS the love witness….fabulous..again a mind blowing concept…i love to read ur os…
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    I’ve a littlle request….whenever u post any of ur work ppzz write by astha in title..as i dont read alll ff so i dont want to miss urs..

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    Take care😘

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Kanfi…Hey that is a lie yaar..Shivaay is straight. If you wish, you can check that(naughty wink)!!!

      1. Kanfi

        Are astha i know…i m just laughing at that..obvio it wS olan if pkj to get rid of nagini

      2. Kanfi

        Are astha i know…i m just laughing at that..obvio it wS olan if pkj to get rid of nagini..
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        U r asking me to check..haww😜😜

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